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Commercial advertisement of Heat Tech

What is Heat Tech?
Heat Tech are clothes with cold protection produced by UNIQLO. Fibres of the clothes get warm when they absorb moisture. The most attractive point of Heat Tech is that Heat Tech are warm though they are thin.

How warm are Heat Tech?

Different users have different opinions on how warm they feel in Heat tech, but Heat Tech are strongly recommended for when you play sports such as golf or skiing outside. Some people bulk buy Heat Tech before they go on trips to cold weather countries such as Russia or Europe in winter.

You will only need Heat Tech even at the coldest place!

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Commercial advertisement of Heat Tech

What is Heat Tech?
Heat Tech is a clothing range with cold protection produced by UNIQLO. The fibers of the clothes get warm when they absorb moisture. The biggest selling point of Heat Tech is that it is thin and yet so warm.

How warm is Heat Tech?

It depends on the person as to how warm they feel in Heat tech, but Heat Tech is strongly recommended for when you play outdoor sports such as golf or skiing. Some people buy Heat Tech in bulk before they go on trips to cold weather countries such as Russia or Europe in winter.

Even in the coldest places, with Heat Tech there is no need to worry!

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May Japanese cuisine surprise you? There comes a dish of rice and eggs easily cooked!

Do you know about Japanese home cooking? This time, I will introduce to you a cheap, simple and quick dish made of rice and eggs that were well-known long ago and yet still popular recently during dining times in Japan. People may feel surprised by Japanese cuisine. You can make the same dish even in your place so long as you can get fresh eggs... ?

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Perhaps you find Japanese cuisine surprising? Here is a dish of rice and eggs that is easy to cook!

Do you know about Japanese home cooking? This time, I will introduce to you a cheap, simple and quick dish made of rice and eggs that was well-known long ago and yet is still popular at the modern Japanese dinner table. There may be people surprised by Japanese cuisine. You can make the same dish even in your country so long as you can get fresh eggs... ?

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Please check about detail of feedback in following URL.
Of course, I do my best when buyer contacts me, and I didn't get negative feedback so far.

If I can do anything else, please tell me.

If there is no problem, please remove this restrictions.

I'm sorry, this e-mail is so long.
thank you.

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Please check the details of the feedback at the following URL.
Of course, I do my best when a buyer contacts me, and I haven't received any negative feedback so far.

If I there is anything else I can do, please tell me.

If there is no problem, please remove these restrictions.

I'm sorry, this e-mail is so long.
Thank you.

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Also, although it is described below; "You can also verify delivery by providing the feedback you have received from buyers.", there are many buyers who do not give us feedback. Thus, we can confirm at most only half numbers of products are safely arrived.
We request buyers to give us feedback.

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Also, although it says "You can also verify delivery by providing the feedback you have received from buyers.", there are many buyers who do not give us feedback. Thus, we can confirm the delivery of around only half of our transactions.
We request buyers to give us feedback.

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I apologize for the trouble this time.

It seems the articles were stopped at your country's EMS handling company (delivery company).
Apparently there are problems in your country.

We sent an enquiry from here, but to day there is no answer.
According to our experience, this case will take some time.

Would reimbursing you as an apology for the wait be all right?

Ans then, could you please refuse receipt when the articles are delivered?

If you accept, we will refund your money promptly.

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I apologize for the trouble this time.

It seems the articles were stopped at your country's EMS handling company (delivery company).
Apparently there are problems in your country.

We sent an inquiry from here, but there has been no reply yet today.
According to our experience, this case will take some time.

Would reimbursing you as an apology for the wait be alright?

And then, could you please refuse the articles when they are delivered?

If you accept, we will refund your money promptly.

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That is to say ER01 and ER02 both have two types, A type and B type?
So the ER01 I have ordered in the past are all type A?
Since the dealer price list does not have A type or B type on it, I haven't noticed it.
Are both types in stock?

I have noticed that the newest dealer price list does not have W01.
Is it no longer for sale? Or is it not in stock?

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That is to say ER01 and ER02 both have two types, A type and B type?
So the ER01 I have ordered in the past are all type A?
Since the dealer price list does not have A type or B type on it, I haven't noticed it.
Are both types normally in stock?

I have noticed that the newest dealer price list does not have WF01.
Is it no longer for sale? Or is it not in stock?

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Does this mean there is a type A and type B for each of ER01 and ER02?
And all of my past orders are type A of ER01, correct?
I didn't realize since there was no description about type A and type B in the dealer price list.
Are they both usually in stock?

I also noticed that WF01 is not listed on the latest dealer price list.
Is this still on sale? Do you have any stocks available?

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Does this mean there is a type A and type B for each of ER01 and ER02?
And all of my past orders are type A of ER01, correct?
I didn't realize since there was nothing written about type A and type B in the dealer price list.
Are they both usually in stock?

I also noticed that WF01 is not listed on the latest dealer price list.
Is this still on sale? Do you have any stocks available?

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On January 11th, I asked to ship products urgently. Though it was said that the package was ready to ship, it hasn't been sent out until today. I strongly request you to dispatch it immediately. Thank you in advance.

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On January 11th, I made a request for urgent shipment of the products. Although it was said that the package was ready to ship on January 13th, it still hasn't been sent out until today. I strongly request you to dispatch it immediately. Thank you in advance.

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I still want AAA.

Soon as BBB arrives, I will return CCC to you.

Befire I sent CCC, I will contact you again.

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I still want AAA.

As soon as BBB arrives, I will have CCC returned to you.

I will contact you again before I send CCC.

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The razor you are about to purchase is larger, and has a longer blade compared
with other razors of the same bland. This makes it very rare piece.

Probably less than 5 people in Japan has this type of razor, so you can expect the
value of this piece increase.

Some razors are traded around $6000 per item in Japan, so the list price I put is
not that expensive, counting the cost of acquisition. However, if you really wish to
purchase this one, I will offer you $3000.

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You can bid the item from Canada without any trouble.
Which piece do you intend to purchase?

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The razor you are planning to purchase is larger, and has a longer blade compared
with other razors of the same brand. This makes it a very rare piece.

Probably less than 5 people in Japan have this type of razor, so you can expect the
value of this piece to increase.

Some razors are traded around $6000 per item in Japan, so the list price I put is
not that expensive, taking into account the cost of acquisition. However, if you really wish to
purchase this one, I will offer you $3000.

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You can bid for the item from Canada without any trouble.
Which piece do you intend to purchase?

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I like the looking of this apartment building.

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I like the look of this apartment building.

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Thank you for your successful bidding.

We are very sorry,but we only ship to the delivery address registered in PayPal to avoid problems.
We appreciate your understanding.

The product is already shipped.
We shipped it out using Japan Post EMS.
The voucher number is listed below.

Thank you for your time and attention.

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Thank you for your bid.

We are very sorry, but we only ship to the delivery address registered in PayPal to avoid problems.
We appreciate your understanding.

The product is already shipped.
We shipped it out using Japan Post EMS.
The voucher number is listed below.

We are sorry for any inconvenience but we hope you understand.

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Thanks for your bid.

Please accept my sincerest apologies, but↵
just to avoid any trouble, I will ship to the address that is registered with the PayPal account.↵
I do hope you'll understand.

Your item has been shipped.↵
I used Japan Post EMS.↵
The tracking number is below.

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I'm truly sorry to bother you, and I thank you very much for your efforts.

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Thank you for your bid.

Please accept my sincerest apologies, but just to avoid any problems, I will ship to the address that is registered with the PayPal account. I do hope you'll understand.

Your item has been shipped. I used Japan Post EMS. The tracking number is below.

I'm truly sorry to put you through the trouble.↵
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Best regards,↵

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The item you bought was shipped from the store of Amazon in the United States. In addition, Amazon Customer Service can deal with the inquiries and claims, so please contact to the Customer Service. Now, the repayment of the item is processing. Please inquire the method for returning the item to Amazon Customer Service. Please note that it will take some time to complete the process of the repayment.
Best regards,

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The item you bought will be shipped from stocks from Amazon in the US. Also, Amazon Customer Service can deal with any inquiries and problems, so please contact Customer Service. The refund for the item is now being processed. Please inquire about the refund process at Amazon Customer Service. Please note that it will take some time to complete the refund process.
Best regards,

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Thank you for your continued support.
We appreciate that you let us know the tracking number for shipping back.
On this occasion of customs clearance at U.S., we regret to inform you the results that we return them.
Anyway, we would like to take action to avoid same trouble.

Now, we considers the follwoing actions:
1. All items should be described HS Code on invoices.
2. All watches should be prepared special invoices.

To proceed the next customs clearance smoothly, could you please give us your additional advice?

Your cooperation would be deeply appreciated.

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Thank you for your continued support.
We appreciate that you let us know the tracking number for the return shipping.
We are truly disappointed to hear that the item was made to be returned when it came under U.S. customs clearance.
As such, we would like to take action to avoid the same problem from occurring.

The actions we are currently considering are as follows:
1. All items should have an HS Code written for them.
2. Prepare special invoices for watches.

If there is anything that can be done to have future customs clearances proceed more smoothly, could you please give us your advice?

Your cooperation would be deeply appreciated.

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Please, would you kindly consider the discount for the shipping fee that I mentioned yesterday?

From years before, I have let ◯◯ be used and shipments requests have been received every month. But the number of shipments will be increasing. From this year, shipment requests are estimated to become weekly.

Though it will 15% for the initial use, I will be requesting to go for a 25% discount. If that will happen, I will always be using your company from now on. And if my request will be possitively received, I think it would benefit the both of us.

Patiently, would be waiting for your kind reply.

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Have you been able to consider the discount on shipping fees that I mentioned yesterday?

Since more than a year ago, I have been using ◯◯ and taking shipment requests on a monthly basis. The number of shipments is continuing to increase, and so from this year, I plan to take shipment requests on a weekly basis.

Although it is at 15% as it was originally, I am hoping to receive a 25% discount. If this happens, I will continue to use your company from here forward. I am capable of actively getting requests so I think it would benefit the both of us.

I am patiently awaiting your reply.

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The shipping fees vary depending on the weight of the package and the destined country.
You can confirm the additional fee upon check out.

<Estimated Leadtime>
Air Small Packet/ 7 to 10 days
EMS/ 4 to 7 days

Please note that the leadtimes are expectations, and actual delivery may be delayed due to the traffic conditions and other causes in the destined country. Buyers are responsible for contacting their local post offices to trace their packages after shipment.

<Package Storage>
When you do not receive your package within the specified period, please contact your local delivery office first. Usually, delivery offices store packages for about a week.

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The shipping fees vary depending on the weight of the package and the destination country.
You can confirm the additional fee upon payment.

<Delivery date>
Air Small Packet/ 7 to 10 days
EMS/ 4 to 7 days

Please note that the delivery dates are estimates, and actual delivery may be delayed due to the transportation conditions and other causes in the destined country. Buyers are responsible for contacting their local post offices to trace their packages after shipment.

<Safekeeping of Packages>
When you do not receive your package within the specified period, please contact your local delivery office first. Usually, delivery offices store packages for about a week.

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Subject: please tell me the EIN number

Concerning the subject above, I heard that recently ,by the amendment of the regislation,↵
goods the price of which is US$ 2,500　and over are not permitted to be exported from USA without the EIN number.
As the goods which you sent me on the 4tht December amounted US$2,527,we are having much troble that we cannot forward them to Japan.

Unless you tell us the EIN number,we might troble you to send back the goods and ask refunding.
We would be so happy if you reply soon to tell us the number.

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Subject: Please tell me the EIN number

Concerning the subject above, I heard that recently that by a recent amendment to legislation, items priced at US$ 2,500 and over are not permitted to be exported from the US without an EIN number.
As the items which you sent me on the 4th of December amounted to US$2,527, we are having a lot of trouble as we cannot forward them to Japan.

Unless you tell us the EIN number,we might have to trouble you and send back the items and ask for a refund.
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Therefore It would be a great help if you could reply soon and tell us the number.

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Being printed double-side with different colour and patterns on each side, this wrapper look nice when you use it folding back.
You can use it freely as a wrapper to wrap something, a bandanna or a scarf!

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Printed double-sided with different colors and patterns on each side, it looks great when you fold it back and forth.
You can use it freely in various ways such as wrapping it to use as a bathtub cover, or even a bandanna or a scarf!

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As you can see the evaluation I have received on eBay, I have kept 100% Positive rates me until now.

This time, you evaluated me Neutral. I am very sorry and I want to compensate it somehow.

Since you are not satisfied with the goods, you can return the goods if you would like.
In this case, please send it back with USPS. I can cover the shipping fee ($ 30).
After I receive the goods, I will refund shipping fee and the cost for the goods.

If you prefer not to return the goods, I can pay you $ 30 for consolation money.
Could you please change the evaluation from Neutral to Positive?

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As you can see from the feedback I have received on eBay, I have kept a 100% feedback rating up until now.

This time, you gave me Neutral feedback. I am very sorry and I want to make up for it somehow.

Since you are not satisfied with the goods, you can return them if you would like.
In this case, please send it back with USPS. I can cover the shipping fee ($ 30).
After I receive the goods, I will refund the shipping fee and the cost of the goods.

If you prefer not to return the goods, I can pay you $ 30 in compensation.
Could you please change the evaluation from Neutral to Positive?

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I ordered two 12v150w bulbs on December 12 and five bulbs of the same 12v150 on December 13 but I did not receive any of seven bulbs yet.
When I traced the shipment with the tracking number that I received on December 20, it says that the goods have been shipped to Switzerland.
Does it imply that your company made a mistake when shipping?
Since I need the goods by the end of this week, please resend the goods to my address via express post in case of they are being shipped to a different address by mistake. Make sure that I will receive the goods within a week from today.
I am considering about placing a complaint at eBay too.

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I ordered two 12v150w bulbs on December 12 and five bulbs of the same 12v150 on December 13 but I have not received any of the seven bulbs yet.
When I traced the shipment with the tracking number that I received on December 20, it says that the goods have been shipped to Switzerland.
Does it mean that your company made a mistake when shipping?
Since I need the goods by the end of this week, please resend the goods to my address via express post if they have been shipped to a different address by mistake. Please make sure that I will receive the goods within a week from today.
I am considering placing a complaint on eBay too.

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I have forgotten about the period for the amount you've presented that I have acknowledged have passed. I apologize for this but I will make an offer again.

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I forgot about accepting the amount you presented and the period has now expired. I apologize for this and will make an offer again.

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I forgot to accept your suggested amount and now the time limit has passed. I'm sorry but please make the offer again.

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I forgot to accept your suggested amount and now the time limit has passed. I'm sorry and will make another offer.