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日本語

昨日Amazonに電話したが、その情報はそちらに届いていますか？
とにかく早くログインしないといけない、昨日電話した時には返答は１日から２日と言われたが本当に返答してくれるのかの確認も含めメールさせていただきます。

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英語

Yesterday I phoned Amazon, but has that information arrived there?
I'm sending mail because it's needed to log in soon in any case and I would like to confirm that there will really be reply in 1 or 2 days as I was told yesterday on the phone.

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Store name:
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susumu-fukuharaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/11/29 11:40:04

元の翻訳
Yesterday I phoned Amazon, but has that information arrived there?
I'm sending mail because it's needed to log in soon in any case and I would like to confirm that there will really be reply in 1 or 2 days as I was told yesterday on the phone.

Login ID:
Store name:
Person name:

修正後
Yesterday I phoned Amazon, but has that information arrived there?
I'm sending this mail because I need to log in soon in any case and I would like to confirm if there will really be reply in 1 or 2 days as I was told yesterday on the phone.

Login ID:
Store name:
Personal name:

log inする主体は「私」なのでI need to(have to)としたほうがすっきりとした文章になると思います。

[blue_lagoon]

Thank you for your review :)