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We are checking our mistake made in the KC online site.
As a KC satelite program, JC will be held on Setember 20th.

Would you participate in this jc?
Please let us know whether you participate of not.

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We are checking our mistake made in the KC online site.
As a KC satelite program, JC will be held on Setember 20th.

Would you participate in this jc?
Please let us know whether you participate or not.

元の翻訳
So, I would like to purchase another 5 pcs of the same product.
All 6 pcs.
By the way, could it be shipped to Japan?
If it is possible, please tell me the price of 6 pcs including shipment.

Thanks a lot.

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So, I would like to purchase another 5 pcs of the same product.
All 6 pcs.
By the way, could it be shipped to Japan?
If it is possible, please tell me how much the shipment fee for 6 pcs is.

Thanks a lot.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
Unfortunately, we have cancedl your order this time, as you've asked to ship the product to US.
I ask for your kind understanding.

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Thank you for the message.
Unfortunately, we have canceled your order this time, as you have asked to ship the product to US.
I ask for your kind understanding.

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I'm sending e-mail to you. Please check it.

For instance, you will access to the user's MUSIC FOLDER below.

When oyu import the music and play, it will play ABC's MUSIC VIDEO Of a song named DEF.

After a breif interval (maybe a week later), if you try to play the same song, it might play the live version of DEF sung b y ABC in London. The aritist name or a song name is just an example.
Since this sort of case happens frequently, please make sure to refer XXX's video.

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I'm sending e-mail to you. Please check it.

For instance, you will access to the user's MUSIC FOLDER below.

When you import the music and play, it will play ABC's MUSIC VIDEO Of a song named DEF.

After a brief interval (maybe a week later), if you try to play the same song, it might play the live version of DEF sung b y ABC in London. The artist name or a song name is just an example.
Since this sort of case happens frequently, please make sure to refer XXX's video.

元の翻訳
再度お詫びしなければなりません。弊社の会計担当がお客様のお支払いを確認しておらず、お客様がお支払いを済まされていることを知りませんでした。

お客様のご注文品をすぐに発送し、できるだけ早くお届けできればと思っております。

弊社会計担当の業務状況については、今後注意して把握する必要があると考えております。
重ねてお詫び申し上げます。

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再度お詫びしなければなりません。弊社の会計担当がお客様のお支払いを確認しておらず、お客様がお支払いを済まされていることを知りませんでした。

お客様のご注文品を本日発送し、できるだけ早くお届けできればと思っております。

弊社会計担当の業務状況については、今後注意して把握する必要があると考えております。
重ねてお詫び申し上げます。

元の翻訳
"Revoltec Danbo Mini" known as a smash hit item made by Kaiyodo,which is a mini size action figure of Danbo cosple charactor showing up on "Yotsubato" originated by Kiyohiko Azuma, now has "Wonder Sowcase" version.

The black colored carton box marked Logo type of Wonder Showcase is set up at the head place, so it looks stylish but somewhat an enigmatic memorial item, which add some flowers on the ceremony of the 5 years of anniversary since "WonderShowcase" was established.

It is a far rare item you can get only at OneFes site and is a completely limitted item which is very likely to be a premier item in the near future.

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"Revoltec Danbo Mini" known as a smash hit item made by Kaiyodo,which is a mini size action figure of Danbo cosplay charactor showing up on "Yotsubato" originated by Kiyohiko Azuma, now has "Wonder Sowcase" version.

The black colored carton box marked Logo type of Wonder Showcase is set up at the head place, so it looks stylish but somewhat an enigmatic memorial item, which add some flowers on the ceremony of the 5 years of anniversary since "WonderShowcase" was established.

It is a far rare item you can get only at OneFes site and is a completely limitted item which is very likely to be a premier item in the near future.

元の翻訳
It's almost 2 weeks, so could you let me know the progress state of stock preservation and website renovation?

Is picture of toppage changed?

I would like to prepare for next step, so please say anything what we need to do.

I guess you're very busy because there have been no contacts recently.

In case I may have misunderstanding, I would like to let you know that the order item are all samples. So you may prepare each items.

Looking forward to your message.

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It is almost 2 weeks, so could you let me know the progress state of stock preservation and website renovation?

Has picture of toppage been changed?

I would like to prepare for next step, so please say anything what we need to do.

I guess you are very busy because there have been no contacts recently.

In case I may have misunderstanding, I would like to let you know that the order item are all samples. So you may prepare each items.

Looking forward to your message.

元の翻訳
eb
十分な情報がいっていないようでしたら、わたしに問い合わをお願いします。
すべて住所だったので、出荷の全体価格は15球の$110になります。
もしそうであれば、私に即決で送っていただけますか。

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eb
十分な情報がいっていないようでしたら、わたしに問い合わせをお願いします。
すべて住所だったので、出荷の全体価格は15球の$110になります。
もしそうであれば、私に即決で送っていただけますか。

元の翻訳
Hello.
I am ●●.
I appreciate that you have purchased this product from myself.

I play football and futsal.
I love football.
I love football game.

Please let me know if you would like to buy another product.
Please do introduce myself to your friends.

P.S.
Please tell me if you are looking for Japanese products regardless of football related!

I will support you with my full effort.

I wish your luck!

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Hello.
I am ●●.
I appreciate that you have purchased this product from me.

I play football and futsal.
I love football.
I also love football game.

Please let me know if you would like to buy another product.
Please do introduce me to your friends.

P.S.
Please tell me if you are looking for Japanese products regardless of football related!

I will support you with my full effort.

I wish your luck!

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

Did the product not arrive?
We will check what the situation is. We are sorry but please wait about 3 days for this.
Regarding the product, if it has been lost or if there has been a mistake in the delivery, we will reship it via EMS. Thank you very much for your patience.

We apologize for the trouble caused.

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Thank you for your message.

Has the product not arrived yet?
We will check what the situation is. We are sorry but please wait about 3 days for this.
Regarding the product, if it has been lost or if there has been a mistake in the delivery, we will reship it via EMS. Thank you very much for your patience.

We apologize for the trouble caused.

元の翻訳
Phoenix Seagaia Resort is now providing English content delivery application, "SEAGAIA MICE" for mobile terminals.
English version of this application is translated from the Japanese one they've started providing last March. It provides information on the resort MICE in variety of media sources like PDF's, movies, images and sounds. It helps achieving a faster and and richer promotion development via tablet terminals and smart phones, and thus, it propagates the attractions of Miyazaki MICE.
You'll able to find not only the introduction of the facility but also a floor plan, baton plan, etc.

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Phoenix Seagaia Resort is now providing English content delivery application, "SEAGAIA MICE" for mobile terminals.
English version of this application is translated from the Japanese one they have started providing last March. It provides information on the resort MICE in variety of media sources like PDF's, movies, images and sounds. It helps achieving a faster and and richer promotion development via tablet terminals and smart phones, and thus, it propagates the attractions of Miyazaki MICE.
You will be able to find not only the introduction of the facility but also a floor plan, a baton plan, etc.

元の翻訳
With a dramatic rise of Japanese yen after Plaza Accord in 1985 and the dramatic fall in price of petroleum in the following year, the consumption pattern of energy in Japan has changed. Rise of Japanese yen has changed Japanese economy to a domestic‐demand‐oriented economy, recession caused by strong yen has resulted in the decline of energy consumption. However, with housing and consumer durables has been expanded due to bubble economy from the late 80s, domestic energy consumption has actually increased. The increase in size and multi-functionalization in consumer electronics, and diffusion rate has risen. The number of possession of air conditioners has also hugely increased. Supply of power, hot‐water supply system and air conditioning has an obvious growth in the field of domestic energy consumption, while kitchen-use and heating system has a decreasing usage in the same field.

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With a dramatic rise of Japanese yen after Plaza Accord in 1985 and the dramatic fall in price of petroleum in the following year, the consumption pattern of energy in Japan has changed. Rise of Japanese yen has changed Japanese economy to a domestic‐demand‐oriented economy, recession caused by strong yen has resulted in the decline of energy consumption. However, with housing and consumer durables have been expanded due to the bubble economy from the late 80s, domestic energy consumption has actually increased. The increase in size and multi-functionalization in consumer electronics, and diffusion rate have risen. The number of possession of air conditioners has also hugely increased. Supply of power, hot‐water supply system and air conditioning have an obvious growth in the field of domestic energy consumption, while kitchen-use and heating system have a decreasing usage in the same field.

元の翻訳
The goods were delivered n the 9th July, but as you was not there they were returned to the office.
Could you please check if there is a notice of delivery in you post box.
If there is not one, please use the following number to make inquiries.

Contact at the Overseas Post Office

1-800-222-1811

The goods will be kept for 5 days only, so please check as soon as possible.

Thank you.

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The goods were delivered n the 9th July, but as you were not there they were returned to the office.
Could you please check if there is a notice of delivery in you post box?
If there is not one, please use the following number to make inquiries.

Contact at the Overseas Post Office

1-800-222-1811

The goods will be kept for 5 days only, so please check as soon as possible.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
New song to be untitled in May J. Package's "Tsikai no Kiss", the limited music video is decided to be delivered at UULA!

May J. celebrate his starting of UULA Original Drama "Kimyona Koi no Monogarari - THE AMAZING LOVE STORY" which is the main theme song in "Tsikai no Kiss".
The limited version of music video "Tsikai no Kiss ~ Kimyona Koi no Monogatari Special Ver. ~" was started to deliver at UULA since 3rd of July.

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New song to be untitled in May J. Package's "Chikai No Kiss", the limited music video is decided to be delivered at UULA!

May J. celebrate her starting of UULA Original Drama "Kimyona Koi No Monogarari - THE AMAZING LOVE STORY" which is the main theme song in "Chikai No Kiss".
The limited version of music video "Chikai No Kiss ~ Kimyona Koi No Monogatari Special Ver. ~" was started to deliver at UULA since 3rd of July.

元の翻訳
We are introducing the 4th edition toy ofAYUMI HAMASAKI on LINE PLAY.

They are gonna be interior items introduced on ayu LIFE STYLE BOOK. (Expected on July 3rd.)

We are also having the special event!
We are collaborating AYUMI HAMASAKI PREMIUM SHOWCASE -Feel the love-!

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We are introducing the 4th edition toy of AYUMI HAMASAKI on LINE PLAY.

They are going to be interior items introduced on ayu LIFE STYLE BOOK. (Expected on July 3rd.)

We are also having a special event!
We are collaborating with AYUMI HAMASAKI PREMIUM SHOWCASE -Feel the love-!

元の翻訳
Performing in "AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014" on September 27th!

"AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014" is a major open-air music festival in which you can experience the best "Music" in Japan and the best "Food" that Aomori is proud of.
DAICHI MIURA and BLUE TOKYO will be performing on September 27th.
Please check the official homepage for more information on prior ticket releases.

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Performing in "AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014" on September 27th!

"AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014" is a major open-air music festival in which you can experience the best "Music" in Japan and the best "Food" that Aomori is proud of.
DAICHI MIURA and BLUE TOKYO will be performing on September 27th.
Please check the official homepage for more information such as preliminary seating information.

元の翻訳
どうもありがとうございます。もう1つ最後に質問です：
80％綿、15％麻でできた作務衣を一着持っているのですが、夏場は本当に涼しくて着心地抜群です。御社で扱っているのは麻なしの100％綿製でしょうか？

商品ページURL:http*****

私が所有しているものと同じぐらいあるいはそれ以上に着心地がよさそうですね。綿は麻より着心地がいいと聞きますが本当でしょうか？ありがとうございます。

宜しくお願いします。

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どうもありがとうございます。もう1つ最後に質問です：
80％綿、15％麻でできた作務衣を一着持っているのですが、夏場は本当に涼しくて着心地抜群です。御社で扱っているのは麻なしの100％綿製でしょうか？

商品ページURL:http*****

私が所有しているものと同じぐらいあるいはそれ以上に着心地がよさそうですね。麻は綿より着心地がいいと聞きますが本当でしょうか？ありがとうございます。

宜しくお願いします。

元の翻訳
The AAA template is really good isn't it. But, when I press the BBB button can I get the video to display? (like CCC's template)
Is there any reason you know of that the video doesn't display? Well, anyway, its great. I am looking forward to Ver. 3 I am barracking for Germany in the World Cup....lol!

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The AAA template is really good. But, when I press the BBB button can I get the video to display? (like CCC's template)
Is there any reason you know of that the video does not display? Well, anyway, it is great. I am looking forward to Ver. 3 I am barracking for Germany in the World Cup....lol!