Mars16 (mars16) — 付けたレビュー

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レポートによると：

我々は、2014年では、スマートフォンのグローバル市場が20%、12億台まで拡大しても、大手2社の出荷台総数は、合計4.5～4.6億台にとどまると予期しています。(2013年：4.67億台）中国のXiaomi、Lenovo、及びHuawei、そしてインドのMicromaxを含む現地の携帯端末機メーカーがAppleとSamsungの主要競合相手になります。

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レポートによると：

我々は、2014年にスマートフォンのグローバル市場が20%増、12億台まで拡大しても、大手2社の出荷総数は合計4.5～4.6億台にとどまると予想しています(2013年：4.67億台）。中国のXiaomi、Lenovo及びHuawei、そしてインドのMicromaxを含む現地の携帯端末機メーカーがAppleとSamsungの主要競合相手です。

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Japan Assosiation for the Promotion of Creative events(JACE) has rereased 「The infential stapics report of size of market of event in 2014」.

in the report, the market size of event in 2014 is assumed to 3 trillion 8374 billion JPY. It is assumed by only picking up the payment in the pavillion of total waste of guest.

Moreover, the variety of payment (before visiting pavillion, transpoptation fee, staying hote, outside pavillionl and after visiting) by expanding the idea of payment is assumed to 15 trillion 1444 billion JPY.

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Japan Assosiation for the Promotion of Creative events (JACE) has released "The report on estimated event market size in 2014".

in the report, the market size of event in 2014 is assumed to 3.8374 trillion JPY. It is assumed by only picking up the payment in the pavillion within total spending by guests.

Moreover, the variety of payment (before visiting pavillion, transportation fee, staying hotel, outside pavillion and after visiting) by expanding the idea of payment is assumed to 15.1444 trillion JPY.

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This is a chance to win an honor of Taiwan incentive travel ambassador and a dream trip.

Taiwan Trading Center (TAITRA) which is working on enhancing the international statue of Taiwan MICE industry is holding a first multinational marketing campaign event "Super Team in Asia".

TAITRA planned this event to promote Taiwan as a familiar destination for an incentive.

The event is held to promote an incentive trip destined for Taiwan, targeting five countries such as Japan, South Korea, Singapore, Malaysia and Indonesia where the most frequent travellers to Taiwan come from.

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This is a chance to win an honor of Taiwan incentive travel ambassador and a dream trip.

Taiwan Trading Center (TAITRA), which is working on enhancing the international statue of Taiwan MICE industry, is holding a first multinational marketing campaign event "Super Team in Asia".

TAITRA planned this event to promote Taiwan as a familiar destination for an incentive.

The event is held to promote an incentive trip destined for Taiwan, targeting five countries such as Japan, South Korea, Singapore, Malaysia and Indonesia where the most frequent travellers to Taiwan come from.

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Today we made a payment for the volume we had ordered so please check it and ship the goods.
Did you ship the goods we ordered on 8/5 and 8/15?
We want to know delivery status so please show me the tracking number of the goods. If you shipped the goods we ordered today, please show me the tracking number of the goods.
Thank you and best regards.

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Today we made a payment for the order so please check it and ship the goods.
Did you ship the goods we ordered on August 5 and 15?
We would like to know delivery status so please show me the tracking number of the goods. If you shipped the goods we ordered today, please show me the tracking number of the goods, too.
Thank you and best regards.

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We'd like to ask a couple of questions regarding your health status.
The result of your answers shall be only used for such purposes as screening process, appropriate workplace assigning, and basic information for health management, therefore shall never be passed to the third party.
In our company, We operate in accordance with our company theme 「**」. Thus, not only do our user find a new job or change jobs, but also your employees make the most of their own skills after they have joined our company. In order to conduct the duty, it is crucial to be both physically and mentally healthy. Yet, some people sacrifice their health condition and push themselves in order to adapt to new work environment.

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We'd like to ask a couple of questions regarding your health status.
The result of your answers shall be only used for such purposes as screening process, appropriate workplace assigning, and basic information for health management, therefore shall never be passed to the third party without your permission.
We operate in accordance with our theme "**". Thus, not only do our user find a new job or change jobs, but also your employees make the most of their own skills after they have joined us. In order to conduct the duty, it is crucial to be both physically and mentally healthy. Yet, some people sacrifice their health condition and push themselves in order to adapt to new work environment.

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I email you for limit-up.
My business is selling Japanese products and watches as the center of camera.
I purchase source of goods (my network) from wholesellers.

I am doing my business by ebay and wholeheartedly.

I am also doing business in Japan.

So it is very difficult of the limit.

I am concerning to increase it at least to $50000.

Please kindly have a discussion

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I email you for limit-up.
My business is selling Japanese products and watches, including espesially cameras.
I purchase source of goods (my network) from wholesellers.

I am doing my business by ebay and whole heartedly.

I am also doing business in Japan, and my trading performance is excellent.

So it is very difficult for me to do the business with the current limit.

I am concerning to increase it at least to $50,000.

Please kindly have a discussion.

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Thank you for your reply.

I got relieved that you admitted that it was a forgery.
I don't need anr forgery.
Please refund all the money including the charges.

Consumer information center told Police,Consumer Affairs Agency,credit card company,Google and Yahoo! about you. It means credit card company will prevent you from getting money from my card, however I think you need to return goods and refund money for your website.
Unless Consumer Affairs Agency will announce all Japanese that your website is dangerous and tell them not to use it.

Could you reply to me as soon as possible?
Have a good day.

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Thank you for your reply.

I got relieved that you admitted that it was a forgery.
I don't need any forgery.
Please refund all the money including the handling charges.

Consumer information center told Police, Consumer Affairs Agency, credit card company, Google and Yahoo! about you. It means the credit card company will prevent you from getting money from my card, however I think you need to return goods and refund money for your website.
Unless Consumer Affairs Agency will announce all Japanese that your website is dangerous and tell them not to use it.

Could you reply to me as soon as possible?
Have a good day.

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As I asked on the forum the error is as follows
The site URL is below.

There is access restrictions so please input both fields as [ABC]

The webmaster/administrator address is [DEF] the password is [GHI]

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As I asked on the forum, the error is shown as follows.
The website's URL is below.

There are access restrictions so please input both fields as [ABC].

The webmaster/administrator's email address is [DEF], and the password is [GHI].

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Thank you for your message.
Is there any problem with the item?
Please send me the photo.

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry we don't have different product.
Thank you.

Thank you for your message.
We use International E Packt for shipment.
Thank you

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Thank you for your message.
Is there any problem with the item?
Please send me the photo.

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry we don't have a different product.
Thank you.

Thank you for your message.
We use International E Packt for shipment.
Thank you

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I belong to the student group of Japan. The group, which learn the themes of povery and refugees from all over the world, and send it to Japan through media like articles, photos and vedios.↵
What I have done in the group are issuing 2 free papers.↵
One is the photo and ariticle written about child labor problem, which I went to india and Myanmar interviewing there.↵
Another one is an interview for 3 Japanese who are activein the world, written about what they would like to convey to Japanese youngest.

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I belong a student group in Japan. The group learns the themes of povery and refugees from all over the world, and send the result to Japan through media like articles, photos and videos. What I have done in this group are issuing two free papers. One is the photo and ariticle written about child labor problem, which I went to india and Myanmar to interview there. The other is an interview for three Japanese who are active in the world, written about what they would like to convey to Japanese youngest.

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I order from the items which is in stock.
I would like to buy them with the wholesale price of the factory. Could you confirm the stock?

Please tell me the price of the items in this inventory and where you ship them.I will order the items in the attached file around summer in next year.
I would like to know how much you can discount them.
According to it, I will decide the final order.

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I am ordering from the items which are in stock.
I would like to buy them at the factory's wholesale price. Could you please confirm the stock?

Please tell me the price of the items in this inventory and the destination. I would like to order items for next year's spring and summer seasons as in the attached file.
I like to know how much discount you can offer.
According to your answer, I will decide the final order.

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Thank you very much for the contract document. I've checked the content and there is no problem on it.

Since ○○ have already been almost sold out, I've replaced ○○ with **.
Can I order as specified in the attached order sheet?

Since you use live tree, I feel like can feel your great energy you poured in it.
Even though I communicating with you via translators since I'm not good at English, I can feel your passion beyond the language barrier. I can really resonate with you.

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Thank you very much for the contract document, too. I've checked the content and could not find any problems on it.

Since ○○ have already been almost sold out, I've replaced ○○ with **.
Can I order as specified in the attached order sheet?

Since you use live trees, I can feel your great energy you poured in it.
Even though I am communicating with you via translators since I'm not good at English, I can feel your passion beyond the language barrier. I can really resonate with you.

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Please deliver the A bearing plate and screw in one package.
We don't need bearing
We would like to ship the exchange parts to the customers who purchased A this April
Because there is few damages on the screw hole of bearing plate and the screw becomeing loosen, and could not be fixed firmly.
We will attach the photo of parts in case.
Please confirm.

When shall we deliver the B, C, D and E?

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Please deliver A's bearing plate and a screw in one package.
We don't need bearing
We would like to ship the exchange parts to the customers who purchased A this April.
Because there is few damages on the screw hole of bearing plate and the screw becoming loosen, and could not be fixed firmly.
We will attach the photo of parts in case.
Please confirm.

When shall you deliver B, C, D and E?

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独自の商品を生産されている方か、ブランドを持たれている方には、以下の情報が必要です。
・生産された商品の注文に関して、顧客に送った90日以内の日付のインボイスを3つ。

その書類をメールに添付し、ご返信ください。（たとえば、PDFファイルか画像ファイルなど）

そうしていただければ、すぐに皆さんに対して開放し、この購入カテゴリーで売ることを認めます。↵
If you manufacture your own products, or you are the brand owner we require the

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自社商品を生産されている方、もしくはブランドオーナーの方につきましては、以下の情報が必要です。
・生産された商品の注文に関して、顧客に送られた90日以内の日付のインボイスを3枚。

その書類をメールに添付し、ご返信ください（たとえば、PDFファイルか画像ファイルなどで）。

それを以てロックを外し、この購入カテゴリーで速やかに販売することを認めます。

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Hello.
My name is X.
I created a business to satisfy customers in your country by bringing Japanese products over.
However, although it's a shame, my efforts were not enough and I caused trouble for your company and its customers, for which I would like to sincerely apologize.

I'm currently in the state of X and the circumstances make it so I can't trade with your company.
I presented the business plan to you before.
I'm in the state of X, but I can deliver Japanese goods to the people in your country without problems.↵
I was working hard on creating the structure needed to do that for 3 months.

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Hello,
My name is X.
I have been doing my business to satisfy customers in your country by bringing Japanese products from Japan.
However, although it's a shame, my efforts were not enough and I caused trouble for you and your customers, for which I would like to sincerely apologize.

I'm currently in the state of X and the circumstances make it so I can't trade with you.
I presented the business plan to you before.
I'm now in the state of X, but I had been sinserely working hard for these three months for creating the structure needed to deliver Japanese goods to people in your country.

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This app is a twitter client app.
Below, the functions and use of the Dropbox API are explained.

With this app, it is possible to pre-register often used titles, hashtags, URLs, etc as headers and footers. It is also possible to pre-register tweets and images. The user is able to compile these registered headers, footers, tweets, and images, and save them as "tweet data", enabling them to quickly tweet that data as required.

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This app is a twitter client app.
Below, the functions and use of the Dropbox API are explained.

With this app, it is possible to pre-register frequently used titles, hashtags, URLs, and others as headers and footers. It is also possible to pre-register tweets and images. The user is able to compile these registered headers, footers, tweets, and images, and save them as "tweet data", enabling them to quickly tweet that data as required.

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Xiaomi、Samsungを超え、今や中国のスマートフォンブランドの最大手に

調査会社Canalysの新たな調査によると、Xiaomiの成長は止まらないようだ。2014年のQ2に関する新たな数字は、XiaomiがSamsung (005930:KS)を飛び越えて、出荷額に関しては中国の最大手スマートフォンブランドになったことを示す―Q1では、 1位のSamsungと2位のLenovoに続いていたので、上がっている。

Canalysによると、XiaomiはQ2のスマートフォンの出荷ついては14％の市場シェアを誇っており、amsung, Lenovo (HKG:0992), and Coolpad (HKG:2369) は各々12％で2位タイ。Huaweiはそれに続き11％だ。（この件について焦点を当ててくれたWSJに感謝）

以下、市場シェアのチャートである。

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Xiaomi、Samsungを超え、今や中国のスマートフォンブランドの最大手に

調査会社Canalysの新たな調査によると、Xiaomiの成長は止まらないようだ。2014年のQ2に関する新たな数字は、XiaomiがSamsung (005930:KS)を飛び越えて、出荷に関しては中国の最大手スマートフォンブランドになったことを示す―Q1では、 1位のSamsungと2位のLenovoに続いていたので、順位が上がっている。

Canalysによると、XiaomiはQ2のスマートフォンの出荷で14％の市場シェアを誇っており、Samsung、Lenovo (HKG:0992)、Coolpad (HKG:2369) は各々12％で2位タイ。Huaweiはそれに続き11％だ。（この件について焦点を当ててくれたWSJに感謝）

以下、市場シェアのチャートである。

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I would like to confirm two things:
1. Does this ScriptiPhone work on Android?
2. It's written in the manual that it uses the Youtube API, is that right?

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I would like to confirm two things:
1. Does this Script work on iPhone or Android?
2. It's written in the manual that it uses the Youtube's API, is that right?

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Shipping:
We ship the goods in 4-5 days.
Shipping and express charge are free.
There are some cases what we charge for the shipping if it was shipped from Amazon FBA warehouse.

Carrier :
Japanese Post - EMS
We will let you know the tracking number after shipping.

Delivery :
3-7 days after shipment.

Guarantee :
1-3 years guarantee depending on the good.
Please check before you order.

Cancel :
We do not accept any cancellation after shipment.

Returning Goods :
Please return the goods within 30 days since you receive.
We will return you the money that is the price of the good, shipping cost subtracted

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Shipping:
We ship the goods in 4-5 days.
Shipping and express charges are free.
There are some cases we charge for the shipping if it was shipped from Amazon FBA warehouse.

Carrier :
Japan Post - EMS
We will let you know the tracking number after shipping.

Delivery :
3-7 days after shipment.

Guarantee :
1-3 years' guarantee depending on the goods.
Please check before you order.

Cancel :
We do not accept any cancellation after shipment.

Returning Goods :
Please return the goods within 30 days after you receive.
We will return you the price of the goods with shipping cost subtracted.

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We are watch shop in Japan.
If you looking for watches Japan sophisticated, you must be find it at our shop!
The watch made in Japan is 100% guarantee quality, because we input it with purchase by maker authorized dealer.
And then, the watches made in Japan out side is save for used, because we are purchasing it by authorized dealer at japan too.
For visit our shop you can check the explanation at bellow.

『How to use the shop』

Please feel free inquire, if you have any question, before ordering.
It is available in Japanese or English language.

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We are watch shop in Japan.
If you are looking for sophisticated Japanese watches, you can find them at our shop!
The watch made in Japan is 100% guarantee quality, because we input it with purchase by maker's authorized dealer.
And then, the watches other than made in Japan can be safely used, because we are purchasing them by authorized dealer in Japan, too.
For visiting our shop you can check the explanation bellow.

『How to use the shop』

Please feel free inquire, if you have any question, before ordering.
We can communicate in Japanese or English language.

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Thank you very much for your successful bid.
I understand delay of your payment.
As for your inquiry, it will be sent by EMS, if it would not stop at custom too long, probably it takes four to five days to reach you, within one week at most.
The state of the product is as the explanation, there is no big problems, there could be a bit of dust, but not mildew.
I will pack carefully.
Please check when it arrives. Please let me know if anything occurs.
Thank you very much.

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Thank you very much for your successful bid.
I understand delay of your payment.
As for your inquiry, it will be sent by EMS, if it would not be stopped at customs too long, probably it takes four to five days to reach you, within one week at most.
The condition of the product is as the explanation, there is no major problems, there could be a bit of dust, but not mildew.
I will pack the item very carefully.
Please check it when it arrives. Please let me know if any problem occurs.
Thank you very much.

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Thank you for your phone call yesterday. It was already past 9:30 at night and I left the office already. I could not start my computer so I asked you to send me an email.
I am not good at English so I am unable to comprehend what you speak. It is probably better to communicate by emails to be certain about the business.
Of course it is no problem to talk on the phone but it helps me if you send me an email afterward to confirm what we discussed on the phone.
I hope I'm not causing you inconveniences.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your phone call yesterday. It was already past 21:30 at night and I left the office then. I could not activate my PC so asked you to send me an email.
I am not good at English so unable to comprehend what you speak. It is probably better to communicate by emails to be certain about the business.
Of course it is no problem to talk on the phone but it helps me if you could send me an email afterward to confirm what we discussed on the phone.
I hope I'm not causing you inconveniences.
Thank you.

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I could receive the maximum about 50USD

I am very appreciate with your coorperation of the returning and your friendly attitude.

So I would like to do my best to repay to you asap

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I will receive the maximum 50USD.

I am very appreciated with your coorperation of the returning and your friendly attitude.
Thank you.
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So I would like to do my best to repay to you asap.

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This is to inform you of the status of the goods you ordered.

As the release date of the goods was July 31st, we sent you two emails to ask for cancellation, on June 8th and June 10th.
We had to cancel your order tentatively on June 14th for the reason of Amazon processing, since we had not received your reply for those emails.

The refund process has been complete with additional $2 for this goods.
- Order Date: June 6th
- Paid Amount: $203.10
- Refund Amount: $205.10

Please be advised no fees will be incurred due to this process.

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This is to inform you of the status of the goods you ordered.

As the release date of the goods was July 31st, we sent you two emails to ask for cancellation, on June 8th and June 10th.
We had to cancel the order tentatively on June 14th for the reason of Amazon processing, since we had not received any reply from Mauro to those emails.

The refund process has been completed with additional $2 for this goods.
- Order Date: June 6th
- Paid Amount: $203.10
- Refund Amount: $205.10

Please be advised no fees will be incurred for Mauro due to this process.