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Dear Leosdiant,

Hello.

Would it be possible to receive a receipt for the products I bought from you recently?

Without a receipt, I can't send them to Japan.


Product 1 x 150
Product 2 x 150
Product 3 x 150

$4707.43


I would be grateful if I could receive a receipt for the above items.

Thank you in advance.

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Dear Leosdiant,

Hello.

Would it be possible to receive a receipt for the products I bought from you recently?

Without a receipt, I can't send them to Japan.


Product 1 x 150
Product 2 x 150
Product 3 x 40

$4707.43


I would be grateful if I could receive a receipt for the above items.

Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Hello how are you doing? It seems like years.
It is good news for me you are in dtock that you don't advertise high quality mark6.
But I'm sorry for luck of money to buy them.

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Hello how are you doing? It's been a long time, thank you for the email.
It is good news for me to hear that you have a high-quality mark6 in stock which isn't advertised.
But unfortunately I currently don't have the money to order in and sell a high-quality mark6.

元の翻訳
There was a bit of damage on the box but I'm almost satisfied. Thank you.

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There was a bit of damage on the box but I'm mostly satisfied. Thank you.

元の翻訳
I feel very releived to hear that. Thank you very much for letting me know. Can you please then, transfer the goods to us as you mentioned?

Our address is as follows:
XXXXXXX

I do not know about the postal system in US, but if it takes time to reach me, could you please mail it by express? And after you mail it, please inform me the mailing cost.

I very much appreciate your kindness. Thank you very much in advance.

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I feel very relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for letting me know. Can you please then, transfer the goods to us as you mentioned?

Our address is as follows:
XXXXXXX

I do not know about the postal system in US, but if it will take time to reach me, could you please mail it by express? And after you mail it, please inform me of the mailing cost.

I very much appreciate your kindness. Thank you very much in advance.

元の翻訳
You are my first eBay customer.
I will send you a present to express my appreciation.
I hope you like it.

If you look for other items, feel free to ask me.
Please attach pictures when you do so.

Best regards,

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You are my first eBay customer.
I will send you a present to express my appreciation.
I hope you like it.

If you are looking for other items, feel free to ask me anytime.
Please attach pictures when you do so to make them easier to find.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
I confirmed the new line of products and attached the PDF of order form.
I would appreciate it if you could send it to me by Monday.

I am going to order A this time.
Does A deal with B, C and D?
Is there any related products to use A?

Please tell me the price for the agency.
Do you have new Dealer Price List?

One of E that I ordered last time was damaged so I considered if I could exchange the damaged part for a new one but it was impossible.
Could you please send new E for free?

Thank you.

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I checked the new line of products and attached the order form as a PDF.
I would appreciate it if you could send it out by Monday.

I am going to order A this time.
Is A compatible with B, C and D?
Are there any related products needed to use A?

Please tell me your dealers' prices of the new items.
Do you have new Dealer Price List?

One of E that I ordered last time was damaged so I considered if I could exchange the damaged part for a new one but it was impossible.
Could you please send a new E for free?

Thank you.

元の翻訳
We are able to do a partial refund, but the shipping charges are non-refundable.
In other words, if the product price is $21.76 and the shipping is $28.48, your total would be $50.24,.
Even so, would you like me to ship your product anyway?
I am prepared to ship it. Since we ship by EMS, you would probably get your package in around a week or so. Feel free to give me an indication of the shipping status at any time.
Please Let me know what you think.

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If you would like a refund, I will refund the cost of the unsent items.
In other words, if the product price is $21.76 and the shipping is $28.48, your total would be $50.24,.
Otherwise, would you like me to ship your product anyway?
I am prepared to ship it. Since we ship by EMS, you would probably get your package in around a week or so. ↵
If you are willing to accept the items, please give me the instruction to send the products at any time.
Please let me know what you think.

元の翻訳
ta43506
Homemade Karaage is rarely crispy, rather get moist.
Kimpiragobo: Kimpira is one of Japanese dishes. Shredded ingredients are frizzled with sugar and soysauce. It is sweet and hot.
There are various kinds of Kimpira. Kimpiragobo is famous for homemade dish. Recently, however, few people buy burdocks than before, so it is difficult to say that Kimpiragobo is a typical homemade dish.

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ta43506
Homemade Karaage is rarely crispy, but instead ends up rather soggy.
Kimpira Gobo: Kimpira is one type of Japanese side-dish. Shredded ingredients are fried in sugar and soy sauce. It is sweet and spicy.
There are various kinds of Kimpira, but Kimpira Gobo is famous as a homemade dish. Recently however, fewer people buy burdock than before so it is difficult to say that Kimpira Gobo is a typical homemade dish.

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Five selected dishes cooked uniquely by Japanese mothers. Introducing the five quintessential Japanese family dishes. Meat, potatoes, onions, and konnyaku noodles (konnyaku is a type of jelly made from yam) are stir-fried in oil, seasoned and simmered with soy sauce, sugar, and mirin. Beef, pork, or chicken can be used for the meat. As the ingredients are same in the Japanese curry, they can be easily supplied, and the dish was introduced nation-wide as a meal in the navy. It's the first dish that comes to many people's mind as their mother's cooking. The flavors vary from family to family, providing conversation topics amongst friends, discussing the lightness or heaviness of the flavor, or whether to use shichimi peppers (seven-flavor chili pepper mixture), etc.

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Five selected dishes cooked uniquely by Japanese mothers. Introducing the five quintessential Japanese family dishes. Meat, potatoes, onions, and konnyaku noodles (konnyaku is a type of jelly made from yam) are stir-fried in oil, seasoned and simmered with soy sauce, sugar, and mirin. Beef, pork, or chicken can be used for the meat. As the ingredients are same as the Japanese curry, they can be easily stocked, and the dish was introduced nation-wide as a meal in the navy. It's the first dish that comes to many people's mind as their mother's cooking. The flavors vary from family to family, providing conversation topics amongst friends, discussing the lightness or heaviness of the flavor, or whether to use shichimi peppers (seven-flavor chili pepper mixture), etc.

元の翻訳
Did you read my text about EIN　yesterday?
As you know, I get in bind because I cannot transfer the package.
If you don't care, could you accept it as a returning good?
Please tell me your address as soon as possible.
We have had a deal for a year.
You are my business partner and I hope you would be it for years to come.
I was surprised for this matter because it was tortally unexpected.
I need your help.
Thank you.

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Did you read my email about EIN yesterday?
As I said, I am in a bind because I cannot transfer the package from the U.S.
If you don't mind, could you accept *** as a return for the time being?
Please tell me your address as soon as possible.
We have been dealing with for over a year.
You are my business partner and I hope you will continue to be so for years to come.
I was surprised about this matter because it was totally unexpected.
I'm sorry but I need your help.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Have you read a mail about EIN yesterday?
As I told you, I have a big trouble due to the situation that I can't transfer from the United States
I would be grateful if I could return *** to you by temporarily?
Please inform of me your address as soon as possible.
I have conducted trading for more than a year.
I consider you as a business partner.
I also continue to conduct trading in the future,
I'm very surprised this matter because it is an unanticipated event.
I'm afraid that I need your help.
Thank you very much in advance.

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Have you read yesterday's email about EIN?
As I told you, I am having trouble due to the situation because I can't transfer the package from the United States
I would be grateful if I could return *** to you temporarily?
Please inform of me your address as soon as possible.
I have traded with you for more than a year.
I consider you as a business partner.
I will also like to continue trading with you long into the future,
I'm very surprised about this matter because it was unanticipated.
I'm afraid that I will need your help.
Thank you very much in advance.

元の翻訳
The BS-model is from the so-called "CLASSIC Series".
Production is currently terminated.
They have been carefully handmade by guitar builders one by one in the Matsumoto workshop
in Japan.
They are 100% made in Japan.

Since it is late at night in Japan right now, so I will contact you tomorrow
after I have confirmed whether the lacquer coating is nitrocellulose coating.

This model is difficult to find in Japan whether it is new or second-hand.
I think you are very lucky.
I will send it in safe packaging via a professional delivery service.
Please wait a short while.

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The BS-model is from the so-called "CLASSIC Series".
Production is currently terminated.
They have been carefully handmade by guitar builders one by one in the Matsumoto workshop
in Japan.
They are 100% made in Japan.

Since it is late at night in Japan right now, I will contact you tomorrow
after I have confirmed whether the lacquer coating is nitrocellulose coating.

This model is difficult to find in Japan whether it is new or second-hand.
I think you are very lucky.
I will send it in safe packaging via a professional delivery service.
Please wait a short while.

元の翻訳
3 items above are arrived though one lens cap is not combined out of three.
Please partly refund.

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The above 3 items have arrived, but out of the three, one is missing the lens cap.
Please give a partial refund.

元の翻訳
Order
Thank you for your ordering.
As I checked items before forwarding,
I noticed that one of two items was damaged.
Could you let me ship only one item?
Please don't worry because I will refund all the amount of money, for it is before forwarding.
Have a good day!

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Order
Thank you for your order.
When I checked the items before shipping,
I confirmed that one of the two items was damaged.
Would it be okay if I ship only the one item?
Please don't worry as it hasn't been shipped and I will refund the full amount.
Have a good day!

元の翻訳
But now I still enjoy it with my small group:)

I've not met B yet though, I can tell B is really great person from even just reading what he was writing.
I think a sense of gratitude and modesty are very important in any country especially in a business relationship:) I would like to follow B's example.

Thank you for telling me about what happened in the business with A.
You must spent a lot of budget on it...

Anyways, I just disappointed what A did at this time...

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But now I still enjoy it with my small group:)

I've not met B yet though, I can tell B is a really great person even from just reading what he writes.
I think a sense of gratitude and modesty are very important in any country especially in a business relationship:) I would like to follow B's example.

Thank you for telling me about what happened in the transaction with A.
You must have spent a lot on it...

Anyway, I'm just disappointed about what A did this time...

元の翻訳
Let me think about it. Because the item's condition is worse that I expected. Is it difficult for you to sell me for 50 euro ??

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Let me think about it because the item's condition is worse than I expected. Is it difficult for you to sell it to me for 50 euros?

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Our clan is composed of six swordsmiths.

There are discrepancies between the expressions understood in English and the jargon we are using. It is difficult to explain it in English, but I'll try to do as much as possible.

The first person succeeds the technique of ●●.
The second person succeeds the technique of ○○.
The third person succeeds the technique of ○○.
The fourth person succeeds the technique of ○○.
The fifth person succeeds the technique of ○○.
The sixth person succeeds the technique of ○○.

That's it.

I can produce it in the method you want, but what is your budget?

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Our clan is composed of six swordsmiths.

There are discrepancies between the expressions understood in English and the jargon we are using. It is difficult to explain it in English, but I'll do my best.

One person inherits the ●● technique.
The second person inherits the ○○ technique.
The third person inherits the ○○ technique.
The fourth person inherits the ○○ technique.
The fifth person inherits the ○○ technique.
The sixth person inherits the ○○ technique.

That's it.

I can produce it by the method you want, but what is your budget?

元の翻訳
Confirmation of changes of your order
Please confirm so we change the order contents as follows.
As soon as the product is ready, we will send you an e-mail with the information of shipment .. Thank you.

Contact about the confirmation of payment
We are contacting you, because we could confirm the payment.

Quotation.
Please confirm the following information of your quote.
Expiration date is of one week. Thank you.

Confirmation of the order cancellation
This message confirms we have received the request to cancel your order. Thank you.

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Confirmation of changes to your order
We have changed the order details as follows so please confirm them.
As soon as the product is ready, we will send you an e-mail with the information of shipment. Thank you.

Contact for payment confirmation
We are contacting you, because we could confirm the payment.

Quotation.
Please confirm the following information of your quote.
The validity period of this quote is one week. Thank you.

Confirmation for order cancellation
This message confirms we have received the request to cancel your order. Thank you.

元の翻訳
It will become 'quite common to be used' like a piano, and music creators who use VOCALOID will attract people's attention. And contents of VOCALOID will be spread all over, and more people can enjoy it in various ways. I hope it will become 'essential' to the music industry in the world.

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It will become as 'natural to be used' as a piano, and music creators who use VOCALOID will attract people's attention. And the range of VOCALOID content will spread, with more and more people enjoying it in various ways. I hope it will become 'truly essential' to the global music industry.

元の翻訳
ph35307

YAWARA! [Topic : Judo]

Summary
Inokuma Yawara is a normal girl who has been trained by the genius judoka Jigoro Inokuma - her grandfather - since she was 3 years old. Jigoro is the one who chooses Yawara's college and her employment, and almost never lets her go out with other men. She understands how honorable Jigoro is despite her opposition towards him and gradually becomes aware of her talent in judo. It's a love comedy about Yawara being active from inside Japan to as far as the Atlanta Olympics.

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ph35307

YAWARA! [Topic : Judo]

Summary
Inokuma Yawara is a normal girl who has been trained by the genius judo master Jigoro Inokuma - her grandfather - since she was 3 years old. Jigoro is the one who chooses Yawara's college and her employment, and almost never lets her go out with boys. She understands how honorable Jigoro is despite her opposition towards him and gradually becomes aware of her talent in judo. It's a judo romance manga which depicts Yawara's beginnings from inside Japan, all the way to the Atlanta Olympics.

元の翻訳
Dear XXX, thank you very much for the inquiry.

Unfortunately, we do not have the any of the products that you have been inquired in the stock. However, we are able to arrange some to the stock soon.

I would like to ask how many is your budget going to be?

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Dear XXX, thank you very much for the inquiry.

Unfortunately, we do not have any of the product that you inquired about in stock. However, we will be able to order it in immediately.

I would like to ask how much is your budget going to be?

元の翻訳
Would you please let me know if you could secure the number you expect??

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Would you please let me know when you're able to get hold of the quantity I requested??

元の翻訳

And ... let's drink!

Minoh beer

Minoh has a local beer. In fact, this minoh beer has received a prestigious award not only in Japan but also in the United States and the United Kingdom.
The label (monkey) of the beer at the right end is very nice because it shows its local taste.

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And ... let's drink!

Minoh beer

Minoh has local beers. In fact, this Minoh beer has received prestigious awards not only in Japan but also in the United States and the United Kingdom.
The label (monkey) of the beer at the right end is very nice because it shows its local taste.

元の翻訳
ly 62707

The new product of 2013, "HeatTech Extra Warm"
A HeatTech that's 1.5 times warmer

A new Heattech that's 1.5 times warmer has been announced. Considering how regular Heattechs are constantly sold out during the middle of winter, it will probably be very hard to get a hold of the new version. Be sure to buy some if you find them in a store. There are only two designs for now, but they both only cost 1,500 yen.

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ly 62707

The new product of 2013, "HeatTech Extra Warm"
HeatTech that's 1.5 times warmer

This new Heattech that's 1.5 times warmer has been announced. Considering how regular Heattech is constantly sold out during the middle of winter, it will probably be very hard to get a hold of the new version. Be sure to buy some if you find them in a store. There are only two designs for now, but they both only cost 1,500 yen.