✿Apple Tea✿ (appletea) — もらったレビュー

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I'm sorry this is late.

I refunded you via PayPal right now.

Please confirm.

Thank you!!

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I'm sorry this is late. (厳密にはthisがなにかわからない。I'm sorry for this late replyなどならはっきりわかる）

I refunded you via PayPal right now.　（right nowは”いますぐやります”、”現在・・・進行中です”とか現在、未来などに適していると思いますが。just now なら”たった今”など時制を問わず使えるのでそれの方がいいかもしれない。

Please confirm.

Thank you!!

元の翻訳
Then, please submit each estimate for the occasions of ordering 10 items and 20 items.

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Then, please submit each estimate when I buy 10 items and 20 items.

元の翻訳
訪問販売につて知識はなく、家のポストから商品を受け取ることが多いです。
ばれないようにお送りください。

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訪問販売につて知識はなく家のポストから商品を受け取ることが多いです。
（宅配便については、あまりよく分かりませんが、いつも商品は郵便受けに入れてもらっています。）↵
ばれないようにお送りください。↵
（中身を分からないようにして送ってください）

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Thank you very much for your inquiry.

The object in the picture, is the product itself.

Flash switch has 3 stages, 2 stages of flash and the another is without flash.

Eyepiece is not included.

Thank you for your consideration.

I'm looking for a positive reply.

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Thank you very much for your inquiry.

The object in the picture, is the product itself.

Flash switch has 3 stages, 2 stages of flash and the another is without flash.

Eyepiece is not included.

Thank you for your consideration.

I'm looking forward to a positive reply.

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You made payment of the item number 777 on eCheck.

I have confirmed that your feedback is 100%, and I sent you before the payment was made.

However, I received information from Paypal today that your payment from eCheck wasn't made.

I sent an invoice of $218.99 again, so please pay out within 3 days.
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I report to both ebay and Paypal about this problem, and request them to freeze your account for good.

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You made payment of the item number 777 on eCheck.

I have confirmed that your feedback is 100%, and I sent you the item before the payment was made.

However, I received information from Paypal today that your payment from eCheck wasn't made.

I sent an invoice of $218.99 again, so please pay out within 3 days.
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I report to both ebay and Paypal about this problem, and request them to freeze your account for good.

元の翻訳
This item would be very costly because this is traded with premium price.

If you don't mind, is it possible for you to let me know your e-mail address so that I can contact you directly?↵
This is our minimum price, considering the purchase price, shipping cost to the U.S., and bidding fee of ＊ market.
If you could buy directly, we can negotiate the price of bidding fee.

If you wish to trade in the ＊ market with this open price, that's fine. Let me know what you think.

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This item would be very costly because it has been traded with premium price (among the collectors).

If you don't mind, let me know your e-mail address for direct dealing.↵
This is my least price I can offer now, considering the purchase price, shipping charge to the U.S., and bidding fee at ＊ market.
If you want to deal with me directly, I can work out to cut the bidding fee.

If you wish to buy at the ＊ market with listed price, that's fine. Let me know what do you think.

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Thank you for your question!

It's possible to report tariff from 40$ to 50$.

I'm looking forward that you will buy from us.

Thank you!

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Thank you for your suggestion!

It's possible to make the customs declaration to be around $40.00 to $50.00

I feel very happy if you could buy from us.

Thank you!

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Thank you as always.
I'm Japanese.
I offered this translation to a translator.
so, I appreciate an answer which is easy to understand.
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Thank you for the reply.
I would like to buy Suomy Vandal Dream Helmet.
Also, I want to order Visor(smoke) which matches Suomy Vandal Dream Helmet.
but I don't have any ideas what to choose.
Could you suggest me what Visor would be best for me?

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Thank you as always.
I'm Japanese.
I offered this translation to a translator.
so, I appreciate an answer which is easy to understand.
.....
Thank you for the reply.
I would like to buy Suomy Vandal Dream Helmet.
Also, I want to order Visor(smoke) which matches Suomy Vandal Dream Helmet.
but I don't have any idea as to what to choose.
Could you suggest to me what Visor would be best for me?

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Hello, Mr. 〇,

Thank you very much for your response.

I'm especially interested in your product, 〇 and 〇.

I bought your item from ebay once, and found it very useful.

So, I'm an import trader here in Japan, and I'm sending this to request you to distribute the items.

I would like to make payment via paypal or credit card issued from Japan.
The shipping address for the storehouse is in Florida, which I already have a contract, so I appreciate it if you could send the items to there.

I wish you could take this as a consideration.

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Hello, Mr. 〇,

Thank you very much for your response.

I'm especially interested in your products, 〇 and 〇.

I bought an item of yours from ebay once before and found it very useful.

Therefore, as I am an import trader here in Japan, I am sending you this to request to distribute your items.

I would like to pay via paypal or credit card issued from Japan.
The shipping address is a warehouse in Florida, which I already have a contract with, so I would appreciate it if you could send the items there.

Thank you for your kind consideration.

元の翻訳
ビッグ・アイズ―オールモスト・フェイマス

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ビッグ・アイズ－オールモスト・フェイマス

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【評価】アルカリントリオ―MY SHAME IS TRUE

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【レビュー】アルカリントリオ―MY SHAME IS TRUE

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【評価】フォールアウトボーイ―ロックンロールを守れ

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【レビュー】フォールアウトボーイ―ロックンロールを守れ