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日本語

Amazonで再び販売したいのですが、あなたの許可を頂けないでしょうか？
もしくは、こちらから提案させて頂きたいことがあります。

あなたが扱っているアダルトジャンルの商品ですが、私は数多くの種類の商品と在庫を持っています。

そこで、私のビジネスパートナーになって頂けませんか？

あなたにもメリットがあるように、安い価格で納品させて頂きます。

Amazonやあなたのショップで扱えば、競合する他社もいないので、間違いなく売上は上がると思います。

英語

I'd like to make a sale again on Amazon, but do I have your approval?
If so, I'd like to make a proposal.

I have a lot of types of the adult genre products you deal in in stock.

So, would you be my business partner?

I can deliver the products at a low price so that it's worth your while.

There are no competing companies, so if you deal the products through Amazon or your own shop I'm certain you'll see an increase in sales.

レビュー ( 1 )

aspenxはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/03 12:06:53

元の翻訳
I'd like to make a sale again on Amazon, but do I have your approval?
If so, I'd like to make a proposal.

I have a lot of types of the adult genre products you deal in in stock.

So, would you be my business partner?

I can deliver the products at a low price so that it's worth your while.

There are no competing companies, so if you deal the products through Amazon or your own shop I'm certain you'll see an increase in sales.

修正後
I'd like to make a sale again on Amazon, may I have your approval?
If so, I'd like to make a proposal.

I have many types of the adult genre products you deal in in stock.

So, would you be my business partner?

I can deliver the products at a low price so that it's worth your while.

There are no competing companies, so if you deal the products through Amazon or your own shop I'm certain you'll see an increase in sales.