Noriko Duck (big_baby_duck) — 付けたレビュー

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There is a mistake about the registered content.

Three of us will participate the conference.
The members are mentioned below.

xxxx

My own registration is done only a while ago from the URL I was told, so please make sure about that.

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There is a little mistake in the contents of the registration.

Three of us will participate in the conference.
The members to join are mentioned below.

xxxx

My own registration was done at the specified URL shortly before now, so please check it.

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Hello, I'm Tanaka.
Can I have both orders 04294975 and 04274759?
Please fix the shipping fee as well if possible.

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Hello, I'm Tanaka.
I'm sorry about causing you a trouble, but would you please put the orders No. 04294975 and No. 04274759 together?
Please adjust the shipping fee as well if possible.

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Hello,

the Item has not arrived yet,↵
could you let us know shipping updates?

Best regards

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Hello,

The corresponding item has not been delivered yet, so please let us know about the shipping status.

We appreciate your cooperation.

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As follows, there is one additional member wants to take part in the conference.
Would it be acceptable for you?

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As mentioned in the following, there is one additional member who we want to take part in the conference.
Would it be possible for you to deal with?

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As below, I would like to let a person participate in the conference in addition.
Could you respond to it?

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As mentioned below, I would like to let a member participate in the conference additionally.
Could you deal with it?

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There is one member would like to join the conference as below.
Would you handle it?

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There is one member who we'd like to join in the conference additionally as mentioned below.
Would you be able to handle it?

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I am also want a function adding "source".It is delightful that the function can be used early.
Also,I,too,think a funtion uploading video is not needed.↵
Like you have said,the function is done by only making use of YouTube or Vimeo and the function is not run by a normal server because the server is added load.
We should omit a useless funtion a few want.↵
Considering in purpose of porn,it is out of a question.

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I hope for a function to add a source, too. If you implement it soon, I'll be very glad.
And I think the function to upload videos is unnecessary, too. As you say, we should just use YouTube, Vimeo, and so on. ↵
We can't carry it on by usual servers because it would be heavy on them.
We should delete functions only a few people would want. It would be out of a question if they wanted to use them for sexual purposes.

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The order (1) is not a product to be returned to Amazon.
It was delivered in order to be stuck in the Marketplace.
Please add it to the stock of the marketplace immediately.

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The product of the order (1) is not to be returned to Amazon.
We've delivered it to you in order to make it be stuck in the marketplace.
Please add it to the stock there immediately.

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Midsummer night barbecue with a group hansome men

July 1st, 2014 (Tuesday) 6:30-9:20pm
OZmall Tokyo experience site

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SOLIDEMO will also star in the barbecue!

Event name:
Midsummer night barbecue with a group hansome men

Place:
Hotel Nikko Tokyo (Odaiba)

Date and time:
July 1st, 2014 (Tuesday) 6:30~9:20pm

Fee:
5800 yen per person (Including tax and handling fee)
Can be paid in advance by credit card or at the convience store

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Midsummer night barbecue on the beach with a group of handsome men

July 1st, 2014 (Tuesday) 6:30pm-9:20pm
OZ Mall ↵
Exploration in Tokyo and an event

SOLIDEMO will star in the event of a barbecue!

Event Name:
Midsummer night barbecue with a group of handsome men

Place:
Hotel Nikko Tokyo (Odaiba)

Date and Time:
July 1st, 2014 (Tuesday) 6:30pm~9:20pm

Fee:
5,800 yen per person (tax included and handling fee separately)
To be paid in advance by credit card or at the convenience store

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"Otameshika!"

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"They Will Try!"

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My ears have fallen in love.

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Ears In Love

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I have come across that designer in the city before.

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I've happened to see the designer in town before.

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Hi, does this Duffy stuffed animal have beads in its belly?

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Hi. Does this Duffy stuffed animal have beads in its belly?

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Hello,

Does this Duffy have beans in its belly?

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Hello,

Does this Duffy have beads in its belly?

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This time, I'm going to be traveling around the Tohoku region. I'm hoping to eat many different types of good food. I've heard there are many festivals and beautiful places to visit, so I'm really looking forward to it. Oh, if you know of any good places to visit or good food to eat, please let me know. Well then, I'm off!

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This time, I'm going to be traveling around the Tohoku region. I'm hoping to eat lots of good food. I've heard there are festivals and many beautiful places to visit, so I'm really looking forward to it. Oh, if you know of any good places to visit or good food to eat, please let me know. Well then, I'm off excited!