翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

私は商品を2個受け取りました。
受け取った2個のうち1個に化粧箱（外箱）と説明書が付いていませんでした。
至急、付属していなかった化粧箱と説明書を送ってください。
もしも化粧箱と説明書が無いのであれば、その分の代金を返金してください。
宜しくお願い致します。

英語

I have received 2 items
For one of them, there are lack of a manual and a vanity case (outer case).
Please send those lacking vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

レビュー ( 3 )

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/23 21:27:06

元の翻訳
I have received 2 items
For one of them, there are lack of a manual and a vanity case (outer case).
Please send those lacking vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

修正後
I have received 2 items
One of them did not come with the fancy box (outer case) and its instruction manual.
Please send them to me immediately.
If you don’t have them to send to me, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

商品のパッケージを一般的に化粧箱と呼ぶので、この場合はお化粧道具をしまうvanity caseとは違うと思います。

[ozsamurai_69]

The outer [box, container, holder] of makeup IS called a vanity case, so named due to the vanity mirror contained in the lid.

ozsamurai_69はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/23 22:35:33

元の翻訳
I have received 2 items
For one of them, there are lack of a manual and a vanity case (outer case).
Please send those lacking vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

修正後
I have received 2 items
One of them, was missing a manual and the vanity case (outer case).
Please send the missing vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for that item.

Thank you in advance.

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/24 08:59:38

元の翻訳
I have received 2 items↵
For one of them, there are lack of a manual and a vanity case (outer case).
Please send those lacking vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

修正後
I have received 2 items, and found out that the presentation box (the outer box) and instruction manual were not included with one of them.
Please ship the presentation box and the manual to me immediately.
If you don’t have the presentation box and the manual available, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

vanity caseはお化粧品を収納して持ち運ぶ際に使う、化粧品バッグのことです。