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For 12 hours both A and B slowed down, and it is impossible to send video now.
This phenomenon also happened last October, does it mean the server checking? When is it completed?

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For 12 hours both A and B slowed down, and it is impossible to broadcast videos now.
This happened also in October last year. Does it mean the server is under maintenance? When will it recover?

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I asked you to proofread a thesis in English a few days ago.
Regarding the magazine rejected, I received a comment from a reader and then
I added some corrections to the original one. May I ask you to proofread the corrected part again? I can pay you the additional fee. I would like you to work on it as soon as possible. I appreciate your cooperation.

I attached the one after you proofread a few days ago and the one that was corrected this time. The corrected part is written in red ink.

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I asked you to proofread a thesis in English a few days ago.
Regarding the magazine rejected, I received a comment from a reader and then
I added some corrections to the original one. May I ask you to proofread the corrected part again? I can pay you the additional fee. I would like you to work on it as soon as possible. I appreciate your cooperation.

I attached the one you proofread a few days ago and the one that was corrected this time. The corrected part is written in red.

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This product is for fun. We will accept no responsibility for damage caused when you use it for other purposes.

The highly accurate molding technique enabled us to this "ultra-thin film". "Red lotion" is sealed in the "cute body".

This molding techniques, not only reproduce "deep groove of skin fold with no abrasion, but also prevent skin from "axis offset" "stickiness" and "smell".

We believe you can use this product repeatedly, athough you may have "red experience" only at the first application.

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This product is for fun. We will accept no responsibility for damage caused when you use it for other purposes.

The highly accurate molding technique enabled us to create this "ultra-thin film". "Red lotion" is sealed in the "cute body".

This molding techniques not only reproduce "deep groove of skin fold with no abrasion, but also prevent skin from "axis offset", "stickiness" and "smell".

We believe you can use this product repeatedly, although you may have "red experience" only at the first application.

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Is it really responsive? The width of the pop-up does not change even if I narrow down the width of the browser.
And it would be good if you can display videos from sites like YouTube.

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Is it really responsive? The width of the pop-up does not change even if I narrow down the width of the browser.
And it would be good if you could display videos from sites like YouTube.

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Is it really Responsive?
Even when I make the browser narrower, the Pop up does not change its with.

Also, it will be better to be able to show videos such as YouTube.

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Is it really Responsive?
Even when I make the browser narrower, the Pop up does not change its width.

Also, it will be better to be able to show videos such as YouTube.

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Applicants must allow us to give all the rights for the usage.
9. You are not allowed to post to the other website except Niconico douga. If its existence was observed in the other website, the applicant will be disqualified.
10. If there is any violation of the rule, we will delete the file without notification and we will disqualify you.

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Applicants must allow us to give all the rights for the usage.
9. You are not allowed to post to the other websites except Niconico douga. If its existence was observed in the other websites, the applicant will be disqualified.
10. If there is any violation of the rule, we will delete the file without notification and we will disqualify you.

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11. Answers to inquiries for information concerning selection procedure and results may not be available.
12. The Company, its affiliates and subcontractors shall not be responsible for whatsoever if Applicants suffer from any damages in connection with their ↵
applications for this project.

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11. Answers to inquiries for information concerning selection procedure and results may not be available.
12. The Company, its affiliates and subcontractors shall not be responsible for whatsoever if Applicants suffer from any damages in connection with their applications for this project.

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* Masking tape 1,028 yen
* Blanket 3,600 yen
* AAA panda orchestra key ring 700 yen
* 2way scrunchy (total 7 types + α) 600 yen
* sticky note 1,000 yen

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* Masking tape 1,028 yen
* Blanket 3,600 yen
* AAA panda orchestra key ring 700 yen
* 2way scrunchy (total 7 types + α) 600 yen
* Sticky note 1,000 yen

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今日、通関費用の請求書を貰いました。明日は税金を支払います。商品が届きましたらお知らせさせて頂きたいと思います。また、Ebayの評価にもさせて頂きたいと思います。

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今日、通関費用の請求書を貰いました。明日は税金を支払います。商品が届きましたらお知らせさせて頂きたいと思います。また、Ebayの評価もさせて頂きたいと思います。

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Toledo Tourism
It took about an hour by bus from Madrid so it was nice to take plenty of time staying in Toledo. The restaurant during lunch was also fantastic.

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Toledo Tourism
It took about an hour by bus from Madrid so it was nice to take plenty of time staying in Toledo. The restaurant where we had lunch was also fantastic.

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OK, I will give it away to you on $210. I want to ask you one question: do you have a paypal account? I can accept your payment by only paypal becuase pay pal is safe for both buyers and sellers. You can rest assured that paypal will protect you in case of trouble.

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OK, I will give it away to you for $210. I want to ask you one question: do you have a PayPal account? I can accept your payment by only PayPal because PayPal is safe for both buyers and sellers. You can rest assured that PayPal will protect you in case of trouble.

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How do you do?
I am very sorry that the product did not arrive as scheduled.
I want to issue you a refund as you wanted.
I will contact support so we can proceed with the procedures.
However, I was not able to contact them since it's the weekend right now.
I will issue you the refund immediately at the start of next week so please kindly wait for a little while.
It would be of great help if you can contact me once the product arrives during that period.
Nevertheless, I will be supporting you all the way until the resolution of this issue.
Please contact me anytime for any concerns.
I will be on standby to support you anytime.

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How do you do?
I am very sorry that the product did not arrive as scheduled.
I want to issue you a refund as you requested.
I will contact the support center so we can proceed with the procedures.
However, I was not able to contact them since it's the weekend right now.
I will issue you the refund immediately at the start of next week so please wait for a little while.
It would be of great help if you could contact me once the product arrives during that period.
Nevertheless, I will be assisting you all the way until this issue is resolved.
Please contact me if you have any concerns.
I will be on standby to support you anytime.

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Thank you for contacting us.
We are sorry for the delay of the arrival of the item.
Please let us know if the item will not arrive until the next week.
We will issue a refund immediately.
We will deal with the item until the final stage of the business.
Please stay peace in mind.

If it does not arrive after a certain period, we will issue a refund.
Please put your heart at ease.
Thank you for your shopping at our shop.

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Thank you for contacting us.
We are sorry for the delay of the arrival of the item.
Please let us know if the item does not arrive before the end of next week.
We will then issue a refund immediately.
We will assist you until the final stage of the business.
Please rest assured.

If it does not arrive after a certain period, we will issue a refund.
Please rest assured.
Thank you for your shopping at our shop.

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This item is purchased as a brand-new product, and delivered directly, so we cannot check the content inside.

Therefore, we think that the manufacturer or the derivery company is to be blame for the trouble of the item.

Could you reconsider and delete the previous rating?

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This item is purchased and delivered as a brand-new product, so we cannot check the content.

Therefore, we think that the manufacturer or the delivery company is to blame for the damages and defects of the item.

Could you reconsider and delete the previous rating?

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This is a confirmation of payment of translation services.
We have checked your payment status up to November, but we have not been able to verify your October payment confirmation.
We will attach the invoice for October. Please verify and make your payment.
Best regards,

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This is a confirmation of payment of translation services.
We have checked your payment status up to November, but we have not been able to verify your October payment.
We will attach the invoice for October. Please verify and make your payment.
Best regards,

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I need to pay a commission if I use the credit card,so I tried to pay by paypal,but I failed.
When I came to the last step,this massage just came out.

So what am I supposed to do?
I'll send you the capture for now.
I want to try it again,so could you please send me the coupon again.

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I need to pay a commission if I use the credit card,so I tried to pay by paypal but failed to do so.
When I got to the last step, this massage popped up.

So should I do now?
I'll send you the capture for now.
I want to fix it as soon as possible, so could you please send me the coupon again.

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I would like to make early arrangements for a boat to ship the product, so please let me know when the product will arrive at the warehouse. Also, please tell me the product's weight and volume.
I would like to receive the product quickly so would it be possible to perform the manufacturing label attachment at my company's warehouse?
After doing so I will be sure to send you a report of the attachment process illustrated with photos. Finally, could I ask you to include several empty boxes along with the products that you will ship to me this time?

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I would like to make early arrangements for a boat to ship the product, so please let me know when the product will arrive at the warehouse. Also, please tell me the product's weight and volume.
As I would like to receive the product quickly, would it be possible to attach production labels at our warehouse?
After this process, I will make sure to send you a report of the labeling process with some photos. Finally, could I ask you to include several empty boxes along with the products that you will ship to me this time?

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From my experience, my grandfather started suffering so much about 3 days before he passed away from lung cancer 3 years ago. Having witnessed this kind of scene, I believe euthanasia should be approved.
However, it appears that euthanasia hasn't been actively discussed in Japan compared to other countries. It is important to have a concrete opinion about the issue on death that eventually comes to anyone.

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From my experience, my grandfather started suffering so much about 3 days before he passed away from lung cancer 3 years ago. Having witnessed this kind of scene, I believe euthanasia should be approved.
However, it appears that euthanasia hasn't been actively discussed in Japan compared to other countries. It is important to have a concrete opinion about the issue on death that eventually comes to anyone.

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For a limited time period only! Receive a $5 (Canadian dollar) gift card!

Were you satisfied with the support and product provided by our company for the transaction this time?
If you are satisfied, then we request for your evaluation in Amazon.

If we received a favorable evaluation within 24 hours from now, then we will give you a $5 cash voucher via email, which you can use in Amazon, after we have confirmed the evaluation.

We are grateful for this opportunity to be of service to everyone of you who are living far away from Japan.

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For a limited time period only! Receive a $5 (Canadian dollar) gift card!

Were you satisfied with the support and product provided by our company for the transaction this time?
If you were, we would like you to rate us on Amazon.

If we receive a good rating within 24 hours from now, we will give you a $5 cash voucher via email, which you can use on Amazon after we have confirmed the rating.

We are grateful for this opportunity to be of service to every one of you who is living far away from Japan.