翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 59 / 1 Review / 2014/01/14 20:48:13

phloan2190
phloan2190 59 Currently assigned as a language tuto...
日本語

サビがついた古い剃刀は見つかるかもしれませんが、
新品の状態の剃刀は、日本でも一部のコレクターしか持っていません。

しかも、あなたが購入を希望する剃刀は、
大きいサイズなので希少価値が高いです。

イギリスへの配送は、インボイスに$10と書き込みますので、
税関は問題ないです。

SUZUで検索すると私のサイトがあるので、そちらもぜひご覧ください。

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私があなたに販売した剃刀は、お正月セールのため格安で販売
しました。利益はほとんどありません


私はあなたに$15を返金するので、許してもらえますか?

英語

Old rusty razor perhaps is easy to find,
but even in Japan only a portion of collectors are in possession of razors in new condition.

And yet, the razor you wish to buy
is big-sized so the rarity makes it expensive to purchase,

The shipping to UK applies invoice to entries of 10$,
so the customs is no big deal.

If you do the search on SUZU it has my site there, so please look over there too.

The razor I sold to you due to the New Year sale
is off-price. The profit is barely there

I will return $15 to you, so would you accept it?

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chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/15 08:40:59

元の翻訳
Old rusty razor perhaps is easy to find,
but even in Japan only a portion of collectors are in possession of razors in new condition.

And yet, the razor you wish to buy
is big-sized so the rarity makes it expensive to purchase,

The shipping to UK applies invoice to entries of 10$,
so the customs is no big deal.

If you do the search on SUZU it has my site there, so please look over there too.

The razor I sold to you due to the New Year sale
is off-price. The profit is barely there

I will return $15 to you, so would you accept it?

修正後
Old rusty razor perhaps is easy to find,
but even in Japan only a portion of collectors are in possession of razors in new condition.

And yet, the razor you wish to buy
is big-sized so the rarity makes it expensive to purchase,

The shipping to UK applies invoice to entries of 10$,
so the customs is no big deal.

If you do the search on SUZU it has my site there, so please look over there too.

The razor I sold to you due to the New Year sale
is off-price. The profit is barely there

Will you forgive me if I refunded $15 to you?

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