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Hello,↵
Thank you for sending me the pictures/↵


I would like to conform that is it really the matte coating because it looked like the glossy coating from the pictures?↵
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Would you send me the pictures of the other finished items?

I’m sorry for taking your time, but thank you for your prompt action on this matter.↵

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Hello and thank you for sending me the pictures.

I would like to confirm that this is really matte coating because it looks like glossy coating from the pictures. Would you send me pictures of the other finished items?

I’m sorry for taking your time, but thank you for your prompt action on this matter.

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Thank you for the information you have shared.
Upon checking the details of the items, I am planning on making an item selection.
I have also understood the circumstances regarding the used items.
The selection is for me to introduce and instruct as much as I can.

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Thank you for providing me with the information.
I had a look at the details and I would like to select a product.
I also understand regarding "used" products.
I'd also like to be able to introduce and inform you about our products as much as possible. I'll go ahead with a selection.

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It is a pity that you didn't reply to the mail I sent the other day. The mail might have difficult questions. I have already solved most of the problems myself, so there is no problem.
I have the following requests for you.

Make it possible to post directly on the page linked from AAA. (as on BBB)
Make it possible to display the links to Twitter and Facebook using image.

FYI

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It is a pity that you didn't reply to the mail I sent the other day. The mail might have had some difficult questions. I have already solved most of the problems myself, so no problem.
I have the following requests for you.

Make it possible to post directly on the page linked from AAA (as on BBB)
Make it possible to display the links to Twitter and Facebook via an image

FYI

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Yesterday, I purchased toilet brush, detergent and flushable towel.
During summer, the smell becomes easy to build up.
I already placed the deodorant spray and tank detergent, but I think the eradiction of the causes is needed.
I clean the mens and ladies toilet earlier, but it was quite dirty.

Next time, please clean the toilet by rotating basis. Mens toilet cleaned by men, ladies toilet cleaned by ladies.
Please discussed and decide the rotation order.
Later, I'll make something to do cleaning checking.

Each of everyone of you please do not neglected it, lets try to stay comfortable.

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Yesterday I purchased a toilet brush, detergent and flushable wipes.
In the summer it is easy for smell to accumulate.
I already used deodorant spray and cleaner for the water tank, but I think we need to get rid of the causes.
I cleaned the men's and women's toilets earlier, and they were very dirty.

Next time, please clean the toilet on a rotating basis; with men's toilets cleaned by men, women's toilets cleaned by women.
Let's discuss and decide on the order of rotation, etc.
Later, I'll make something for checking on the cleaning.

I ask that each of you not pretend to overlook things and remain comfortable in your work.

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Yesterday I purchased a toilet brush, toilet cleaner and flushable wipes. Once it becomes Summer, it becomes easy for odors to linger. I am already using both a deodorant spray and cistern cleaner however I think it is necessary to stop the odor at its source. Just earlier I cleaned both the ladies and mens toilets but they were rather dirty.

Starting from next time, please clean the mens and ladies toilets in turns. It would be best for you to talk about the order and decide from there. Afterwards we will make come up with something to check the cleaning.

Let's have everyone not pretend not to see anything and give adequate attention to the job.↵
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Yesterday I purchased a toilet brush, toilet cleaner and flushable wipes. When it becomes summer, it becomes easy for odors to linger. I am already using both a deodorant spray and water tank cleaner, but I think it is necessary to stop the odor at its source. I just cleaned both the ladies' and men's toilets and they were extremely dirty.

Starting from next time, please clean the men's and ladies' toilets in turn. It would be best if we talk about the order and decide from there. Afterwards we will come up with something to check the cleaning.

Let's not pretend we don't see anything and let's be sure we give adequate attention to the job.

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I would like to say that I made a bid for your item listed.

Please inform me the shipping costs to Japan and send me the PayPal invoice as well.

I made the multiple successful bids on the items you listed, therefore, please gather all the items I won into one package for shipping to Japan to save the costs.

Is it possible, if you can, to ship the item to my friend who live at ○○?

I will be looking forward to hearing from you.

I am sorry for taking your time, but please write down the Antique as the item description.
Further, please take very great care for packing for not damaging the item during the shipping.

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I was the winning bidder for your item listed.

Please tell me the shipping costs to Japan and send me a PayPal invoice.

I was the winning bidder for a number of the items you listed, so I would appreciate it if you can gather them all into one package for shipping to Japan to save costs.

If possible, can you to ship the item to my friend who lives in ○○?

I look forward to hearing from you.

I am also sorry for the trouble, but please be sure to write "Antique" as the item description.
Please also be sure to be careful with the packing so the items are not damaged during shipping.

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Haruka and Nagisa is currently in the swimming club, but Rei, who will be coming in soon, is also quite a character; Seems like Makoto will have a lot more to worry about...

He managed to be the manager of the club (somehow with the flow), I am expecting him to be relied more and more from a lot of people!

Keep it up Makoto! Don't cry even if Haruka's in fer swimsuit!!

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Haruka and Nagisa are currently in the swimming club, but Rei, who will be coming in soon, is also quite a character. It seems like Makoto will have a lot more to worry about.

He managed to (by some chance) become the manager of the club. I am expecting that more and more people will be relying on him.

Good luck Makoto! Don't cry even if Haruka's in a swimsuit!

元の翻訳
The package which was stuck at the customs has now arrived. Thank you for your cooperation.

By the way, why are the shipping charges getting increased?
Listed below are some of the examples.

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The package that was held up in customs has now arrived. Thank you for your understanding and cooperation.

By the way, why are the shipping charges gradually increasing?
Listed below are some of the examples.

元の翻訳
I’m relieved to know that the goods safely reached you. However, you seem to have a complaint about the shipping cost, please allow us to explain about that. According to the rules of Amazon, we should list our goods on the site at the total price of product price and shipping cost while balancing these two costs.
The shipping costs are subject to the weights registered by Amazon, so please understand that they are different from the actual shipping costs.
Though you chose the standard shipping cost, we sent your order by EMS instead by bearing the express delivery charge on our side. Appreciate your understanding. ↵

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I’m relieved to know that the goods reached you safely. However, you seem to be displeased about the shipping cost. Please allow us to explain about that. According to Amazon's rules, we should list our goods on the site at the total price of product price and shipping cost while balancing these two costs.
The shipping costs are subject to the weights registered by Amazon, so please understand that they differ from the actual shipping costs.
Though you chose the standard shipping cost, we instead sent your order by EMS and bore the express delivery charge on our side. We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
As the item you kindly purchased from us is region-free and therefore is compatible with PAL, so you shouldn't have any problems in the region where you live. For this reason, once you have broken the seal we can no longer accept a refund. We hope for your understanding regarding this policy.

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The item you kindly purchased from us is region-free and therefore is compatible with PAL, so you shouldn't have any problems in the region where you live. For this reason, once you have broken the seal we can no longer accept a refund. We hope for your understanding regarding this policy.

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France
Is that about B008W513B0?
If so, we can ship it on 15th July.
If it does not take time to go through a duty, you will receive it from 18th July to 28th July.
Thank you

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France
Is the product like a B008W513B0?
If so, we can ship it on July 15.
If it does not take a long time to pass customs you will receive it July 18-28.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
France
Is it about the product of B008W513B0?
If so, we can ship it on July 15.
If it doesn't take unusual time in the customs, it will be delivered to you sometime between July 18-28.
Thank you.

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France
Is the product like a B008W513B0?
If so, we can ship it on July 15.
If it doesn't take unusually long in customs, it will be delivered to you sometime between July 18 and 28.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I am a Japanese distributor. This time, what's important is logo not size.
The logo item you put on the site is valuable in Japan.
The item you sent me is worth only 10 dollars in Japan, however, the item you put on the site is 10 times more worth.
Please understand that the cost including overseas shipping cost is not small.
Furthermore, I have lost my client's trust because this item has been ordered from my client.
The damage incurred on me is big. Could you respond to this with your sincerity?↵

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I am a Japanese distributor. What is important this time is the logo, not the size.
The logo item you put on the site has value in Japan.
The item you sent me is worth only $10 in Japan, but the item you put on the site has 10 times the value.
Please understand that the cost including overseas shipping cost is not small.
Moreover, I have lost my client's trust because they ordered this item.
I have incurred a great deal of damage. I look forward to your sincere reply.

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Germany

It is difficult to pass the German customs. Sometimes. They sometimes keep some items there for 2 months or so. I think German economy would be improved if they would make the customs clearance smoother. I hope for further development of Germany.

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Germany

German customs are extremely strict. Sometimes they hold items there for around two months. I think the German economy would be improved if they made customs clearance smoother. I hope the country can further develop in this area.

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I have thoroughly inspected all the merchandises delivered.
The quality is very poor and unsatisfactory for sale.
The following is the list of defects found in the merchandises:
- Visible damages (black smudge, scratch)
- Movable parts are too flimsy to fix the light.
For the reasons above, I return all the merchandises.

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I have thoroughly inspected all the items delivered.
The quality is extremely poor and unsatisfactory for sale.
The following defects were found in the items:
- Visible damage (black smudges, scratches)
- Movable parts break immediately and the light cannot be affixed
For the above reasons, I am returning all the items.

元の翻訳
360 degrees adjustable
height is adjustable ca. 14cm～25cm
nail: 2.5～3.7cm
adhesion surface diameter ca. 9cm

[Product dimensions]
ca.15cmx19cmx18cm(height)

mainly compatible models
iPad/XOOM Wi-Fi/Optimus Pad/ICONIA TAB A500/REGZA Tablet AT300
*depending on the thickness it is possible that it cannot be affixed on some models.
*compatible models are examples. We cannot answer to questions regarding specific models.

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Specifications↵
Adjustable 360 degrees
Height adjustable approx. 14-25 cm
Clasp: 2.5-3.7 cm
Adhesion surface: approx. 9 cm in diameter

Product Dimensions
approx. 15 cm x 19 cm x 18 cm (height)

Mainly Compatible Models
iPad, XOOM Wi-Fi, Optimus Pad, ICONIA TAB A500, REGZA Tablet AT300
*Depending on the thickness it is possible that it cannot be installed on certain models.
*Compatible models are examples. We cannot answer questions regarding specific models.

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Thank you for buying my item. I have checked all your e-mails, but I'm a little confused. Where shall I send the item?
I'm willing to send it to wherever you want me to, however as it is written on the caution, I cannot send it to the address where it is not registered at Paypal.

If you still wishes the item to be sent to the address other than registered at Paypal, then the item will be out of buyers' Protection.

There will not be any additional charge to either America nor France.

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Thank you for your winning bid on my item. I have checked all your e-mails, but I'm a little confused. Where should I send the item?
I'm willing to send it to wherever you like, however, as it is written on the warning, I cannot send it to an address not registered with PayPal.

If you still would like the item to be sent to a non-registered address, then the item will not qualify for Buyers' Protection.

There will be no additional charge to either the US or France.

元の翻訳
As I have just checked, it seems the item has not arrived yet.
In this case, the easiest way is to ask A to cancel the order for this time, and then after that reorder the same item.
If this is understood, I will let you know the order page.

Also, there will be an additional shipping service charge for the returned item. I do not know for sure how much the shipping fee will be yet, however I'm guessing it will be about 20 dollars. Would it be possible for A to pay 10 dollars, which is half the shipping fee?

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I have just checked and it seems the item has not arrived yet.
Given these circumstances, the easiest way is to ask A to cancel the order this time, and then reorder the same item.
If you understand this process, I will let you know the order page.

There will also be an additional shipping service charge for the returned item. I do not know for sure how much it will be yet, but I'm guessing about $20. Would it be possible for A to pay $10, which is half the shipping fee?

元の翻訳
Thank you for the success bit of my auction.

Have you received the item?
If you have already received it, it would be great if you can ↵
give me a feedback for the trade.

If you haven't received it yet, please try to contact your nearest USPS.

I have contacted Japanese post, and been told that↵
the item has been in US already, and only thing we can do is ↵
contacting USPS in US.

Thank you.

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Thank you for the successful bid on my auction.

Have you received the item?
If you have already received it, it would be great if you can give me feedback on the transaction.

If you haven't received it yet, please try to contact your nearest USPS office.

I contacted Japan Post and was told that the item is already in the US, and the only thing we can do is contact the USPS.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Sorry for the inconveniences caused by me. I am not used to deal on ebay yet.
I discounted a little. Thank you.

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I apologize for any inconvenience. I am not used to dealing with eBay yet.
I reduced the price a little. Thank you.

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I'm　sorry I'm not used to using ebay yet.
I made it cheaer a little bit.
Thank you very much.

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Sorry but I'm not used to using eBay yet.
I made it a little bit cheaper.
Thank you very much.

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There is one that I cannot hear anything.
Another one doesn't react to any command.
There is even one whose tip is broken and doesn't work at all.

I think you should check every items before you ship.

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There is one from which I cannot hear anything.
Another one completely doesn't respond.
There is even one on which the tip is broken and it doesn't work at all.

You really should check all items before you ship them.