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評価: 60 / ネイティブ 英語 / 1 Review / 2016/10/19 08:48:38

scintillar
scintillar 60 I have the Japanese Language Proficie...
日本語

ノーフリルズ(バナナのマーク)、バスストップ、地下鉄の駅があり、便利なロケーションです。
大家は別居ですがアパートは綺麗に保つようにしています。
家には4部屋あります。
キッチンは大きい冷蔵庫が二つあってたっぷりとスペースがあります。
キッチンには炊飯器、瞬間湯沸かし器、電子レンジ、トースター、お鍋、フライパン、お皿、ボウル、おはし、スプーン、フォーク等完備です。
部屋はベッド、クローゼット、デスク、チェアー等付きです。
インターネット、水道代、電気代、ガス代も全て家賃に含まれています。

英語

There's a no frills (banana mark), a bus stop, underground station, and it's a convenient location.
The landlord lives separately but keeps the apartment clean.
There are 4 rooms in the house.
There are 2 large fridges in the kitchen with plenty of space.
The kitchen is fully-equipped with a rice cooker, instant water heater, a microwave oven, a toaster, pots, frying pans, plates, bowls, chopsticks, spoons and forks.
The bedroom includes a bed, closet, desk and chair.
The internet, water bill, electricity and gas are all included in the rent.

レビュー ( 1 )

bluejeans71 59 This is a Japanese freelance translat...
bluejeans71はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2016/10/19 10:06:59

元の翻訳
There's a no frills (banana mark), a bus stop, underground station, and it's a convenient location.
The landlord lives separately but keeps the apartment clean.
There are 4 rooms in the house.
There are 2 large fridges in the kitchen with plenty of space.
The kitchen is fully-equipped with a rice cooker, instant water heater, a microwave oven, a toaster, pots, frying pans, plates, bowls, chopsticks, spoons and forks.
The bedroom includes a bed, closet, desk and chair.
The internet, water bill, electricity and gas are all included in the rent.

修正後
There's a no frills (banana mark), a bus stop, underground station, and it's a convenient location.
The landlord lives separately but keeps the apartment clean.
There are 4 rooms in the house.
There are 2 large fridges in the kitchen with plenty of space.
The kitchen is fully-equipped with a rice cooker, instant water heater, a microwave oven, a toaster, pots, frying pans, plates, bowls, chopsticks, spoons and forks.
The bedroom includes a bed, closet, desk and chair.
The rent includes charges for the internet, water bill, electricity and gas.

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