翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 66 / 1 Review / 2013/08/28 12:30:28

tokyomanly
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日本語

台湾貿易センターは9月、福岡、大阪、東京の3都市で「2013台湾生活用品・パテント商品商談会」を開く。台湾の生活用品関連サプライヤー69社が参加し、デザイン生の高い家庭用品からギフト、園芸用品まで、多数の商品を展示する。

福岡会場は2日にホテルオークラ福岡で、大阪会場は4日にスイスホテル南海大阪で、東京会場は6日にホテルオークラ東京で開催。

入場無料。開場時間は各会場とも9時30分から17時まで。

昨年は約2000名の日本企業のバイヤーの方々が来場した。

英語

In September in the three cities of Fukuoka, Osaka, and Tokyo, the Taiwan Trade Center will be holding the "2013 Taiwan Living Ware and Patented Goods Negotiation Exhibition." A total of 69 Taiwanese suppliers associated with living ware will participate, with numerous items ranging from high-quality design household articles to gifts and horticultural goods on display.

The Fukuoka event will be held on September 2 at the Hotel Okura Fukuoka, Osaka will be on the 4th at Suissotel Nankai Osaka, and Tokyo will be on the 6th at the Hotel Okura Tokyo.

Entry is free. Opening time at each venue will be 9:30 a.m. to 5 p.m.

Last year's event attracted approximately 2,000 buyers from Japanese companies.

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takeshikm 61 経歴(Career): 企業2社で合計約3年の社内通訳・翻訳の経験を積...
takeshikmはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/30 17:29:27

元の翻訳
In September in the three cities of Fukuoka, Osaka, and Tokyo, the Taiwan Trade Center will be holding the "2013 Taiwan Living Ware and Patented Goods Negotiation Exhibition." A total of 69 Taiwanese suppliers associated with living ware will participate, with numerous items ranging from high-quality design household articles to gifts and horticultural goods on display.

The Fukuoka event will be held on September 2 at the Hotel Okura Fukuoka, Osaka will be on the 4th at Suissotel Nankai Osaka, and Tokyo will be on the 6th at the Hotel Okura Tokyo.

Entry is free. Opening time at each venue will be 9:30 a.m. to 5 p.m.

Last year's event attracted approximately 2,000 buyers from Japanese companies.

修正後
In September, the Taiwan Trade Center will be holding the "2013 Taiwan Living Ware and Patented Goods Negotiation Exhibition" in the three cities of Fukuoka, Osaka, and Tokyo. A total of 69 Taiwanese suppliers associated with living ware will participate, with numerous items ranging from high-quality design household articles to gifts and horticultural goods on display.

The Fukuoka event will be held on September 2 at the Hotel Okura Fukuoka, Osaka will be on the 4th at Suissotel Nankai Osaka, and Tokyo will be on the 6th at the Hotel Okura Tokyo.

Entry is free. Opening time at each venue will be 9:30 a.m. to 5 p.m.

Last year's event attracted approximately 2,000 buyers from Japanese companies.

no misinterpretation. I suppose this is a perfect translation, but is it easier for people to read if the first sentence is written as above? The word order will be of course different from the original text though.

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tokyomanly tokyomanly 2013/08/30 18:32:29

Thanks for your review. Yes I agree, I like your word order better.

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