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mo89910

It is a fairy-tale well-known from children to adults in Japan.
Well then, about the said "Okayama Fair was renamed as Momotarou Fair" mentioned in the beginning...

The mayor was possessed by a spirit, it seems.
That was some sort of PR tactics along the lines of humor
the same goes for the special Christmas service train that didn't get called Momotarou but "KURO"(black), named casually as homage to the beautiful and black facade of the historical Okayama Castle (also known as Crow Castle)
perhaps it's just their sense of humor.

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mo89910

It is a fairy-tale well-known from children to adults in Japan.
Well then, about the said "Okayama Fair was renamed as Momotarou Fair" mentioned in the beginning...

The mayor was possessed by a spirit, it seems.
That was some sort of PR tactics along the lines of humor
The same goes for the special Christmas service train that didn't get called Momotarou but "KURO"(black), named casually as homage to the beautiful and black facade of the historical Okayama Castle (also known as Crow Castle)
perhaps it's just their sense of humor.

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1. This article is unsealed yet untouched. Because of its unsealed status, I label it as secondhand. It is rare to get a product that could be in a condition as good as new while being an old product. Now is the time!

2. We can't confirm if the camera works with film because we don't use film.

3. The lens got fogged up and its aperture blade won't open. That's why we include lens as freebie and thus we won't accept any claim in regards to the lens. Please understand before deciding to buy it.

4. It is certain that the shutter works while batteries are inserted.

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1. This article is unsealed yet untouched. Because of its unsealed status, I label it as secondhand. It is rare to get a product that could be in a condition as good as new while being an old product. Now is the time!

2. We can't confirm if the camera works with film because we do not have a film which fits this camera.

3. The lens got fogged up and its aperture blade won't open. That's why we include lens as freebie and thus we won't accept any claim in regards to the lens. Please understand before deciding to buy it.

4. It is certain that the shutter works while batteries are inserted.

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Even though I checked the package when it was on the way to shipping, it is understandable if the package may have had some damage.↵
Unfortunately, we are in no condition to allow shipping.↵
For the time being , we only have this in stock.
I am deeply sorry that I am not much of help.
Allow me to suggest the following.

① Upon contacted for cancelling the order, we will do refund in full
②The customer will proceed to cancel the order on their side

To cancel the order, you could click the "cancel request" button on the left of the item page in concern,
located in the request history on your admin page, and the cancel request will be done.

Have a nice day!

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Inspection of the package prior to dispatching revealed some damages on the item, and I am sorry to tell you that it is not in the condition that can be shipped and this is the only one we have on our stock.
I am deeply sorry that I am not much of help.
Allow me to suggest the following.

① Upon contacted for cancelling the order, we will do refund in full
②The customer will proceed to cancel the order on their side

To cancel the order, you could click the "cancel request" button on the left of the item page in concern,
located in the request history on your admin page, and the cancel request will be done.

Have a nice day!

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Even people who don't know baseball will be swept off the feet.
People who have played baseball can also see themselves in there.
The character development will inspire you with confidence.
Ace of Diamond is such an ultimately exciting baseball manga that everyone can enjoy (>∀<)!

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Even people who don't know baseball will be swept off their feet.
Those who have played baseball can also see themselves in there.
The character development will inspire confidence in you.
"Ace of Diamond" is such an ultimately exciting baseball manga that everyone can enjoy (>∀<)!

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The case is important.
I would like you to ship it with the case included.

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I need the case .
I would like you to ship it with the case included.

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What are salted cherry blossoms?

Salted cherry blossoms are cherry blossoms mixed with salt and vinegar (or lemon) and using stones as pickle press, marinated for 2-3 days and dried.
Although they taste salty, the scent of cherry blossoms are deepened.

Salted cherry blossoms are often used in Japanese pastries,

but Japanese pastry shops also use them to convey Japanese flavor in Western pastries they make.

And... there is indeed such a product!
▼Cherry blossom macaron
The macaron in "SAKURA" series, that is. (even the packing design is really lovely, feeling just like spring ^^)

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What are salted cherry blossoms?

Salted cherry blossoms are cherry blossoms mixed with salt and vinegar (or lemon juice) and using stones as pickle press, marinated for 2-3 days and dried.
Although they taste salty, the scent of cherry blossoms are condensed.

Salted cherry blossoms are often used in Japanese pastries,

but Japanese pastry chefs also use them to convey Japanese flavor in Western pastries they make.

And... there is indeed such a product!
▼Cherry blossom macaron
The macaron in "SAKURA" series, that is. (even the package design is really lovely, feeling just like spring ^^)

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May Japanese cuisine surprise you? There comes a dish of rice and eggs easily cooked!

Do you know about Japanese home cooking? This time, I will introduce to you a cheap, simple and quick dish made of rice and eggs that were well-known long ago and yet still popular recently during dining times in Japan. People may feel surprised by Japanese cuisine. You can make the same dish even in your place so long as you can get fresh eggs... ?

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Perhaps you find Japanese cuisine surprising? Here is a dish of rice and eggs that is easy to cook!

Do you know about Japanese home cooking? This time, I will introduce to you a cheap, simple and quick dish made of rice and eggs that was well-known long ago and yet is still popular at the modern Japanese dinner table. There may be people surprised by Japanese cuisine. You can make the same dish even in your country so long as you can get fresh eggs... ?

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Let's also visit the symbol tower of Osaka, Tsuutenkaku.

What is Tsuutenkaku?

Its other name is "Eiffel Tower of Osaka". It is built as a viewing platform in the shopping district.

Tsuutenkaku Kitty!

It is a Kitty climbing up Tsuutenkaku, wearing the takoyaki costume on its head. What an over-the-top Osakan (cat).
It apparently wears leopard print for some reason... If you want to know, check down below!

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Let's also visit the symbol tower of Osaka, Tsutenkaku.

What is Tsuutenkaku?

Its other name is "Eiffel Tower of Osaka". It is built as an observatory in the shopping district.

Tsutenkaku Kitty!

It is a Kitty climbing up Tsuutenkaku, wearing the takoyaki costume on its head. What an over-the-top Osakan (cat).
It apparently wears leopard print for some reason... If you want to know, check down below!

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#william

My apologies that it has taken me long to reply.
In regards to the shaft, even the maker judged it to be excellent,
so if the same signs occur even by your handle, then there is no certain problem with the quality.
Please explain with the customer like what I said above.
I am terribly sorry for the inconvenience.
This is also the first time that I have gotten this kind of feedback from the customer.

Best regards to our continued business from now on.

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#william

My apologies is that it has taken me long to reply.
In regards to the shaft, even the maker judged it to be excellent,
so if the same signs occur even by your handle, then there is no certain problem with the quality.
I will explain with the customer like what I said above.
I am terribly sorry for the inconvenience.
This is also the first time that I have gotten this kind of feedback from the customer.

Best regards to our continued business from now on.

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Thank you for contacting me about the shipping.
I am looking forward to the arrival of the parts! You truly have my thanks.

I really enjoy combining the parts I made with E4U parts I receive.
When it is finished, I will email you its photos.

Is taking measurements for the car cage going well?
I got contacted for photoshoot date by the magazine publisher the other day, so I expect to be informed as soon as it is known.

Once the parts arrive, I will get in touch with you again.

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Thank you for contacting me about the shipping.
I am looking forward to the arrival of the parts! You truly have my thanks.

I really enjoy combining the parts I made with E4U parts that I received.
I will take a photo and email to you right after it's been finished.

Is taking measurements for the car cage going well?
I got contacted for photoshoot date by the magazine publisher few days ago, so please inform me with the situation as soon as you get know it.

Once the parts arrived, I will get in touch with you again.

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I have included the files of all the merchandise bills.
In case you find something wrong with the bills, please tell me which article it is. I am rushing the shipping of the articles.
Could you reply early by today, whether there is no problem with the shipping IDs or not?

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I am sending you a file that contains invoice for all of the merchandise.
Should you find a merchandise whose invoice is missing, please tell me which article it is. I am rushing the shipping of the articles.
Could you reply early by today, whether there is no problem with the shipping IDs or not?

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Old rusty razor perhaps is easy to find,
but even in Japan only a portion of collectors are in possession of razors in new condition.

And yet, the razor you wish to buy
is big-sized so the rarity makes it expensive to purchase,

The shipping to UK applies invoice to entries of 10$,
so the customs is no big deal.

If you do the search on SUZU it has my site there, so please look over there too.

The razor I sold to you due to the New Year sale
is off-price. The profit is barely there

I will return $15 to you, so would you accept it?

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Old rusty razor perhaps is easy to find,
but even in Japan only a portion of collectors are in possession of razors in new condition.

And yet, the razor you wish to buy
is big-sized so the rarity makes it expensive to purchase,

The shipping to UK applies invoice to entries of 10$,
so the customs is no big deal.

If you do the search on SUZU it has my site there, so please look over there too.

The razor I sold to you due to the New Year sale
is off-price. The profit is barely there

Will you forgive me if I refunded $15 to you?

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I'm sure among your Japanese clients there are traders who use MyUS (people with similar occupation as that of mine in USA) ? MyUS's new policy is that, in case of buying that exceeds $2500 on the same supplier, the supplier's EIN is required. Given the case, if there is another Japanese client conducting a large sum of transactions with you, certainly they would ask of you the same in near future. Even if they apply other shipping methods, EIN would be required in one way or another under US laws, so I consider asking of you the same nonetheless.

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Are there traders who use MyUS (people with similar address as that of mine in USA) among your Japanese clients ? According to MyUS's new policy is, it seems to be requrired the supplier's EIN in case of buying that exceeds $2500 from the same supplier. So if there is another Japanese client having a large transactions with you, certainly they would tell you the same thing in the near future. Even if they apply other shipping methods, As EIN would be required as well under US laws, I think they would asking of you the same again.

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I graduated from Department X of University X. It was an undergraduate program that allows taking courses within the university as you please. I majored in political science and history. I am also a member of Taekwondo club, holding red belt.
After graduation from university, I worked as financial assistant at a bank for about 1 year. My duties involved lodging establishment and excursion surveys. Later I worked for about 1 year as marketer in an Apple store. My job involved promoting sales of Mac and iPad and so on.
I learned from the jobs I have taken so far how to listen to customers or clients and pick up what my partners look for. I want to prove my competencies, putting my experience to good use at your company.

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I graduated from Department X of University X. It was an undergraduate program that allows taking courses within the university as you please. I majored in political science and history. I am also a member of Taekwondo club, holding red belt.
After graduation from university, I worked as financial assistant at a bank for about 1 year. My duties involved lodging establishment and excursion surveys. Later I worked for about 1 year as marketer in an Apple store. My job involved promoting sales of Mac and iPad and so on.
I learned from the jobs I have taken so far how to listen to customers or clients and pick up what my partners look for. I want to prove my competence, putting my experience to good use at your company.

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Mobile Suit Gundam series

What about Mobile Suit Gundam? The stories' focus is centered on the protagonist's social transition to adulthood more than mecha. Then again, thanks to the war-themed reality full of human dramas and the introduced setting that deals with a certain kind of weapon being robots named "Mobile Suit", from early years until mid 1980's it has become the pioneer of a mecha anime series subsequently taking the name of "realistic robot".

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Mobile Suit Gundam series

What is Mobile Suit Gundam? The focus of the story is centered on the protagonist's social transition to adulthood more than mecha, thanks to the war-themed reality full of human dramas and the introduced setting that deals with a certain kind of weapon being robots named "Mobile Suit", from early years until mid 1980's it has become the pioneer of a mecha anime series subsequently taking the name of "realistic robot".

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Q) Where is the download link?
A) In case of payment done via PayPal or credit card, you can download the item using the following link (where the image is). If you use bank account, the download link will be informed via email as soon as the payment is confirmed.

Also, for items already ordered, you can log in and scroll down order history in your account to download as well.

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Q) Where is the download link?
A) In case of payment done via PayPal or credit card, you can download the item using the following link (where the image is). If you use bank account, the download link will be informed via email as soon as the payment is confirmed.

Also, for items ordered after logging in, scroll down the order history in your account to download as well.

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Thank you very much for your quick response.

- About the expense on your end, we will handle the payment in cash by the next time we meet.

- Thank you so much for agreeing to try our sample. We'll look forward to the sample's arrival in your place.

- Thank you so much for taking the questionnaire on battery life. We followed that battery should work perfectly even under undue conditions. In that case, may I ask how much the battery usually works for you? For example, given that Doctor worked 10% each, how much would it accumulate in case there are ten patients for a whole day?

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Thank you very much for your quick response.

- About the expense on your end, we will handle the payment in cash next time we meet.

- Thank you so much for agreeing to try our sample. We'll look forward to the sample's arrival in your place.

- Thank you so much for taking the questionnaire on battery life. We followed that battery should work perfectly even under undue conditions. In that case, may I ask how much the battery usually works for you? For example, given that Doctor worked 10% each, how much would it accumulate in case there are ten patients for a whole day?