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smart April issue ※Cover

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smart April issue ※cover

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ZIP! 「Take a look!」

2/27 (Thur) 5:50〜
NTV broadcasting station ZIP! 「Take a look!」
「something」 Introduction of music video

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ZIP! 「Take a look!」

2/27 (Thu) 5:50-
NTV broadcasting station ZIP! 「Take a look!」
「Something」 Introduction of music videos

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National Cancer Center (Central Hospital, Hospital East) has devices for X-ray, Y-ray, electron beam in clinical, and the National Cancer Center Hospital East has begun a proton beam treatment for head and neck neoplasm, pulmonary carcinoma, liver cancer, prostate cancer since late of 1998.

The reason why radiation can kill cancer.
Radiation invalidates the cell division by direct action on DNA of cell, and kills cell by enhancing a phenomenon called apoptosis, the process of programmed cell death.

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The National Cancer Center (Central Hospital, Hospital East) has devices for X-ray, Y-ray, and electron beam in clinical, and the National Cancer Center Hospital East has begun a proton beam treatment for head and neck neoplasm, pulmonary carcinoma, liver cancer, and prostate cancer since late of 1998.

The reason why radiation can kill cancer:
Radiation invalidates the cell division by direct action on DNA of cell, and kills cell by enhancing a phenomenon called apoptosis, which is the process of programmed cell death.

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あなたの領収書は再印刷しお届けしますが、封筒に封をされて送られます。しかし、なぜそんなに多くの領収書のコピーが必要なのですか？

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あなたの領収書を再度印刷してお届けしますが、封筒に入れて送ります。でも、なぜそれほど多くの領収書のコピーが必要なのですか？

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この場合、このような個人販売契約に関する購入注文や注文確定は訂正されます。また、新たな購入注文や注文確定は用意され、発行されます。個人販売契約の一連の変更により相手が損害を被った場合、損害を解消するよう討議します。
記事5 商品の配達

5.1 販売者は注文が確定した14日以内に、個人販売契約による買い手の住所へ自費で商品を配達します。

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この場合、このような個人販売契約に関する購入注文や注文確定は訂正されます。また、新たな購入注文や注文確定は準備され、発行されます。個人販売契約の一連の変更により相手が損害を被った場合、損害を解消するよう討議します。
記事5 商品の配達

5.1 販売者は注文が確定した日から14日以内に、個人販売契約による買い手の住所へ自費で商品を配達します。

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個人販売契約は、この契約の一部として譲渡されるものとする。
2.2 この契約が満期となるか、または早期終了となる時、この契約に準ずる全ての個人販売契約は自動的に終了するものとする、しかし、そのような期限満期や終了より先に発生した権利や義務に関係者は従わねばならない。

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個人販売契約は、この契約の一部として譲渡されるものとする。
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2.2 この契約が満期となるか、または早期終了となる時、この契約に準ずる全ての個人販売契約は自動的に終了するものとする。ただし、そのような期限満期や終了より前に発生した権利や義務に当事者は従わねばならないものとする。

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The item which I ordered never arrives.Usually it will arrive in 6 days to 12 days.
But it has been 30 days since I ordered it.(After ordering it,I ordered other ones but they arrived)
If the item does not arrive,I should receive the buyer protection by PayPall.So I have to submit a protest within 45 days from when I paid.
I am going to do that on March 20th.
Of course,I will not submit it if the item arrives.
(If it arrives after I pay back,I will pay to your company again)
Let me know if your company has some propasal.

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The item which I ordered never arrives.Usually it will arrive in 6 to 12 days.
But it has been 30 days since I ordered it.↵
(After ordering it,I ordered other ones but they arrived)
If the item does not arrive,I should receive the buyer protection by PayPall.So I have to submit a protest within 45 days from the date I paid.
I am going to do that on March 20th.
Of course,I will not submit it if the item arrives.
(If it arrives after I pay back,I will pay to you again)
Let me know if you have any proposals regarding this matter.

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１、オデッサからヤルタまでの”レーニン”線からのソビエト連邦の物や人々の出港
２、ソビエト連邦の安全を守れ

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１、オデッサからヤルタまで、ソビエト連邦の物資・旅客ライナー「レーニン」の航海
２、ソビエト連邦の安全を守れ

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Thank you for your inquiry.

I have traded with so many customers in Singapore but have never heard something like this before.

Actually EMS policy describes that there are cases when customs duties may be incurred upon random inspection by the customs office. It also describes that you will be requested to pick up your package at the customs office in such cases.

Where did the request come from? And what do they say for the reason for the upfront fee?

In any cases, we are inquiring with the EMS agency here.

Please allow us a while to hear from them.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

I have traded with so many customers in Singapore but have never heard something like this before.

Actually EMS policy describes that there are cases when customs duties may be incurred upon random inspection by the customs office. It also describes that you will be requested to pick up your package at the customs office in such cases.

Where did the request come from? And what do they say for the reason for the upfront fee?

In any cases, we are inquiring with the post office's EMS agency here.

Please allow us a while to hear from them.

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IG9567
£25.35の消費税の還付を承認していただき、ありがとうございます。
念のため、 購入金額£59.00についても還付されるか確認してください。

IT9931
Dear C
わたしは注文書（クーポン）を受け取っていません。
懸念点がわかりかねるのですが、もし商品の発送を止めたい場合は、注文をキャンセルできます。
こちらに非がなく、あなたの都合であるにもかかわらず、なぜこちらにキャンセル依頼をされるのか理解できません。
発送できないのは非常に残念ですが、なぜあなたが、レゴにしては、商品の塗装に不備があるなどと連絡してくるのか理解ができません。塗装などそもそもありません!!!
もし冗談で言っているのであれば、やめてください。
よろしくお願いいたします。

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IG9567
25.35ポンドの消費税の還付を承認していただき、ありがとうございます。
念のため、 購入金額59.00ポンドについても還付されるか確認してください。

IT9931
Dear C
わたしは注文書（クーポン）を受け取っていません。
ご懸念の点がわかりかねるのですが、もし商品の発送を止めたい場合は、注文をキャンセルできます。
こちらに非がなく、あなたの都合であるにもかかわらず、なぜこちらにキャンセル依頼をされるのか理解できません。
発送できないのは非常に残念ですが、なぜあなたが、レゴにしては、商品の塗装に不備があるなどと連絡してくるのか理解ができません。塗装などそもそもありません!!!
もし冗談で言っているのであれば、やめてください。
よろしくお願いいたします。

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Do you mean that we need a saleｓ agent?
Who should I contact so that we can buy Japanese beef?
I'd like you to tell me how to get an estimate and do business as we consider purchasing.

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Do you mean that we need a sales agent?
To whom should I contact so that we can buy Japanese beef?
I'd like you to tell me how to get an estimate and do business for us to consider purchasing.

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ph81802
usually,it's close to brown a little rather than bright red in that case.
▼piled high with cute red hair girls!
It is the Appearance work Inside the【】
Shana【Shana of the Burning Eyes】
Kanade Amou【Swan Song of the Valkyries: Symphogear】
Minori Kushieda　【Toradora!】
Akiha Tono　【Lunar Princess】
Shiori Fujisaki 　【Heartbeat Memorial】
Demon King 　【Archenemy and Hero】
Lunamaria Hawke　【GUNDAM SEED DESTINY】
Kyoko Sakura　【PUELLA MAGI MADOKA MAGICA】
Ranma Saotome（female）　【Ranma 1/2】

▼Legend red hair！
Anne Shirley【Anne of Green Gables 】

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ph81802
Usually, it's close to brown a little rather than bright red in that case.
▼piled high with cute red hair girls!
The【 】is the Appearance work.
Shana【Shana of the Burning Eyes】
Kanade Amou【Swan Song of the Valkyries: Symphogear】
Minori Kushieda　【Toradora!】
Akiha Tono　【Lunar Princess】
Shiori Fujisaki 　【Heartbeat Memorial】
Demon King 　【Archenemy and Hero】
Lunamaria Hawke　【GUNDAM SEED DESTINY】
Kyoko Sakura　【PUELLA MAGI MADOKA MAGICA】
Ranma Saotome（female）　【Ranma 1/2】

▼Legend red hair！
Anne Shirley【Anne of Green Gables 】

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Exchange管理センター(EAC)は、Exchange管理パネル(ECP)の後継団体です。↵
本センターは、アウトルックのウェブアプリケーションからアクセス可能なウェブベースの管理インターフェース経由により自主管理機能を提供します。↵
特殊なメールボックス機能のユーザーレベルの管理に加え、Exchangeアドミニストレーターたちは、特殊な管理機能のためにEACを使用できます。↵
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さらに、アドミニストレーターたちは、複数のEACの機能を他のユーザーへ委託できます。↵
顧客管理ポータル(CMP)が過去に提供した機能も、EAPにおいて利用可能です。

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Exchange管理センター(EAC)は、Exchange管理パネル(ECP)の後継団体です。本センターは、アウトルックのウェブアプリケーションからアクセス可能なウェブベースの管理インターフェース経由により自主管理機能を提供します。特殊なメールボックス機能のユーザーレベルの管理に加え、Exchangeアドミニストレーターは、特殊な管理機能のためにEACを使用できます。さらに、アドミニストレーターは、複数のEACの機能を他のユーザーへ割り当てることができます。顧客管理ポータル(CMP)が過去に提供していた機能もEAPにおいて利用可能です。

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Exchange管理センター（EAC）はExchange コントロールパネル（ECP）の後継です。Outlook Web AppからアクセスできるWebベース管理インターフェイスによるセルフサービス管理機能があります。 ユーザーレベルでのメールボックス機能に特化した管理に加え、Exchange管理者は特定の管理機能のためにEACを使用できます。管理者はいくつかのEAC機能を他のユーザーに割り当てることもできます。カスタマー管理ポータル（CMP）により予め与えらた機能はEAC内で利用できます。

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Exchange管理センター（EAC）はExchange コントロールパネル（ECP）の後継です。Outlook Web AppからアクセスできるWebベース管理インターフェイスによるセルフサービス管理機能があります。 ユーザーレベルでのメールボックス機能に特化した管理に加え、Exchange管理者は特定の管理機能のためにEACを使用できます。管理者はいくつかのEAC機能を他のユーザーに割り当てることもできます。カスタマー管理ポータル（CMP）により以前提供されていた機能はEAC内で利用できます。

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Thank you always for your kind support, this is Yamada from Japan.
We express our gratitude towards your quick reply, it was of real help to us.
We will consider for quick purchase.

Well, its regarding the A-000 case, what should we do now, because the product received from your company does not work atall.We have tested the product in different conditions, but it just does not work.
So we would like to either exchange the product, or return and get refund.
We are still interested in further purchase, but first we would like to have reply from your side in this case.
We are looking forward to have business with you for long duration.

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Thank you always for your kind support, this is Yamada from Japan.
We express our gratitude towards your quick reply, it was of real help to us.
We will consider for quick purchase.

Well, with regard to the A-000 case, what should we do now, because the product received from your company does not work at all. We have tested the product in different conditions, but it just does not work.
So we would like to either exchange the product or return it and get refund.
We are still interested in another purchase, but first we would like to have reply from you for this matter.
We are looking forward to having business with you for longer duration.

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I serached for the methods to get SIM cards, and it turned out that they were not sold at second-hand store or on auction. I've seen that docomo prohibits the sale of pre-paid SIM. I'm sorry, but I would like to offer you a refund for pre-paid SIM.

My family always tells me to find a husband and get him adopted into my family because two of my sisters and the oldest brother are married. My father and grandmother think that I'm not interested in getting married because of my hobby, and sometimes my father gets into my room and throw away my collections without my permission. Items I'm selling on ebay are safe because they are in the Amazon's warehouse though.

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I serached for the methods to get SIM cards, and it turned out that they were not sold at second-hand store or on auction. I've seen that docomo prohibits the sale of pre-paid SIMs. I'm sorry, but I would like to offer you a refund for pre-paid SIM.

I am always told to find a husband and get him adopted into my family because two of my sisters and the oldest brother are already married. My father and grandmother think that I'm not interested in getting married because of my hobby, and sometimes my father gets into my room and throw away my collections without my permission. Items I'm selling on ebay are safe because they are in the Amazon's warehouse though.

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Thank you for your reply.

I have placed a lot of orders and might have confused you. So could I cancel all the orders I have placed before now, and execute a new order through b2b for all the items I have ordered and for additional items I would like to purchase ?

I will place the new order within two hours, so I would appreciate it if you would send me the bill by today.

Sincerely,

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Thank you for your reply.

I have placed a lot of orders and might have confused you. So could I cancel all the orders I have placed before now, and execute a new order through b2b for all the items I have ordered and for additional items I would like to purchase ?

I will place the new order within two hours, so it would be appreciated if you would send me the bill today.

Sincerely,

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合計金額は407.90ユーロでした、申し訳ありません。私は、2014-30317と2014-30213の注文しか受けていません。もしあなたの注文がB2Bで保留になっているのなら、注文されていなかったということでしょう。

PACもORHも注文を確認できません。新規にご注文していただき、ご希望の商品を追加してください。

よろしくお願いいたします。

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合計金額は407.90ユーロでした、申し訳ありません。私は、インボイス番号2014-30317と2014-30213の注文しか受けていません。もしあなたの注文がB2Bで保留になっているのなら、注文されていなかったということでしょう。

PACもORHも注文を確認できません。新規にご注文していただき、ご希望の商品を追加してください。

よろしくお願いいたします。

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mo109009

They have competed in the administration of one of the professional baseball teams "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" at the end of 2011.
They have expanded their management resources into "Platform business" in addition to "Social Game business", and they are aiming at the No.1 Social Entertainment Platform.
complimentary ticket for a stockholder( the official baseball game watching tickets for "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" of Yokohama Stadium )

The following is content of complimentary goods for shareholder
Those who have their shares will be presented "Complimentary goods for shareholder", which can be used for the official baseball game watching which Yokohama DeNA BayStars sponsor at the Yokohama Stadium.

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mo109009

They have competed in the administration of one of the professional baseball teams "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" at the end of 2011.
They have expanded their management resources into "Platform business" in addition to "Social Game business", and they are aiming to be the No.1 Social Entertainment Platform.
Complimentary ticket for a stockholder (the official baseball game watching tickets for "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" at Yokohama Stadium)

The following is a content of complimentary goods for shareholder.
Those who have their shares will be presented "Complimentary goods for shareholder", which can be used for the official baseball game watching which Yokohama DeNA BayStars sponsor at the Yokohama Stadium.

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mo105404

Poached Eggs

It is a dish with eggs. Slip eggs gently into boiling water, simmer it for a while.
It is called 'Otoshi Tamago(dropped eggs)' in Japanese.
Eggs Benedict


The dish is served with ham, bacon, and poached eggs with sauce hollandaise put on English muffins.
It is new to people in Japan, but there are more and more recipes of the dish available these days.

Let me show you the Japanese poached eggs 'Onsen Tamago(hot spring eggs)'.

They are called 'Onsen Tamago(hot spring eggs)', because they are cooked in hot spring water.

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mo105404

Poached Eggs

It is a dish with eggs. Slip eggs gently into boiling water, simmer it for a while.
It is called 'Otoshi Tamago(dropped eggs)' in Japanese.
Eggs Benedict


The dish is served with ham, bacon, and poached eggs with sauce hollandaise put on English muffins.
It is new to people in Japan, but there are more and more recipes of the dish available these days.

Let me show you the Japanese poached eggs 'Onsen Tamago(hot spring eggs)'.

They are called 'Onsen Tamago(hot spring eggs)', because they were cooked in hot spring water.

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A little knowledge of cosplay that you have to know if you enjoy doing it! The popular traditional color of Japan in cosplay is that, the " World Cosplay Summit" , the biggest event of the cosplayer' s circle is open holded in the facility, " OASIS 21" of City Nagoya since 2003. Cosplayers dressed in colorful and gorgeous costumes has their popularity, what should their color be. To define it with the traditional color of Japan.

What is " World Cosplay Summit" ?
World Cosplay Summit

WCS, 2008

performance of Brazil team, 2008

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A little knowledge of cosplay that you have to know if you are enjoying it! The popular traditional color of Japan in cosplay is that, the "World Cosplay Summit", the biggest event of the cosplayer's circle is open holded in the facility "OASIS 21" in Nagoya City since 2003. Cosplayers dressed in colorful and gorgeous costumes has their popularity, what should their color be. To define it with the traditional color of Japan.

What is "World Cosplay Summit" ?
World Cosplay Summit

WCS, 2008

performance of Brazil team, 2008

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fr103501
You can enjoy Taisho style romantics at Retro Moji Port in Fukuoka!

Moji port remains as a town of the flavor of the Taisho era. Let me guide you through the romantic journey of Taisho by the views of the streets of red brick and smacking your lip at the baked curry.

Go around from Moji harbor station to retro area.

Entrance of Retro at Moji Port

The Moji prot station was built in 1891, and relocated about two hundred meters to the current location.

The Wooden building of Neo-Renaissance-style was supervised by German engineer Hermann Rumschöttel, it remains until now and is important cultural property of the country.

Currently, the station building is under large-scale preservation repair.

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fr103501
You can enjoy Taisho style romantics at the Retro Moji Port in Fukuoka!

Moji port remains as a town of the flavor of the Taisho era. Let me guide you through the romantic journey of Taisho by the views of streets of red brick and smacking your lip at the baked curry.

Go around from Moji harbor station to retro area.

Entrance of Retro at Moji Port

The Moji prot station was built in 1891, and relocated about two hundred meters to the current location.

The Wooden building of Neo-Renaissance-style was supervised by German engineer Hermann Rumschöttel, it remains until now and is important cultural property of the country.

Currently, the station building is under large-scale preservation repair.

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バーチャルマシンクラウド---ウィンドウズまたはリナックスのバーチャルマシンを対象としたサービスとしてのインフラ(laaS)を提供するサービス。本サービスは、VMテンプレートギャラリー、スケーリングオプション及びバーチャアルのネットワーク機能を擁します。

サービスバスクラウド---配信済みのアプリケーション間における信頼性の高いメッセージサービスを提供するサービス。本サービスは、行列及びトピック単位の公開及び購読機能を擁する。

SQL及びMySQL---データベースの事例を提供するサービス。本データベースは、ウェブサイトサービスとの共同により使用される。

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バーチャルマシンクラウド---ウィンドウズまたはリナックスのバーチャルマシンを対象としたインフラストラクチャー・アズ・ア・サービス(laaS)を提供するサービス。本サービスは、VMテンプレートギャラリー、スケーリングオプション及びバーチャアルのネットワーク機能を擁します。

サービスバスクラウド---配信済みのアプリケーション間における信頼性の高いメッセージサービスを提供するサービス。本サービスは、行列及びトピック単位の公開及び購読機能を含む。

SQL及びMySQL---データベースの事例を提供するサービス。本データベースは、ウェブサイトサービスとの共同により使用される。