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With my previous track record up until now is there any way I can get a discounted price?

I've worked with you many times in the past and, unlike other American sellers, your responses have been quick and your packaging incredibly tidy. So I trust you deeply.
I'm hoping to continue working with you for a long time and I think our profits and numbers are going to go up and up.

Please consider this. I'm looking forward to your response.

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With my previous track record up until now is there any way I can get a discounted price?

I've worked with you many times in the past and, unlike other American sellers, your responses have been quick and your packaging incredibly tidy. So I trust you deeply.
I'm hoping to continue working with you for a long time and I think our profits and numbers are going to go up and up.

Please consider this. I look forward to a favorable response.

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Hello, I'm so glad to have this lovely product.
Please let me know the total price.

Please say 100 euro in the invoice when you ship.
It's for the tariff.

Thank you for your cooperation.↵
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Hello, I'm so glad to have this lovely product.
Please let me know the total price.

Please declare 100 euros in the invoice when you ship.
It's for the tariff.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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The model I ordered is model number LAMBO09G, not LAMBO09B, I think.

I didn't order MATT BLACK; RED BASE.

I'll return MATTBLACK to you and send me Lamborghini URUS Black Nemesis Shanghai Auto show 2012 instead.
Thank you.

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The part number of the model I ordered is LAMBO09G, not LAMBO09B, I think.

I didn't order MATT BLACK (RED BASE).

I'll return MATTBLACK to you, so please send me Lamborghini URUS Black Nemesis Shanghai Auto show 2012 instead.
Thank you.

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The product A I received is going to be been shipped back to the seller so can you please complete the return procedures? Please download the label from the link and print it out. Also, please print two copies of the label and stick them on the box. Sorry for the trouble.

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The product A I received is going to be been shipped back to the seller so can you please complete the return procedures? Please download the label from the link and print it out. After that, please print two copies of the label and stick them on the box. I apologise for the inconvenience.

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I'd like to make a sale again on Amazon, but do I have your approval?
If so, I'd like to make a proposal.

I have a lot of types of the adult genre products you deal in in stock.

So, would you be my business partner?

I can deliver the products at a low price so that it's worth your while.

There are no competing companies, so if you deal the products through Amazon or your own shop I'm certain you'll see an increase in sales.

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I'd like to make a sale again on Amazon, may I have your approval?
If so, I'd like to make a proposal.

I have many types of the adult genre products you deal in in stock.

So, would you be my business partner?

I can deliver the products at a low price so that it's worth your while.

There are no competing companies, so if you deal the products through Amazon or your own shop I'm certain you'll see an increase in sales.

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I want to end our deal since it is taking too much time and effort on my side. I am frustrated and disappointed with how you are dealing this. I will not return the products and will not expect refund from you.

However, if you refunded, I will regard it as a good will and I will give you a good customer review.

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I want to end our deal since it is taking too much time and effort on my side. I am frustrated and disappointed with how you are dealing with this. I will not return the products and will not expect refund from you.

However, if you do refund, I will regard it as good will and I will give you a good customer review.

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Sorry for causing you trouble.
First, about the camera you purchased from me, I want to refund your money. However, I am expecting a return of my goods.
It seems there were some handling fees for customs, but do you not get a refund when returning the item? I'm really sorry that you had to pay so many customs fees but if I don't get my goods back then I'll be taking a big loss too.

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I apologise for inconveniencing you.
First, about the camera you purchased from me, I want to refund your money. However, I am expecting a return of my goods.
It seems there were some handling fees for customs, but do you not get a refund when returning the item? I'm really sorry that you had to pay so many customs fees but if I don't get my goods back then I'll be taking a big loss too.

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Thank you for your continued support. We are thinking of selling the stock we ordered from you in our actual store. In regards to this, I wanted to ask you about the item code. Is the code that your company issues out for UPC or EAN?

If it's one of those two types we can use it as is here in Japan, otherwise if it's a different we will reissue one. If it's UPC of EAN, would it be possible for us to get the code sticker that is stuck onto the item? Also is there an item code attached with the Japanese size item we ordered from you? We would appreciate your confirmation on this.

Best regards,

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Thank you for your continued support. We are thinking of selling the stock we ordered from you in our actual store. In regards to this, I wanted to ask you about the item code. Is the code that your company issues out for UPC or EAN?

If it is one of these two types, we can use it as is here in Japan. Otherwise we will reissue again.↵
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If it is UPC of EAN, would it be possible for us to get the code sticker that is stuck onto the item? Also is there an item code attached with the Japanese size item we ordered from you? We would appreciate your confirmation on this.

Best regards,

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Thank you very much for contacting me.

I am aware that you are selling the item for $31.50 including shipping on ◯◯ and I was hoping to inquire in regards to this.

I believe there is a handling fee (I know it's over 10%) for every time you close a deal on ◯◯, but I was wondering if it were at all possible to take out this fee as a discount. If you are unable to do this, please let me know the best price that you can offer. I am really hoping to continue doing business with you from here forward. I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

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Thank you very much for contacting me.

I am aware that you are selling the item for $31.50 including shipping on ◯◯ and I was hoping to inquire in regards to this.

I believe there is a handling fee (I know it's over 10%) for every time you close a deal on ◯◯, but I was wondering if it were at all possible to take out this fee as a discount. If you are unable to do this, please let me know the best price that you can offer. I am really hoping to continue doing business with you from here on. I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

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The purpose making this policy is not necessary to change your company work method immediately, but to use as examining for developing new regulation and implementation to enhance your company internal organization structure in future.

Let us make joint efforts to develop this rule through sharing information like sending related documents etc..

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The purpose of making this policy is not necessary to change your company work method immediately, but to use as examining for developing new regulation and implementation to enhance your company internal organization structure in future.

Let us make joint efforts to develop this rule through sharing information like sending related documents etc..

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Hello. I asked you earlier to log the missing package (worth $130) back to my account, however, I do not see it back yet. I expected that the package would be shipped last week together with my last order. Please advise the current status of the package.

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Hello. I asked you earlier to refund the missing package (worth $130) back to my account, however, I do not see it refunded yet. I expected that the package would be shipped last week together with my last order. Please advise the current status of the package.

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I have a question about acquiring your company's products.

I think the products of your company are attractive, and I would appreciate to expand them as a sales outlet in Japan.

As sales method, I'm thinking of creating a specialized online shop, or selling on platforms such as Amazon.
I have 2 questions.
1. Can you ship the products to Japan?
2. What is the percent for wholesale price of the product?

For payment method, I'm thinking of using Paypal.
My Paypal Address is ◯◯.
I'm waiting for a good response.

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I have a question about your company's products.

I think your company's products are attractive, and I would like to expand your reach by opening a sales outlet in Japan.

As a mode of sales, I'm thinking of creating a specialized online shop, or selling on platforms such as Amazon.
I have 2 questions.
1. Can you ship the products to Japan?
2. What is the percentage discount for wholesale price of the product?

For payment method, I'm thinking of using PayPal.
My PayPal Address is ◯◯.
I look forward to a favorable response.

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Hello,

I am +++ who have just called you.

I know we have been in contact for a while, but again there was no detailes indicated on the invoice from the seller for the package #***.

So, I have attahced a document that shows that shows the e-mails that I and the seller exchanged.

In the document, you will find the package #, the numbers of items, the price, and the UPS tracking number.

I would very much appreciate a quick shipment of the package to Japan.

Thank you.

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Hello,

I am +++ who have just called you from Japan.

I know we have been in contact for a while, but again there were no details indicated on the invoice for package #*** to be filled up by the seller.

So, I have attached an image that shows the e-mails that I have exchanged with the seller.

In the image, you will find the package #, the numbers of items, the price, and the UPS tracking number.

I would very much appreciate a quick shipment of the package to Japan.

Thank you.

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Hi I'm Yamada from Japan.
The parcel ordered a few days ago has arrived.
Thank you very much for the quick delivery.

One of 〇〇 was shortage after verifying the receipt and the amount paid on our side.
Please do confirm in your store too.

It's all right to deliver the shortage item together the next order.
An other order will be placed soon.
We look forward to working more closely with you in the future.

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Hi I'm Yamada from Japan.
The parcel ordered a few days ago has arrived.
Thank you very much for the quick delivery.

One of 〇〇 was short after verifying with the receipt and the amount paid on our side.
Please do confirm in your store too.

It's all right to deliver the shortage item together the next order.
An other order will be placed soon.
We look forward to working more closely with you in the future.

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It was said this year around August, there was a transaction with E-bay.
Is it possible to purchase "A" again? If the stock is available, I would very much like to purchase it.
In future, if there is a possibility to have priority it will be good.
Thank you very much, I look forward to your reply.

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I am ○○, who made a purchase from you through Ebay in August this year.
Is it possible to purchase "A" again? If the stock is available, I would very much like to purchase it.
I will like to have priority to the goods if it is possible.
Thank you very much and I look forward to your reply.

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Thank you very much for your constant patronage.

I am deeply grateful for your this time round.
When you purchase 2 items, I will bundle both items together and send them. Also, for bulk purchases, I will send the invoice for free shipping.

Thank you very much.

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Thank you very much for your constant patronage.

Thank you for your purchase of the two items this time.
I will pack the two items together and ship them out. Due to your high volume of purchases from us, please let us extend an invoice for the free shipping of one item to you.

Thank you very much.

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Hi,

I have some experiences that refund was issued by sellers, but I have never told the sellers about my email address and phone number on ebay. (I think you can check using Paypal.)

Just in case, I have sent my email address and phone number, so please check.

I appreciate your quick response.

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Hi,

I have some experiences where I received partial refunds from sellers, but I have never had to tell the sellers my email address and phone number through ebay. (I believe you will understand if you check it out with PayPal)

Just in case, I have sent my email address and phone number to your email address, so please check.

I appreciate your quick response.

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The aforementioned data is summarised only from the data in the English article, (There has been an investment in wide scale advertising of the Chinese article, so to include the Chinese article would blur the results).

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The aforementioned data is summarised only from the data in the English article, (There has been an investment in wide scale advertising of the Chinese article, so to include the Chinese article would affect the results).

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I already performed the "URGENT" procedure to have my baggage shipped 3 days ago but the still haven't been shipped yet.
You said that a part of my luggage was launched out, but please send the rest of the existing baggages immediately.
If you don't, I won't be able to figure out what's been lost!
Please send what luggage you have ASAP!

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I had already performed the "URGENT" procedure to have my luggage shipped 3 days ago but until now, it has yet to be shipped.
You said that a part of my luggage spilled out, but please send the rest of the existing baggages immediately.
If you don't, I won't be able to figure out what's been lost!
Please send what luggage you have ASAP!

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Were the manual and e-mails I sent to you written in so poor English that you could not understand?

If my English is not understandable, we cannot communicate.

You listed items without product descriptions, shipping costs or payment details.

When you would buy something from a webshop like eBay, what would make you to decide buying it?

Would you buy an item with just seeing a picture and product name?

Once you buy an item and find a wrong size or function delivered to you, what would you do?

On eBay, an item should never fail to be returned in such a case. And the return shipping cost is to be paid by me.

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Were the manual and e-mails I sent to you written in so poor English that you could not understand?

If my English is not understandable, we cannot communicate.

You listed items without product descriptions, shipping costs or payment details.

When you wish to buy something from a webshop like eBay, what would you base your purchase decision on?

Would you buy an item after just seeing a picture and its product name?

Once you buy an item and find that the wrong size has been delivered or the product's function is not what you expected, what would you do?

On eBay, an item should never fail to be returned in such an event. Of course, the return shipping cost is to be paid by me.

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I was suggested by you to contact the delivery company (xx) to confirm the delivery status.
The following is the proof of delivery e-mailed from them, as per your request.
I did ship the item, and it has been delivered to the buyer, whereas there has not been any payment received, and I can't believe it.
Such a thing should not happen.
Please look into the situation well, and send me the money for what I sold.
I hope you to judge this matter right.

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I was instructed by you to contact the delivery company (xx) to confirm the delivery status.
The following is the proof of delivery e-mailed from them.
It is unconceivable that payment is not made when the item has been shipped and delivered to the buyer.
Such a thing should not happen.
Please look into the situation well, and send me the money for what I sold.
I look forward to your fair resolution.