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元の翻訳
We are planning to build our web store of the domestic specialized in March at the moment. We are going to begin the selling xx there. We would like to purchase xx 10 items and yy 2 items. Could you tell us how to pay? Also we are going to sell not only in Japan but also in overseas countries in our stores that we are proud of only the proceeds from the music instruments category of OO yen by ebay for a year. Could you tell us it is possible? We look forward to hearing from you.

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We are planning to build our web store of the domestic specialized in March at the moment. We are going to begin the selling xx there. We would like to purchase xx 10 items and yy 2 items. Could you tell us how to pay? Also we are going to sell not only in Japan but also in overseas countries in our stores that we are proud of only the proceeds from the music instruments category of OO yen by ebay for a year. Could you tell us if it is possible? We look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
If possible, can we set the price higher than MAPprice the same as the sales domestically? We are a small company. However, we would like to maintain great relationship with you and we would like to grow together.

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If possible, can we set the price higher than MAPprice the same as the sales domestically? We are a small company. However, we would like to maintain a great relationship with you and we would like to grow together.

元の翻訳
As for ④, I created the second account in order to maintain second hand items and brand new items.

■ Issues
As for the above issues, ①～③, we have learned and checked 262 issues one by one.
All AtZ negative reviews are because of the cancellations by the seller.
I have sent all customers emails of our apologies with the reasons by explaining the cancellations and our commitments to prevent such an issue in the future from the bottom of my heart.

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As for ④, I created the second account in order to maintain second hand items and brand new items separately.

■ Issues
As for the above issues, ①～③, we have learned and checked 262 issues one by one.
All AtoZ negative reviews are because of the cancellations by the seller.
I have sent all customers emails of our apologies with the reasons by explaining the cancellations and our commitments to prevent such an issue in the future from the bottom of my heart.

元の翻訳
This is regarding the case that an item has been returned from you company from the U.S. to our company because the US custom didn't approve it.

We have requested to send it to our address in Japan the other day, however, we would like to cancel the items which have been returned this time.

A reason is that it has taken for a long time to receive it and the amount is large so it is difficult of us to handle at this time.

As soon as you receive the items and confirmed returned items, please refund us all as soon as possible.

We will take care of the shipping cost to the U.S. So please deduct it from the total refunded amount and refund it. Thank you.

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This is regarding the case that an item has been returned from you company from the U.S. to our company because the US custom didn't approve it.

We have requested to send it to our address in Japan the other day, however, we would like to cancel the items which have been returned this time.

A reason is that it has taken for a long time to receive it and the amount is large so it is difficult of us to handle at this time.

As soon as you receive and confirm returned items, please refund us all as soon as possible.

We will take care of the shipping cost to the U.S. So please deduct it from the total amount and refund it. Thank you.

元の翻訳
#niblic
I would like to ask you a question about the item. I have a question about +seal inscribed around the serial number. I would like confirmed that the item inscribed is finished the coefficient of restitution test (rule compatibility), the item without being inscribed is HOT head (rule non-compatibility). By the way, I would like to know whether the head which was finished the coefficient of restitution test (rule compatibility) without +seal is on the market or not. As I am thinking about the purchase, I really appreciate your prompt reply. I look forward to hearing from you.

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#niblic
I would like to ask you a question about the item. I have a question about +seal inscribed around the serial number. I would like it to be confirmed that the item inscribed is finished the coefficient of restitution test (rule compatibility), the item without being inscribed is HOT head (rule non-compatibility). By the way, I would like to know whether the head which was finished the coefficient of restitution test (rule compatibility) without +seal is on the market or not. As I am thinking about the purchase, I really appreciate your prompt reply. I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I am sorry but because the credit card you used to order at first cannot be used, please order with another card (debit card), I apologise for your any inconvenience.
If we can see the settlement from you by 10th Feburuary at 19:00 (at Japanese time), it is possible to send out to you during 10th Feburuary.
EMS's number of days seems to be for about 4 days.
I am sorry but I cannot promise to send it to you by 14th Feburuary. Thank you for your time and understanding.

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I am sorry but because the credit card you used to order at first cannot be used, please order with another card (debit card), I apologise for your any inconvenience.
If we can confirm the settlement from you by 10th Feburuary at 19:00 (at Japanese time), it is possible to send out to you during 10th Feburuary.
The EMS normally takes about 4 days.
I am sorry but I cannot promise to send it to you by 14th Feburuary. Thank you for your time and understanding.

元の翻訳
I'm afraid that the card you used when you first ordered seems to be invalid, so please place an order again with other card (or debit card). I apologize for the inconvenience.
If the transaction is confirmed by 7pm on February 10th (Japan time), we'll be able to send out on February 10th.
EMS seems to take about 4 days to deliver. This is an estimate and unfortunately we won't be able to promise to deliver by February 14th.
We regret it but would appreciate your understanding.

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I'm afraid that the card you used when you first ordered seems to be invalid, so please place an order again with other card (or debit card). I apologize for the inconvenience.
If the transaction is confirmed by 7pm on February 10th (Japan time), we'll be able to send out on February 10th.
EMS seems to take about 4 days to deliver. This is an estimate and unfortunately we won't be able to promise to deliver by February 14th.
We regret it but would appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
The server recently seems not working well, and I won't be able to send or receive messages at times.
I get second thoughts about sending messages properly, so I send you a message again with read receipt.
I apologize for sending same messages repeatedly.

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The server recently seems not working well, and I won't be able to send or receive messages sometimes.
I get second thoughts about sending the message properly, so I send you a message again with read receipt.
I apologize for sending the same message repeatedly.

元の翻訳
Recently the condition of the e-mail server is not good, and sometimes I can neither send nor receive the e-mail.

As I am not sure if the e-mail is sent appropriately, I will send it again by setting the confirmation of opening the e-mail.
I apologize that I have sent the same e-mail repeatedly.

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Recently the condition of the e-mail server is not good, and sometimes I can neither send nor receive e-mails.

As I am not sure if the e-mail is sent appropriately, I will send it again by setting the confirmation of opening the e-mail.
I apologize that I have sent the same e-mail repeatedly.

元の翻訳
I have reported the matter to the person in charge of Japan Post on January 24. I also reported that you had already submitted a damage report to Post Office in Holland and that the number was **.
I requested to Japan Post to urge the procedure, as I want to resolve the problem as soon as possible.
However, they asked me to wait a little while as the matter is being processed.
We are sorry to cause you trouble. I beg for your patience.

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I have reported the matter to the person in charge of Japan Post on January 24. I also reported that you had already submitted a damage report to Post Office in Holland and that the number was **.
I requested to Japan Post to hurry up the procedure, as I want to resolve the problem as soon as possible.
However, they asked me to wait a little while as the matter is being processed.
We are sorry to cause you trouble. I beg for your patience.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
While we enter the tracking number on the website of Postal Annex and search the item, only "Tracking Number: LN213104614US" is displayed" is displayed on the screen and we can not track the item.
We are sorry, but could you please ask directly to the customer service of the delivery company?
Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for contacting us.
While we enter the tracking number on the website of Postal Annex and search the item, only "Tracking Number: LN213104614US" is displayed on the screen and we can not track the item.
We are sorry, but could you please ask directly to the customer service of the delivery company?
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Sorry, maybe that's because I didn't explain enough that you didn't understand.
I only need 3 kinds of 000: 0,1 and 2.
Then the only one that needs to be made all black is 2.
Since only the screws and the clips on 2 are silver, you only need to paint those in black.
0 and 1 are fine as they are.

If the order quantity is at least 300 pieces, then that would be 900 pieces in all as there are 3 kinds.
It might be a little more.

Please tell me how much time and how much would it cost to make those 3 kinds.
00 is not outsourced but I had it purchased, so the ratio of wholesale price to retail price is not good.

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Sorry, maybe that's because I didn't explain enough and you didn't understand.
I only need 3 kinds of 00 to sell: 0,1 and 2.
Then the only one needed to be made all black is 2.
Since only the screws and the clips on 2 are silver, you only need to paint those in black.
0 and 1 are fine as they are.

If the order quantity is at least 300 pieces, then that would be 900 pieces in all as there are 3 kinds.
It might be a little more.

Please tell me how much time and how much it would cost to make those 3 kinds.
00 is not outsourced but I had it purchased, so the ratio of wholesale price to retail price is not good.

元の翻訳
Japanese are peculiar about details but if you can clear those requests then it will become a good product that can sell in the whole world.

I have attached pictures of the current box and the design for the new box.
It is hard to see on the picture but on there is glue and scratches on the box and that's why the 4 corners are a bit white.
The new box designs are both paper boxes. The small one has a carbon style so I think it is perfect for KK. Besides, for the inside, paper looking like black velvet is pasted.
If I order the regular product now, when will I receive it?

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Japanese are peculiar about details but if you can clear those requests then it will become a good product that can sell in the whole world.

I have attached pictures of the current box and the design for the new box.
It is hard to see on the picture but there is glue and scratches on the box and that's why the 4 corners are a bit white.
The new box designs are both paper boxes. The small one has a carbon style so I think it is perfect for KK. Besides, for the inside, paper looking like black velvet is pasted.
If I order the regular product now, when will I receive it?

元の翻訳
A also told us that he want to have a meeting with you, so please set up it.

The dates Oage have time for meeting are below.

Monday 2, March from 11:00 to 12:00
Tuesday 3, March from 15:15 to 16:00

Let us know which date we should arrange and your member's name who join it.
We would like to know our group member's name you are approaching ccurrently.

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A also told us that he want to have a meeting with you, so please set it up.

The dates Oage have time for meeting are below.

Monday 2, March from 11:00 to 12:00
Tuesday 3, March from 15:15 to 16:00

Let us know which date we should arrange and your member's name who will join it.
We would like to know our group member's name you are approaching ccurrently.

元の翻訳
As A would like to talk with your company, would you give us an opportunity to talk with us?

Onoue can talk with you in the following time.

March 2nd (Monday) 11:00 to 12:00
March 3rd (Tuesday) 15:15 to 16:00

Please let us know which day we are going to adjust, and who is going to
participate in the meeting from your company.

May we ask you to tell us the members of our group that you are approaching?

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As A would like to talk with your company, would you give us an opportunity to talk with us?

Onoue can talk with you in the following time.

March 2nd (Monday) 11:00 to 12:00
March 3rd (Tuesday) 15:15 to 16:00

Please let us know which day we should adjust, and who is going to
participate in the meeting from your company.

May we ask you to tell us the members of our group that you are approaching?

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply as I had inquired the detail to the maker.
The detail of the item you inquired is as below.
Thank you for your consideration.

Name: AA
ASIN: BB

Inside of the hood is yellow like the picture.
Size: Free (Unisex)
Body height: 165 - 175cm
Chest measurement: 88 - 96cm
* The size of the body height and the chest measurement are approximate.

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Sorry for the late reply as I had inquired the detail to the manufacturer.
The detail of the item you inquired is as below.
Thank you for your consideration.

Name: AA
ASIN: BB

Inside of the hood is yellow like the picture.
Size: Free (Unisex)
Body height: 165 - 175cm
Chest measurement: 88 - 96cm
* The size of the body height and the chest measurement are approximate.

元の翻訳
Please contact us for more information by e-mail.

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Please contact us for more information by an e-mail.

元の翻訳
Please email us for more details, thank you.

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Please email us an email for more details, hank you.

元の翻訳
For more information, please contact us by e-mail.

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For more information, please contact us by an e-mail.

元の翻訳
Mr. A has contacted Mr. Tanaka, the CTO of B company, for requesting a meeting at an event in March, as attached document.

Were you aware of this exchange?

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Mr. A has contacted Mr. Tanaka, the CTO of B company, for requesting a meeting at an event in March, as an attached document.

Were you aware of this exchange?

元の翻訳
We would like you to introduce what is your team doing except design of  websites and emails in next meeting.
For example, banner advertisements, novelty items, printed materials, etc.

If you have any sample please let us see.

It is helpful for us to know what products other country teams are making and we can get a new source of inspirations.

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We would like you to introduce what your team is doing besides designs of  websites and emails in the next meeting.
For example, banner advertisements, novelty items, printed materials, etc.

If you have any sample please let us see.

It is helpful for us to know what products teams in other countries are making and we can get a new source of references and new inspirations.