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Is it possible for you to ship to Japan?

Nice to meet you. My name is ●●. I live in Japan.

I like the products of your store very much. I'd like to buy this one.

Can you send it to Japan?
I plan to buy many things from your shop.

I'll be waiting for your contact.

Thank you for your message.

Is it possible for you to deduct the VAT?

What's the shipping method and cost?

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Is it possible for you to ship to Japan?

Nice to meet you. My name is ●●. I live in Japan.

I like the products of your store very much. I'd like to buy this one.

Can you send it to Japan?
I plan to buy many things from your shop.

I'll be waiting for your contact.

Thank you for your message.

Is it possible for you to deduct the VAT?

What's the shipping method and cost?

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あなたに話すつもりはなかったのですが、気が変わりました。私がTippiを連れて行こうとしたら、彼女は目の下に黒い点をつけていました。それを取り除き、塗り直そうと頑張ったのですが、できませんでした。なので、目と髪をもう一度やり直すようにいいました。そして彼女全てまたやり始め、ちょうどいま髪の毛が終わったところです。でも、Bonnieの髪の毛もまだやっていないくて、3/4も残っています。2人にとても手を焼かされ、まいっています。Tippiの黒い点を見たときは泣きそうでした。とても動揺しましたが、アキコのことは動揺させたくありませんでした。2人が手間取らせるので、Bonnieの髪の毛をやるのにあと1週間くらいかかりそうです。

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あなたに話すつもりはなかったのですが、気が変わりました。私がTippiを組み立てていてほぼ完成という時に、彼女の目の下に濃いシミがついていることに気づきました。それを取り除いて塗り直そうと頑張ったのですが、何をやろうとその濃いシミは取り除くことはできませんでした。そのため、目と髪のキットをもう一度オーダーし、また一から彼女の組み立てを始めたのですが、ちょうどいま髪の毛が終わったところです。でもまだBonnieの髪の毛に取り掛からなければならないため、あと3/4も作業が残っています。2人の組み立てにこんなに時間を要することになり、とても残念です。Tippiの濃いシミを見つけた時は泣きそうでした。ひどくがっかりしましたが、アキコにまで残念な思いはさせたくなかったです。この2体の人形には本当に手を焼かされましたが、Bonnieの髪の毛が仕上がるまでにあと1週間はかかりそうです。

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I can check the number of a little stocked items on your firm's web pages, but can I think all stocks in France? Or by the case, do you order from out of France? Please tell me that how I show our customers about the time of a little stocked items.

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I can check the number of indent goods on your firm's webpage, but can I consider that stocks are all in France? Or will the goods be purchased from outside France? Please advise me how I can explain to our customers about the delivery time of the indent goods.

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1. I searched for Mamiya winder and adapter, but no luck so far. Since it is fairly old, it might take some time. I will contact you as soon as I find anything. Do you have any preference for lens? In case you do, please don't hesitate to ask.

2. It is affected if you take photo with backlighting.
3. It didn't seem to have any affect on usual photographing.
4. The pictures are uploaded, so you can check there.

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1. I searched for Mamiya winder and adapter, but no luck so far. Since they are fairly old, it might take some time to find them. I will contact you as soon as I find anything. Do you have any preference for lens? In case you do, please don't hesitate to ask.

2. It would have some effects if you take backlit photos.
3. It didn't seem to have any effect on usual photographing.
4. The actual pictures have been uploaded, so you can refer to them.

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Nice to meet you , I am xx of xx company . I have contact you on behalf of mr.xxx.
Actually, I know your company's services from before, so I know well about this matter.
Also , if there will be a specific questions , we will contact you again from here on by e-mail .
From now on , thank you.

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Nice to meet you. I am xx of xx company. I am contacting you on behalf of Mr. xxx.
In fact, I have been using the services of your company for some time now, so I know well about this matter.
Also , if we have specific questions, we will contact you again by e-mail .
I hope to have a great business relationship with you in the future. Thank you.

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I am very sorry but I am not able to answer your question as I do not have detailed knowledge of the product.

Please have a look and decide on the details based on the photograph as I am not clear on the details of the completed grindstone.

I have mentioned this over and over again that you can confirm my official address in eBay so you can return the product within one day. You do not need to wait for my response.
If there is a mistake from my end, then eBay will provide you a 100% warranty, but this is not the case. If you are not satisfied with eBay's decision for not accepting the product return, then please submit a complaint to eBay.

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I am very sorry but I am not able to answer your question as I do not have detailed knowledge of the product.

Please have a look and decide on the details based on the photograph as I am not clear on the details of the finishing grindstone.

I have mentioned this over and over again that you can confirm my official address on eBay, and you can return the product within one day. You do not need to wait for my response.
If it is a mistake on my part, then eBay will provide you a 100% warranty, but this is not the case. If you are not satisfied with eBay's decision for not accepting the product return, then please submit a complaint to eBay.

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Lisa, I can understand what your mother told.
It is spring holiday now, so I am thinking about children more than everything as well.
And I don't care about Facebook.
But I love you and Olivia and would like to see growing up. So please send photos or something by e-mail.

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Lisa, I can understand what your mother said.
It is spring holiday now, so I am thinking about children more than everything as well.
And I don't care about Facebook.
I love you and Olivia, and would like to see how they grow. So please send photos or something by e-mail.

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Thank you so much for hearing from you.

Well noted.

Then, the number of carbons is 25. Please change invoice.

Please send products you can send now.

Can you change a driver for 00 to old model which we cannot decompose.

If there are no extra fee, it is fine.

This is to confirm, orders from Japan are blocked now?

And, could you please make springs in clip black? Though you don't need to do it soon, but really happy if you can do it.

At the result, as LIKEs have not been increased not at all, please cancel it.

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Thank you so much for contacting me.

Well noted.

Then, the number of carbons is 25. Please change the invoice accordingly.

Please send available products for now.

Can you change the driver for 00 to an old model which cannot be dismantled?

If there are no extra fees, Please go ahead with that.

I would like to clarify with you if orders from Japan are being blocked?

Also, could you also make springs inside the clips in black? Though you don't need to do it soon, it would be great if you could do it for me as they would look really beautiful.

Please cancel it as it did not generate more LIKEs at all.

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Thank you for contacting with me.
I sent it out without any problems.
I hope the item will be delivered by 9th, and take a lot of wonderful pictures!

2.Have you already got the item?
I checked tracking and it seems that your item has not been delivered since 18th, being kept by a mover or the post office.

Sorry for your inconvenience, but please do an inquiry with the tracking number if you have not received it yet.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I sent it out without any problems.
I hope the item will be delivered to you by the 9th. ↵
Enjoy taking a lot of wonderful pictures!

2.Have you already received the item?
I have checked its tracking record, and it seems that your item has been held by a mover or the post office since the 18th.

Sorry for the inconvenience, but please contact the mover or the post office to check the status if you have not received the item. ↵

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You are telling me that the returning of the product was delayed because of us but that is not true.
You could have confirmed our address anytime on eBay and it was also written on the label of the product.
Normally buyers would return products with that information.
Since it took too long for you to return, eBay has officially gave permission for "No refunds."
Had I been wrong, eBay wouldn't have judged in that way. (eBay is 99% of the times a support for buyers)

I will still accept the product return but cannot pay back the total amount.
Within this 2 and a half months, the selling price of the product on eBay has fallen to $250.
If you do not agree, you do not have to return the product.

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You are telling me that the returning of the product was delayed because of us but that is not true.
You could have confirmed our address anytime on eBay and it was also written on the label of the product.
Normally buyers would return products with that information.
Since it took too long for you to return, eBay has officially regarded this as "No refunds."
Had I been wrong, eBay wouldn't have judged in that way. (eBay supports buyers 99% of the time)

I will still accept the product but will not refund the full amount.
Within this 2 and a half months, the selling price of the product on eBay has fallen to $250.
If you do not agree to this, you do not have to return the product.

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I would like to know the situation about the fourth order.
Have you already sent the white ICON and the Herley jacket?

This is the fifth order. Please make sure the information below.

*Please do not get it wrong because it is kind of confusing.
One of the three monster jacket (L size) is needed pouncing mesh process in front.
I will attach the size chart because REPSOL is a custom order.
Two pieces are needed pouncing mesh process in front.

Please finish this up in two weeks.
I'll appreciate that if you do them in time.

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I would like to know the status of the fourth order.
Have you already sent the white ICON and the Harley jacket?

This is the fifth order. Please make sure of the information below.

*Please do not get it wrong because it is kind of confusing.
One of the three monster jackets (L size) needs a punching mesh process at the front.
I will attach the size chart because REPSOL suit is made-to-order.
It is in two pieces, and needs a punching mesh process at the front.

Please complete the above in two weeks.
It would be appreciated if you could get this done in time.

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Thank you for letting me know. I understood that the teleconverter does not fit on your any lenses.
I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you let me know the detail of the lenses which you want to use?
I will make sure this situation between your lenses and the teleconverter to the manufacturer immediately.

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Thank you for letting me know. I understood that the converter does not fit on any of your lenses.
I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you let me know which lenses you are using?
I will clarify the issue with the manufacturer. Thank you for your understanding.

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1) Have you received the e-mail regarding an order I sent on the 24th of March?

2) Hello. The prize I ordered the other day has arrived today. Thank you.
I received a letter from Tom which came with the prize, do you share its content, too?

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1) Have you received the e-mail regarding an order I sent on the 24th of March? Please confirm.

2) Hello. The prize I ordered the other day has arrived today. Thank you.
I received a letter from Tom which came with the prize. Do you share its content, too?

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We are very sorry for not being able to send you the important order that you were to use as a birthday present. We will make a refund to you. You will receive an email in regards to the agreement of order cancellation from ebay. Please choose "Agree". We will refund the full amount as soon as we confirm it. Again, we are very sorry that you have experience the great trouble.

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We are very sorry for not being able to send you the important order that you were to use as a birthday present. We will make a refund to you. You will receive an email in regards to the agreement of order cancellation from eBay. Please choose "Agree". We will refund the full amount as soon as we confirm it. Again, we are very sorry that you have experienced the great trouble.

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商品が確実に記載通りのものである事を保証してください。又、レンズが輸送途中ににダメージを受けないようにその商品が新聞紙ではないもので適切に舗装されているようにしてください。キャップとフードとフィルターも同梱されているようにしてください。

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商品が確実に記載通りのものである事を保証してください。又、レンズが輸送途中ににダメージを受けないように新聞紙ではないもので商品を適切に梱包してください。キャップとフードとフィルターも同梱してください。

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I've attached the purchase order. Please check the quantity and correct if it necessary.

Regarding the payment, the maximum amount of a single payment is around $10000 by Paypal.

Since the payment will become expensive from now, so I want to ask you the settlement by credit card. Is it possible?

Although I heard last year that production possible number of month is around 3000,↵
please tell me how much it is now, and by when and how much it becomes from now.


The products have arrived today. I was so excited because they were more than I expected.

Currently you are not accepting the order for any reason, I see.

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I've attached the purchase order. Please check the quantity and correct it, if necessary.

Regarding the payment, the maximum amount of a single payment is around $10,000 by Paypal.

Since the payment will be high in value from now, I want to request for the settlement by credit card. Is it possible?

Although I heard last year that the possible production quantity per month is around 3,000, I would like to know how many can be produced now. Also, by when and how many can be produced in the future.


The products have arrived today. I was so excited because they were more than I expected.

I understand that you are currently not accepting the order for some reason.

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Since the packing in the #2565 ROTARY CYLINDER is subject to wear I am thinking to buy a new packing.

Could you please send me a quote for the #2565 part (packing)?

I am looking to hearing from you soon.

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Since the packing in the #2565 ROTARY CYLINDER is subject to wear I am thinking to buy a new packing.

Could you please send me a quote for the #2565 part (packing)?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.