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評価: 53 / 1 Review / 2013/08/15 16:29:55

yuukin
yuukin 53 2012年から2013年にかけて1年間サンフランシスコに留学。 帰国後よ...
日本語

返信が遅くなってごめんなさい。顧客センターには問い合わせをしました。しかしまだ返答を貰っていません。何故なら日本では今週はお盆休み(夏休み)だからです。顧客センターも8月10日から8月18日までお休みなのです。あなたはこの品物の保証書を持っているので修理は可能です。日本への発送費用は私が負担致します。しかし振り子式のメトロノームは衝撃に弱いようです。せっかく修理してもらってもアメリカに発送する時にまた故障してしまうかもしれません。

英語

I am sorry for delaying reply. I had contacted the customer center, but they haven't answered me because it's summer vacation in Japan now. So the customer center also have a vacation from Augst 10th to 18th. You have a warranty of this item, so it's possible to be fixed. I will pay the shipping fee from US to Japan. However, a pendulum metronome is vulnerable to shock, so it may break again during delivry to US even if it's fixed.

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tokyomanly 66 Professional editor and sometimes tra...
tokyomanlyはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2013/08/16 00:34:30

元の翻訳
I am sorry for delaying reply. I had contacted the customer center, but they haven't answered me because it's summer vacation in Japan now. So the customer center also have a vacation from Augst 10th to 18th. You have a warranty of this item, so it's possible to be fixed. I will pay the shipping fee from US to Japan. However, a pendulum metronome is vulnerable to shock, so it may break again during delivry to US even if it's fixed.

修正後
I am sorry for the delayed reply. I contacted the customer center, but they haven't answered me because this week is the Obon summer holidays in Japan; so the customer center is on vacation August 10-18. You have a warranty for this item, so it can be fixed. I will pay the shipping fee from the US to Japan, but pendulum metronomes are vulnerable to shock, so it may break again during delivery to the US even if it's fixed.

I would give it three stars since it's otherwise adequate, but the spelling mistakes are on basic words and careless. Spelling is easily checked in Google Chrome or through any spellchecker. Basic spelling mistakes look very poor in business transactions.

yuukin yuukin 2013/08/16 10:40:36

Thank you for your correction! I do appreciate you. I have compared yours with mine several times. I could learn natural expressions and know my mistakes.
One thing that I want to ask you about your review is that how many stars you intended to give me. In your comment, you said three stars, but you gave me two. If you meant two, I accept it. If you gave me two by mistake, please change it into three if you can. (I am not sure if you can change your review...)
I know I shouldn't be obsessive about the number, but Conyac is one of sources of my income. If my evaluation falls below the number that Conyac had set up, I can't convert my points into money... Again, it's no problem if you meant two (or changed your mind just before you gave me stars.) I can accept it as my current translation ability.
Thank you.

tokyomanly tokyomanly 2013/08/16 10:47:41

Yes, I did mean to give it two, because of the spelling mistakes. I would have given it three if it didn't have the spelling mistakes. Thanks for your reply.

yuukin yuukin 2013/08/16 10:55:28

I see. Thank you.

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