Mars16 (mars16) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
-300 at the profit of AN column of GD, make "cancled by private company" as purchasing status, paint the whole line grey and complete the abolishment.

修正後
Have 300 at the profit of AN column of GD, make "canceled by own company" as purchasing status, paint the whole line grey and complete the cancelation

元の翻訳
For the duration of the campaign, follow SOLIDEMO manager QP (@staff_SOLIDEMO), tweet with hashtag "#Heroine917", or retweet @staff_SOLIDEMO's tweets with hashtag "#Heroine917" and we will present Heroine posters autographed by the members as a present to 8 people chosen by lot!

修正後
For the duration of the campaign, follow SOLIDEMO manager QP (@staff_SOLIDEMO), tweet with hashtag "#Heroine917", or retweet @staff_SOLIDEMO's tweets with hashtag "#Heroine917" and we will present Heroine posters autographed by the members as a present to eight people chosen by a lot!

元の翻訳
Please click the 「Confirm shipment」at the next page.
The page will refresh twice.

Confirm the status has switched to 「Shipped」, then click 「Refund order」.

At the next page, please select 「Pricing Error」from the Full Refund list.

Enter 3 at Other concession. After that, you will see 「Submit Full Refund」on the screen. Please select Yes at the confirm letter.
In the end of this message, we are sorry to all the buyers. Select your name.

修正後
Please click the 「Confirm shipment」at the next page.
The page will refresh twice.

Confirm the status has switched to 「Shipped」, then click 「Refund order」.

At the next page, please select 「Pricing Error」from the Full Refund list.

Enter 3 at Other concession. After that, you will see 「Submit Full Refund」on the screen. Please select Yes at the confirmation letter.
In the end, send a message of apology to all the buyers. Select your name.

元の翻訳
10. If you have decided the shop and amounts, input the product's title in <PRODUCT'S NAME> of GD where you purchased.
And then input the monetary, if you remit the money by cash in <Purchase by cash>, if it is credit card payment then in <Purchase by credit>.
And paste the supplier's URL in < Purchasing URL>.
When the purchasing completed, put the "Complete" in <Purchasing status>

修正後
10. If you have decided the shop and amounts, input the product's title in <PRODUCT'S NAME> of GD where you purchased.
And then input the amount of money, if you remit the money by cash in <Purchase by cash>, if it is credit card payment then in <Purchase by credit>.
And paste the supplier's URL in < Purchasing URL>.
When the order is completed, put the "Complete" in <Purchasing status>.

元の翻訳
On the day, we will close when the space is filled. We request tha you understand it in advance. Those who are eligible for it are younger than elementary school students.
However, as for participating in the event by babies and very young children, we do not recommend it much by considering the volume of speaker when the live concert is performed.
If they would like to participate in it, we recommend that they see the concert at a seat that is far from the speaker.

Note:
In participating in this event, we request that you observe the following notes.

修正後
On the day, we will close requests when the space is filled. We request that you understand it in advance. Those who are eligible for it are elementary school students or younger.
However, as for participating in the event with babies and very young children, we do not recommend it much by considering the volume of speakers when the live concert is performed.
If they would like to participate in it, we recommend that they see the concert at a seat that is far from the speakers.

Note:
In participating in this event, we request that you observe the following notes.

元の翻訳
I checked it.
The setting of control panel has been set to ABC.
But I guess the actual screen of the Homepage is DEF.
Since if I toss you questions any further, it’ll bother you, so I stop it.

修正後
I checked it.
The setting of control panel has been set to ABC.
But I guess the actual screen of the homepage is DEF.
If I toss you questions any further, it’ll bother you, so I stop it.

元の翻訳
A part of content of this article is made by consulting the info of "A".

修正後
A part of this article's content is made by consulting the information of "A".

元の翻訳
TapTalkは、SnapChatが進化したものとして4月に公開された。Mirageは7月に、Yoの後継として、Moshe Hogeg氏発案のもと公開された。CatchChatはだいたいMirageと同時期に発表され、Instagram’s Boltもまた同じ7月に現われた。まるで浅瀬でバカ騒ぎをするような夏だった。CatchChatは英語と中国語に対応しているが、そのホームページは英語のみで表記されている。そうすることで、この中国のスタートアップが世界中の人々に向けていること、そしてファンキーだが親しみやすいアプリであるということを示唆している。

修正後
TapTalkは、SnapChatが進化したものとして4月に公開された。Mirageは7月に、Yoの後継として、Moshe Hogeg氏発案のもと公開された。CatchChatはだいたいMirageと同時期に発表され、InstagramのBoltもまた同じ7月に現われた。まるで浅瀬でバカ騒ぎをするような夏だった。CatchChatは英語と中国語に対応しているが、そのホームページは英語のみで表記されている。そうすることで、この中国のスタートアップが世界中の人々に向けていること、そしてファンキーだが親しみやすいアプリであるということを示唆している。

元の翻訳
アリババは収益の80パーセント以上が中国のオンライン ショッピング市場から発生し、Tmall（天猫）とTaobao(淘宝)は中国の2つのトップオンラインショッピングサイトでもあります。しかし、アリババはそれほど多くの他にもアマゾンと直接比較するのは不可能だということです。アリババのPayPal式サービスはアリペイ（このIPOの一部ではありませんが）と呼ばれるサービスだけでなく、クラウドサービス、スマートテレビ、新興ののソーシャルネットワークやアプリなど、および、 中国の製造業者のためにアリババ帝国を始めた第一の市場Alibaba.comでもあります。

アリババはBABAティッカーでニューヨーク証券取引所に上場する予定であったが、まだIPO自体の日付を設定していません。↵

修正後
アリババは収益の80パーセント以上が中国のオンラインショッピング市場からもたらされており、Tmall（天猫）とTaobao(淘宝)は中国の2大オンラインショッピングサイトでもあります。しかし、アリババはそれほど多くの他にもアマゾンと直接比較するのは不可能だということです。アリバには、PayPal式サービスのアリペイ（このIPOの一部ではありませんが）と呼ばれるサービスのほか、クラウドサービス、スマートテレビ、新興のソーシャルネットワークやアプリ、 アリババ帝国の始まりとなった中国の製造業者向けの最初のマーケットプレイスAlibaba.comがあります。

アリババはBABAティッカーでニューヨーク証券取引所に上場する予定であったが、まだIPO自体の日付を設定していません。

元の翻訳
Thank you very much by sending me the photos! I'm really happy! I showed the photos to friends. I have to apologize for troubling you, but I have to ask three additional things. I would like a little darker around the eyes (lower upper eyelid) so it will make more clear the outline of the eye. I want also to add a little more red to the lips. I am sending an attached file. And please add eyelashes at the top and bottom. I am really sorry to trouble you so much.

修正後
Thank you very much for sending me the photos! I'm really happy! I showed the photos to my friends. I have to apologize for troubling you, but I have to ask three additional things. I would like a little darker around the eyes (lower upper eyelid) so it will make more clear the outline of the eye. I want also to add a little more red to the lips. I am sending an attached file. And please add eyelashes at the top and bottom. I am really sorry to trouble you so much.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
And Yes, please change the demand to 0, and cancel my account.

Best regards,

修正後
Thank you for your reply.
And then, please change the request amount to zero, and cancel my account.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
Teacher gave us his lesson that we had to continue with efforts. "I found they said in a program of a certain new school of drama that they had made a spark-flying effort for three months. Though I thought just threemonths effort, howeveer many sparks they made fly, wouldn't be much, they were complaining in the end that the efforts were not rewarded. As for myself, I havemade my spark flying efforts for fifty years, yet not bringing any result.

修正後
The teacher always gave us his lesson that we had to make efforts. "I found they said in a program of a certain new school of drama that they had made a spark-flying effort for three months. Though I thought just three months effort, however many sparks they made fly, wouldn't be much, they were complaining in the end that the efforts were not rewarded. As for myself, I have made my spark flying efforts for fifty years, yet not bringing any results.

元の翻訳
Kevin (Kevin)

Date of Birth : November 25, 1991
Blood type: O type
Height / Weight: 180cm / 55kg
Part: vocal
Hobbies: Listening to music, watching movies, reading, composer
Specialty: English, piano, guitar, pop dance, eating slowly, smiling
Favorite food: Sushi, shabu-shabu, fried chicken, udon, ramen
If the group is likened to a family, which would be your role? : Daughter

修正後
Kevin (Kevin)

Date of Birth : November 25, 1991
Blood type: O type
Height / Weight: 180cm / 55kg
Part: vocal
Hobbies: Listening to music, watching movies, reading, composition
Specialty: English, piano, guitar, pop dance, eating slowly, smiling
Favorite food: Sushi, shabu-shabu, fried chicken, udon, ramen
If the group is likened to a family, which would be your role? : Daughter

元の翻訳
On July 25, the single of the third 「Dear My Friend」 was released, as the first domestic tie-up, and theending theme in the series animation of Tokyo TV 『friendship forever 』 have gained a good reputation. In August, it was the first performance to appear in 「a-nation stadium fes. Charge > Go! Weider in Jelly @ Ajinomoto Stadium」.

修正後
On July 25, the third single 「Dear My Friend」 was released, as the first domestic tie-up, and the ending theme in the series animation of Tokyo TV's『friendship forever 』 has gained a good reputation. In August, it was the first performance to appear in 「a-nation stadium fes. Charge > Go! Weider in Jelly @ Ajinomoto Stadium」.

元の翻訳
The members talking the willingness about the activities in Japan is that, they are glad to stay in Japan and can do activities in full-scale, and also looking forward to meet lots of fans. The dream is remembering Japanese soon and doing one-man live at dome.

修正後
The members talking the willingness about the activities in Japan is that, they are glad to stay in Japan and can do activities in full-scale, and also looking forward to meet lots of fans. The dream is learning Japanese soon and doing their own live at dome.

元の翻訳
このロシアのメールに書いてあるアイテムが紛失しています。この国の国内の配送における期限は過ぎています。厳正にこれに対して9月30日までに対処を行うことを勧めます。
これが現在の状況です。EMS配送料は支払いました。EMSで配送されるべき時間は過ぎています。もし3日以内に小包を受け取らなかった場合は、拒否されていただきます！以下の文はあなたが広告に書いた配送と取り扱いです。アイテムは日本からEMSを使用しての（日本郵便）配送で、ほとんどの国の場合営業5日から7日で届きます。アイテムは支払い後たいていは営業1－3日以内に配送されます。
配送はペイパルに登録してある住所にのみ可能です。eBayでの住所が正しいかどうかを支払い前に確認してください。

修正後
この商品はロシアの郵便で紛失しました。この国での国内の配送期限は過ぎています。厳正にこれに対して9月30日までに対処を行うことを勧めます。
これが現在の状況です。EMS配送料は支払いました。EMSで配送されるべき時間は過ぎています。もし3日以内に小包を受け取れなかった場合は、拒否させていただきます！以下の文はあなたが広告に書いた配送と取扱です。アイテムは日本からEMSを使用しての（日本郵便）配送で、ほとんどの国の場合5営業日から7営業日で届きます。アイテムは支払い後たいていは1－3営業日以内に配送されます。
配送はペイパルに登録してある住所にのみ可能です。eBayでの住所が正しいかどうかを支払い前に確認してください。

元の翻訳
All seats reserved 6/10（Tue）

6/7（Sat）

7/19（Sat）

7/26(Sat)

修正後
All seats reserved for 6/10（Tue）

6/7（Sat）

7/19（Sat）

7/26(Sat)

元の翻訳
We are the cloud dedicated vendor that offers the integration services specializing AWS (Amazon Web Services) ince 2008. Our contribution includes starting up the donation website via AWS for Japan Red Cross within 48hours from the occurrence of the disaster, etc., that has helped to build up a case optimizing the cloud with the reconstruction support to enhance the opportunity of the cloud use. With the recognition of our activities for having supported over 200 clients' AWS introduction, AWS has authorised us as an Advanced Consulting Partner.

修正後
We are the cloud dedicated vendor that offers the integration services specializing AWS (Amazon Web Services) since 2008. Our contribution includes starting up the donation website via AWS for Japan Red Cross within 48hours from the occurrence of the disaster, etc., that has helped to build up a case optimizing the cloud with the reconstruction support to enhance the opportunity of the cloud use. With the recognition of our activities for having supported over 200 clients' AWS introduction, AWS has authorised us as an Advanced Consulting Partner.

元の翻訳
ポルトガールに発送する前に、海関を通す貨物の問題をないようにしてください。

修正後
以前ポルトガールに発送したことはありますか？通関で何か問題がありましたか？

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your continuous support. ↵
↵
We aplogize for inconvience about not being able to track the merchandise. We requested the international office to track it through the local HP, however, we have not been able to obtain any additional information or whereabout of the merchandise after it was shipped out of Japan.
We have requested Japan Post for the investigation. We apologize where you are in hurry, we would appreciate if you could wait for a little while as we will contact you as soon as we receive the result of the investigation.

Thank you very much in advance.

修正後
Thank you very much for your continuous support. We aplogize for the inconvenience about not being able to track the merchandise. We requested the international office to track it through the local website, however, we have not been able to obtain any additional information or whereabout of the merchandise after it was shipped out of Japan.
We have requested Japan Post for the investigation. We apologize where you are in hurry, we would appreciate if you could wait for a little while as we will contact you as soon as we receive the result of the investigation.

Thank you very much in advance.

元の翻訳
This ticket is only available at the day.
You can not enter the events which are held in Yoyogi National Stadium Yoyogi Gymnasiums 1 and 2. You need to pat additional fee for enter those events.
This ticket is not confirming for the priority seat of the fashion shows and for advanced entry to the shopping moles. You can buy one day pass at the day in the event place.

※The schedule of those event may be changed or cancelled by bad weather condition and decision by the organizer. Please understand.

修正後
This ticket is only available at the day.
You can not enter the events which are held in Yoyogi National Stadium Yoyogi Gymnasiums 1 and 2. You need to pay additional fee for entering those events.
This ticket is not confirming for the priority seat of the fashion shows and for advanced entry to the shopping malls. You can buy one day pass at the day in the event place.

※The schedule of those event may be changed or cancelled by bad weather condition and decision by the organizer. Please understand.

元の翻訳
お返事が遅れましてまことに申し訳ございません。実は、36時間前に私の娘を救急病院に連れて行き、その後病院に娘と一緒に降りました。ただいま帰宅したところでございます。はい、もちろんソフィアが貴方にされたことにつうては私はベトを尽くす所存でございます。彼が作成したとてもすばらしいまっすぐで眉毛の長さに近い43番ゲージの針を使います。私でイングランドから購入することのできるソフィアとヘッジのベアキットが届くのをお待ちしております。それらが今週届く事を祈っております。リリアンと髪の脇につけるものを仕上げました↵
。また、ふさふさの髪を持つルカ用の髪を明日40番ゲージの針と同じ厚さと使用の針を使って仕上げます。

修正後
お返事が遅れましてまことに申し訳ございません。実は、36時間前に私の娘を救急病院に連れて行き、その後病院に娘と一緒におりました。ただいま帰宅したところでございます。はい、もちろんソフィアについて貴方にお願いされたことについては私はベストを尽くす所存でございます。彼が作成したとてもすばらしいまっすぐで眉毛の長さに近い43番ゲージの針を使います。私はイングランドから購入することのできるソフィアとヘッジのベアキットが届くのをお待ちしております。それらが今週届く事を祈っております。リリアンと髪の脇につけるものを仕上げました。また、ふさふさの髪を持つルカ用の髪を明日40番ゲージの針と同じ厚さと使用の針を使って仕上げます。

元の翻訳
Weibo、月間アクティブユーザー1.57億人に達するも第二四半期は損失を計上

ツイッター風のSina Weibo （NASDAQ:WB）は、月間アクティブユーザー（MAUs）が1億5650万人に達した－このうち6970万人が毎日アクティブである－と、同社の2014年第二四半期報で明らかにした。

WeChatの4.38億MAUsに達する猛攻撃にもかかわらず、Weiboは、ユーザーベースでゆっくりながらまだ成長を続けている。同社の月間アクティブユーザーは過去12か月間で30％上昇した。

修正後
Weibo、月間アクティブユーザー1.57億人に達するも第二四半期は損失を計上

ツイッター風のSina Weibo （NASDAQ:WB）は、月間アクティブユーザー（MAU）が1億5650万人に達した－このうち6970万人が毎日アクティブである－と、同社の2014年第二四半期決算発表で明らかにした。

WeChaが4.38億MAUに達するほど猛攻をかけたにもかかわらず、Weiboのユーザーベースは緩やかながらも増加を続けている。同社の月間アクティブユーザーは過去12か月間で30％増加した。