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日本語

ご連絡を下さりまして、ありがとうございます。

お尋ねしたいのですが、◯◯のサイトでは、あなたは送料込みの31.50$
で販売をされていると存じます。

◯◯のサイトで毎回成約の度に、手数料（約10%以上と存じます）を徴収
されていると思いますが、その分をディスカウントして頂く事は可能か
という事をお聞きしたいのです。

もし、できないのでしたらあなたのベストプライスを教えて下さい。
私はあなたと今後、継続的にビジネスがしたいと考えています。

何卒、宜しくお願い致します。

英語

Thank you very much for contacting me.

I am aware that you are selling the item for $31.50 including shipping on ◯◯ and I was hoping to inquire in regards to this.

I believe there is a handling fee (I know it's over 10%) for every time you close a deal on ◯◯, but I was wondering if it were at all possible to take out this fee as a discount. If you are unable to do this, please let me know the best price that you can offer. I am really hoping to continue doing business with you from here forward. I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

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aspenxはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/23 17:42:03

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for contacting me.

I am aware that you are selling the item for $31.50 including shipping on ◯◯ and I was hoping to inquire in regards to this.

I believe there is a handling fee (I know it's over 10%) for every time you close a deal on ◯◯, but I was wondering if it were at all possible to take out this fee as a discount. If you are unable to do this, please let me know the best price that you can offer. I am really hoping to continue doing business with you from here forward. I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

修正後
Thank you very much for contacting me.

I am aware that you are selling the item for $31.50 including shipping on ◯◯ and I was hoping to inquire in regards to this.

I believe there is a handling fee (I know it's over 10%) for every time you close a deal on ◯◯, but I was wondering if it were at all possible to take out this fee as a discount. If you are unable to do this, please let me know the best price that you can offer. I am really hoping to continue doing business with you from here on. I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Great!