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I'm very sorry to bother you at this time of year, but thank you for your reply.
Also, thank you for presenting the MOQ and terms of trade at dealings.

Please advise your sales channels, we do not support retailing our products on Amazon.
Regarding the above, does it mean we cannot sell the product at Amazon of Japan?
We are planning to sell it at Amazon as sales plan in Japan, so could you let me know?

The address is as follows.

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I'm very sorry to bother you at this time of year, but thank you for your reply.
Also, thank you for letting us know the MOQ, incoterms, and other terms and conditions.

"Please advise your sales channels, we do not support retailing our products on Amazon."
Regarding the above, does it mean we cannot sell the product on Amazon of Japan?
We are planning to sell it on Amazon as sales plan in Japan, so could you let me know?

The address is as follows.

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I am in charge of a assistant of Japanese subsidiary of America's hotel chain. My main work is my boss's mail check, creation of files, phone calls, preparation of meetings, and ordering items. Now we are in preparation of a new hotel in Tokyo. I need to study English I have forgotten for I need it. In private, I sometimes do design for graphic designer. Before, I had worked as a graphic designer. I like designing but I like creative hotel developing work too.

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I am an assistant at a Japanese subsidiary of a American hotel chain. My main work includes checking my boss' mail, creating files, taking and making phone calls, preparing for meetings and ordering items. Now, we are preparing for the opening of a new hotel in Tokyo. I need to brush up on my English because I will need it. In private, I sometimes do some design work as a graphic designer. Previously, I had worked as a graphic designer. I like designing but I like creative hotel development work too.

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1. Can I resume the music box without any problem?

2. I am going to bid this item. Can I send it with xx I purchased a few days ago if I win it?
If I can, is the shipping charge I had paid all right?
Or do I need to pay the shipping charge additionally?

3. Please pack is as strictly as possible.
Would you tell me the additional shipping charge required for sending with it?

4. I purchased it in the concert hall.
It had not been used, but I found a small damage on the surface when I purchased it.
It is a T shirt that has not been used, but I found that some parts of the characters were missing when I purchased it.

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1. Can I take it that the music box functions well without any problems?

2. I am going to bid for this item. If I win the auction, can you ship it together with xx which I purchased a few days ago?
If so, are the shipping fees I paid all right?
Will I need to top up for the shipping fees?

3. Please try to pack it as carefully as possible.
Please let me know the additional fees and charges for packing them together.

4. I purchased it in the concert hall.
It had not been used, but it came with light damage on the surface when I purchased it.
It is a brand new unused T-shirt but I found some parts of the characters missing when I purchased it.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message and your support last year.
I hope our business relationship will continue this year as well.
Here are two questions for you:

1. In your email, it was mentioned that no shipping fee is charged to the unshipped kit ordered in December. Would those remaining kits of the order be subject to the shipping fee as well?
2. I would like to newly place an order for your product because it is popular. Which would you recommend, if I should order after the unshipped order is done or can I go ahead and place a new order right away?
I believe you are busy, but your reply is appreciated.

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Thank you for your message and your support last year.
I hope our business relationship will continue this year as well.
Here are two questions for you:

1. In your email, it was mentioned that no shipping fee was charged on the unshipped kit ordered in December. Will the remaining kits from the order be subject to a shipping fee as well?
2. I would like to place another order for your product because it is popular. Which would you recommend? Should I order after all the outstanding orders have been shipped, or should I go ahead and place a new order right away?
I believe you are busy, but your reply is much appreciated.

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I sell goods at Amazon.com and ship goods by USPS.
I released shipping labels using the Buy Shipping service at Amazon.com.
Some of my goods I shipped in November and December became missing.
Therefore, I asked to check my goods at "Where is my Package" of USPS site.
Below is a part of the case numbers, now under investigation.

Are these still under investigation? I'd like to know the present status.
If they are not found, could I receive any any compensations?

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I sell goods on Amazon.com and ship goods by USPS.
I released shipping labels using the Buy Shipping service at Amazon.com.
Some of the goods I shipped in November and December went missing.
Thereafter, I enquired about my goods through the "Where is my Package" function on the USPS site.
Below is a part of the case numbers, now under investigation.

Are these still under investigation? I'd like to know the present status.
If they are not found, could I receive any compensation?

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(1) I checked the invoice, but I am afraid the name of the item that I ordered is not correct.
The item I ordered is not 〇〇〇.
I ordered the item below.

Please send me an invoice again with the item which I ordered.

(2) Currently I buy 10 pcs of the item above for US $340.
I heard the prices for MOQ10, MOQ50 and MOQ100. So, can you please the price for MOQ50 and MOQ100 respectively?

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(1) I checked the invoice, but I am afraid the name of the item that I ordered is not correct.
The item I ordered is not 〇〇〇.
I ordered the item below.

Please reissue the invoice with the item which I ordered.

(2) Currently I buy 10 pcs of the item above for US $340.
I heard the prices for MOQ10, MOQ50 and MOQ100. So, can you please let me know the price for MOQ50 and MOQ100 respectively?

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How have you been ?
I have heard that the coronavirus has been spreading over Turkey as well on the TV news.
It has been greater spreading rapidly worldwide since the last email for you about a week time.
In Tokyo, it may likely lockdown situation soon.
I have been staying home for working for a couple of weeks.
Are you and your family and also for staffs at your hospital staying safe?
If you are experiencing the shortage of surgical masks, please let me know.
I will be able to send some of them even in same shortage situation in Japan for masks now.
Be safe !
When the situation will be better I do hope to work with you again soon.

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How have you been ?
I heard on the TV news that the coronavirus has been spreading over Turkey as well.
It has been spreading even more rapidly worldwide since the last email for you about a week time.
In Tokyo, it may likely be lockdown situation soon.
I have working from home for a couple of weeks.
Are you, your family and also staff at your hospital staying safe?
If you have a shortage of surgical masks, please let me know.
I will be able to send some of them even though we alre also in shortage in Japan now.
Stay safe !
When the situation is better I do hope to work with you again soon.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support as always.

How is the production going now?

I would like to have a meeting about caution for the order this time by Skype.
Are you available on March 19th?
(Vietnamese will also join the meeting, so the language can be applied with Vietnamese, too.)
It would be happy for me if you could tell me your availability.
Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for your support as always.

How is the production going now?

I would like to have a meeting about caution for the order this time over Skype.
Are you available on March 19th?
(A Vietnamese will also join the meeting, so the language can be Vietnamese, too.)
It would be happy if you could tell me your availability.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your support.
How is the things going on?
I would like to hold an meeting to discuss notices for ordering at this time over the Skype.
Would you be available on 19th of March? As our Vietnamese staff is also attending so that conduction in Vietnamese will be possible
Could you please tell me your available schedule?
With regards.

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Thanks for your support.
How are things going?
I would like to hold a meeting to discuss things to take note for the order this time over the Skype.
Would you be available on 19th of March? As our Vietnamese staff is also attending, we can conduct this in Vietnamese.
Could you please tell me your available schedule?
With regards.

元の翻訳
Hello.

Regarding the order, I don't have any information from th customer.
I am looking forward to your reply about the Proforma Invoice and the delivery date.

Please let me talk about another topic.
In terms of the table sample, is the color sample of iron ready?
And, are the table sample and the color sample of ash material ready, either?

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Hello.

Regarding the order, I do not have any information from the customer.
I am looking forward to your reply about the Proforma Invoice and the delivery date.

Please let me talk about another topic.
Regarding the table sample, is the color sample of iron ready?
And, are the table sample and the color sample of ash material ready, either?

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At this time, the amount will be high, so that I think I had better pay it via bank transfer.
Is your system to be accepted for the bank transfer?
If so, would you make a discount , which is approximately for the transaction fee for PayPal ?
I very much appreciate your consideration .

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This time, the amount is high, so I think I had better pay it via bank transfer.
Can your system to be accept bank transfer?
If so, could you give me a discount , for approximately the transaction fee through PayPal ?
I very much appreciate your consideration .

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I am sorry to be late in contacting you. I opened the item last week, but lamp was damaged.
I hate to say, but I would like to return it to you.

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I am sorry to be late in contacting you. I opened the item last week, and found the lamp to be damaged.
I hate to say, but I would like to return it to you.

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Hello, my name is Io!
This illustration is of "TOHO Project", which is one of the famous otaku culture in Japan.
I will continue to draw and post "TOHO Project" illustrations.
Please enjoy the "TOHO Project"'s world!

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Hello, my name is Io!
This illustration is of "TOHO Project", which is one of the famous otaku culture in Japan.
I will continue to draw and post "TOHO Project" illustrations.
Please enjoy "TOHO Project"'s world!

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Hello, my name is EO(?)!
This illustration is from "TOHO Project", which is famous in Japanese Otaku culture!
I am also going to draw "TOHO Project"'s illustration and submit to it from now on.
Please enjoy the world of "TOHO Project"!

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Hello, my name is EO!
This illustration is from "TOHO Project", which is famous in Japanese Otaku culture!
I am also going to draw "TOHO Project"'s illustration and submit to it from now on.
Please enjoy the world of "TOHO Project"!

元の翻訳
#will

SLDR Plate arrived today.
There're 2 plates and 5 weights,so you gave me 3 extra weights for free?
And thank you for the pro 70 Stiff as a free gift.So if they sell well,I'll buy more.

I want to order 2 Tour Issue SLDR TS 14 3Woods and could you make it $280 including shipping cost for me?

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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#will

SLDR Plate arrived today.
There're 2 plates and 5 weights, so you gave me 3 extra weights for free?
And thank you for the pro 70 Stiff free gifts. If they sell well, I'll buy more.

I want to order 2 Tour Issue SLDR TS 14 3Woods. Could you make it $280 including shipping cost for me?

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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I receaved the product SLDR Plate today.
There are 2 plates and 5 weights. Did you do me 3 weights an addition? Thank you for your addition for a pro 70 Stiff.If there wii sell well, I will order theme for the next time.

I will order you 2 Tour Issue SLDR TS 14 3Wood and are you interested in 280& for the price of shipping?

Thank your for your answer.

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I received the product SLDR Plate today.
There are 2 plates and 5 weights. Did you give me 3 weights as addition? Thank you for your addition for the pro 70 Stiff too. If they sell well, I will order more for the next time.

I will like to order 2 Tour Issue SLDR TS 14 3Wood. Since I am ordering 2, can you make it $280 for the 2 inclusive of shipping?

I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
#will

SLDR Plate arrived today.
Two plates, plus 5 weights included; are 3 weights the throw-in?
And thanks for the pro 70 Stiff throw-ins. If they sell well I will purchase them again.

As for the Tour Issue SLDR TS 14 3Wood, I would like to order two. Because I purchase two, it includes the postage, And how about at $280 for the two including the postage?

I look forward to hearing from you.

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#will

SLDR Plate arrived today.
I received two plates with 5 weights included; are 3 weights the throw-in?
And thanks for the pro 70 Stiff throw-ins. If they sell well I will purchase them again.

As for the Tour Issue SLDR TS 14 3Wood, I would like to order two. Because I am purchasing two, can you make it $280 for the two including the postage?

I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
(Supplimentation)
It is difficult for us to accept their request right away.
However, we should look into how we can realise their requests.
They also want to know the necessary requirements for making it happen.
I understand what both parties feel, and I am continuing to investigate the countermeasure for this matter.

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(Supplementation)
It is difficult for us to accept their request right away.
However, we should look into how we can fulfill their requests.
They also want to know the necessary requirements for making it happen.
I understand what both parties feel, and I am continuing to investigate the countermeasure for this matter.

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That's right...
I am very disappointed.
However since I don't know the cetain way to import the item, there is a higher chance to get the item confiscated at the customs. I am sorry to consult with you because it would cause a loss to you, but it would be appreciated if you could repay me a half of the price. Also, would you please let me know what procedure to take for doing so? Should I open a dispute? Although I couldn't receive your item, I am grateful for your kind support.

"The store for watch repair and battery replacement in Akishima-city"

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That's right...
I am very disappointed.
However since I don't know any certain way to import the item, there is a higher chance to get the item confiscated at the customs. I am sorry to consult with you because it would cause a loss to you, but it would be appreciated if you could repay me half of the price. Also, would you please let me know what procedure to take for doing so? Should I open a dispute? Although I couldn't receive your item, I am grateful for your kind support.

"The store for watch repair and battery replacement in Akishima-city"

元の翻訳
11, Using account when you buy something
-The day of Amazon
-you e-mail address: acountusan@gmail.com
-password:
*Make sure using gift certificate.

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11, Using account when you buy something
-The day of Amazon
-you e-mail address: acountusan@gmail.com
-password:
*Use of gift certificate is required

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A news I'm concerning recently is about Iraq. In Iraq, the government is attacking on many cities for countering terror, resulting in extensive damage to citizen. For example, many abnormal infant were born by the effect of using bombs which include harmful substances to human. My friend is working on the problem in Iraq and Jordan. I feel sadness to hear the situation of Iraq from her. I intend to keep my eyes toward incidents around the world.

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A news I'm concerning recently is about Iraq. In Iraq, the government is attacking on many cities for countering terror, resulting in extensive damage to citizen. For example, many infants were born with birth defects due to the effect of using bombs which include harmful substances to humans. My friend is working on the problem in Iraq and Jordan. I feel sad to hear the situation of Iraq from her. I intend to keep my eyes opened to incidents around the world.

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My friends often say that I am active very much. I had been enthusiastic about playing baseball in elementary school, junior and senior high school while studied hard.

After entering the university, I volunteered in NGO in India and Myanmar, and created a free paper and documentary to show the activity. I also held a charity event to inform the activity of NGO in these countries. My grades in the university had been always good to be a foreign exchange student.
I am working at a company that carries out halal business as an intern energetically.
I always try to challenge.

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My friends often say that I am very active. I had been enthusiastic about playing baseball in elementary school, junior and senior high school while studied hard.

After entering the university, I volunteered in NGO in India and Myanmar, and created a free paper and documentary to show the activity. I also held a charity event to inform the activity of NGO in these countries. My grades in the university had been always good to be a foreign exchange student.
I am working at a company that carries out halal business as an intern energetically.
I always try to challenge myself.