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According to your tracking information, delivery was completed on X/X.

You may have already done so, but please confirm the following two items:

1. Is it possible that family or others who live with you received the delivery?
2. Our company arranged for delivery to the name and address below. Is there any mistake in those details?

If you have confirmed both of these items, I'm sorry for the trouble but please inquire with the post office responsible for receiving the shipment. If this still doesn't establish the whereabouts of the delivery please contact us again.

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According to your tracking information, the delivery was completed on X/X.

You may have already done so, but please confirm the following two items:

1. Is it possible that your family or others who live with you received the delivery?
2. Our company arranged for the delivery to the name and address below. Are there any mistakes in the delivery details?

If you have confirmed both of these items, I'm sorry for the trouble but please inquire with the post office responsible for the delivery. If this still doesn't establish the whereabouts of the delivery, then please contact us again.

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If you have interest in products regarding Japanese "otaku" culture, figures, etc. we may be able to help your business, so please feel free to contact us. We are very sorry for the trouble and offer our deepest apologies.

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If you are interested in products such as Japanese "otaku" culture, figures, etc., we might be able to help your business so please feel free to contact us. We are very sorry for the trouble and offer our deepest apologies.

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The monochrome is in 1986. It was taken from in front of the Shinjuku Center Building. On the left is the Keio Plaza Hotel. Actually, from this point Mt. Fuji could be seen so I took a shot of that. You really can't tell in the photo, but you can vaguely make it out from the right-hand side of the center left. I remember I was really moved when I found that from the middle of the group of Shinjuku buildings, without being in a high place, just on the ground, I could see Mt. Fuji. Now the Tokyo Government Office has been built. The color one was taken in 2011.

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The monochrome is from 1986. It was taken from the front of Shinjuku Center Building. On the left is Keio Plaza Hotel. Actually, I could see Mt. Fuji from this point, so I took this shot. It may be hard to find it in the photo, but you can see it vaguely on the right-hand side of a far-away building around the left side of the center. I still remember I was really moved when I could see Mt. Fuji from the middle of a group of Shinjuku buildings, without climbing up high, just on the ground. Now Tokyo Metropolitan Government Office Building has been built. The colored one was taken in 2011.

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There are now 30,000 Conyac users around the world.
When your company does not have staff capable of translation, with just one e-mail these users go to work helping you to expand overseas by localizing and disseminating your contents. Without the high costs of a translation company, simply by utilizing the Conyac platform you can enjoy a superb translation experience. WIth the ability to translate upward of 60 languages, you can choose your preferred translator to go to work for you.

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There are now 30,000 Conyac users around the world.
When your company does not have staff capable of translation, with just one e-mail these users go to work helping you to expand overseas by localizing and disseminating your contents. Simply by utilizing the Conyac platform, you can enjoy a superb translation experience without the high costs of a translation company. With the ability to translate upward of 60 languages, you can choose your preferred translator to work for you.

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1. I'm sorry for my late reply. I'll definitely buy all that you have of the Japanese size so please hold them for me. Since I sometimes get requests to put embroidery on the Japanese size I'd like to have you hold those. Thank you very much.
2. I'm contacting you in place of Shunsuke. Does the time for delivery vary depending on the product series and variety?
If there are items that can be shipped immediately or will take some time, please tell me specifically which items. Thank you very much for that. Please send your reply to Shunsuke.

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1. I'm sorry for my late reply. I'll definitely buy all that you have of the Japanese size so please hold them for me. Since I sometimes get requests to put embroidery on the Japanese sizes I'd like to have you hold those. Thank you very much.
2. I'm contacting you in place of Shunsuke. Does the time for delivery vary depending on the product series and variety?
If there are items that can be shipped immediately or will take some time, please tell me specifically which items. Thank you very much for that. Please send your reply to Shunsuke.

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It's cute, so let's go!

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She's cute, so that's OK!

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Mana is a charismatic figure in the Gothic-Lolita style that has attracted global attention.
So what is the story behind Mana who yearns to be a global Gothic-Lolita?

Malice Mizer was a Japanese band. They are generally known as a "visual-kei" band. They were formed in August 1992 and stopped producing music December 31, 2001. The band's name originated from the French translation of the Japanese words "akui" (ill will, malice) and "higeki" (disaster).

Even in the visual-kei world, Malice Mizer was an especially colorful presence.

Mana uses blue as her theme color from the Malice Mizer era.

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al78901

Mana is a charismatic figure in the Gothic-Lolita world who has attracted global attention.
So who is this Mana that gothic-lolitas all around the world look up to?

MALICE MIZER was a Japanese band. They are generally known as a "visual-kei" band. They were formed in August 1992 and went on hiatus on December 31, 2001. The band's name comes from the words "malice" and "misery" in French.

MALICE MIZER was a colorful presence even in the visual-kei scene.

Mana has used blue as his theme color ever since he was in MALICE MIZER.

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I'm very sorry but I don't have a fax machine. Can you send me that photo as an e-mail attachment? I'm not sure specifically what you're aiming at when you refer to an "advertisement". If that advertisement doesn't refer to the Amazon product page, I think you may have some sort of misunderstanding.

It seems like you're talking about a false advertisement. It appears likely that Amazon and I have no responsibility regarding that advertisement.

To the best of my ability I sent you the product advertised on the Amazon page.

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I'm very sorry but I don't have a fax machine. Can you send me that photo as an e-mail attachment? I'm not sure specifically what you're aiming at when you refer to an "advertisement". If that advertisement doesn't refer to the Amazon product page, I think you may have some sort of misunderstanding.

It seems like you're talking about a false advertisement. It appears that Amazon and I have no responsibility regarding that advertisement.

To the best of my ability I sent you the product advertised on the Amazon page.

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In September in the three cities of Fukuoka, Osaka, and Tokyo, the Taiwan Trade Center will be holding the "2013 Taiwan Living Ware and Patented Goods Negotiation Exhibition." A total of 69 Taiwanese suppliers associated with living ware will participate, with numerous items ranging from high-quality design household articles to gifts and horticultural goods on display.

The Fukuoka event will be held on September 2 at the Hotel Okura Fukuoka, Osaka will be on the 4th at Suissotel Nankai Osaka, and Tokyo will be on the 6th at the Hotel Okura Tokyo.

Entry is free. Opening time at each venue will be 9:30 a.m. to 5 p.m.

Last year's event attracted approximately 2,000 buyers from Japanese companies.

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In September, the Taiwan Trade Center will be holding the "2013 Taiwan Living Ware and Patented Goods Negotiation Exhibition" in the three cities of Fukuoka, Osaka, and Tokyo. A total of 69 Taiwanese suppliers associated with living ware will participate, with numerous items ranging from high-quality design household articles to gifts and horticultural goods on display.

The Fukuoka event will be held on September 2 at the Hotel Okura Fukuoka, Osaka will be on the 4th at Suissotel Nankai Osaka, and Tokyo will be on the 6th at the Hotel Okura Tokyo.

Entry is free. Opening time at each venue will be 9:30 a.m. to 5 p.m.

Last year's event attracted approximately 2,000 buyers from Japanese companies.

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In Kyoto, green tea is of course drunken, but many also regularly enjoy maccha (powdered green tea), freely drink tea at home, and prepare tea when customers pay a visit.

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In Kyoto, green tea is of course drunk, but many also regularly enjoy maccha (powdered green tea), freely drink tea at home, and prepare tea when customers pay a visit.

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Hello, how are you?
I would like a catalog of the automobiles that your company deals with. Would you be able to send this to me? If possible, I would like three copies of catalogs displaying each of the makers and models. I am, of course, willing to pay for the postage and the catalogs.
Thank you for your consideration and assistance.

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Thank you for your assistance.
I would like a catalog of the automobiles that your company handles. Would you be able to send this to me? If possible, I would like three copies of catalogs displaying each of the makers and models. I am, of course, willing to pay for the postage and the catalogs.
Thank you for your consideration.

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It's not such a great trouble, so no problem. It's definitely fun when there are lots of different seasonal snacks/sweets. I usually see them and think "oh, they're back again", but ________ seasonal limited snacks are pretty unusual.

The giant-sized Colon are maple and cocoa flavored aren't they. I see. The Glico snacks this time have a somewhat strong taste (I've tried them).

On Monday it looks like I'll be able to give an answer on the price. I'll be in touch. Take care.

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It's not such a great trouble, so no problem. It's definitely fun when there are lots of different seasonal snacks/sweets. I usually see them and think "oh, they're back again", but ________ seasonal limited snacks are pretty unusual.

The giant-sized Colｌon are maple syrup and cocoa flavored aren't they. I see. The Glico snacks this time have a somewhat strong taste (I've tried them).

On Monday, it looks like I'll be able to give an answer on the price. I'll be in touch. Take care.

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Hello and sorry for the trouble. For remittances to/from abroad, the only method I know is MoneyGram. The next time you send money, you might use MoneyGram.

If possible, it would be good to use PayPal for settlement, but a shop in Ukraine that I often transact with uses a payment service called Skrill. It allows you to pay by credit card and the commissions are probably quite low.

Next time, how about using a service to pay by credit card? However, I don't want to cause you any difficulties, so MoneyGram would be fine too.

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Hello and sorry for the trouble. For remittances to/from abroad, the only method I know is MoneyGram. The next time you send money, you might use MoneyGram.

If possible, it would be good to use PayPal for settlement, but a shop in Ukraine that I often transact with uses a payment service called Skrill. It allows you to pay by credit card and the commissions are probably low.

Next time, how about using a service that allows you to pay by credit card? However, I don't want to cause you any difficulties so MoneyGram would be fine too.

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Thank you for your kind proposal. Yes of course, please let us search for you.

Thank you also for presenting with me the great number of links. Of course I also have used well-known stores (those that advertise on Rakuten, Yahoo!, etc.) and searched many auctions for items. But I have run into nothing but items being out of stock and my estimated bids exceeding the budget.

I'm now in the middle of confirming inventory of two far away retails stores I've found.

I continue this long search and when I can ensure items are in stock I'll contact you again.

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Thank you for your kind proposal. Yes of course, please let us search for you.

Thank you also for presenting with me the great number of links. Of course I also have used well-known stores (those that advertise on Rakuten, Yahoo!, etc.) and searched many auctions for items. But I have run into nothing but items being out of stock and my estimated bids exceeding the budget.

I'm now in the middle of confirming inventory of two far away retails stores I've found.

I will continue this long search and when I can ensure the items are in stock I'll contact you again.

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Dear Mr./Ms. ___:

This is [◯◯ ＝フルネーム] from [◯◯ ＝会社名]. Our company is a retail trader importing products to Japan. We are continually searching for stores with which we might conduct business. If we purchase quantities of your items, we hope you will be able to grant us a discounted price. Our company deals with a great many customers. And by using Amazon, Yahoo (which is very well known in Japan), and Rakuten, we possess a large market for selling goods.

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Dear Mr./Ms. ___:

This is [◯◯ ＝フルネーム] from [◯◯ ＝会社名]. Our company is a retail trader importing products to Japan. We are continually searching for stores with which we might conduct business. If we purchase quantities of your items, we hope you will be able to grant us a discounted price. Our company has a large number of potential customers. And by using Amazon, Yahoo (which is very well known in Japan), and Rakuten, we possess a large market for selling goods.

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Thank you for agreeing to the price discount.
I forget to ask a little while ago, but can these items be sent and received as "gifts"?
When I receive your reply, I'll make payment to the designated account.
Thank you very much.

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Thank you for agreeing to the price discount.
I forgot to ask a little while ago, but can these items be sent and received as "gifts"?
When I receive your reply, I'll make payment to the designated account.
Thank you very much.

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And if there are products you desire that aren't available in the online store or Japanese products you are searching for, feel free to send us your requests. We will search for you.

Figures, books, toys, fishing supplies, clothing, anything in Japanese brands - we will search for it!


Requests are easy.
Simply click the below link, and make a request from this store.

In fact, since there is no cost for shopping mall handling or inventory, we are often able to offer items at a low price.

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And if there are Japanese products you desire that aren't available in the online store, feel free to send us your requests. We will search for you.

Figures, books, toys, fishing supplies, clothing, anything in Japanese brands - we will search for it!


Requests can be made easily.
Simply click the below link, and make a request from this store.

In fact, since there is no cost for shopping mall handling or inventory, we are often able to offer items at a low price.