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#myus

I have a question about True Price. The total height of True Price is up to 108 inch verticaly and horizontaly is only one box, the postage is calculated by real weight, could you please recognate it?

From the 2nd box, it's not covered by True Price, until now it is 25% up calculated, could you please recognate it?

For example, all product is shipped in one time, there is any possiblity of multiple boxes, in order to be able to send True Price there, could you send it one by one?

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#myus

I have a question about True Price. The total height of True Price is up to 108 inch vertically and horizontally is only one box, the postage is calculated by real weight. Can you confirm this understanding is correct?

From the 2nd box, it's not covered by True Price, until now it is 25% up calculated. Can you confirm this understanding is correct?

For example, all product is shipped in one time, there is any possibility of multiple boxes, in order to be able to send True Price there, could you send it one by one?

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It's about volume discount, if there were more quantity of order, it might be the meaning of question to think of.

But the largest number of shipping in one month is 50 sheets right?

I understood about 00 matter.
I hope it can arrive during this month.

Please kindly confirm about 1 poin.
This contract should be dealed, By spreading the visibility in Japan, because I think the order coming personaly from Japan company directly in Thailand, at that time could we ask for all to be connected to us?

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It's about volume discount, [comma splice] if there were more quantity of order, it might be the meaning of question to think of [not sure what this means].

But the largest number of shipping in one month is 50 sheets, right?

I understood about the 00.
I hope it can [usage] arrive during this month.

Please kindly confirm about 1 poin [spelling].
This contract should be dealed [spelling], By spreading the visibility in Japan [dangling modifier], because I think the order coming personaly [spelling] from Japan company directly in Thailand, at that time could we ask for all to be connected to us [awkward]?

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Thank you for your message.
There's a relationship with Japan. I have no idea.
I did fishing a lot. But I cannot fishing now because there are no sea or pond around my house, and if I had a holiday I want to do fishing a whole day. I do bass fishing ...

Surely your sea must be beautiful, and the fish also pretty.
This time please enjoy fishing by using Tenryu that I sent.

Then please wait for the arrival with pleasure now.

Thank you↵

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Thank you for your message.
I had no idea that your country had a friendly relationship with us.
I did fishing a lot. But I cannot fish now because there are no sea or pond around my house, and if I had a holiday I'd want to do fishing a whole day. I do bass fishing though...

Surely your sea must be beautiful, and the fish also pretty.
Please enjoy fishing by using Tenryu that I send this time.

Then please wait for the arrival with pleasure now.

Thank you

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Thank you for your call.
And then, please don't forget to bring your goods when you out.
Please cancel all your gas and electricity contract.

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Thank you for your call [word choice].
And then, please don't forget to bring your goods [word choice] when you out [parts of speech confusion].
Please cancel all your gas and electricity contracts.

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Because there is no manual in operation, person who have experiences is needed.
The work is input the data into File Exchange (Exel) of eBay Tools.
Important point.
Cutting off the shop name from product picture, processing more than 500 big sale.
The pictures are multiple.
Product explanation, editting the explanatory note in English to be easy to understand.
Creating the title less than 80 words.
Please input 1 test into eBay File Exchange.
It's OK when you safely upload on eBay.
The fee will be $10 for 50 cases. Handling fee is 10% attached, the receipt amount is $9.

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Because there is no manual in operation, [article] person who have [s-v agreement] experiences is needed.
The work is input the data into File Exchange (Exel) of eBay Tools.
Important points
Cutting off the shop name from product picture, processing more than 500 big sale.
The pictures are multiple.
Product explanation, editting [spelling] the explanatory note in English to be easy to understand.
Creating the title less than 80 words.
Please input 1 test into eBay File Exchange.
It's OK when you safely upload on eBay.
The fee will be $10 for 50 cases. Handling fee is 10% attached, the receipt amount is $9.

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Because there is no manual in operation, person who have experiences is needed.
The work is input the data into File Exchange (Exel) of eBay Tools.
Important point.
Cutting off the shop name from product picture, processing more than 500 big sale.
The pictures are multiple.
Product explanation, editting the explanatory note in English to be easy to understand.
Creating the title less than 80 words.
Please input 1 test into eBay File Exchange.
It's OK when you safely upload on eBay.
The fee will be $10 for 50 cases. Handling fee is 10% attached, the receipt amount is $9.

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Because there is no operating manual, an experienced person is needed.
What they are supposed to do is data input on File Exchange (Excel) which is an eBay Tool.
Remarks
Crop shop names from product pictures and resize it into bigger than 500 pixels.
Multiple pictures are required.
Regarding product explanations, editting the explanatory note in English to be easy to understand.
Create titles shorter than 80 letters.
Please input one test case on eBay File Exchange.
When they upload it on eBay without trouble, it's complete.
The fee will be $10 for 50 cases. 10% handling charge is deducted and they receive $9.

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Hallo
Thank you for your purchasing.
We are now in processing of packaging, the items change into recent model, the handle color is changing from red to green.
Please look at the picture.
Things that's being purchased in Japan, for us Japanese people, we don't mind with the model changing, but for other country, they might feel insecure with thinking it might be a counterfeit product.
We guarantee that it is an original product.
If you still feel insecure, please contact us in anytime.
In addition we send an extra from now on.
Please wait patiently.

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Hallo [spelling]
Thank you for your purchasing.
We are now in processing of packaging, [comma splice] the items change into [article] recent model, [comma splice] the handle color is [tense confusion] changing from red to green.
Please look at the picture.
Things that's [s-v agreement] being purchased [tense confusion] in Japan, for us Japanese people, we don't mind the model changing, but for other countries, they might feel insecure thinking it might be a counterfeit product.
We guarantee that it is an original product.
If you still feel insecure, please contact us in [wrong proposition] anytime.
In addition we send an extra from now on [mistranslation].
Please wait patiently.

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Use eBay file exchange, we are looking for people who understand Japanese. Please input product site into Exchange file by CSV or Exel.
There is 10000 items. Please take 1 test before the agreement. Because we send the file of address site, please tell us the important information. We will contact you after confirming the content of data entry. We will make a payment after confirmation of uploading on eBay.
The items are 10000.
Because there is another candidates, please tell us your fee for 100 data entry cases.

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We are looking for people who can use eBay file exchange and understand Japanese. Please input product site into Exchange file by CSV or EXL.
There is 10000 items. Please take a trial test before the agreement. Because we send the file of address site, please tell us the necessary information we need. We will contact you after confirming the content of data entry. We will make a payment after confirmation of uploading on eBay.
The number of items are 10000.
Because there are other candidates, please tell us your reward for 100 data entry cases.

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After I confirmed the e-mail, but I could not check the e-mail about running out stock.

Because we have returned the BDP-3200 product, please kindly refund.
Please tell us the right procedure to do.

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I confirmed the e-mails, but I could not find the e-mail about out of stock.

Because we would like to return the "BDP-3200" product, please kindly refund.
Please tell us how to proceed with it.

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I was called by xx.
For the one who dealing with this phone, I was told that they want to get in touch by e-mail.

We have a small bicycle shop in Japan and sell the bicycle parts.
We sell online too.

We would like to be stocked up for $3000 in a month.
And we plan to buy more than $7000 in month sooner.

How much the discount rate will be?
Because I attached you the list, could you please give me an estimation?

Could you please issue the invoice?

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I called xx.
And the person who answered the phone told me to contact through this e-mail.

We have a small bicycle shop in Japan and sell the bicycle parts.
We sell online too.

We would like to purchase about $3000 in a month.
And eventually we plan to purchase up to $7000 per month.

How much the discount rate will be?
I have attached a list herewith, please give me an estimation based on that.

Could you please issue the invoice?

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After checking in the Amazon explaination, there is a mistake in quantity.
We hope the the postal charge and product will be returned immediately. We give that goods with wrong quantity to customer.
We are deeply sorry for cannot deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping in our shop.

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After checking the Amazon explanation, there was a mistake in the quantity.
We will return you the postal charge and product cost immediately. We will give you the goods which the quantity was wrong for free.
We are deeply sorry for not being able to deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping with us.

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After checking in the Amazon explaination, there is a mistake in quantity.
We hope the the postal charge and product will be returned immediately. We give that goods with wrong quantity to customer.
We are deeply sorry for cannot deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping in our shop.

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After checking [dangling modifier] in the Amazon explaination [spelling], [comma splice] there is a mistake in quantity.
We hope the the postal charge and product will be returned [use active voice] immediately. We give that goods with wrong quantity to customer [mistranslation].
We are deeply sorry for [ungrammatical] cannot deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping in our shop.

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As you say, there are good things in every four seasons.
I think I love spring and autumn because I hate it if it too hot or too cold.
I want to try to live in southern island because I've never lived there. There is an image that living in the south makes you live longer than living in the north.

Yes, I must try it.
Depend on the shop, there is also a place where you can enjoy various taste of highball. Plum flavour or green apple flavour. But perhaps you like the ordinary highball.

You have siblings like that?
I want to have more siblings.

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As you say, there are good things in every four seasons.
I think I love spring and autumn because I hate it if it's too hot or too cold.
I want to try to live in southern island because I've never lived there. There is an image that living in the south makes you live longer than living in the north.

Yes, you must try it.
Depend on the shop, there is also a place where you can enjoy various taste of highball. Like plum flavor or green apple flavor. But perhaps you like the ordinary highball.

You have siblings like that?
I want to have more siblings.

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I was registered in dealer.

At first our business is few but I think the amount of stock is increased.
Our sales destination is music course and musical instrument shop.
We also have a web shop.
This violin case is our best seller in Japan.

Then, because we have web marketing of different company, we have confidence to help you to broaden your product in Japan.

This product in Amazon it's purchased in $140, can you give me the wholesales prices lower than that?

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I was registered in dealer [doesn't make sense].

At first our business is few [?] but I think the amount of stock is increased [why passive?].
Our sales destination is music course and musical instrument shops.
We also have a web shop.
This violin case is our best seller in Japan.

Then, because we have a web marketing different company, we have confidence to help you to broaden [usage] your products in Japan.

This product in Amazon it's purchased in $140 [doesn't make sense], can you give me the wholesales price lower than that?

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XXXX product was purchased on 1 October, and my name is yyyy.
After I confirmed the arrival products, what's arrived is different from the product that we ordered.
The product that we ordered was aaaa, but the product which delivered was bbbb.
Because I take the picture, please see from URL.

Because bbbb is unnecessary, please make a deal with the returning goods and refund.
If there is any stock of aaaa, we want to make a new order.

The following information of the product and order number . Please kindly confirm.
Order day: 1 October
Order number:
Amount of order: 3
Total payment:

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XXXX product was purchased on 1 October [use active voice], and my name is yyyy.
After I confirmed the arrived product, it is different from the product we ordered.
The product that we ordered was aaaa, but the product that was delivered was bbbb.
Because I take [tense] the picture, please see from the URL.

Because bbbb is unnecessary, please make a deal with the returning goods [mistranslation] and refund.
If there is any stock of aaaa, we want to place a new order.

The following information of the product and order number [fragment]. Please kindly confirm.
Order day: 1 October
Order number:
Amount of order: 3
Total payment:

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1. Is brooch pin (metal fitting) attached inside the product? Because I want part using DIY without attaching metal fitting, can you sell the goods without metal fitting?

2. Because the attached picture sold in 90's, it seems they didn't sell the gold color.

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1. Is a brooch pin (metal fitting) attached to this product? Because I want a part for DIY without a metal fitting, can you sell the goods without metal fittings?

2. The attached picture is of an item sold in the 90's, it seems like they didn't sell it in gold color.

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It was sent on 15 September, but the product hasn't arrived yet.
I tried to track, the opening was on 17 September but no progress of it.
Because it seems like the postal service trouble, we ask for refund for awhile.

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The item was sent on 15 September, but it hasn't arrived yet.
As I tried to track it, the status became "opening" on 17 September but no progress since then.
Because it seems like the postal service trouble, please issue me a refund first.

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Your favorite liquor is might be what is called highball in Japan.
Perhaps I can drink it too. Even I cannot drink Rock cause it too adult tasted (laugh).
I only went to a high fashionable shop, but recently I and my friend are looking for cheap but delicious bars.
Then, because I'm addicted to cooking, inviting my friends to my home, and drinks a lot at home.
Get drunk and sleep immediately at home is very safe.

I have lived with my 17 years age friend
But in the end, something happened

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Your favorite liquor might be what is called highball in Japan.
Perhaps I can drink it too. I cannot drink Rock [usage] cause [spelling] it too adult tasted (laugh) [awkward].
I only went to a high fashionable shop, but recently I and my friend are looking for cheap but delicious bars.
Then, because I'm addicted to cooking, inviting my friends to my home, and drinks [s-v agreement] a lot at home.
Get drunk and sleep immediately at home is very safe [ungrammatical].

I have lived [tense confusion] with my 17 years age friend [mistranslation].
But in the end, something happened [mistranslation].

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After I checked my best friend, this time I've been seen.
I'm sorry for long waited examination.
Please give me your help on the next purchase.

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Dear XXX(Addressee)↵
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Hello.↵
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After I checked with my friend, I have decided not to proceed further.
I am sorry for making that decision after you have spent your time on researching.
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I look forward for doing business with you in the next opportunity.