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あなたの宅配アカウント番号と名前を教えてください。サンプルを送付いたします。

お手数おかけ致します。
よろしくお願い致します。

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あなたの宅配業者のアカウント番号と名前を教えてください。サンプルを送付いたします。

お手数おかけ致します。
よろしくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
時計の損傷はどれも輸送中に起こったのではないことがプロの手で証明されています。
ご存じだったかもしれませんし、または、この時計を売った際あなたはこれをご存知なかったのかもしれません。
再考をお願いしますと共に、受け取りの後、時計の全額返金のご了承をお願い致します。
そうでなければ、私たちはネガティブな評価を残さざるをえませんし、さらに、eBayやPayPalにおいてこれをエスカレートせざるをえません。
私達は脅すことは本当にいやですが、あなたが他に選択肢を残してくれないので仕方ありません。
是非再度ご検討ください。

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時計の損傷はどれも輸送中に起こりえないことが専門的に証明されています。
この時計を売った際あなたはこれをご存じだったかもしれませんし、または、ご存知なかったのかもしれません。
再検討をお願いしますと共に、受け取りの後、時計の全額返金をご了承していただけるようお願い致します。
そうでなければ、私たちはマイナス評価を残さざるをえませんし、さらに、eBayやPayPalに対応をお願いせざるをえません。
私達は脅すようなことは本当はしたくないのですが、他に選択の余地はありません。
是非再度ご検討ください。

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I really had fun!
There were so many places to see! I didn't expect I could a sightseeing ship, so I was excited.
With the blue sky, white clouds and a lake without waves, it was like a mirror world. (It was like Uyuni lake in Bolivia.)
A harbor town where I went to by ship had a beautiful streetscape.
After seeing a cheese factory, I had a lunch (I brought) and took a walk, but fish and chips was really tasty there as well.
The one day sightseeing was like a dream. I'm so satisfied.

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I really had fun!
There were so many places to see! I didn't expect I could ride on a sightseeing ship, so I was excited.
With the blue sky, white clouds and a lake without waves, it was like a mirror world. (It was like Uyuni lake in Bolivia.)
A harbor town where I went to by ship had a beautiful streetscape.
After seeing a cheese factory, I had a lunch (I brought) and took a walk, but fish and chips was really tasty there as well.
The one day sightseeing was like a dream. I'm so satisfied.

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Country views of Holland.
With fine weather, it was the best sightseeing tour ever. At a cheese factory and a wooden shoes factory, girls wearing pretty ethnic costumes explained things with full of humor, and I enjoyed it. Cheeses in the cheese factory was delicious!
Guide people were very friendly, and I was impressed by cheerful and upbeat responses of a driver.
In the last, we sang "Amsterdam, Amsterdam" (Holland song?) together.
It was a fun and memorable trip!

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Country views of Holland.
With fine weather, it was the best sightseeing tour ever. At a cheese factory and a wooden shoes factory, girls wearing pretty ethnic costumes explained things with full of humor, and I enjoyed it. Cheeses in the cheese factory was delicious!
Guides were very friendly, and I was impressed by cheerful and upbeat responses of a driver.
At the end, we sang "Amsterdam, Amsterdam" (Holland song?) together.
It was a fun and memorable trip!

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Waterfall was amazing.
It was a tour in which we could enjoy the dynamic nature of Iceland. We joined this tour because my friend saw a review of it and felt like joining it. I recommend it to those who are going to Iceland. The tour was in the middle of September. The days are longer than in Japan still, and it was not so cold yet, but it was cold when we got to a glacier lake. So it was a good decision to take a thin down jacket of UNIQLO.
There was a description which said it would be better to sit down on the left side, so we sat on the seats on the left. I am grateful because there were more beautiful landscapes on the left side.

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Waterfall was amazing.
It was a tour in which we could enjoy the dynamic nature of Iceland. We joined this tour because my friend saw a review of it and felt like joining it. I recommend it to those who have a plan to go to Iceland. We joined the tour in the middle of September. The days were longer than in Japan still, and it was not so cold yet at Reykjavik, but it was cold when we got to a glacier lake. So it was a good decision to take a light down jacket of UNIQLO.
The review said it would be better to take a seat on the left side of the bus, so we did. I am grateful because there were more beautiful landscapes on the left side.

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Convenient tour.
It was more like a tour rather than just transportation, and it was nice that I could visit many paces faster. The time allocation was adequate as well. English of the tour guide was strange a little bit, but the guide was very kind and made an effort to explain for us when I asked questions. The conversation between the guide is also my good memory. Thank you very much.

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Convenient tour.
It was more like a tour rather than just transportation, and it was nice that I could visit many places faster. The time allocation was adequate as well. The tour guide's English was a little bit strange, but the guide was very kind and made an effort to explain things for us when we asked questions. Conversations with the guide are also good memories of mine. Thank you very much.

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the Tower of Pisa
The tour guide explained very effectively, and it was helpful. We traveled around effectively. The Tower of Pisa itself was also great.↵

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Tower of Pisa Tour
The tour guide explained everything very effectively, which was helpful. We traveled around efficiently. The Tower of Pisa itself was also great.

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Outlet tour, awesome!!
Last year on my Italy trip, I couldn't go there. But it was really great that I was able to join the outlet tour which I wished to go this year!
I bought Miu Miu purses and Gucci bags with really cheap price.
If I have a chance, I would definitely go there again.

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Outlet tour, awesome!!
Last year on my Italy trip, I couldn't go there. But it was really great that I was able to join the outlet tour, which I wished to go this year!
I bought Miu Miu purses and Gucci bags at really cheap prices.
If I have a chance, I would definitely go there again.

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It was comfortable.
It was an Italy trip as a honey moon.
We joined this tour because it seemed very difficult to go to these two place by train. The landscape from the window of the car is very beautiful, it is possible to go to both with half a day, you can go shopping to The Mall leaving baggage of Prada you buy before it in bus, you don't have to take buses and trains with lots of brand baggage so it's safe, and I recommend this. There was a Prada shop in The Mall as well, but I compare with SPACE, the amount of the products is different. In SPACE, there are varieties of products and very cheap!

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It was comfortable.
It was an Italy trip as a honey moon.
We joined this tour because it seemed very difficult to go to these two places by train. The landscape from the window of the car was very beautiful, it is possible to go to both in half a day, you can go shopping to the mall while leaving the Prada bag you bought before in the bus. You feel safe that you don't have to take buses and trains with lots of brand items. So I recommend this tour. There was a Prada shop in the mall as well, but if I compare with SPACE, the price of products is different. In SPACE, there are many varieties of products and they are very cheap!

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It was the first time to go to Italy and I really wanted to go to the space if I go to Firenze, and it was really nice that I could join it. The space was really spacious, and the products were displayed more neatly than I expected and it was like a Japanese outlet shop. I could buy clothes, shoes and so on at once at a same cashier, and the shop clerks were kind and they helped me choosing which to buy! They were really cheaper and I bought Prada bag, children shoes, thick cardigan, poach and it was around 100,000 yen in total. It was possible to put the baggage which I bought at the space in the car, so I was able to go for shopping light.

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It was the first time to go to Italy and I really wanted to go to the space if I go to Firenze, and it was really nice that I could join it. The space was really spacious, and the products were displayed more neatly than I expected and it was like a Japanese outlet shop. I could buy clothes, shoes and so on at once at a same cashier, and the shop clerks were kind and they helped me choosing which to buy! They were really cheaper and I bought Prada bag, children shoes, thick cardigan, poach and it was around 100,000 yen in total. It was possible to put the baggage which I bought at the space in the car, so I was able to go for shopping lightly.

元の翻訳
一つ必要なことがあります。返金はpaypal GIFTとして行っていただく必要があります。paypalに手数料を払いたくないからです。また、返金の全額がGBP £339.05（USD $515からの換算）である必要があります。

私の理解が合っているかどうかご確認ください。もしあなたがこれを喜んでしてくださるようでしたら、これがマイナス評価を解決する最も迅速な方法です。

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一つ必要なことがあります。paypalに手数料を払うのを避けるため、返金はpaypal GIFTとして行ってください。また、返金の総額はGBP £339.05（USD $515からの換算）としてください。

こちらの理解でよろしいかどうかご確認いただければと思います。もしこの方法でよろしければ、これがマイナス評価を解決する最も迅速な方法です。

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Plastic protect jacket covering the back side of iPhone for iPhone6.
They protect them from scratch and small shaking and shock.
Can be connected with lightning connector with it.
There is a strap hall for a strap.

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Plastic protect jacket for covering the back side of iPhone for iPhone6.
This jacket protects your iPhone 6 from scratch, small vibration, and impact.
Can be connected with lightning connector without taking it off.
There is a strap hole provided for you to attach a strap.

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Guests are KREVA and DAICHI MIURA who sing the program theme song "Drivin' Love" with the navigator Clover!
For this public recording event, 120 pairs 240 guests from J-WAVE listener will be invited!
We are looking forward to your applying.

Dress up, join and spend the best Christmas party ever!

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Guests are KREVA who sings the program theme song "Drivin' Love" with the navigator GROVER and DAICHI MIURA !
For this public recording event, 120 pairs of tickets will be available for J-WAVE listeners!
We are looking forward to your applying.

Dress up, join and have the best Christmas party ever!

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[content amount]
perfume 50ml / Roll on perfume 10ml / Solid perfume 8g

[price]
¥5,000 (excluded tax)

Contact
scentnations
info@scentnations.com
03-3780-0825

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[net volume]
perfume 50ml / Roll on perfume 10ml / Solid perfume 8g

[price]
¥5,000 (excluded tax)

Contact
scentnations
info@scentnations.com
03-3780-0825

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Yesterday I phoned Amazon, but has that information arrived there?
I'm sending mail because it's needed to log in soon in any case and I would like to confirm that there will really be reply in 1 or 2 days as I was told yesterday on the phone.

Login ID:
Store name:
Person name:

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Yesterday I phoned Amazon, but has that information arrived there?
I'm sending this mail because I need to log in soon in any case and I would like to confirm if there will really be reply in 1 or 2 days as I was told yesterday on the phone.

Login ID:
Store name:
Personal name:

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私は玉鋼や、多くのハンティング、キッチンナイフから短刀を鍛造したことがあります。数百ものナイフや刀の作成、鍛造に通常のダマスカスを使用したことがあります。私が最近使用した玉鋼は、私がプロジェクトを始めた際は既にブルームから基本的な鋼片に精錬てありました。私は経験豊富な鍛冶職人で、ナイフの分野では良く知られています。私はブレードフォーラムのショップトークで議長を務めています。もし必要であれば、私のユーザー名はStacy E. Apelt - Bladesmithです。私のプロジェクトや、経験をご覧になってください。
私は米国にてアッショーカーンセミナーで玉鋼の製作に携わったことがあります。来年は「刀年」となり、三日間でタタラ溶解をし、ブルームを精錬して刀を鍛造する予定です。

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私は玉鋼や、多くのハンティング、キッチンナイフから短刀を鍛造したことがあります。数百ものナイフや刀の作成、鍛造に通常のダマスカスを使用したことがあります。私が最近使用した玉鋼は、私がプロジェクトを始めた際は既にブルームから基本的な鋼片に精錬してありました。私は経験豊富な鍛冶職人で、ナイフの分野では良く知られています。私はブレードフォーラムのショップトークで議長を務めています。もし必要であれば、私のユーザー名はStacy E. Apelt - Bladesmithです。私のプロジェクトや、経験をご覧になってください。
私は米国にてアッショーカーンセミナーで玉鋼の製作に携わったことがあります。来年は「刀年」となり、三日間でタタラ溶解をし、ブルームを精錬して刀を鍛造する予定です。

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なぜSequoia Capitalが特にTokopediaにとって有利かを尋ねたところ、Tanuwijaya はApple, Yahoo, Google, Linkedin, Zappos, Airbnb, WhatsAppそしてInstagramの全てが世界クラスのプロダクトを届け、時代を築いてきたと説明する。彼らは、始めの数年はSequoia に支援された。

アジアにおけるテクノロジーは、Tanuwijayaの決定に追随する傾向がある。これは新規に形作られたトリオがインドネシアのインターネット市場を成層圏に打ち上げる完璧なストームになることを証明し得る。

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なぜSequoia Capitalが特にTokopediaにとって有利かを尋ねたところ、Tanuwijaya はApple, Yahoo, Google, Linkedin, Zappos, Airbnb, WhatsAppそしてInstagramの全てが世界クラスの製品を届け、一時代を築いてきたと説明する。これらの企業は全て、始めの数年はSequoia に支援されていた。

Tech in Asia(固有名詞)は、Tanuwijayaの決定に追随する傾向がある。これは新規に形作られたトリオがインドネシアのインターネット市場を成層圏に打ち上げる完璧なストームになることを証明し得る。