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Sorry for my late response.
As for the date of the training, please arrange that it will begin at 10:00(CET) on Nov. 13th(Thurs).
I want to confirm the begining time, is 18:00(JPT) right?
Would you tell me about the details of the training and the way to join it?
Thank you for your help.

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Sorry for my late response.
As for the date of the training, please arrange so that it will begin at 10:00(CET) on Nov. 13th(Thurs).
I want to confirm the begining time, is 18:00(JPT) right?
Would you tell me about the details of the training and the way to join it?
Thank you for your help.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

I'll ansewer your inquieries.

I originally woked as a distrubuter of the watchs and sold them many foreigners who often came to buy them.

That is one of the reasons for using amazon to sell items overseas.

The monthly sales target is 1-1.5 million yen.
In Japan, I sell the items in the Yahoo shop and the Yahoo Auction.

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Thank you for your reply.

I'll answer your inquiries.

I originally worked as a distributor of the watches and sold them to many foreigners who often came to buy them.

That is one of the reasons for using amazon to sell items overseas.

The monthly sales target is 1-1.5 million yen.
In Japan, I sell the items in the Yahoo shop and the Yahoo Auction.

元の翻訳
If you don't mind the age of the building, the rent for an apartment having one room is 60000-70000yen on average.
But it may be not a reinforced concrete apartment but a wooden apartment.
If you choose a very old room without bathroom, you can rent it by cheaper than 30000yen.
But I do't recommend the room which is too cheap. You may see a ghost there.
My friend, who lives in Nishi-Ogikubo, says his room have one room and one kitchen and the rent is 63000yen.

Wow! you speak out Japanese when you least expect it, don't you?
I don't think that is unusual.
Maybe that man saw you could speak Japanese and envied you.

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If you don't mind the age of the building, the rent for an apartment having one room is 60000-70000yen on average.
But it may be not a reinforced concrete apartment but a wooden apartment.
If you choose a very old room without bathroom, you can rent it by cheaper than 30000yen.
But I do't recommend a room that is too cheap. You may see a ghost there.
My friend, who lives in Nishi-Ogikubo, says his room have one room and one kitchen and the rent is 63000yen.

Wow! you speak out Japanese when you least expect it, don't you?
I don't think that is unusual.
Maybe that man saw you could speak Japanese and envied you.

元の翻訳
I am ,purchased through Ebay.
Thank you for your eraly delivery.

I have a question about thr item.
Is this a old model, which is in the maker's website?
Can you buy this item anytime?
We are a Japanese company dealing in impoted goods.

We hope to do business with you.

We would like to purchase more than 5 units every month.
Now we are creating a military shop.

We are promotingsales and we consider the purchase will be increased later.

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I am ,purchased through eBay [unclear].
Thank you for your eraly [spelling] delivery.

I have a question about thr [spelling] item.
Is this an old model, which is in [wrong proposition] the maker's website?
Can you buy this item anytime?
We are a Japanese company dealing in [wrong proposition] impoted [spelling] goods.

We hope to do business with you.

We would like to purchase more than 5 units every month.
Now we are creating a military shop.

We are promotingsales [spelling] and we consider the purchase will be increased later.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I purchased a product via Amazon.com the other day.
It functioned well, but didn't include a instruction manual and written warranty.
Would you please send me them?
My address is in Japan.

In addition, please tell me the warranty period.

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Hello,
I purchased a product via Amazon.com the other day.
It functioned well, but didn't come with the instruction manual and the warranty.
Would you please send them to me?
My address is in Japan.

In addition, please tell me the warranty period.

元の翻訳
1568554 の“TRAKTOR + KOMPLETE 27.10.2014”の仕事に関する説明ありがとう。
明日10月29日10時（中央ヨーロッパ標準時）までに仕事を完成してもらえますか？

お願いですから断らないで、そちらのもっとも都合の良い締切期限の教えてください。こちらでクライアントと何とか確認を取りますから。

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1568554 の“TRAKTOR + KOMPLETE 27.10.2014”の仕事に関する説明ありがとう。
明日10月29日午前10時（中央ヨーロッパ標準時）までに仕事を完成してもらえますか？

お仕事自体を断るのではなく、そちらのもっとも都合の良い締切期限の教えてください。こちらでクライアントと何とか確認を取りますから。

元の翻訳
Let me ask again.
Sometimes website can't be displayed displaying error message below

Are there any other users who have such an problem of error display?
This doesn't often happen so I don't think this is because of the error on setting of the database .
(I'm wondering it is because of the error on the setting of ABC.)

Is it because of the CSS's setting that I can't drag and drop the image of the page below
(I am not sure I will be able to customize by myself)

I belong to the very popular group, so I was left out of the selection.

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Let me ask again.
Sometimes the website can't be displayed with the below error message.

Are there any other users who have encountered errors like this?
This doesn't happen often so I don't think this is because of the error on setting of the database .
(I'm wondering if it is because of an error on the setting of ABC.)

Is it because of the CSS setting that I can't drag and drop the image of the page below
(I am not sure I will be able to customize by myself)

I belong to a very popular group, but I was left out of the selection.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。リールはすぐ受け取れました、ありがとう。
リールを調べて、状態が良いのを確認しましたが、ハンドル組立体の下に金属の削りくずがあるのを見つけました。（添付の写真を見てください。）
これはそこにあるべきものではなく、何か欠陥があることを示すのでは。
またthe # 12 スペーサー が欠品しています（添付のリールダイアグラムの写真を見てください）し、ハンドルがそのせいでぐらついて安定してません。
私の古いリールのスペーサーで直しているところです。
もし直せなければ返品して返金を請求する必要があります。よろしく。

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こんにちは。リールはすぐ受け取れました、ありがとう。
状態が良いことを確認するためにリールを調べましたが、ハンドル組立体の下に金属の削りくずがあるのを見つけました。（添付の写真を見てください。）
これはそこにあるべきものではなく、何か欠陥があることを示すのでは。
またthe # 12 スペーサー が欠品しています（添付のリールダイアグラムの写真を見てください）し、ハンドルがそのせいでぐらついて安定してません。
私の古いリールのスペーサーで直しているところです。
もし直せなければ返品して返金を請求する必要があります。よろしく。

元の翻訳
商品を受け取れません
お客様商品コードは１０字必要です。

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商品を受け取ることができません。
税関のお客様商品コードは１０文字必要です。

元の翻訳
Visit us to reserve the tickets! on the first come first served basis
ticket pia ：http://ticket-search.pia.jp/pia/search_all.do?kw=URATA%20NAOYA
yahooticket：https://y-tickets.jp/urtny14-ip2

【Date・Venue】
11月10日(Mon) Sendai Rensa Open18:30 /Start19:00
■Ticket Handling GIP TEL:022-222-9999

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Visit us to reserve the tickets! on the first come first served basis
ticket pia ：http://ticket-search.pia.jp/pia/search_all.do?kw=URATA%20NAOYA
yahoo ticket：https://y-tickets.jp/urtny14-ip2

【Date・Venue】
Nov. 10th (Mon) Sendai Rensa Open18:30 /Start19:00
■Ticket Handling GIP TEL:022-222-9999

元の翻訳
The customer is considering purchansing IP-PBX and hope to decide after comfirming the two estimates between PBX and IP-PBX.
So for now it is not the change to IP-PBX.
He want to have IP-PBX's estimate to comapare each other.

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The customer is considering purchansing [spelling] the IP-PBX and hope [s-v agreement] to decide after comfirming [spelling] the two estimates between the PBX and the IP-PBX.
So for now it [unclear] is not the change to the IP-PBX.
He want [s-v agreement] to have the IP-PBX's estimate to comapare [spelling] each other.

元の翻訳
The customer is considering purchansing IP-PBX and hope to decide after comfirming the two estimates between PBX and IP-PBX.
So for now it is not the change to IP-PBX.
He want to have IP-PBX's estimate to comapare each other.

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The customer is considering purchansing IP-PBX, and hope to decide after comfirming the estimate of IP-PBX for making the final decision between PBX and IP-PBX.
So at this stage it is not changing to IP-PBX.
He is requesting for IP-PBX's estimate for products comparison and investigation.

元の翻訳
Recently I can't upload photos by using the e-mail address for twitter.
I can upload on Flicker, but can't still upload on twitter.
I want to know when this problem will be fixed.

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Recently I can't upload photos by using the e-mail address for twitter.
I can upload on Flicker, but can't post on twitter.
I want to know when this problem will be fixed.

元の翻訳
このことについて直接そして建設的に話すことが重要だと私は思います。
彼が不快に思っていることあなたに伝えていることが重要であり、それによってあなたたちは今後同じミスをすることを避けることが出来ます。

この議論に対して私はそんなに役に立てませんので、Ryoとわたしはあなた方が私抜きで合うことに賛成しています。けれどお願いしたいのですが、会議の議事録を記載して欲しいのです、そうすればわたしはあなた方が何を話し、どんな問題を見いだし、それらを解決するためのあなた方の考え（アイディア）を知ることが出来ます。（Ryo,私はこれはあなたの仕事だと思います）

Ryoが会議をアレンジするために連絡します。
私に決まった日時を教えてください、私は会議に参加する必要は無いけれども、情報を知っておきたいので。

Ryo

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このことについて直接そして建設的に話すことが重要だと私は思います。
彼が不快に思っていることをあなたに伝えていることが重要で、それによってあなた方は今後同じミスをすることを避けることが出来ます。

この議論に対して私はそんなにお役に立てませんので、Ryoと私はあなた方が私抜きで会うことに賛成しています。けれどお願いしたいのですが、会議の議事録を作成して欲しいのです、そうすればわたしはあなた方が何を話し、どんな問題を見いだし、それらを解決するためのあなた方の考え（アイディア）を知ることが出来ます。（Ryo,私はこれはあなたの仕事だと思います）

Ryoが会議を手配するためにご連絡さしあげます。
私には決まった日時を教えてください、私は会議に参加する必要はありませんが、情報を知っておきたいので。

Ryo

元の翻訳
Next, we want to ask about the defective item.
I uploaded the video of the defective item on YOUTUBE before.
After that, the sales rose and more defective items were found.
We have sold the products you sent to me in unchanged condition until this Aug.
But since Aug, we inspect all of them.
In addition, when we find the defective items, we are doing trouble-shooting operation to sell them as good items.

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Next, we want to ask about the defective items.
I uploaded the video of the defective item on YOUTUBE before.
After that, the sales rose and more defective items were found.
We had sold the products you sent to me without reparing until Aug of this year.
But since Aug, we inspect all of them.
In addition, when we find the defective items, we are doing trouble-shooting operation to sell them as good items.

元の翻訳
It is very beatiful and impressive.
It is conveniently located near Sapporo,too.
I recommend you should go on the first day of your arrival in Sapporo.

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It is very beautiful and impressive.
One of the great things is that the great accessibility since It is conveniently located near Sapporo.
I recommend you visiting the place on the first day of your arrival in Sapporo.

元の翻訳
Please cover the postage to send the new body there.
I thought that should be.
In addition, the postage from Japan to China is about 100$.
I even think that postage should be also covered by you.
I'll be waiting for your reply during the morning today.
Because we need to tell our customer the tracking number.

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Please cover the postage to send the new body there.
I think it's a legitimate claim.
In addition, the postage from Japan to China is about 100$.
I even think that postage should be also covered by you.
I'll be waiting for your reply during the morning today.
Because we need to tell our customer the tracking number.

元の翻訳
I'm very sorry, but we can't accept your suggestion.
The item is kept by our customer now, so it is impossible to repair it.
We cannot keep our customer waiting anymore, please send us the new body without delay.
If you haven't contacted us about the shipment by tomorrow morning, we'II demand a refund tomorrow afternoon.
We'll send the defective product back to you, please repair it on your side.

As you haven't contacted us about the shipment, we demand a refund.

Does ebay allow you such a way to handle problems?

Last time, we got a defective product.
Please be sure to send items after inspection work this time.

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I'm very sorry, but we can't accept your suggestion.
The item is with our customer now, so it is impossible to repair it.
We cannot keep our customer waiting anymore, so please send us the new body without delay.
If you haven't contacted us about the shipment by tomorrow morning, we'II demand a refund tomorrow afternoon.
We'll send the defective product back to you, so please have it repaired.

As you haven't contacted us about the shipment, we demand a refund.

Does eBay allow you to handle problems in such a way?

Last time, we received a defective product.
Please be sure to send items after inspection.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message. Now your item is being stored.
Please ask the post office and receive your item.
I'll contact the post office ,too.

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Thank you for your message. Now your item is being stored.
Please ask the post office and receive your item.
I'll contact the post office, too.