スミス　マーク Mark Smith (ozsamurai_69) — 付けたレビュー

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I'm sorry that I could not understand the meaning of the words.
This is not the common word used in nowadays, and it's difficult to research.
I'm not sure if I could find out it, if I did, I would like to contact you.
Thanks for understanding.

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I'm sorry that I could not understand the meaning of the [letters/characters/Kanji].
This is not a common [letter....] used nowadays, and it's difficult to research.
I'm not sure if I can find out anything about it, if I can, I will contact you.
Thanks for understanding.

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Unfortunately, I do not know what this character represent.
These words of Kanji are currently not being used, and it is also difficult to examine.
I will contact you if I know something about them, but I might not know anything even by examining.
Please understand. Thank you very much.

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Unfortunately, I do not know what this character represent[s].
These [This] (not plural) Kanji [letter/character] are [is] currently not being used, and it is also difficult to examine.
I will contact you if I [find out anything] know something about [it] them, but I might not know anything even [after] examining [researching it].
Please understand. Thank you very much.

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Lastly, send the message of apologies to the buyers. Choose names.

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Lastly, send an apology message to the buyers. Choose the name(s).

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In the end, we are sending this message to express our sorry to all the buyers.
Please select your name.

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In the end, we are sending this message to express our [apologies] sorry to all the buyers.
Please select your name.

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Regarding to the schedule of the Meeting with the ABC Company, how’s your convenience?

So far, I can arrange my time slot as following.
Sep. 18(Thu): 15:00-16:00
Sep. 19(Fri): 15:00-17:00

The place for the meeting will be the office of the ABC Company.
Its address is below.

I am waiting your feedback.

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Regarding the schedule for the Meeting with the ABC Company, what time is convenient?

So far, I can arrange my time slots as follows.
Sep. 18 (Thu): 15:00-16:00
Sep. 19 (Fri): 15:00-17:00

The place for the meeting will be at the office of the ABC Company.
The address is below.

I await your feedback.

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Thank you for your reply.
How was the event in Amsterdam?
Since I suddenly asked you to adjust the meeting schedule, I think it can’t be helped that you say impossible.
I’ll make a contact if a telephone meeting is necessary.

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Thank you for your reply.
How was the event in Amsterdam?
Since I suddenly asked you to adjust the meeting schedule, I think it can’t be helped that you say impossible.
[As I was who made sudden changes to the schedule, I understand that you are not able to attend.]↵
I’ll make a contact if a telephone meeting is necessary.

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It doesn't come with a box, but comes with a plastic case instead. ( It is pretty damaged)
I checked if it works and it does.
It sounds and the light shines.

It seems that you can not put money to my paypal account by e-check.
I will put A item to an auction because I also have the finds.
Please understand my situation that I could not have business with you.

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It doesn't come with a box, but comes with a plastic case instead. ( It is pretty damaged [scratched])
I checked if it works and it does.
[The] sound [works] and the light shines.

It seems that you can not put money to my [PayPal] account by e-check.
I will put A item to an auction because I also have the [funds].
Please understand my situation that I could not have business with you.↵
[I'm sorry we were unable to do business on this occasion]↵

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Next week, either on Thursday and Friday, Tanaka, Yamada, and Sato are tied up with respective errands. So they are unable to attend the meeting. I on the other hand will be available all next week except for Friday. If my sole attendance is okay with you, please let me know.

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Next week, either on Thursday and Friday, Tanaka, Yamada, and Sato are tied up with respective errands. So they are unable to attend the meeting. I on the other hand will be available all next week [except for Friday]. If my sole attendance is okay with you, please let me know.

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KREVA Live House Tour 2014「K10」
●Date : Friday June 27, 2014
●Venue ：Zepp Sapporo
●Time： Oepn : 18:00 / Start : 19:00
●Ticket：6,500yen (Drink not included, must order）
●Inquiry：WESS 011-614-9999
●Ticket
・Ticket Pia：0570-02-9999(Pコード:222-638)
・Lawson ticket：0570-084-001(Lコード:17852)
・e+：http://eplus.jp(PC・mobile)

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KREVA Live House Tour 2014「K10」
●Date : Friday June 27, 2014
●Venue ：Zepp Sapporo
●Time： [Oepn] : 18:00 / Start : 19:00
●Ticket：6,500yen (Drink not included, must order）[1 drink??]
●Inquiry：WESS 011-614-9999
●Ticket
・Ticket Pia：0570-02-9999[(Pコード:222-638)]
・Lawson ticket：0570-084-001[(Lコード:17852)]
・e+：http://eplus.jp(PC・mobile)

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No, the item I received was the old model called BOSE system instead of BOSE system3. Looking at the image posted on the website again, it is obvious that the item was the old one. There was a serial number in the photo, which is in accordance with the item I received. According to BOSE, the old model was manufactured 4 to 5 years ago. Also as per descrived, the remote controller is for the old one as it has a plastic cover on it. I will return the product exactly the way you packed the cardboard box wrapped with the cushion.

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No, the item I received was the old model called BOSE system instead of BOSE system3. Looking at the image posted on the website again, it is obvious that the item was the old one. There was a serial number in the photo, which is in accordance with the item I received. According to BOSE, the old model was manufactured 4 to 5 years ago. Also as per [descrived], the remote controller is for the old one as it has a plastic cover on it. I will return the product exactly the way you packed the cardboard box wrapped with the cushion.

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this book use 34 and 90 cm of cloth.
when i checked it i have a cloth which last one.
if you give me more days i can prepare more thing.

i investigated chaina market so over the 1000 chaina money is difficult to receive.
i send you it to separate.

i written 15 Dora's in box.
thank you.

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this book use 34 and 90 cm of cloth.
dimensions of the book not USES.↵
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when i checked it i have a cloth which last one.
??????↵
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if you give me more days i can prepare more thing[s].
days --> time↵

i investigated chaina market so over the 1000 chaina money is difficult to receive.
i send you it to separate.
chaina --> CHINA Chinese money is GEN↵

i written 15 Dora's in box.↵
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Dora's [are you serious????] on the box
thank you.

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This is a new order. I couldn't finish order because of some trouble on shopping cart of your website.
So, I will order by PayPal.

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This is a new order. I couldn't finish order because of some trouble on shopping cart [on] your website.
So, I will order by PayPal.

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Thank you very much for indicating the product that hazardous material is included this time.

We have been paying attention to the product that DEA regulates all the time, but
we have not understood lip cream well.

We are glad if you throw it away as you indicated.

We cannot prepare MSDS that you requested, but do you need something else?

We appreciate your cooperation.

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Thank you very much for indicating [a] the product that [has] hazardous material is included this time.

We [always pay attention ] have been paying attention to the product[s] that [the] DEA regulates all the time, but
we [did] have not understood [fully understand about the ] lip cream [well].

We are glad if you throw it away as you indicated.

We cannot prepare MSDS that you requested, but do you need something else?

We appreciate your cooperation.

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I understand what you want to say but I did not sent out a wrong product.

In fact, the image provided by FANCL is still the old one in the page of the product that you've ordered.

And currently, the packaging of this product is being improved so it seems that it may have mislead you.

I would like to ask you to try confirming, but isn't Tense Up EX also indicated in the old product image?

The product sent this time is the exact Tense Up EX product provided by FANCL.

So we would like to ask for your kind understanding.

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I understand what you want to say but I did not sent out a wrong product.

In fact, the image provided by FANCL is still the old one [on] in the page of the product that you've ordered.

And currently, the packaging of this product is being improved so it seems that it may have mislead you.

[I would like to ask you to try confirming, but isn't Tense Up EX also indicated in the old product image?]↵
If you check on the old product image you will find Tense Up EX is written, can you confirm this?]

The product sent this time is the exact Tense Up EX product provided by FANCL.

So we would like to ask for your kind understanding.

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-The electric products may require a transformer or a transformational plug. Transformer is not attached.
In case you need the one, you can buy from here.
-Previously, we told you to write this sentence as electric products need a transformer or a transformational plug, but have you write about it?
-It is all right from now, please be sure to put this sentence on the last part of item description for electric products.
From now on, I do the research. Please place it. Therefore, you don’t need to do the research, so we change your payment. It will be 10 dollars for 45 items.
Is it OK for you?

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-The electric products [may](必要) require a transformer or a [transformational plug] (transformer plug/adapter). Transformer is not attached. [Not included]
In case you need [the] one, you can buy from here.
[If you wish I can buy them myself here]↵
-Previously, we told you to write this sentence as electric products need a transformer or a transformational plug, [but have] DID you write about it?
(threatening)↵
-It is all right from now, please be sure to put this sentence on the last part of item description for electric products.
From now on, I WILL do the research. Please place [LIST] it. AS Therefore, you don’t need to do the research, [so] we WILL change your payment. It will be 10 dollars for 45 items.
Is THIS it OK for you?