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日本語

我々の質問に丁寧にお答えいただき感謝いたします

あなたがxxの代理店で安心しました

xxの割引をありがとうございます
ですが、あなたと継続的にビジネスをしていくためには
その価格では我々は他に優位性を出せないのです

我々はアメリカのメーカーと何社か取引をさせていただいています
商品にもよりますがメーカーからの卸価格の相場は、だいたい定価の50％オフより安いです

この商品を1個＄170で販売していただけないでしょうか
今後は更に購入数を増やしていきます
xxも購入したいと考えています

英語

Thank you for answering to our question.

I got relieved that you are an agency of xx.

We appreciate your discount of xx.
However, for our contentious business, we can’t make a predominance with that price.

We trade with some American firms.
Although it depends on products, the market price of a wholesale price is generally less than 50%-off of their established price.

Could you sell us this product for $170 per one?
We’ll increase the amount of purchase from now on.
Also we want to buy xx.

レビュー ( 1 )

ozsamurai_69はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/10/28 08:28:48

元の翻訳
Thank you for answering to our question.

I got relieved that you are an agency of xx.

We appreciate your discount of xx.
However, for our contentious business, we can’t make a predominance with that price.

We trade with some American firms.
Although it depends on products, the market price of a wholesale price is generally less than 50%-off of their established price.

Could you sell us this product for $170 per one?
We’ll increase the amount of purchase from now on.
Also we want to buy xx.

修正後
Thank you for answering our question.

I was relieved that you are an agency of xx.

We appreciate your discount of xx.
However, for our contentious [continuous] business, [we can’t make a predominance with that price. >?????<]

We trade with some American firms.
Although it depends on products, the market price of a wholesale price is generally less than 50%-off of their market price [RRP
]↵

Could you sell us this product for $170 per unit/item?
We’ll increase the amount of purchase from now on.
Also we want to buy xx.

contentious = 異論の多い、議論を引き起こす