Chris Ishii　 (bluejeans71) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I am sorry for my late reply.
I had been out of office on Saturday and Sunday, because my son had been sick and not been feeling well.
I apologize for the inconvenience.
At first, I sent the item to you on Saturday.
Regarding accessories, all of accessories are shown in the picture. Please confirm.
And, the pad lock comes with them. I have double checked.

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I am sorry for my late reply.
I took my days off on the weekend because my son was sick.
I apologize for the inconvenience.
At first, I sent the item to you on Saturday.
Regarding accessories, all of accessories are shown in the picture. Please confirm.
And, the pad lock comes with them. I have double checked.

元の翻訳
Good day.
How are you?
I am in Hawaii.
I wanted to see you, but as I do not have time, I will go back to Japan around noon today.
As I will come back to Hawaii next week, we should see next time. Regarding our work,
would you let me know when you are ready to produce our item?
Last time you said that you wanted to import and sell Japanese car.
Are you going to sell it?
May I support you in some way?↵
Please send me an email.

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Good day.
How are you?
I am in Hawaii.
Though I wanted to see you, I will be back to Japan this afternoon as I do not have enough time.
As I will come back to Hawaii next week, we should see then. Regarding our work,
would you let me know when you are ready to produce our items?
Last time you said that you wanted to import and sell Japanese cars.
Are you going to sell them?
Is there anything I can do for you? Please e-mail me.↵

元の翻訳
Hello.
How are you?
I wanted to meet you but had no time, so I will go back to Japan around today noon.
I will come back to Hawaii next week so let's meet next time.
As for business, please let me know when you prepare to produce our products.
As you said that you would like to import and sell Japan's cars, are you still going to sell them?
Are there anything to help you? Please send me again.

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Hello.
How are you?
I wanted to meet you but had no time, so I will go back to Japan around today noon.
I will come back to Hawaii next week, so let's get together then.
As for business, please let me know when you will prepare to produce our products.
As you said that you would like to import and sell Japanese cars, are you still going to sell them?
Is there anything to help you? Please e-mail me again.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry to put you to trouble.
Please choose refund or change.
If you choose change, you have to send items to me.
And, it takes about three weeks because I send you new items after I get returned goods.
Thank you for your patience.

I accepted.
I will procedure refund right now.

Please proceeding to return on ebay.
When I get items, I send you new items.
I am sorry to put you to so much trouble.
Thank you in advance.

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I am sorry to put you in trouble.
Please choose refund or change.
If you choose change, you need to send the item to me.
And it will take about three weeks because I send you new items after I have received them.
Thank you for your patience.

I accepted.
I will proceed to refunding you right now.

Please proceed to return on ebay.
When I receive the items, I will dispatch new ones.
I am sorry to put you in so much trouble.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
こんにちは
アマゾンでのご注文をイギリス国外に輸送することはできませんが、私たちのウェブサイトを経由して注文していただきますと、この照明をドイツへ輸送することができます。
よろしくお願いいたします。

パメラ

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こんにちは
アマゾンでのご注文をイギリス国外に輸送することはできませんが、弊社のサイト経由でご注文いただくと、この照明をドイツへ輸送することができます。
よろしくお願いいたします。

パメラ

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

弊社はアマゾンに発注された商品をイギリス国外に発送することができません。しかし、もしあなたが弊社のウェブサイト経由で発注された場合は、ライトはドイツに郵送されることになります。

よろしくお願いします。
パメラ

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こんにちは。

弊社はアマゾンで受注した商品をイギリス国外に発送しておりません。しかし、もしお客様が弊社のサイト経由でご注文された場合、ライトはドイツに郵送されます。

よろしくお願いします。
パメラ

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

アマゾンのご注文はイギリス以外には配送はできませんので、わたしたちのウェブサイトからご注文の場合はドイツに送られる可能性はあります。

宜しくお願い致します。
Pamela

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こんにちは。

アマゾンのご注文はイギリス以外には配送はできませんが、弊社のサイトからご注文の場合、↵
ドイツに送られる可能性がございます。

宜しくお願いいたします。
Pamela

元の翻訳
Greetings. Perhaps you do not understand the way it works for us in Ebay. The ability to send out return stickers is only available to American sellers. Because you also verified this even as a customer of Ebay Japan, you may believe that this information is correct. But because I am a Japanese seller (in Japan) the return-sticker service is not available. The return charges are remitted to you first through your Paypal account. Please write back with the approximate amount that it will cost to return the item. With an additional Paypal commission added, the amount will be remitted to your account.

I’m sorry to trouble you like this, but can you please also verify the address to which you will return the item to me?

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Hello. Perhaps the staff members of Ebay must be making a mistake. Return labels cannot be issued except those to American sellers. I am sure this information is correct as I have contacted the Japan Customer Center of ebay. As I am a Japanese seller, I cannot get the return label issued. So I will remit you the return charges via PayPal at first. Please write back with the approximate amount that it will cost to return the item. With an additional Paypal commission added, the amount will be remitted to your account.

I’m sorry to trouble you like this, but can you please also verify the address to which you will return the item to me?

元の翻訳
I was waiting for your reply.
I think you are busy after finishing exhibition in Japan.
I'm looking forward to working with together.
Let's have a talk about work in Japan.
You can't get in touch with me until Mondy.

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I was waiting for your reply.
I think you have been busy since you finished the exhibition in Japan.
I am looking forward to working with you.
Let's have a talk about work in Japan.
I am afraid you fail to get in touch with me until next Monday.

元の翻訳
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Website: http://housecube.d-x-b.jp/
Blog: http://ameblo.jp/housecube/
Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/housecubekyoto/
Line: @housecube-kyoto

Click here for information about digital citizenry
http://kyoto-city.avex.jp/city/

元の翻訳
It was fun today, thank you very much.
Ｉ hasten to inform you of the current state of several points which were talked about.
As for the o o, the customs duties aren't imposed but the liquor tax is high when importing.
The liquor tax is also imposed on domestic products as well as imports.
It's 17 times of o o and is 220 yen per 1L.
It'll be a problem of the physical distribution cost besides the license, so the sales force that how much can be transported by a refrigeration container will be a key.
It's difficult by only myself , but if there is someone who seems able to be useful, I'll contact you again.

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I had a good time today, thank you very much.
I just tell you the status quo of several points we talked about.
As for the o o, tariffs aren't imposed but the liquor tax is high in importing.
The liquor tax is also imposed on domestic products as well as imports.
It's 17 times of o o and is 220 yen per 1L.
It'll be a problem of the physical distribution cost besides the license, so the key will be that how much can be transported by a refrigeration container.
It's difficult by only myself , but if there is someone who seems to be useful, I'll contact you again.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for telling product's information to me on products.
I tried them.
First time when turning on a power supply, the various colors mixed and blurred.
After the power supply was turned off once and was turned on once again, it worked normally .
When a picture blurs, please turn on the power once again.
There are no English instructions.
Is a mail available for the explanation?
From the place where infrared scope looks down, in the inside.
1. Adjuster ( turn it and add the width of the lens to the width of the eye.
2.Power supply ON/OFF

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Thank you very much for giving me some information about the products.
I tried them.
When I turned on the power for the first time, various colors mixed and blurred.
After my turning off the power supply once and turning it on again, it worked normally.
When a picture blurs, please turn on the power once again.
There are no English instructions.
Is a mail available for the explanation?
From the place where infrared scope looks down, in the inside.
1. Adjuster (turn it and add the width of the lens to the width of the eye.
2.Power supply ON/OFF

元の翻訳
いつもお世話になります。　

恐れ入りますが、購入したカメラを郵送していただけますでしょうか？PAYPAL（ペイパル）にて料金の支払いは完了しております。

よろしくお願いいたします。

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いつもお世話になります。　

恐れ入りますが、注文したカメラを早急に郵送していただけますか？PAYPAL(ペイパル)にて料金を支払い済みです。

よろしくお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
I came back to Tokyo day after day.
Last day, I was very glad to saw you with yours in NY.
And now, I think thank you for the debate with yours about my restriction circumstances .
Step-by-step,I'm exited that I could contribution your's in Japan development.
The end of the month, I'm looking forward to seeing Mr Tom about alliance strategy of Japan market cultivation.

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I came back to Tokyo two days ago.
I was very glad to see both of you two people in New York the other day.
I also appreciate you giving me an opportunity to explain the circumstances under which I was restricted and to discuss the matter with you.
I am excited about contributing to your progress in Japan little by little.
I am looking forward to seeing Mr Tom at the end of this month, when we will talk about the alliance strategy to cultivate the Japanese market.↵

元の翻訳
”Mine sweeper " is a game that you find sprinkled mines using the numbers of hints.

●Mines are randomly filled under the ground.
●When you touch the box with no mines, you can know the number of filled mines in near 8 boxes.
●When you open all the boxes with no mines, game is cleared!

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”Mine sweeper " is a game where you find sprinkled mines by using the numbers of the hints.

●Mines are randomly filled under the ground.
●When you touch the box with no mines, you can know the number of filled mines in near 8 boxes.
●When you open all the boxes with no mines, you have won the game!

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I understood.
And so, please pay back US$200 to PAYPAL.
When could you pay me back the money?
Could you pay back early, please? I would like to use that money for buying glass panel.
Thank you in advance.

I confirmed your payback.
Thank you.

Could you remove the knob if you can? The glass panel is so fragile.
I think that the glass panel might be broken because of the pressure of the knob.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I understood.
And so, please refund US$200 to PAYPAL.
When could I be refunded?
Could you pay back early, please? I would like to use that money for buying a glass panel.
Thank you in advance.

I confirmed your refund.
Thank you.

Could you remove the knob if you can? The glass panel is so fragile.
I think that it might be broken because of the pressure of the knob.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your courteous response.

I am a Japanese, so the address indicated in my credit card is Japan.

However, I am in a contract with an American delivery company.

That address that I sent you is the address of the aforementioned delivery company.

I want you to send the item through that company.

Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for your courteous response.

I am a Japanese, so the address indicated in my credit card is Japan.

However I have a contract with an American delivery company.

That address that I sent you is that of the delivery company I have mentioned earlier.

I would like you to send the item to that company.

Thank you in advance.