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Thank you for visiting our web site. This item is brand-new and unpacked. We will ship this item intrcately packaging via REGISUTERED AIR Small PACKET with tracking number. It will take a few weeks. If your purchase more than 80 pounds in total, we will ship them via EMS with tracking number and insurance . It will take 4 to 5 days. (If they are subjected to Custom's inspection, it may delay a few weeks.)

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Thank you for visiting our website. This item is new and unopened. We will carefully package and ship it via registered air small packet with a tracking number. It will take two to three weeks to arrive. If you purchase more than 80 pounds in total, we will ship via EMS with a tracking number and insurance. This will take four to five days. (If items are subject to customs inspection they may be delayed one to two weeks.)

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I appreciate you for working in a long term.

I highly recommend him for other requesters.↵
I hired 5 people for this project, and for me ○○ was my NO.1.↵
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He is honest and highly responsibile. He asks whenever he faces something unclear, he corrects positively when I point out the mistakes. He completes the requested works without giving them up.

Provided that, gradually I came to delegate many jobs to him and I could finally leave important task to him.

I'll ask for your cooperation when I start business again, thank you in advance.

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I am very thankful for your working over such a long term.

I highly recommend this person to other clients. I hired five people for this project, and for me ○○ was the best. He is honest and highly responsible. He asks questions whenever he something is unclear and he obediently corrects mistakes when I point them out. He completes requested work without giving up on it.

Due to these traits, I gradually came to delegate many jobs to him and was able to have him work on important tasks.

I'll ask for your cooperation when I start business again, thank you in advance.

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I order products for $144 from your website and paid through paypal. Then error appeared; it seemed there is not the order history on the website; however, the order history has left on paypal. Could you make sure the cause of this issue?

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I ordered $144 of products from your website and paid through PayPal. Then an error appeared. It seems there is no order history on the website, but the order history remains on PayPal. Could you please confirm the cause of this issue?

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We have four seasons in Japan, so we do not have so many mosquitoes whole year like Uganda.↵
We have mosquitoes from around April to October in Japan.↵
It means there is few demands from November to March.

The season of mosquitoes has reached the peak, so it is too late to prepare for the sales in this year.

We need to start preparing from the end of this year or the beginning of next year at the latest, and prepare for building the website in three months. It is ideal that we send the direct mails to the retail shops after three months.

If we have the chance to participate in the exhibition by April, we want to exhibit this Kite and ask for the retail shops.

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We have four seasons in Japan, so we do not have as many mosquitoes year-round like in Uganda. Here we have mosquitoes from around April to October. It means there is little demands from November to March.

The mosquito season has already reached the peak, so it is too late to prepare for sales this year.

We need to start preparing from the end of this year or the beginning of next year at the latest, and prepare for building the website within three months. After that it would be ideal to send direct mail to retail stores after three months.

If we have the chance to participate in exhibitions by April, we want to exhibit this Kite and solicit retail stores.

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I'm afraid to return the item to the seller as you had explained. Two years ago, I sent back an item to a seller because the customer support had adviced me like that. Then, I told you the tracking number as specified. After that, the item was delivered to the seller. However the seller didn't refund. I got an e-mail of apology, but that's it. To put it another way, I paid money to the seller and give them the item for free. I'm really worrying if the same thing will happen. Can I be refuned in advance?

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I'm afraid to return the item to the seller as you explained. Two years ago, I sent back an item to a seller because customer support advised me to do so. I then told you the tracking number as specified. After that, the item was delivered to the seller, but the seller didn't repay the money. I got an e-mail of apology, but that's it. To put it another way, I paid money to the seller and gave them the item for free. I'm really worried the same thing might happen. Can I be refunded in advance?

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I'm worried about returning the item to the seller as you described. 2 years ago, I received an explanation from customer support and returned an item to a seller. I gave the tracking number to you as you specified. Later, the seller received the item. However, the seller did not return money. I received an apology message from you, but that was all. That means I paid for the item and gave away the item for free. I'm worried that this time will be like the last. Is it not possible to make the seller refund the money to me beforehand?

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I'm worried about returning the item to the seller as you described. Two years ago, I received an explanation from customer support and returned an item to a seller. I gave you the tracking number as you specified. Later, the seller received the item. However, the seller did not return the money. I received an apology message from you, but that was all. That means I paid for the item and gave it away for free. I'm worried that this time will be like the last. Is it not possible to make the seller refund the money to me beforehand?

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I am sorry for delaying reply. I had contacted the customer center, but they haven't answered me because it's summer vacation in Japan now. So the customer center also have a vacation from Augst 10th to 18th. You have a warranty of this item, so it's possible to be fixed. I will pay the shipping fee from US to Japan. However, a pendulum metronome is vulnerable to shock, so it may break again during delivry to US even if it's fixed.

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I am sorry for the delayed reply. I contacted the customer center, but they haven't answered me because this week is the Obon summer holidays in Japan; so the customer center is on vacation August 10-18. You have a warranty for this item, so it can be fixed. I will pay the shipping fee from the US to Japan, but pendulum metronomes are vulnerable to shock, so it may break again during delivery to the US even if it's fixed.

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Focusing Food of this camera is a very hard metal. Even a person hold it on the hand and dropped it to the ground with that height, there is no possibility it will become badlly dent or distorted. Moreover, lets assuming it dropped, it is strange that the Food which is made from hard metal dented greatly, but the most vulnerable part (Focusing Screen made from glass that have 2 lenses) not damaged at all.

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The focusing hood of this camera is made of very hard metal. Even a person held it and dropped it to the ground from that height, there is no possibility it would be badly dent or distorted. Moreover, even if it was dropped, it would be strange if the hard metal hood was badly dented but the most fragile parts (glass focusing screen and two lenses) were not damaged at all.

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The focusing food of this camera is made of the very rigid metal. It is impossible that the said food was dented if somebody held it up and dropped to ground. In addition, it cannot understand why there was no damage to the other fragile parts (two lenses made of the glass) even if there were the dent in the rigid food.

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The focusing hood of this camera is made of very rigid metal. It is impossible that the hood would be dented if somebody held it up and dropped it to ground. I also cannot understand why there was no damage to the other fragile parts (glass focusing screen and two lenses) even if there was a dent in the rigid hood.

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Thank you for adjusting the invoice.

Unfortunatelly, there is no money left in my PayPal account, so I cannot use the personal option. I have to pay as I said. I am sorry to have troubled you.

In the meantime, the invoice shows the amount as $514.80, while it was $511.80 when I bought 20 units last time.

You said you would give us an additional unit for free since the previous units lacked one. So please ship us 21 units at $511.80 as the last time.

Please revise the invoice again with the amount that I am to pay.

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Thank you for adjusting the invoice.

Unfortunately, there is no money left in my PayPal account, so I cannot use the personal option. I have to pay as I said I would. I am sorry for the trouble.

There is also something I'd like to confirm. Last time I purchased 20 units for $511.80, and this time the price is $514.80.

You said you would give us an additional unit for free since you forgot to include one the last time. So please ship us 21 units at $511.80.

Please revise the invoice again with the correct price.

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Currently, prices are the same for all colors including red, white and black. Although the red color was initially priced at 350 dollars, we have lowered it to 340 dollars after realizing that the product is now also priced at 480 AUD. As such, both red and black colors are now a bargain.

Also, the stand for the shaver is not sold separately. Both the shaver and the stand is sold as a single set. As I am confirming the whether it is possible to sell to different manufacturers, I will give you a reply immediately once I have the answer.

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Currently, prices are the same for all colors: red, white and black. Although the red was initially priced at $350, we have lowered it to $340 after realizing that it is now also priced at AU$480. As such, both red and black are now a bargain.

The stand for the shaver is also not sold separately. The shaver and stand are sold as a single set. Please wait a little while for me to confirm whether it is possible to sell to different manufacturers.

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I purchased 5 pairs of boots from you the other day. When I checked the boots today, I found that the three pairs of boots have a problem.
１．item number:251303556896
Overall, the dirt caused by the adhesion is bad, especially the part of the photo where it is darkish in color.
I am hoping for a 30 dollar refund..

2.item number:251303558692
The size of the right pair is 7E while the left pair is 8E.
If you find the other pair, please sell it to me at the same price.

3.item number:261245187310
There's a cut on the left side.
This product can no longer be sold, so please give me a refund of 50 dollars.

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I purchased five pairs of boots from you the other day. When I checked the boots today, I found that three pairs have a problem.
1. item number: 251303556896
Overall, the dirt sticking to the glue is very bad, especially the part of the photo where the color is darkened.
I would like a $30 refund.

2. item number: 251303558692
The right is 7E while the left is 8E.
If you find the matching ones, please sell them to me at the same price.

3. item number: 261245187310
There's a cut on the left tongue.
This product can no longer be sold, so I would like a $50 refund.

元の翻訳
Hello!↵
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I see, I'll arrange that we'll send the item to the address you had specified.↵
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Please wait for arrival for a while.

Thank you!

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Hello. I see, I'll arrange that we send the item to the address you specified. Please wait for arrival for a while.

Thank you!

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I am very interested in this item.↵
Can I ask a question?↵
It is about the knob on the part by the tip of the pen.↵
Is the backslide of this tip flat?↵
Or, does it have two vertical lines carved into it?↵
I look forward to your response.↵
Thank you very much.

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I am very interested in this item. I would like to ask you about the knob on the part by the tip of the pen. Is the backside of this tip flat or does it have two vertical lines carved into it? I look forward to your response. Thank you very much.

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Based on the following concept, this project will feature hit songs by domestic male singers. Its target audience is women in their 20s and 30s. We would like to collect songs that root for women who live positively while being busy with their work. This omnibus will feature only male singers. As for the cover design, we will use a photographer who is currently popular among women.

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Based on the following concept, this project will feature hit songs by Japanese male artists. Its target audience is women in their 20s to early 30s. We would like to compile songs that lend support to women who are living with a positive attitude despite being busy with their work. This collection will feature only male singers. For the cover design, we plan to use a photographer who is currently popular among women.

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I apologize for the late reply as I was waiting for a reply from Amazon.

Unfortunately, you seem to have misunderstood this time.↵
This product is not sold with a case.
I don’t understand why you insisted on the case.↵
Perhaps you have ordered it from a totally different page.↵
Please take a look at the page you have ordered from again.↵
This product does not come with a case.

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I apologize for the late reply as I was waiting for a reply to my inquiry from Amazon.

Unfortunately, you seem to have misunderstood. This product is not sold with a case.
I'm afraid I don’t understand why you insisted on the case. Perhaps you previously ordered it from a totally different page. Please take a look at the page you have ordered from again. This product does not come with a case.

元の翻訳
■$12 is fine.
But I will list the item again for $12 so please buy from ebay.
Shipping is separate but I will make it as inexpensive as I can.
Please give me a feedback too. I will ship it to you within 24 hours after I verify the payment.
At that time, I will make sure to give you the tracking number.

■I am sorry for not contacting you earlier.
■All items will be insured and the tracking number will be sent to you.
If it gets lost, the post office will insure the loss so please be assured.
If you are concerned about the tariff, it will be shipped as a gift.
Would that work for you?

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■$12 is fine.
But I will list the item again for $12 so please buy it from eBay.
Shipping is separate but I will make it as inexpensive as I can.
Please also leave me feedback. I will ship the item to you within 24 hours after I verify the payment.
At that time, I will make sure to give you the tracking number.

■I am sorry for not contacting you earlier.
■All items will be insured and the tracking number will be sent to you.
If the item gets lost, the post office will insure the loss so please rest assured.
If you are concerned about customs duties, it will be shipped as a gift.
Would that work for you?

元の翻訳
This chart shows comparison of the work time between the old and new procedures.
A year ago, the reduction was 30%, whereas it has been reduced by 40% to date.
As for a new trial, we reduced work time of exterior checking without changing the procedure.
This product has had a chronic problem. We have changed the design after several meetings on the phone. This eliminates checkings and has contributed to much fewer checkings.
Should a problem occure, we will confirm with the manufacturer if any checking is necessary.

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This chart shows a comparison of the work time involved between the old and new procedures.
A year ago, the reduction was 30%, whereas it has been reduced by 40% to date.
Regarding the new trial, we reduced the work time of exterior checking without changing the procedure.
A chronic problem has continued for this product. We have changed the design after several conference calls. This eliminates checking and has contributed to much fewer checks.
Should a problem occur, we will confirm with the manufacturer if any checking is necessary.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your eail.↵
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The one I'm looking to buy is the old mode.↵
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I'm attaching the photo here, so please refer to it.↵
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Also please let me know the shipping cost to Japan.↵
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If you have any questions, please ask me.↵
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Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for your email. The one I'm looking to buy is the old model. I'm attaching the photo here for your reference. Please also let me know the shipping cost to Japan. If you have any questions, please ask me. Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for telling me that!
I am sorry for my late reply as I was overseas on a business trip.↵
Even though I told my subordinates to list products that have been sold again, but we listed the same contents again.↵
I am truly sorry.↵
I will have it corrected right away.
I have checked the image you sent me.↵
Please acccept my sincere apologies.↵
How would you like me to solve this issue?↵
I will do my best to meet your needs.

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Thank you for telling me that!
I am sorry for my late reply as I was overseas on a business trip. Even though I told my subordinates to again list products that have been sold, we listed the same details again. I am truly sorry. I will have it corrected right away.
I have checked the image you sent me. Please accept my sincere apologies. How would you like me to resolve this issue? I will do my best to meet your needs.

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Thank you for buying it in our shop. I have the misfortune to tell you that the thing you bought has already out of stock because of our mistake. I am so sorry about that.
I have already return your money.

This is my suggestion that both repay and finding alternative thing are possible. Please choose whichever you want.

I hope you understand and forgive our mistake.

I wish you come to our shop for many years to come.

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Thank you for your purchase at our store. I am very sorry to report that due to our mistake, the item you ordered is out of stock. I would like to apologize for this.
I have already returned your money.

I would like to offer the suggestion of either refunding your or you could search for an alternative item. Please choose whichever you prefer.

I hope you can understand and forgive our mistake.

I sincerely hope you will continue to use our store.

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I have an interest in a piece of merchandise very much.
Kindly, send me any pictures which I can observe and understand more.
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Yours sincerely,

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I have a great deal of interest in this item.
Please send me any pictures that will give me a good understanding of it.
Thank you very much.

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I have just told the buyer that I would send them a gift card.
The value has been agreed on. I would like to send a gift card or a coupon, but↵
is it possible to send a gift card using amazon mail?
If there is any other method to do this, please let me know.
Also, does this break any contract rules?
How can I go about providing the buyer with a discount without breaking any contract rules?
I'm sorry for the trouble, but a quick response would be much appreciated. Thank you.

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I have just told the buyer that I would send them a gift card.
The value has been agreed on. I would like to send a gift card or a coupon, but is it possible to send a gift card using Amazon mail?
If there is any other method to do this, please let me know.
Also, does this break any contract rules?
How can I go about providing the buyer with a discount without breaking any contract rules?
I'm sorry for the trouble, but a quick response would be much appreciated. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Welcome to Okinawa.
We extend our warm welcome to the foreigners and tourists.
You will receive a 5% discount for every purchase amounting to 3000 Yen and above.

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Welcome to Okinawa.
We extend our warm welcome to foreign tourists.
You will receive a 5% discount for every purchase amounting to 3,000 yen and above.