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日本語

モノクロは1986年。新宿センタービル前から西に向かって撮影をした。左は京王プラザホテル。実はこの位置から富士山が見えたので撮影をしたのだ。写真ではあまりわからないが中央左の遠いビルの右側にうっすらと見えている。見つけたときには新宿のビル群のまっただ中、高台に上がらず地面の上から富士山が見えたのにとても感動したのを覚えている。今では都庁が建った。カラー2011年撮影。

英語

The monochrome is in 1986. It was taken from in front of the Shinjuku Center Building. On the left is the Keio Plaza Hotel. Actually, from this point Mt. Fuji could be seen so I took a shot of that. You really can't tell in the photo, but you can vaguely make it out from the right-hand side of the center left. I remember I was really moved when I found that from the middle of the group of Shinjuku buildings, without being in a high place, just on the ground, I could see Mt. Fuji. Now the Tokyo Government Office has been built. The color one was taken in 2011.

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jojoはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/08 13:17:35

元の翻訳
The monochrome is in 1986. It was taken from in front of the Shinjuku Center Building. On the left is the Keio Plaza Hotel. Actually, from this point Mt. Fuji could be seen so I took a shot of that. You really can't tell in the photo, but you can vaguely make it out from the right-hand side of the center left. I remember I was really moved when I found that from the middle of the group of Shinjuku buildings, without being in a high place, just on the ground, I could see Mt. Fuji. Now the Tokyo Government Office has been built. The color one was taken in 2011.

修正後
The monochrome is from 1986. It was taken from the front of Shinjuku Center Building. On the left is Keio Plaza Hotel. Actually, I could see Mt. Fuji from this point, so I took this shot. It may be hard to find it in the photo, but you can see it vaguely on the right-hand side of a far-away building around the left side of the center. I still remember I was really moved when I could see Mt. Fuji from the middle of a group of Shinjuku buildings, without climbing up high, just on the ground. Now Tokyo Metropolitan Government Office Building has been built. The colored one was taken in 2011.

富士山がテーマのようなので、文の末尾にある「I could see Mt. Fuji」を前の方に持ってきて、文全体をすっきりさせてみました。