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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2015/01/21 23:59:14

blue_lagoon
日本語

楽ちんです
新婚旅行でのイタリア周遊です。
電車ではかなり大変そうな２箇所だったのでこちらのツアーを利用しました。移動中の車窓からの景色もキレイですし、半日で両方回れるし、先に寄ったプラダで買い物したものもバスの中に置いたままモールで買い物もできるし、たくさんのブランド品を抱えたままバスや電車に乗らずに済むので安心ですし、おススメです。モールの中にもプラダがありましたが、やはりSPACEと比べると品揃えが違います。SPACEは種類も豊富だし、とても安いです！

英語

It was comfortable.
It was an Italy trip as a honey moon.
We joined this tour because it seemed very difficult to go to these two place by train. The landscape from the window of the car is very beautiful, it is possible to go to both with half a day, you can go shopping to The Mall leaving baggage of Prada you buy before it in bus, you don't have to take buses and trains with lots of brand baggage so it's safe, and I recommend this. There was a Prada shop in The Mall as well, but I compare with SPACE, the amount of the products is different. In SPACE, there are varieties of products and very cheap!

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yxn667 52 Conyacでの翻訳経歴（2014年10月登録）： Standard依頼...
yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2015/01/23 00:07:54

元の翻訳
It was comfortable.
It was an Italy trip as a honey moon.
We joined this tour because it seemed very difficult to go to these two place by train. The landscape from the window of the car is very beautiful, it is possible to go to both with half a day, you can go shopping to The Mall leaving baggage of Prada you buy before it in bus, you don't have to take buses and trains with lots of brand baggage so it's safe, and I recommend this. There was a Prada shop in The Mall as well, but I compare with SPACE, the amount of the products is different. In SPACE, there are varieties of products and very cheap!

修正後
It was comfortable.
It was an Italy trip as a honey moon.
We joined this tour because it seemed very difficult to go to these two places by train. The landscape from the window of the car was very beautiful, it is possible to go to both in half a day, you can go shopping to the mall while leaving the Prada bag you bought before in the bus. You feel safe that you don't have to take buses and trains with lots of brand items. So I recommend this tour. There was a Prada shop in the mall as well, but if I compare with SPACE, the price of products is different. In SPACE, there are many varieties of products and they are very cheap!

blue_lagoon blue_lagoon 2015/01/23 06:20:53

レビューありがとうございます。丁寧に添削してくださりとても勉強になりました。
ザ・モールについては、固有名詞（イタリア　フィレンツェにあるアウトレットの名前）のようなので、大文字にしておりました。
下記ご参照ください。
http://wikimapia.org/9040668/The-Mall-Outlet
よろしくお願い致します。

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