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Thank you for sending a picture of the item.
I looked at it, but I did not identify which part was damaged.
Could you specify which part it was?
Is the item unusable at all?
As I need to pass the information to the supplyer, I need to know it accurately.
Thank you for your help.

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Thank you for sending a picture of the item.
I looked at it, but I did not identify which part was damaged.
Could you specify which part it was?
Is the item unusable at all?
As I need to pass the information to the supplier, I need to have more details.
Thank you for your help.

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A product with black and pink ○○ is sold at the manufacture’s home page.
However, the wholesale list only shows one with black and grey ○○.
Where can I purchase a combination of black and pink?
Many customers want to buy it.

Does a set of ■■ come in a special case?
This does not appear on the wholesale list, either.
My customers want it, but where can I buy it?

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A product with black and pink ○○ is sold at the manufacture’s home page.
However, the wholesale list only shows the product with black and grey ○○.
Where can I purchase it with a combination of black and pink?
Many customers want to buy it.

Does a set of ■■ come in a special case?
This is not indicated on the wholesale list, either.
My customers want it, but where can I buy it?

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Thank you for point out.
I apologize for my poor English.

The product will arrive in a few days.
Please feel free to contact me if you have any other product you are looking for in Japan.

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Thank you for point out.
I apologize for my poor English.

The product will be delivered to you in a few days.
Please feel free to contact me if you have any other product you are looking for in Japan.

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If you would like to refund the total mount, please send the item to the address below.
I have the same item extra, I can exchange too.
If you would like to exchange, I will ship it first.
If you are satisfied with the item, please send me only defect items.
If you don't need both, send me back both of the items.↵
I will start the process of returning total amount as soon as you contact me.
Please let me know which way you would like to.

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If you would like us to refund the total amount, please return the item to the address below.
We have more of the same item in stock, so I can exchange it too.
If you would like to exchange your item, we will ship it first.
If you are satisfied with the item, please return the item with defect.
We will start processing for the full refund as soon as we hear from you.
Please let us know which way you would like.

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Does that mean you are requested to pay custom duties? Tax cannot be caluculated in the shipping stage from Japan. We can't pay the tax in advance since we use Japan Post to save the shipping cost.


If you don't receive the product, it will be returned to us. We will arrange refund foqt the product the next day the item arrives here.

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Does that mean that you are requested to pay custom duties? Tax cannot be calculated while the item still is being shipped from Japan. We can't pay the tax in advance since we use Japan Post to save the shipping cost.


If you don't receive the product, it will be returned to us. We will arrange refund foqt the product the next day the item arrives here.

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Do you know this site?
The Fitbit company officialy announced that your skin might have a rash if you wrap this item around your hand.
This item has initial failure.
Currently, the Fitbit is recalling the items.
The item I purchased is not opened yet.
I will return the item, so please make a prompt refund.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Do you know this website?
Fitbit company officially announced that users' skin might have a rash if you wrap this item around your hand.
This item has initial defect.
Currently,Fitbit is recalling the items.
The item I purchased is unopened and still in the original package .
I will return the item, so please make a prompt refund.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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■ How do you feel with this makeup?

I'm amazed.
I feel like it's not me, really.
I almost say who are you to myself.
Very refreshed and happy to feel as if l made myself a different person.

■ How well do you dance then?

Because I have danced the woman's part always
and I am a woman, so i was able to do it regularly well,
but it is the man's part now,
which forces me to use different muscles,
move fifferently, like body turn and hand movement etc.,
everything different, and so
very difficult.
But we studied together in the rehearsals
and I'm detemined to do my best, too.

I was lucky to get this position this time, which makes me happy,
as it's surely worth hungin tough, and
I'm getting really motivated now to do it so well!

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■ What do you think of this makeup?

I'm amazed.
I feel like it's not me, really.
I almost said who are you to myself.
Very refreshed and happy to feel as if l made myself a different person.

■ How well do you dance then?

Because I have danced the woman's part always
and I am a woman, so i was able to do it regularly well,
but it is the man's part now,
which forces me to use different muscles,
move differently, like body turn and hand movement etc.,
everything is different, and so
very difficult.
But we studied together in the rehearsals
and I'm determined to do my best, too.

I was lucky to get this position this time, which makes me happy,
as it's surely worth hang in tough, and
I'm getting really motivated now to do it so well!

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I received the item. But when I connected it did not work. It was broken.
I hope to exchange the item.

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I received the item. But when I connected it, it did not work. It was broken.
I hope to exchange the item.

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I have received the item.
However, it does not work even connected, and it was broken.
Please replace the item.

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I have received the item.
However, it does not work when it is connected, and it was broken.
Please replace the item.

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I checked Docomo and found that you must pay Yen for administration fee and prepaid amount to obtain SIM.

I visited and asked several stores, and found that used PSvita is basically sold by removing SIM card in Japan.

I don't charge you fee, but I will charge for others as packing fee separately.
Does your friend understand it?

The souvenir from you must be a good my birthday present.
In Paris, does city hall look for an apartment?
I assume that ○○ is not sent abroad.

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I checked with Docomo and found that you must pay Yen for administration fee and prepaid amount to obtain SIM.

I visited and asked around at several stores, and found out that used PSvita is basically sold without SIM cards in Japan.

I don't charge you fee, but I will separately　charge for others as a packing fee .
I hope your friend understands it.

The souvenir from you will be a nice birthday present for me.
In Paris, does the city hall look for an apartment for you?
I think shipment for abroad is not available with ○○ .

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I have received the package.
The amount stated on the attached invoice was US$3,000.00, but DHL seemed declaring the item value at US$3,000 because it was stated on the invoice they received.
(I confirmed with DHL over the telephone)

Because of this, I was required to pay at US$150.00 to pick it up.
It was so expensive charge.
Would you please make the value the same for the next time onward?

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I have received the package.
The amount stated on the attached invoice was US$2,000.00, but DHL seemed to have declared the item value at US$3,000 because it was stated on the invoice they received.
(I confirmed with DHL over the telephone)

Because of this, I was required to pay US$150.00 to pick it up.
The charge was so expensive.
Would you please make sure the values (on the invoice and the customs forms) match from the next time?

元の翻訳
I see. That price doesn't differ from the one in the shop, does it.

As you know from the e-mails we exchanged, up until now, I've been buying items from Mike at their wholesale price.

Other products, such as /// and +++, I always got for their wholesale price.

I would like to make more transactions with you, which would of course include more money.

So could you sell me the *** for the wholesale price as well?

Thank you for your consideration.

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I see. That price isn't that much different from the retail price, is it?

As you know from the e-mails we exchanged, up until now, I've been buying items from Mike at their wholesale price.

Other products, such as /// and +++, I always got for their wholesale price.

I am interested in buying more from you, which would of course mean more money.

So could you sell me the *** for the wholesale price as well?

Thank you for your consideration.

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A consulate staff advised us that the description about the consul, being aginst the fact, consequently ends up in rejection of approval.

They gave us the attached file which includes the past letter of attorney submitted from a company. They say an application described like this will be approved smoothly (as this does not say that the cousul has witnessed). Please refer to it.

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A consulate staff advised us that the description about the consul, being aginst the fact, consequently ends up in rejection of approval.

They gave us the attached file which includes the past letter of attorney submitted by another company. They say an application described like this will be approved smoothly (as this does not say that the cousul has witnessed). Please refer to it.

元の翻訳
Windows Azure Pack for Windows ServerはWindows Azureテクノロジーのコレクションであり、Microsoftの顧客は追加費用なしでデーターセンターにインストールして利用することができます。Windows Server 2012 R2 および System Center 2012 R2上で動作し、公共のWindows Azureの経験と一致して豊富なセルフサービス、マルチテナントのクラウドを提供することができます。

Windows Azureのパックには、次の機能が含まれています。

*テナントのための管理ポータル - ウェブサイトのクラウド、仮想マシンのクラウド、およびサービスバスのクラウド等のサービスをプロビジョニング、監視、および管理するカスタマイズ可能なセルフサービスポータル。

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Windows Azure Pack for Windows ServerはWindows Azureテクノロジーのコレクションであり、Microsoftのお客様は追加費用なしでデーターセンターにインストールして利用することができます。Windows Server 2012 R2 および System Center 2012 R2上で動作し、公共のWindows Azureの経験と一致して豊富なセルフサービス、マルチテナントのクラウドを提供することができます。

Windows Azureのパックには、次の機能が含まれています。

*テナントのための管理ポータル - ウェブサイトのクラウド、仮想マシンのクラウド、およびサービスバスのクラウド等のサービスをプロビジョニング、監視、および管理するカスタマイズ可能なセルフサービスポータル。

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I want to purchase this rug.
I am going to send it to address in Japan.
Can you send it to Japan?
Hou much is shipping charge?
How many days do we need to send it to Japan?

I also have my work place in Florida in USA.
Please tell me the shipping charge if it is sent to Florida.

How do I pay for shortage of the shipping charge?
If I can, I want to pay it via PayPal.

I saw a picture of the product, and I want to know length at the bottom.
I mean the length at the bottom, which is the length of MANGA.

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I want to purchase this rug.
I am going to send it to an address in Japan.
Can you ship it to Japan?
Hou much is the shipping charge?
How many days would it take to ship to Japan?

I also have my work place in Florida in USA.
Please tell me the shipping charge if it is sent to Florida.

How do I pay for shortage of the shipping charge?
If I can, I want to pay it via PayPal.

I saw a picture of the product, and I want to know length at the bottom.
I mean the length at the lower edge, which is the length of MANGA.

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Has SELMER already sold you got up before? I am sereiously looking for SELMER in good condition. Can you sell it for $3500 if you still have. If it's OK, I can make a PayPal payment soon. Thank you.

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Has SELMER already been sold which you got up before? I am sereiously looking for SELMER in good condition. Can you sell it for $3500 if you still have it available. If it's OK, I can make a payment via PayPal immediately. Thank you.

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Have you already sold SELMER that you listed before? I am seriously looking for SELMER, which is in good condition. If it has not been sold yet, could you sell it at 3,500 dollars?

If possible, I can pay via PayPal immediately. Thank you for your cooperation.

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Have you already sold SELMER that you listed before? I am seriously looking for SELMER, which is in good condition. If it has not been sold yet, could you sell it to me for 3,500 dollars?

If possible, I can pay via PayPal immediately. Thank you for your cooperation.

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I am engaged in the import business as a sole proprietorship since 2010. I have handeled a wide variety of items from work boots, knives to vintage lanterns,etc,. I also have an experience of sales of items with a loyal and enthusiastic following such as industrials art works .

When I first saw this item, I felt a strong story and message. I can sense where and how it was created. I can even feel how does the producer feel. An ax is, in its nature, is an item that people focus on its functionality. I have never seen an item that appeals so many messages.

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I am engaged in the import business as a sole proprietor since 2010. I have handeled a wide variety of items from work boots, knives to vintage lanterns,etc,. I also have an experience of selling items with a loyal and enthusiastic following such as industrials art works .

When I first saw this item, I felt a strong story and a message behind it. I can sense where and how it was created. I can even feel how does the producer feel. An ax is, in its nature, is an item that people focus on its functionality. I have never seen an item that appeals so many messages.

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Do you only need strap and ticket? How about towel?
Then you pay only for 1 ticket. You do not have to pay for 2 ticket for me.
I used the ticket I have, and I don't need a goods.

I am satisfied if I read it once. I am happy if I give it to you.
It is a pity. I wish price of paperbacks went lower.
I tendered a bid of clear file. I will send it with your birthday present this month.
Ok. I will add it to invoice. Thank you for the book. I am looking forward to it.

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Do you only need the strap and the ticket? How about the towel?
Then you pay only for 1 ticket. You do not have to pay for 2 ticket for me.
I used the ticket I have, and I don't need the goods.

I will be satisfied if I read it once, and am happy to give it to you.
It is a pity. I wish the price of paperbacks went lower.
I tendered a bid of clear file. I will send it with your birthday present this month.
Ok. I will add it to the invoice. Thank you for the book. I am looking forward for receiving it.

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I shipped the item.
It is now at the post office.
I tried to verify the tracking number, but it is not updated yet.
We will be soon be able to track the situation of our item, after a little while.

Also, you are demanding the paypal to make the refund.
Please withdraw the complaint.
If you don't, the complaint on the paypal will remain, although I shipped you a new item.

Please cancel the complaint submitted to paypal.

If by any chance the delivered phone cannot be used, I will definitely make a refund to you at any price.
I believed you, and shipped the new item to you.
I want you to make sure that you return the item to me .

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I shipped the item.
It is now at the post office.
I tried to verify the tracking number, but it is not updated yet.
We will be able to track the situation of our item, after a little while.

Also, you are demanding the paypal to make the refund.
Please withdraw the complaint.
If you don't, the complaint on the paypal will remain, although I shipped you a new item.

Please cancel the complaint submitted to paypal.

If by any chance the delivered phone cannot be used, I will definitely make a refund to you at any price.
I believed you, and shipped the new item to you.
I want you to make sure that you return the item to me .