Fujisawa (fujisawa_2014) — もらったレビュー

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11/18～12/14
¡Feliz Navidad! LEA CON CUIDADO - ¡En época navideña, los repartos pueden tardar más de lo usual!!

12/15～12/24
¡Feliz Navidad! LEA CON CUIDADO - No hay forma de hacer llegar los repartos antes de Navidad este año.

Nos comprometemos a empacar con cuidado y repartir con exactitud. Durante la época navideña, el reparto puede tomar de 2 a 4 semanas. Todos los envíos son asegurados y tienen número de rastreo.

Durante la época navideña, el reparto puede tomar de 2 a 4 semanas. (Envío normal gratis sin número de rastreo será despachado por un precio razonable)

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11/18～12/14
¡Feliz Navidad! LEA ATENTAMENTE - En navidades, los repartos pueden tardar más de lo usual.

12/15～12/24
¡Feliz Navidad! LEA CON CUIDADO - Ya no será posible realizar entregas antes de esta Navidad.

Nos comprometemos a empacar con cuidado y repartir con seguridad. En navidades, los repartos pueden tardar entre 2 y 4 semanas. Todos los envíos están asegurados y tienen número de seguimiento.

En navidades, los repartos pueden tardar entre 2 y 4 semanas (los envíos corrientes gratuitos se realizarán sin numero de seguimento y por un precio razonable).

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With regard to the bouquet of roses (50 roses), currently, the growth of roses has been delayed due to the weather.
I am sorry, but I have to ask you to wait two weeks until the roses growth.
We will contact you when we have an estimated shipping date, until then I kindly ask for your understanding.

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With regard to the bouquet of roses (50 roses), currently, the growth of roses has been delayed due to the weather.
I am sorry, but I have to ask you to wait for two weeks until the roses grow.
We will contact you again when we have the estimated shipping date, thank you for your patience and kind understanding.

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We have received a request for one accompany employee, but will there are not accompany employees from Japan. As the trip is only for the Finalist, I wonder if you could assign one employee there to take care of them? I think that other countries are also asigning one employee, so it would be better if there are not differences between them.
By detecting a person's face from the image captured by the camera and analyzing the face portion of the image, we estimate the person attributes (gender, age) and emotions (smile level). The attributes of the customers are converted to data to establish a predictive analysis model.

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We have received the instruction from you that one employee to attend as a mandatory, however we will send none to accompany from Japan. As the trip will take place by the finalists alone, I was wondering if you could assign one local employee to take care of them? I am afraid that other countries also assign one employee, so I would like to avoid differentials.
By detecting a person's face from the image captured by the camera and analyzing the facial parts of the image, we will estimate the personal attributes (gender/age group) and emotions (degree of smile). The customer's attributes output from the sensor are converted to data for structuring a predictive analysis model.

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Today, I heard the status of the damages from the Japan Post Office. The United States Post Office has been already contacted by the Japanese side, but it seems that the United States post office work is slow when it comes to damages.
In order to get the payment soon, it is necessary that you go to the US post office.
If you claim for compensation through ebay, you will lost the $ 492 sale money, but if you claim compensation from me through the post office, you will not lost the sale money.
I think this method is better for you, so I would recommend you that you go to the US post office and carry out the procedure to get compensation for damages.
Once this is resolved I will be glad to give you a good feedback.

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Today, I heard the status of the damages from the Japan Post Office. The United States Post Office has been already contacted by the Japanese side, but it seems that the United States post office work is slow when it comes to damages.
In order to get the payment soon, it is necessary that you go to the US post office.
If you claim for compensation through ebay, you will lose the $ 492.00 sales money, but if you claim compensation from me through the post office, you will not lose the sales money.
I think this method is better for you, so I would recommend you that you go to the US post office and carry out the procedure to get compensation for damages.
Once this is resolved I will be glad to give you a good feedback.

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I think things are progressing well.
Did CITES arrive at your place?
As you may know, to obtain a permit from the Japanese government, it is necessary to make an application and submit also the invoice and the CITES.
If you already got CITES, please send it to me as attached file in a mail as soon as possible. Then, to receive them, I must send the application to the Japanese government, and a mail to Narita airport.

We trust you very much.
The environment to welcome them is already prepared. After that, only the documents have to be sent.

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I think things are progressing well.
Did CITES arrive at your place?
As you may know, to obtain a permit from the Japanese government, it is necessary to make an application and submit also the invoice and the CITES.
If you already got CITES, please send it to me as attached file in an email as soon as possible. Then, to receive them, I must send the application to the Japanese government, and an email to Narita airport.

We trust you very much.
The environment to welcome them is already prepared. After that, only the documents have to be sent.

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1. Sign in to Google Docs (GD)
2. Purchase the item for which an order number has been added. (Your are in charge of dates after 7/12)
3. Portion for the input that is green.
→ <Representative Office> In principle, always Osaka
<Shipping instructions>
For GD sale amount less than $ 100 SAL. less than $ 300: e Package. Higher:EMS

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1. Sign in to Google Docs (GD)
2. Purchase the item for which an order number has been added. (Your are in charge of dates after 7/12)
3. The parts to enter the data are marked in green.
→ <Representative Office> In principle, always Osaka
<Shipping instructions>
For GD sales amount less than $ 100 SAL, for less than $ 300: e Package. Anything higher: EMS

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• Copy all the numbers for the GD order and paste on the management DB.

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• Copy all the GD oroder numbers and paste them on the paste tab on the management DB.

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Contact information
Apex Marketing Co.
0120-850095（Only weekdays from 11:00 to 18:00）

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Contact information
Avex Marketing Inc.
0120-850095 (Only weekdays from 11:00 to 18:00)

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We are very surprised to hear these sudden news about him. It is very unfortunate.
Next week I shall contact you, including the matter of stock.

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We are very surprised to hear the sudden news about him. It is unfortunate.
Next week I shall contact you, including the matter of stock.

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Gracias por su mensaje.
Existe la posibilidad de que la mercancía se haya extraviado o esté en aduana.
Yo les preguntaré.
Si en 10 días no hemos tenido suerte, le devolveré su dinero.

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Gracias por su mensaje.
Existe la posibilidad de que la mercancía se haya extraviado o esté retenida en la aduana.
Yo les preguntaré.
Si en 10 días no hemos tenido suerte, le devolveré su dinero.↵
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Saludos cordiales,

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Thank you very much by sending me the photos! I'm really happy! I showed the photos to friends. I have to apologize for troubling you, but I have to ask three additional things. I would like a little darker around the eyes (lower upper eyelid) so it will make more clear the outline of the eye. I want also to add a little more red to the lips. I am sending an attached file. And please add eyelashes at the top and bottom. I am really sorry to trouble you so much.

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Thank you very much for sending me the photos! I'm really happy! I showed the photos to my friends. I have to apologize for troubling you, but I have to ask three additional things. I would like a little darker around the eyes (lower upper eyelid) so it will make more clear the outline of the eye. I want also to add a little more red to the lips. I am sending an attached file. And please add eyelashes at the top and bottom. I am really sorry to trouble you so much.

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¿Se muda a San Francisco / Zona de la Bahía? ¿Conseguir o no un coche?

· ¿Se muda a la zona de la Bahía? Por esto es por lo que no es necesario comprar un coche.

Al mudarse a los EE.UU., una cosa a tener en cuenta, junto con la zona en la que desea vivir, es cómo se va a desplazar allí. Mucho de esto tiene que ver con el lugar hasta donde usted necesita ir a trabajar, sus actividades extracurriculares, y lo que va a hacer en los fines de semana.

· Hay pros y los contras de vivir en la ciudad, en los suburbios, y por supuesto, en los viñedos.

Las variables a considerar son: Costos de alquiler, estilo de vida y si usted desea conducir. Sin embargo, a veces la gente se olvida de que el viaje al trabajo tiene un impacto directo en la calidad de vida. Conducir diariamente de 30 a 40 minutos no es muy divertido.

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¿Se muda a San Francisco / Zona de la Bahía? ¿Conseguir o no un coche?

· ¿Se muda a la zona de la Bahía? Esta es la razón por la que no es necesario comprar un coche.

Al mudarse a los EE.UU., un aspecto a tener en cuenta, además de la zona en la que desea vivir, es cómo se va a desplazar. Mucho de esto tiene que ver con el lugar hasta donde usted necesita ir a trabajar, sus actividades extracurriculares y lo que va a hacer en los fines de semana.

· Hay pros y contras de vivir en la ciudad, en los suburbios, y por supuesto, en los viñedos.

Las variables a considerar son: el costo de alquiler, el estilo de vida y si desea conducir. Sin embargo, a veces la gente se olvida de que el viaje al trabajo tiene un impacto directo en la calidad de vida. Conducir diariamente de 30 a 40 minutos no es muy divertido.

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Payment corresponding to two articles has not been confirmed, so it is not possible to make any purchase on your behalf.
If payment fails this time, I will have to stop any dealings with you.
I have been waiting for this payment for a long period of time.
I will auction the merchandise so please consider purchasing them there.

I will be able to wait for payment. Please make the purchase at the time more convenient for you. We will wait for the payment.

It is a seal with a rhinestone.
It is a seal that is a little thick.
Seal with the design of various sweets.

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Payment corresponding to two articles has not been confirmed, so it is not possible to make any purchase on your behalf.
If payment fails this time, I will have to stop any dealings with you.
I have been waiting for this payment for a long period of time.
I will auction the merchandise so please consider purchasing them there.

I will be able to wait for your payment. Please make the purchase at the time more convenient for you. We will wait for the payment.

It is a sticker with a rhinestone.
It is a sticker that is a little thick.
Sticker with the design of various sweets.

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Kevin (Kevin)

Date of Birth : November 25, 1991
Blood type: O type
Height / Weight: 180cm / 55kg
Part: vocal
Hobbies: Listening to music, watching movies, reading, composer
Specialty: English, piano, guitar, pop dance, eating slowly, smiling
Favorite food: Sushi, shabu-shabu, fried chicken, udon, ramen
If the group is likened to a family, which would be your role? : Daughter

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Kevin (Kevin)

Date of Birth : November 25, 1991
Blood type: O type
Height / Weight: 180cm / 55kg
Part: vocal
Hobbies: Listening to music, watching movies, reading, composition
Specialty: English, piano, guitar, pop dance, eating slowly, smiling
Favorite food: Sushi, shabu-shabu, fried chicken, udon, ramen
If the group is likened to a family, which would be your role? : Daughter

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Asahi Junior High School Weekly

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Asahi Chugakusei Weekly

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Did you to read the e-mail that I sent on 7/25? I was worried because there is no reply and I writing you again.

The products ordered on the 7/15 have not yet arrived, but the ordered products ordered on the 7/17 have already arrived by direct shipment to the customer. As 15th is an earlier date than 17th, could you explain why the products ordered first have not yet arrived?

Have you sent the products ordered on 7/15 and 7/24? Please let me know the date of shippment.

I would appreciate it if you check this matter and reply me as soon as possible.

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Did you read the e-mail that I sent on 7/25? I was worried because there is no reply and that is why I am writing you again.

The products ordered on the 7/15 have not arrived yet, but the ones ordered on the 7/17 have already arrived by direct shipment to the customer. As 15th is an earlier date than 17th, could you explain why the products ordered first have not yet arrived?

Have you already sent the products ordered on 7/15 and 7/24? Please let me know the date of shipment.

I would appreciate it if you check this matter and reply me as soon as possible.