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【regular】TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE Showroom< ひとみのひとみぼっち>

TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE comes on stage at Showroom!
https://www.showroom-live.com/tokyogirlsstyle

Hitomi Akai will start a solo regular performance at Showroom!< ひとみのひとみぼっち> will start!Every Thurs.21:00～imaginary live space"Showroom",wait you!

broadcast day:Every Thurs.21:00～22:00（on air,free charge)

Showroon

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【regular】TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE Showroom< ひとみのひとみぼっち>

TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE comes on stage at the Showroom!
https://www.showroom-live.com/tokyogirlsstyle

Hitomi Akai will start a solo regular performance at the Showroom!< ひとみのひとみぼっち> [will start!] (you already said that in the start of the sentence) Every Thurs.21:00～imaginary live space"Showroom",wait you!<-- What is this??

broadcast day:Every Thurs.21:00～22:00（on air,free charge)

Showroom

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if the product specifications doesn't say anything, I would like you to wright about it on the title or the item description to call an attention. Regarding this, I don't require any discount because it is partly my fault. However, I didn't get your answer about the paint peeling. Though it is small, there is a paint peeling on the left side of "R" of "CROWN". I attached the picture the last time, so please make sure of it.

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if the product specifications doesn't say anything, I would like you to write it on the title or the item description to call attention to it. Regarding this, I don't require any discount because it is partly my fault. However, I didn't get your answer about the paint peeling. Though it is small, there is a paint peeling on the left side of "R" of "CROWN". I attached the picture the last time, so please make sure of it.

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People who order through our shop will be given an English manual (in PDF format) as a special present.

The manual that comes with the product is written in Japanese.
If you cannot understand Japanese, please do not worry, as we have an English manual.

You can view the manual on your computer, or you may have it printed out.

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People who order through our shop will be given an English manual (in PDF format) as a special present.

The manual that comes with the product is written in Japanese.
If you cannot understand Japanese, please do not worry, as we have an English manual.

You can view the manual on your computer, or you can print ti yourself.

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Lisa, I'm glad to know that you received it without accident.
I'm looking forward to seeing Olivia's growing always,always. I'm really happy to be your family.Say hello to your family.Let's definitely get together. I'll email you again.
I love you. Yuka

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Lisa, I'm glad to know that you received it without accident.
I always look forward to seeing Olivia's growing up from Japan. I'm really happy to be your family. Say hello to your family. Let's definitely get together. I'll email you again.
I love you. ↵
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Yuka

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Lisa,I'm very happy that you got my mail.
I'm always happy to hear that you are growing up in Olivia.I'm really grateful to be your family.Say hi to your family.we'll meet again.I'll E-mail you latter.

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Lisa,I'm very happy that you got my mail and you are safe.
[I'm always happy to hear that you are growing up in Olivia]. [I'm really grateful to be your family]. Say hi to your family. Let's get together again. I'll E-mail you again.
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Olivia is her daughter's name......↵
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I am always happy watching Olivia growing while I'm in Japan....↵
I think you and your family are wonerful..........

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Hello,
Thank you for the contact.
This item of course is authentic manufacturer's.
I would not say females cannot use the merchandise, but fundamentally it is for men.
This is because some may find it irritant depnding on his/her skin type.
I would not recommend this to customers with sensitive skin.
Also, as for its effects, I am not supposed to make any statements due to the Pharmaceutical Affairs Law.
I apologize the inconvenience.
Nevertheless, Yanagiya's producs are popular in Japan, too.
Personally, in the past, I used to use its hairdressing.
The feature of this hair tonic are its fresh usability and its freglance.
Please be careful that this is a hair tonic, but not a hair growing formula.

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Hello,
Thank you for the contact.
This item, of course is authentic manufacturer's.
[This item, is of course, from the original manufacturer]↵
I would not say females cannot use the merchandise, but fundamentally it is for men.
This is because some may find it irritant depending (spelling ) on his/her skin type.
I do not recommend this for customers with sensitive skin.
Also, as to its effects, I am not allowed to make any statements due to the Pharmaceutical Affairs Law.
I apologize the inconvenience.
Nevertheless, Yanagiya's products (spelling) are popular in Japan, too.
Personally, in the past, I used to use its hairdressing.
[I have used it personally in the past for hairdressing]↵
The feature of this hair tonic is (not plural) its fresh usability and its fragrance. (spelling)
Please note that this is a hair tonic, not a hair growth formula.

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I received .
Thank you.

Please send it to .

I have several questions.?
Does the price you charge include the shipping charge?
To where do I send the price?
After sending the item, could you tell me the tracking number?
From next time, may I log in and purchase without complicated arrangement?

I ask you to reply even if you are busy.

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I received .
Thank you.

Please send it to .

I have several questions.?
Does the price you charge include the shipping charge?
To where do I send the payment?
After sending the item, could you tell me the tracking number?
From next time, can I log in and simply purchase?

I please ask that you reply even though I know you are busy.

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We are very sorry that the item you received was damaged.
We are purchasing the same item, so we ask you a little patience.
We will send it to you as soon as possible.

Could you go to the nearest post office by bringing the item↵
you received under the current condition,and fill out the damage report?
After filling it out, could you please send a receipt number and the document scanned to me?
Then I can proceed the arrangemet of compensation for insurance at Japan Post.

We hate to give you an extra work, but we hope that you understand it.

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We are very sorry that the item you received was damaged.
We are purchasing the same item, so we ask you a little patience.
We will send it to you as soon as possible.

Could you take the damaged item and go to the nearest post office and complete a damage report please?
After filling it out, could you please send a scanned copy of the receipt number?
Then I can process insurance compensation arrangements Japan Post.

Sorry for the trouble, we kindly ask for your understanding.

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I'm using ebates add-on on Google Chrome.
On the top screen of the products on ebay, there are products that are displayed with "Activate Cash Back"
Should it means that you can get a cash back from those ?

Also, from ebates site, if I make a research on ebay, when i display the "Search results", "Showing 1 of 1 Stores" and "B" appears but in the case I want to get a cash back, which "shop now" should I click on ?

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I'm using the ebates add-on with Google Chrome.
At the top of the eBay products screen, there are products that are displayed with "Activate Cash Back"
does this means that you can get a cash back from those ?

Also, from ebates site, if I do a search of 'ebay', when it displays the "Search results", it shows "Showing 1 of 1 Stores" and "B" appears but in the case I want to get a cash back, which "shop now" should I click on ?

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I listed up the new A's products on my online shopping.
This guitar is limited, there are only 50 in tje world. Japanese factory ESP doesn't produce anymore.
Its sound is the kirk of metallica's sound.
Getting new one is a miracle.

We have been getting inquiries from collectors from Japan and american customers so that I recommend you that buy one soon.
If you miss it now, you would never get one forever.
If you buy new one, I will cancel on the used one from Amazon.

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I listed up the new A's products on my online shopping.
This guitar is limited, there are only 50 of them in the world. The Japanese ESP factory doesn't produce them anymore.
It sounds like Kirk's guitar from Metallica.
Getting new one, is a miracle.

We have been getting a lot inquiries from collectors in Japan and US customer so, I recommend you buy it quickly.
If you miss it, you would never be able to get a new one again.
If you buy this new one, I will cancel the order for the second-hand one on Amazon.

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As you see on the attached, when I turn it on, I cannot use it as the error informing sound go off.
I cannot see any progresses when I turn the emergency button to the right.
As it is an early failure, please send the replacement of the body to the address below.

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As you see in the attached file, when I turn it on, I cannot use it as the error alarm goes off.
I cannot see any progresses when I turn the emergency button to the right.
[This is not remedied/fixed even by rotating the emergency button to the right]↵
As it is an initial failure/manufacturing failure, please send a replacement for the unti to the address below.

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We sre looking for sneakers and such for men.
We mainly sell A, B, and C for the moment.
It would be great if you could find types that are not available in Japan.

Can your company send products directory to Japan?
If possible, how much would it be for ten products to Japan approximately?
If you can send directly, we can order more for one order.

However, due to the weaker Japanese yen against US dollars for today's foreign currency, please wait for a while until we make an order.

Here you find Japanese snacks.
I hope you like it.
It is the best eaten by ... .

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We are looking for mens sneakers [and such??].
We mainly [handle] A, B, and C for the moment.
We are looking for types that are not available in Japan.

[By the way] Can your company send products directory to Japan?
If possible, how much would it be for ten products to Japan approximately?
[Furthermore/moreover, additionally] If you can send directly, we can order more in one order.

However, due to the weaker Japanese yen against the US dollars in today's foreign currency exchange, please wait for a while until we make an order.↵
[Please wait a while for our order as at the moment the Yen is very weak against the US dollar.]

Here you find Japanese snacks.
I hope you like it.
It is the best eaten by ... .

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I'm relieved that you contacted me.
It seems that many counterfeit versions of A are appearing on the Japanese market and I'm very sorry that your company is displeased with that fact.
The place where I sold was the Yahoo Mall.
The requested document is either the maker's invoice or an invoice from the direct management.

As the buying price, etc. are internal affairs of your company it can't be said that it is impossible.
If I stop selling there will be no problem.
In this case would it be possible to return the products?
I will of course assume the shipping costs.

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I'm relieved that you contacted me.
It seems that many counterfeit versions of A are appearing on the Japanese market and I'm very sorry that your company is displeased with that fact.
The place where I sold was the Yahoo Mall.
The requested document is either the maker's invoice or an invoice from the direct management.

As the buying price, etc. are internal affairs of your company and it is impossible to disclose.
If I abandon the sale there will be no problem.
In this case would it be possible to return the products?
I will of course assume the shipping costs.

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I am sorry to bother you in the midst of your busyness, but I hope to get in touch with you more closely.

I get very anxious without hearing any news from you.

Also, regarding the item, I accept your request.

Please ship it as soon as we receive it.

I would like to make it in November somehow.

I am glad to know that you are arranging additional 4 pieces for the inconvenience.

I have faith in you.

As for those inventories you have received already, please ship them today.

The item sells well towards the end of the year.
I am considering to place an additional order,
so your prompt actions are appreciated.

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I am sorry to bother you in the midst of your [busyness] (not a word), but I hope to get in touch with you more [frequently].

I am sorry to bother you even though I know you must be busy......↵
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I get very anxious if I do not hear any news from you.

Also, regarding the item, I accept your request ( no request was made) ↵
Regarding the items, I have understood about them.

Please ship it as soon as [you] receive it.

I would like them/it to make it by November somehow.

I am glad to know that you are arranging additional 4 pieces for the inconvenience.

I have faith in you.

As for those inventories you have received already, please ship them today.

The item sells well towards the end of the year.
I am considering placing an additional order,
so your prompt actions are appreciated.

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(1) It was heart warming to see him say "Micky is that important? Then I'll be Micky"!"
(2) Why are you makin such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours lager
(6) What do you use to draw this? Are you using mobile application to draw by fingers?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

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(1) It was heart warming to hear him say "Micky is that important to you? Then I'll be Micky"!"
(2) Why are you making such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours later
(6) What did you use to draw this? Are you using a mobile application to draw it with your fingers?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use a translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

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Hello,
Thank you for your continued support.
Please explain to me about the buyer's payment.
Lately we receive following orders consecutively:

- Buyer's protection
- Tracking number service

The situation is a new trend different from the past,
and I was wondering if any changes were made to my account.

Or, should I just keep continuing our business without worry?

I'd appreciate your advice on the above concern.

I would like to further continue providing Japanese items to the world through eBay.

Thank you for your continuing support.

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Hello,
Thank you for your continued support.
Please explain to me about the buyer's payment.
Lately we have received the following consecutive orders:

- Buyer's protection
- Tracking number service

The situation is a new trend different from the past,
and I was wondering if any changes were made to my account.

Or, should I just keep continuing our business without worry?

I'd appreciate your advice on the above concern.

I would like to further continue providing Japanese items to the world through eBay.

Thank you for your continuing support.

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I am confused to get your claim about the product which was sold about 2 months ago.

To be honest, the razor you bought was under super high condition since I had been selling.

I expect it is known how it is valuable in the world.

I will give you a big discount when you will buy one next time because you are my important customer. I hope you stop claiming.

I have a experience to live in Moscow for four years so I feel people in Russica are my friends.

Thank you very much for your cooperation and your understanding.

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I am confused to get your claim about the product which was sold about 2 months ago.

To be honest, the razor you bought was one of the best I had ever sold.

It was one of the most valuable razors in the world.

I will give you a big discount when you will buy one next time because you are my important customer. I ask that you please remove the claim.

I have a experience to living in Moscow for four years so I feel people in Russia are my friends.

Thank you very much for your cooperation and your understanding.

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I see.
It's good that there was nothing.

It is good to divide 21items into twice or three times if you send that.
It is not necessary to send by one box.

When will you ship 9items which I ordered in front of 21items?

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I see.
It's good that there was nothing the matter.

It is OK/acceptable if you divide 21items into two or three shipments.
It is not necessary to send the boxes one by one/separately.

When will you ship 9 items which I ordered before these 21items?

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Thank you for your contact.
Regarding the data which you purchased, you can re-download up to 100 times from your purchase record.
From your home computer, you can download the data which you purchased from smartphone or a terminal of office.

Thank you for your interest in our company's product.
I asked maker, but there is no overseas export of this product.
I'm sorry I can't help you.

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Thank you for your contact.
Regarding the data which you purchased, you can re-download it up to 100 times from your purchase record.
From your home computer, you can download the data which you purchased from smartphone or a terminal of office.

Thank you for your interest in our company's product.
I asked maker, but there is no overseas export of this product.
I'm sorry I can't help you.

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Thank you for your inquiry
the data that you bought can be re-download up to 100 time from your personal purchase history.
it is as well possible to download the data that you bought with your smartphone or a computer terminal from your office to your personal computer at home.

we really grateful for the interest that you have for our product.
I contacted the manufacturer , but that it seems that there is no oversea dispatch of the corresponding product
Sorry that I couldn't be of any help to you

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Thank you for your inquiry.
The data that you purchased can be re-download up to 100 times from your personal purchase history.
It is also possible to download the data that you purchased with your smartphone or computer terminal from your office to your personal computer at home.

We are really grateful for the interest that you have in our product.
I contacted the manufacturer , but it seems that there is no overseas dispatch for appropriate/corresponding product.
Sorry that I couldn't be of any more help to you.

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We are sorry to hear that the zoom function didn't work.
There are possibilities that we could not find that failure in our inspection, or it broke while being shipped by post.
We sincerely apologize for this inconvenience caused to you.
Let us deal it as an initial failure, and we would like you to return the product so that we can refund the money to you.
We are sorry to trouble you, but please send it back to us at the following address. We will fully refund you as soon as we receive it.
Please let us know the shipping cost you pay to return it then we will refund it to you via PayPal.
Once again, we are terribly sorry to inconvenience you, but we appreciate your cooperation.

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We are sorry to hear that the zoom function didn't work.
There is the possibility that we did not find that failure during our inspection, or it broke while being shipped.
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We sincerely apologize for this inconvenience caused to you.
Let us deal with it as an initial failure, we would like you to return the product so that we can refund the money to you.
We are sorry to trouble you, but please send it back to us at the following address. We will fully refund the funds to you as soon as we have received it.
Please let us know the return shipping costs and we will refund it to you via PayPal.
Once again, we are terribly sorry to inconvenience you, but we appreciate your cooperation.