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I made a mistake, I wrote US instead of UK. I'm very sorry.

I also think it's strange that the items which were sent at the same time arrived different time. I assume 1.The item has been stopped at somewhere. or, 2. The post office has lost the item.
However, I think it's too early to decide it has been lost, because I previously sent clear files to France, but it took more than 5 weeks to reach there.

There is no need to feedback before you get them, of course. I really would like you to receive 〇, so I will respond you till last.

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I really apologize that I have mistakenly wrote US instead of UK

I also think it's strange that the items sent at the same time would be delivered in different time. What I can think is whether it has been held somewhere due to delayed processing or it has been lost during the shipment↵

However, I think it's too early to decide it has been lost. I have experience previously sending clear files to France that took more than 5 weeks to be delivered.

There is no need for you to leave a feedback before you get them, of course. I really would like you to receive 〇, so I will respond to you till the last.↵

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Where is Q) download address displayed?
A)Paypal・ If you are considering a credit card transaction, the items can be downloaded from the link below(image's position). As for a bank payment, we can inform you a download address via e-mail short after we confirm the payment.

Also, you can download the items you logged in and bought from your past order history.

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Q) Where download address is displayed?
A) If you are considering a Paypal or credit card transaction, the items can be downloaded from the link below(image's position). As for a bank payment, we can inform you a download address via e-mail soon after we confirm the payment.

Also, you can download the items you logged in and ordered from your past order history.

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Hello, I would like to place an additional order,

but please ship the item numbers above altogether.

Also I would like to ask if you can ship the additional order from internet operation.

It's described on the site explanation you can?

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Hello, I would like to place an additional order,

but please ship the item numbers above altogether.

Also I would like to ask if you can ship the additional order from website operation.

It's described on the website and the explanation that you can do that.

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I have a favor for you regarding to the tracking number X.
I will return the game devices which lack the amount.
Regarding to N, I would like you to add to the current delivery setting.

Feel free to let me know if there are anything unclear.

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I have a request for you regarding tracking number X.
I will return the game devices which lack the amount.
Regarding N, I would like for you to add to the current delivery setting.

Feel free to let me know if there is anything unclear.

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Thank you very much for contacting me. About the item I found, Please kindly register to your account. Thank you also for your 25$ discount.
I have one question as well, about the products I have received,↵
Tracking number: ＊＊↵
Tracking number: ＊＊↵
These two products are originally the same item, and you sent them to me distinctively considering the safety of amp and front panel of the main body. So, I wanted to declare glass panel for 0$, but it hasn't reflected. Will you let me know how I can solve this?

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Thank you very much for contacting me. Please register that item that I found to the account (my/your?). Also, thank you for the $25 discount.
I also have a question about another case, the items I currently have on order with tracking number:?? and ?? These are originally part of the same product, but considering the safety of the amp and front panel, I would like to have the two sent separately. I wanted to declare the price for the glass panel as $0, but its not reflecting in the price. Can you tell me how to resolve this?

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商品がどうさせず、申し訳ございません。返品に支障はございません。届いた時と同じ包装状態で商品をお入れください。もし同じでなかったら、お客様の自費で商品の返却となってしまいます。
弊社の輸送先住所は下記の通りです：

Botach Tactical(会社の名前)
eBay 返却係宛て
3423 West 43rd Place
ロサンゼルス

パッケージに、お客様のお名前と、RMA # 219967、メールアドレスを記入し、商品の交換または返金どちらをご希望かご記入ください。商品交換を迅速に処理いたします。

ご不明な点やご質問がある際は、ご遠慮なくお問い合わせください。

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商品が動作せず、申し訳ございません。返品に支障はございません。商品は必ず届いた時と同じ包装状態にしてください。同じでない場合は、お客様へ返却され、費用はお客様のご負担となります。
弊社の送り先住所は下記の通りです：

Botach Tactical
Attn:eBay
3423 West 43rd Place
Los Angeles

パッケージに、お客様のお名前、RMA # 219967、メールアドレス、そして商品の交換または返金どちらをご希望かご記入ください。商品の返品処理が迅速に行えます。↵
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交換をご希望の場合は、お客様のお名前、メールアドレス、およびご希望の新しいサイズ をパッケージにご記入ください。交換処理が迅速に行えます。

ご不明な点やご質問がある際は、ご遠慮なくお問い合わせください。

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Do herb's cartridge and oil contain nicotine?

If included, you can't sell inn Japan.
If there are anything contain nicotine, let me know all of them.

Is USB only available for power supply?
Is it okay without consent?

We will purchase immediately if it costs $10,000 monthly.

We will enlarge our selling soon, so I think we can buy more than $50,000, monthly.

We are sincerely happy about being a branch of your company.

I'm looking forward to all of your replies.

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Do herb's cartridge and oil contain nicotine?

If included, you can't sell in Japan.
If there is anything contain nicotine, let me know all of them.

Is USB only available for power supply?
Is it okay without consent?

We will purchase immediately if it costs $10,000 monthly.

We will enlarge our selling soon, so I think we can buy more than $50,000, monthly.

We are sincerely happy about being a branch of your company.

I'm looking forward to all of your replies.

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Oh yes, I saw the site, too. But it doesn't include any description about the cartoon bonus.
I think the bonus will definitely comes along since they are making exclusive pages!
By the way, the cover was drawn by Mr. ◇.

I misread quite often, so sometime I say the same things... sorry. I must be careful not to miss the sticker on December!

The shipping fee is included, but it says shipping abroad is possible, so how about purchasing here?

This is an announcement poster of theatrical 〇 which is not for sale, so it's hard to get it.

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Oh yes, I saw the site, too. But it doesn't include any description about the cartoon bonus.
I think the bonus will definitely come along since they are making exclusive pages!
By the way, the cover was drawn by Mr. ◇.

I misread quite often, so sometime I say the same things... sorry. I must be careful not to miss the sticker on December!

The shipping fee is included, but it says shipping abroad is possible, so how about purchasing here?

This is an announcement poster of theatrical 〇 which is not for sale, so it's hard to get it.

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I expect near original price or cheaper then A store.

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I expect near original price or cheaper than A store.

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Do you know Himeji Castle?

This is a world's cultural heritage, and it only takes twenty minutes from my home by car.

I guessed there are less visitors because it's under refit once in five decades, but we can see the repairment condition of the castle from different angle.

(I didn't know it...)

This is such a precious experience.
I head we can see it by 1/15 next year, so I want to take my kid there.
If you are planning a trip to Japan, please take this as consideration.
It's my recommendation.

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Do you know Himeji Castle?

This is one of the world cultural heritage sites, and it only takes twenty minutes from my home by car.

I guessed there are less visitors because it is under repairs which is once in five decades, but we can see the castle from a different angle as well as how the repair is going.

(I didn't know it...)

This is such a precious experience.
I heard we could see it by 1/15 next year, so I want to take my kid there.
If you are planning a trip to Japan, please take this as consideration.
It's my recommendation.

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I'm glad that the item has reached you safely.
I'm also pleased to know that it became your favorite.
I will help you if there are any Japanese products you are looking for.
Thank you very much.

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I'm glad that the item has reached you safely.
I'm also pleased that you liked it.
I will help you if you are looking for any Japanese item.
Thank you very much.

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Here is a product I bought on June 8th.
As you can see from the URL below, our customer reported us that three heads stopped moving.

According to him, other three heads are normally activating.
He also said that the condition doesn't change even if he pushed the emergency button.

Please kindly send three heads in the image to following address.

This is a failure that annual coverage is still available.

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Here is a product I purchased on June 8th.
As you can see from the URL below, our customer reported us that three heads stopped moving.

Apparently, other three heads are normally activating.
The report also addressed the condition in which pushing an emergency button does not make any difference.

Please send three heads in the image below to the following address.

This is a breakdown within a range of one year indemnity.

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こんにちは、INFINITE second invasionの日本ツアーについて聞きたいんことがあります。
商品の写真を送ってくれませんか。

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こんにちは、INFINITE second invasionの日本ツアーについて聞きたいことがあります。
商品の写真を送ってくれませんか。

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Dear Mr. Troy Garretty,

How do you do?

I'm sorry this doesn't make clear sense.

What I wanted ask from you, is that I couldn't find a product called LR Baggs M1A Active, but I could only check LR Baggs M1 Active on the maker's homepage.
The items that Mr. Troy Garretty is selling is written LR Baggs M1A Active, and is this the same product as LR Baggs M1 Active?
Or is it totally different product?

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Dear Mr. Troy Garretty,

How do you do?

I'm sorry this doesn't make clear sense.

What I wanted ask from you is that I couldn't find a product called LR Baggs M1A Active and I could only find LR Baggs M1 Active on the maker's homepage.
The items that you are selling is written as LR Baggs M1A Active, but is this the same product as LR Baggs M1 Active?
Or is it a totally different product?

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Mon was so glad to hear it!
There are varieties of bags in Japan, but I had a crush on a bag at ○, because its design was simple and sophisticated.
The design of Eiffel Tower was too cute!
There is no need to send me back what I sent you first. I still have storage, so no worries.
I don't find many posting accidents here in Japan, but I heard there are many in other countries.
There was a same thing in the U.S. the other day, too. I attached a tracking number, so I think it works!
I wish the delivery doesn't make you wait too long.

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Mon [sp?] was so glad to hear it!
There are varieties of bags in Japan, but I had a crush on a bag at ○, because its design was simple and sophisticated.
The design of Eiffel Tower was too cute!
There is no need to send me back what I sent you first. I still have storage [?], so no worries.
I don't find many posting accidents [?] here in Japan, but I heard there are many in other countries.
There was a same thing [?] in the U.S. the other day, too. I attached a tracking number, so I think it works!
I wish the delivery doesn't make you wait too long [awk].

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Ii was so lucky to choose at Ray & Lena.
I don't speak English pretty much, and this was my first visit to the U.S., so I was very worried.
However, Lena spoke Japanese very well and I felt relieved.
Also, Ray recommended me some stores and sightseeing spots, and all of them made my journey special.
Moreover, their lovely dog welcomed me. NY became my favorite city thanks to Ray & Lena.
I will use their room again on my next visit.

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I was so lucky to choose at Ray & Lena.
I speak very little English, and this was my first visit to the U.S., so I was very worried.
However, Lena spoke Japanese very well and I felt relieved.
Also, Ray recommended me some stores and tourist spots, and all of them made my journey extremely memorable.
Moreover, their lovely dog welcomed me. I came to really liked NY thanks to Ray & Lena.
I will use their room again on my next visit.

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The item that I have ordered on 8/28 hasn't reached yet.

I'm sorry to bother you, but I appreciate it if you could let me know the tracking number as soon as possible.

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The item that I have ordered on 8/28 hasn't been delivered yet.

I'm sorry to bother you, but I appreciate it if you could let me know the tracking number as soon as possible.

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Thank you very much for shipping the product. It reached me safely.

However, sorry to bother you, but
Please refund to my paypal account, XXX@XX.XX.XX.

I live in Japan and the address you sent to an address of transfer company.
I was planning to receive from that company, but the restriction of law doesn't allow them to export to Japan.
I'm very sorry. Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you very much for shipping the product. It reached me safely.

However, sorry to bother you, but
Please refund to my paypal account, XXX@XX.XX.XX.

I live in Japan, and the address you sent to was the address of transfer company.
I was planning to receive it from that company, but the restriction of law doesn't allow them to export it to Japan.
I'm very sorry, and thank you for your understanding.

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Your company sells many catching and high-quality products. We will consider measurements which don't bother you, so we appreciate it if you could keep trading with us.
If you happen to know any contact information about tour department, it would help us a lot.
Thank you very much for your time.

Than you for your response.
We are now contacting to our supplier.
We are sorry to have bothered you.

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Your company sells many eye-catching and high-quality products. We will consider methods which don't cause you any trouble, so we would appreciate it if you could keep trading with us.
If you happen to know of the contact information for the tour department, it would help us a lot if you could pass that along.
Thank you very much for your time.

Than you for your response.
We are now contacting our supplier.
We are sorry to have caused you any inconvenience.