yakuok (yakuok) — 付けたレビュー

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You can download and enjoy the music contents immediately after entering the gift code on the back of the music card!

Precautions for use:
This is a product to be used on smartphones and PC. (You cannot use it on feature phones.)
Smartphone users will need to download the mu-mo application (free of charge) after downloading the contents.

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You can download and enjoy the music contents immediately after entering the gift code on the back of the music card!

Precautions for use:
This is a product to be used on smartphones and PC. (You cannot use it on feature phones.)
Smartphone users will need to download the mu-mo application (free of charge) for downloading contents.

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It's Sunday now. The post office is not available today, so I will send it out tomorrow morning.

I'll upload the tracking number after I have sent it out, please wait for a while.

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It's Sunday here in Japan. The post office is not open today, so I will send it out tomorrow morning.

I'll upload the tracking number after I have sent it out, so please wait for a while.

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Hello.
My store is called Tokyo, TATHIKAWA.
It's 40 minutes away from Akihabara by train.
I would like to explain a little bit of Japan.
Soon, cherry blossoms will bloom in Tokyo.
They are really beautiful
I will take pictures of the cherry blossoms this year and e-mail them to you.

By the way, regarding the item, the power plug is A type.
If I remember correctly, Saudi Arabia uses BF so I will include a conversion adopter but games are something you play for many hours so please use PS4 power cable of Sony in your country.

Please let me know if you have something you would like to ask.
Thank you for your purchase.

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Hello.
My store is in TATHIKAWA, Tokyo.
It's 40 minutes away from Akihabara by train.
I would like to explain a little bit of Japan.
Soon, cherry blossoms will bloom in Tokyo.
They are really beautiful.
I will take pictures of the cherry blossoms this year and e-mail them to you.

By the way, regarding the item, the power plug is A type.
If I remember correctly, Saudi Arabia uses BF so I will include a conversion adopter, but games are something you play for many hours so please use PS4 power cable of Sony in your country.

Please let me know if you have something you would like to ask.
Thank you for your purchase.

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Are you busy now? I have something to ask you, do you have time to talk with me?
It might not the thing I ask you, but no one except you tells me.
No one tells me about products, how to use the system, and the procedure to shipping.

First of all, I would like you to tell me how to see the shipping data which we send you everyday.
Which row is the amount of shipped items from the storage?
Which row is the amount of awaiting shipment items?
Which row is the amount of balancing orders?

Can I ask you again if I have something what I don't know?
Thank you for your help.↵
Thank you in advance.

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Are you busy now? I have something to ask you. Do you have time to talk with me?
Maybe I should not be asking you this, but I couldn't think of anyone else.
No one tells me about the products, how to use the system, and the procedure of shipping.

Firstly, I want you to tell me how to see the shipping data which we send you everyday.
Which row is for the items which have been shipped out from the storage?
Which row is for the items waiting to be shipped out?
Which row is for the remaining orders?

If I have some questions in the future, can I ask you again?
Thank you in advance for your help and assistance.

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KUMI KODA has been supported by her music and fashion surely, moreover by her frank personality. So you cannot miss this program filled with her real face and feelings!

<ON AIR>
Mar. 1 (Sun.) 20:00-20:30
Mar. 20 (Fri.) 21:30-22:00
Mar. 26 (Thur.) 21:00-21:30

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KUMI KODA has been supported by fans because of her music and fashion and also by her frank personality. So you cannot miss this program which is filled with her real self and true inner feelings!

<ON AIR>
Mar. 1 (Sun.) 20:00-20:30
Mar. 20 (Fri.) 21:30-22:00
Mar. 26 (Thur.) 21:00-21:30

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We could not identify order # 102-4414052-0085818 ordered on February 19th at our shop.

I believe you bought it at another shop.

There are many shops on Amazon's product page.

I do not know anything besides what is written on he manual.

If you cannot get the watch to work by looking at the manual, I recommend that you return it.

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We could not identify order # 102-4414052-0085818 ordered on February 19 at our shop.

I believe you bought it at another shop.

There are many shops on Amazon's product page.

I do not know anything besides what is written on the manual.

If you cannot get the watch to work by following the manual, I recommend that you return it to the seller.

I am sorry I could not be of more help.

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24:20〜 Aoyama one seg development
"Chiisaize chokoyamakun" on air once before featuring Misako Uno enters the battle for revival. It won to enter finalist battle because of your support.
The live appearance of Misako Uno in the battle has been confirmed.

As same as the previous session, you can vote at the following web site while the program is on air.
http://www.nhk.or.jp/aoyama-k/

If the final is won, sequel can be expected.

All three stories can be seen in the web site.

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24:20〜 Aoyama one seg development (Uno)
"Chiisaize chokoyamakun" which was aired before featuring Misako Uno is here for the battle of revival. Thanks to everyone, it was voted to enter this final battle.
The live appearance of Misako Uno in the battle has been confirmed.

Just like the previous session, you can vote on the following website while the program is on air.
http://www.nhk.or.jp/aoyama-k/

As for the winner, its sequel will be produced!

All three stories can be seen on the website.

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Thank you for contacting.

It seems that tha package has already sent from Japan to US but we cannot find out a record for arrival in US.

When you get it, please refuse to receive it.

We think it will return to Japan.

When you refuse to receive it and contact us, we would like to take a process of refund.

Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for contacting us.

It seems that the package has already been sent out from Japan to US, but we cannot trace the record that confirms the arrival in the U.S.

When you receive it, please decline the receipt.

That way, we think it will be returned to Japan.

After you decline to receive the parcel, please contact us. We will then proceed with the refund arrangement.

Thank you for your understanding.

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I used your service the other day. I was able to use it without any issue. It helped me a lot. Thank you very much.
Since this really is a good service, I would like to provide the service as your agency.
Would you let me know the condition to become your agency in Japan?

Would you ship your products to Japan?
If possible, please let me know the shipping fee.
Will customs be imposed on the products when you ship them to Japan?

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I used your service the other day. I was able to use it without any issue. It helped me a lot. Thank you very much.
Since this really is a good service, I would like to provide the service in Japan as your agency.
Would you let me know the condition to become your agency in Japan?

Would you ship your products to Japan?
If possible, please let me know the shipping fee.
Will taxes be imposed on the products when you ship them to Japan?

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I understood regarding the invoice matter.
I can wait for the payment. Please do not worry.

The auction will end after 3 hours.
There are currently no bids.
I am planning to bid around 1 hour in advance.

I will send you an email after the auction.
Please kindly wait for a little longer.

It's nice that you are able to attend school.
I am praying that you would do well in school and in work from Japan.

Will you start your diet by spring?
It's also the same with Japanese people. Everyone will be wearing light clothes and seems to be anxious of their body.
This is the same in any country.

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I understood regarding the invoice matter.
I can wait for the payment. Please do not worry.

The auction will end in 3 hours.
There are currently no bids.
I am planning to bid around 1 hour in advance.

I will send you an email after the auction.
Please wait for a little longer.

It's nice that you are able to attend school.
I am praying that you would do well in school and in work from Japan.

Will you start your diet by spring?
It's also the same with Japanese people. Everyone will be wearing light clothes and seems to be anxious about their bodies.
This is the same in any country.

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We also accept product returns if it is within 14 days similar with eBay's policy.
If the product return is due to your own convenience (such as not liking the product), then you will be the one to shoulder the product return shipping charge.
If the product return is due to our convenience (such as operation defects), then of course we will also be the one to shoulder the product return shipping charge.
Please kindly take note of this in advance.
We will also send you the PayPal invoice in a separate email afterwards.
We will proceed with the shipping procedure once we've confirmed your deposit.
Have a great weekend!

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We also accept product returns if it is within 14 days, which is similar to eBay's policy.
If the product return is due to your own convenience (such as not liking the product), then you will be the one to bear the product return shipping charge.
If the product return is due to our error (such as operational defects), then of course we will be the one to bear the product return shipping charge.
Please take note of this in advance.
We will also send you a PayPal invoice in a separate email afterwards.
We will proceed with the shipping procedure once we've confirmed your deposit.
Have a great weekend!

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Thank you for contacting us.
We answer regarding above.

We made you worry and inconvenient.
Although we cannot recognized the cause, it might be a problem of the driver.
Would you install the newest driver at the homepage, and try to access it again?
URL:

As we would also like to check its cause, may we know the specification of your personal computer?

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Thank you for contacting us.
Here is our answer regarding the above-mentioned.

We are sorry for the inconvenience caused.
Although we cannot recognize the cause, it might be a problem of the driver.
Would you install the newest driver from the homepage, and try to access it again?
URL:

As we would also like to check its cause, may we know the specification of your personal computer?

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I am displaying the Mickey from Disneyland. I recommend displaying with a diorama. It is a limited item from Disneyland Japan. I am faithfully reproducing Disneyland Mickey. This item was bought by going to Disneyland during a limited period and placing an order. You are no longer able to purchase it, even in Japan is it an extraordinarily rare item. It is 12 inches. You can change the wrists. It is in working condition. The costume is well made and very luxurious. Included is a certificate of authenticity in Japanese from Disneyland.

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I am listing Mickey from Disneyland. I recommend that it is displayed with a diorama. It is a limited item from Disneyland Japan. I am faithfully reproducing Disneyland Mickey. This item was bought when I visited the Disneyland during a limited period and an order was placed then. You are no longer able to purchase it, even in Japan it is an extraordinarily rare item. It is 12 inches. You can change the wrists. It is in working condition. The costume is well-made and very luxurious. Included is a certificate of authenticity in Japanese from the Disneyland.

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Do you go to school?
I think it is good for you.
Now, what are you leaning?
I think it is exciting when you are learning new skill.
I also want to try other thing after winter.

Spring is coming. Does Japanese feel the body becomes light when it is Spring? A lot things are starting.
How is weather in Finland?
I think Finland also is cold for now.
Take care yourself please.

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Do you go to school?
I think it is good for you.
What are you going to study?
I think it is exciting when you are learning new skills.
I also want to do new things after winter.

Spring is coming. Maybe because Japanese people feel light when Spring comes, so they start new things.
How is the weather in Finland?
I think Finland is also cold for now.
Please take care of yourself.

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Are you going to go to school?
That sounds good!
What are you going to study?
Start a new thing is very exciting, isn't it?
I also want to do something new, when spring comes.

Spring will come soon. It becomes warm in spring and our bodies seem to become light, Many Japanese start something new in spring.
How about Finland?
I think it's very cold now in Finland.
Take care of yourself.

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Are you going to go to school?
That sounds good!
What are you going to study?
Starting a new thing is very exciting, isn't it?
I also want to do something new when spring comes.

Spring will come soon. It becomes warm in spring and our bodies seem to become light, Many Japanese start something new in spring.
How about Finland?
I think it's very cold now in Finland.
Take care of yourself.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

Regarding commodity prices,we can't describe exact international shipping cost because the shipping sizes of all three goods are unknown.

we can deliver them to your door If you settle the bill separately by paypal after purchase.Are you OK in that way?

In that case the shipping method belongs to us.Regarding international shipping fee we search cheap way as much as possible and use it.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

Regarding the fees, we are not able to indicate the actual international shipping fees because the sizes of all three goods are unknown.

we can deliver them to your door If you settle the bill separately by paypal after purchase. Are you OK with that?

In that case, we will select the shipping method. Regarding the international shipping fees, we will search and select the cheapest possible fees.

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Today, a new hard case have arrived again.
Tomorrow, I can ship the item to America.

But I have to tell you something.
Although I told you that the maker's qualification will be attached the other day by e-mail, that was my mistake.
I confirmed to the Japanese supplier and the maker of D Company, but they said they had not issued it from the beginning. As serial number was shown by handwriting on the label in the body, the qualification is not made.
I will attach a photo of your own guitar.
Can I proceed the shipment of the guitar? Thank you for your kindness.

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Today, new hard cases have arrived again.
Tomorrow, I can ship the items to America.

But I have to tell you something.
Although I told you that the maker's certificate would be attached the other day by e-mail, but that was my mistake.
I confirmed with the Japanese supplier and D Company, the maker, but they said they had not issued it from the beginning. As serial number is handwritten on the label in the body, the certificate has not been made.
I will attach a photo of your guitar.
Can I proceed the shipment of the guitar? Thank you for your kindness.

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I should tell you in person.
However, as I cannot get my message across in English orally,↵
I am sending an e-mail. Sorry for it.

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By right, I should tell you in person.
However, as I cannot get my message across in English orally, I am sending you an e-mail. ↵
Sorry for it.

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I tell you repeatedly.↵
I called your company and told you the necessary information to remove the locking.
I also asked you to obtain a permission to access to K.

Although I myself called, why has the access to the K not been permitted?

Why has the locking not been removed?
I appreciate if you share this information in your company.

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I am repeating myself, but I called your company and provided you with the necessary information to unlock.
I also asked you to obtain a permission to access to K.

Although I called you myself, why has the access to K not been permitted?

Why has it not been unlocked?
I appreciate if you share this information within your company.

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Hello. Thank you for your message.
Which items have been canceled?
(**) Are these two items?
The dispatching mail has been sent, so please reconfirm it.

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Hello. Thank you for your message.
Which items have been canceled?
(**) Are they these two items?
The dispatching mail has been sent too, so please reconfirm it.

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Hello.

Could you tell me which order was cancelled?
（★★） Are those cancelled?
I've received shipping email. Could you check again? Thank you.

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Hello.

Could you tell me which order was cancelled?
（★★） Are these two items cancelled?
I've received a shipping email. Could you check again? Thank you.