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I am terribly sorry that I caused you to worry about sending the item.
It is going to be sent today on schedule.
It will arrive in 3~5 days if there is not a problem like a delay of customs procedures.

It is wrapped by thin paper and keep newness as the attached image.
When we inspect, there is no damage also on the box.
We pack it by bubble wrap and cardboard then send.
If this arrives with damage, you need to claim insurance to USPS.
But if there is a problem without this, for example, an initial failure on figure,
we will refund besides the product return.↵
You needn't have any anxiety on that score.

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I am terribly sorry that I caused you to worry about sending the item.
It is going to be sent today on schedule.
It will arrive in 3~5 days if there is not a problem like a delay in customs procedures.

It is wrapped by a thin paper and kept as we received from the manufacturer as you see in the attached image.
When we inspected, there is no damage either on the box.
We will pack it by bubble wrap and cardboard then send it.
If this arrives with damage, you need to claim insurance to USPS.
But if there is a problem, for example, an initial failure on the figure,
we will refund after you return the product, so please do not worry about it.

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I am very sorry to make you worry about the shipping of the product.
The product will be delivered as scheduled to Japan.
If there are no problems or delays with customs, then it will normally be delivered by 3-5 days.

As seen in the attached image, the product was shipped as when it was shipped by the manufacturer and wrapped with a thin sheet of paper.
And there are also no damages on the box when we inspected the product.
This has been packaged and delivered with aircap and cardboard.
If this gets damaged when it reaches you, then there is a need to request for an insurance claim with USPS. But for other problems such as initial defects on the figure, please rest assured that I will issue you a refund after you return the product.

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I am very sorry to make you worry about the shipping of the product.
The product will be dispatched to Japan as scheduled.
If there are no problems or delays with customs, then it will normally be delivered in 3-5 days.

As seen in the attached image, the product will be shipped as it was shipped by the manufacturer and wrapped with a thin sheet of paper.
And there were also no damages on the box when we inspected the product.
This has been packaged and delivered with aircap and cardboard.
If this gets damaged when it reaches you, then there is a need to request an insurance claim to USPS. But for other problems such as initial defects on the figure, please do not worry as I will issue you a refund after you return the product.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
All the products in our store is sold through PDF data download.
You can place order from anywhere in the world.
You can use PayPal or credit card to settle your payment.
(Bank payment is only limited within Japan)
We sincerely look forward to your visit next time.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
All the products in our store is sold as PDF data downloads.
You can place an order from anywhere in the world.
You can use PayPal or credit card to settle your payment.
(Bank payment is only available within Japan)
We sincerely look forward to your visit next time.

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Thanks for your mail.
We offer our product by PDF data and you can download it any time and every where. Also can use PayPal and credit card. (Pay for bank is Japan only)
We are looking forward to your visit next time.

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Thanks for your mail.
We offer our product by PDF data and you can download it any time and every where in the world. Also you can use PayPal and credit card or payment. (Bank transfer is only available in Japan.)
We are looking forward to your visit next time.

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Thank you for the inquiry.
All commodities on our shop is on sale by downloading PDF data.
It is available all over the world.
The ways of paying are PayPal or credit card.
(payment by bank is available only in Japan.)
Please come again.

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Thank you for the inquiry.
All commodities of our shop is on sale by downloading PDF datas.
It is available to all over the world.
The ways of payment are PayPal or credit card.
(payment by bank is available only in Japan.)
Please visit our shop again.

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Thank you for your email. Finally made it on time for the board meeting.

The following are the comments from the meeting:

• An exclusive native staff with management training experiences is needed for the introduction of A. However, it considers to be difficult from the current human resources situation.
• B can be started very soon. C is very comprehensive.

With the above comments, our company would like to have some discussions about the corporate partnership and human resources so please give us some time.
For B, is it able to start with localization first?

For all the communications from now on, would it be better for us to do with your colleagues from the sales department?

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Thank you for your email. ↵
I made it in time just before the board meeting.

The followings are the comments from the meeting:

• An dedicated native staff is essential and management training experiences is needed for the introduction of A. However, it considers to be difficult from the current human resources situation.
• B can be started very soon. C is very comprehensive.

With the above comments, our company would like to have some discussions about the corporate partnership and human resources so please give us some time.
For B, is it able to start with localization first?

For all the communications from now on, would it be better for us to do with your colleagues from the sales department?

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Thanks for your letter. We caught the last moment of the board meeting,

We got some opinions for the next meeting.
・To introduce A in, professional management is necessary. It's difficult to only depend on the man source now.
・Quickly start with B seems possible.
・C is easy to understand.
In regard to this, we would discuss with the partner company and talents in our company. Please wait for our reply.
If there's only B, is it possible to localize in advance?

Will we contact with the sales in your company for further coordination?

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Thanks for your letter. We caught the last moment of the board meeting,

We got some opinions for the meeting.
・To introduce A in, a native speaker is essential and an experienced one who have an experience in teaching the professional management is necessary. It's difficult to find from our staffs at this moment.
・B can be started soon.
・C is easy to understand.
In regard to this, we would discuss the partner company and talents in our company. Please wait for a while.
In regards to B, do we need localize in the beginning?

Should we contact the person in charge of the sales in your company for further coordination?

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Thank you for your e-mail. I was just in time for the board meeting.

We had the following opinions in the meeting.
For introduction of A, we need a special native speaker and those who
have an experience in the management training. It is difficult to find these
kinds of people among the staff we have now.
We will be able to start B soon and C is easy to understand.

As we are going to discuss a partner company and the personnel based on these opinions, may we have a little more time?
May we localize only the B first?
Is it more appropriate for us to negotiate with a person in charge of the sales in your company hereafter?

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Thank you for your e-mail. I was just in time for the board meeting.

We had the following opinions in the meeting.
In regards to the introduction of A, we need a dedicated native speaker and those who
have experiences in the management training. It is difficult to find those
kinds of people among the staff we have now.
We will be able to start B soon and C is easy to understand.

As we are going to discuss a partner company and a personnel based on these opinions, may we have a little more time?
May we localize only the B first?
Is it more appropriate for us to negotiate with a person in charge of the sales in your company hereafter?

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for contacting us.

「*****」

Interpreting above English sentence was difficult for us so we could not really understand what you meant.
I am sending the picture of the measurement so hopefully the measurement you were asking about is in the picture....

Please let us know about it.

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Thank you very much for contacting us.

「*****」

To understand the English sentence above was difficult for us so we could not really understand where you meant.
I am sending the picture of the measurement so hopefully the measurement you were asking about is in the picture....

Please let us know about it.

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I agree with you absolutely.
What do you think about it, xx?
Almost people around me think the old logo good.
Is it possible to offer to make the old logo for Japan in the future?

Considering the development for WW in Japan's market from now on, this matter may be difficult to hope. But I do want to make it come true. Because I really think that WW is easy to spread to Japan if the products are placed here.

I have decided to set up a booth at the biggest DESIGN TOKYO scheduled on July this year in Tokyo.

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I agree with you absolutely.
What do you think about it, xx?
Many people around me think the old logo is good.
Is it possible to offer you to make the old logo for Japan in the future?

Considering the development for WW in Japan's market from now on, this matter may be difficult to ask you. But I do want to make it comes true. Because I really think that WW is easy to spread to Japan if the products are placed here.

I have decided to set up a booth at the biggest exibition called DESIGN TOKYO scheduled on July this year in Tokyo.

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I completely agree with you.
What is your idea, Mr. XX?
There are so many people around me who like the old logo.
Is it possible to take this offer that you create the old logo for Japan version in the future?

When I think about the WW's direction in the Japanese market, I would like to make it come true even though this offer might be tough. Because if they can handle our product, it would easier to promote WW in Japan so please consider about this offer.

We have already decided to have the exhibition at the DESIGN TOKYO, which is held in July in Tokyo and is one of the biggest exhibition in Japan.

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I completely agree with you.
What is your idea, Mr. XX?
There are so many people around me who like the old logo.
Is it possible to take this offer that you create the old logo for Japan version in the future?

When I think about the WW's direction in the Japanese market, I would like to make it comes true even though this offer might be tough. Because if they can handle our product, it would easier to promote WW in Japan so please consider about this offer.

We have already decided to have the exhibition at the DESIGN TOKYO, which is held in July in Tokyo and is one of the biggest exhibition in Japan.

元の翻訳
I have big news.
In fact, I had the sales conversation with 00 today and they said that they can sell our product as long as we can clear the certain condition.
00 is the top of the select shop in US and very famous store so I think Mr. XX knows it.
I am very surprised but as the condition, they like old type logo design and they would like us to add 00 logo at the top left. Plus, they want to change the aluminum black version into clip and screw. That is it. Do you think it is possible?
For the name insertion of 00, is WW logo printed? or is it shaved?

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I have big news.
That is, I had the sales conversation with 00 today and they said that they can sell our product if we can satisfy the certain condition.
00 is the top of the select shop in US and a very famous store, so I think Mr. XX knows it.
I am very surprised but as the condition, they the like old type logo design and they would like us to add the 00 logo at the top on the left. Plus, they want to change a clip and a screw of the aluminum black version into black. That is it. Do you think it is possible?
For the name insertion of 00, is WW logo printed? or is it shaved?

元の翻訳
We have a reason why it took a little time to reply you.
When we were making a final checkup before sending xx that you had ordered, we found a problem.
The truss rod was broken when we were adjusting the neck.
We received it as "USED", but it was repaired to make the broken one appear the perfect one before we received it, and it was broken when we were adjusting this time.
We hate to say, but we cannot sell this guitar to you this time. We apologize to you.
We are very sorry to have caused you an inconvenience. We hope that you understand the situation above.

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We have a reason why it took some time to reply you.
When we were making a final checkup before sending xx that you had ordered, we found a problem.
The truss rod was broken when we were adjusting the neck.
We received it as "USED", but it was repaired to make the broken one appears to be the perfect one before we received it, and it was broken when we were adjusting this time.
We hate to say, but we cannot sell this guitar to you this time. We apologize to you.
We are very sorry to have caused you an inconvenience. We hope that you understand the situation above.

元の翻訳
It take a while for me to reply because when I final check the order made before it has been despatched, I had a problem during adjusting the neck, the truss rod has been broken.
Our store get the stock from USED, it seems to be they will try to fix the item once be broken and during the adjustment this time, they accidentally break the product.
We are truly sorry, we are unable to sell this guitar this time. Sorry for the inconvenience made, we appreciate your understanding about the situation.

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It took a while for me to reply because when I finally checked the order before dispatch, I had a problem while adjusting the neck and the truss rod got broken.
Our store got it as USED, and it seems that they tried to fix the broken item temporarily. During my adjustment this time, it got broken.
We are truly sorry, we are unable to sell this guitar this time to you. Sorry for the inconvenience made. We appreciate your understanding about the situation.

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The lens itself has indeed been received, however the lens hood and filter have not been returned, and the cap for the front and back differs from what was originally attached. In addition, the front cap that was returned is 49mm, which is the wrong size, and is not manufactured by Nikon. Can you explain what is going on here? Please return the parts that were originally included. I am very perplexed by this. A refund will be arranged once the return of the correct goods has been confirmed.

If the negative feedback can be changed to positive feedback, I will arrange the refund.

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The lens itself has indeed been received, however the lens hood and filter have not been returned, and the cap for the front and back differs from what was originally attached. In addition, the front cap that was returned is 49mm, which is the wrong size, and is not manufactured by Nikon. Can you explain what is going on here? Please return the parts that were originally included. I am very perplexed by this. A refund will be arranged once the return of the correct goods has been confirmed.

If the negative feedback can be changed to a positive feedback, I will arrange the refund.

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I received the lens, but the hood and filter have not been returned yet. The front cap and the back cap are not the ones that had been attached originally. What is worse is that the front cap that was returned is 49 millimeters, which means that it is not a correct size and it is not manufactured by Nikon, either.
Why did it happen? Could you return the accessory that had been attached originally?
I am in an inconvenience. I will refund you after checking the returned item.

I will refund you if you change the low rating to higher one.

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I received the lens, but the hood and filter have not been returned yet. The front cap and the back cap are not the ones that had been attached originally. What is worse is that the front cap that was returned is 49 millimeters, which means that it is not a correct size and it is not manufactured by Nikon, either.
Why did it happen? Could you return the accessories that had been attached originally?
I am in an inconvenience. I will refund you after everything returned.

I will refund you if you change the negative feedback to the positive one.

元の翻訳
This item is able to play on only Japanese player because it is made in Japan and has only Japanese region code. Can we ship your order? Do you want to cancel your order?
We have had new items in stock now. We send your order right away. Please wait until it will be delivered to your place.

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This item is able to be played on only a Japanese player because it is made in Japan with a different region code. Can we ship your order? Do you want to cancel your order?
We have had new items in stock now. We will send your order right away. Please wait until it will be delivered to your place.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact for us.

This is a URL which you can see our products.
URL

We don't have much products but we would like to collect the Casio watch.
If you are considering to purchase one of those, please feel free to contact us.

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Thank you for your contact for us.

This is the URL which you can see all of our products.
URL

We don't have many products but we would like to stock mainly the Casio watches again.
If you are considering to purchase one you like, please feel free to contact us.

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I would like to check regarding delivery.
I have not received the bath mat that I ordered in the beginning of this month
in Japan yet.
I listed the day when I made an order and a list of items that have↵
not arrived in Japan.

The following items arrived in Japan on January 27th.

A large size color: I heard that the ivory is the back order.
Are other sizes and the colors also the back order?
If you had already sent, could you tell me the tracking number of the items
that I ordered on January 6ht, 9th and 13th?
I will also contact a delivery company that receives the items all the time.

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I would like to check the delivery status.
I have not received the bath mat that I ordered in the beginning of this month
in Japan yet.
Below is the list of dates I ordered and items that I ordered and I have not received.

The following items arrived in Japan on January 27th.

A large size color: I heard that the ivory is the back order.
Are other sizes and the colors also the back order?
If you had already sent them, could you tell me the tracking number of the items
that I ordered on January 6th, 9th and 13th?
I will also contact a delivery company that receives the items all the time in New Jersey.

元の翻訳

It is a coincidence. I had also sick leave until yesterday because of cold. Please dispatch item A at your earliest convenience.
My name is Yamada. I made reservation for the accommodation from 28 January to 3 February.
I will stay at your hotel with my wife for honey moon.
Looking forward very much to Hawaii after seven years from my last visit.
We are scheduled to arrive at Oahu airport at 10 and likely to checking in by 11.
Is it possible to check in early?
If not, could you please take care of our luggage by the time of checking in?

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It is a coincidence. I had also sick leave until yesterday because of cold. Please dispatch the item A at your earliest convenience.
My name is Yamada. I made a reservation for the accommodation from January 28 to February 3.
I will stay at your hotel with my wife for honey moon.
Looking forward very much to Hawaii after seven years from my last visit.
We are scheduled to arrive at Oahu airport at 10am and likely to arrive your hotel by 11am.
Is it possible to check in early?
If not, could you please keep our luggage by the time of checking in?

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What a coincidence! I had been also absent from the work until yesterday due to the influenze.
Would you please send A as soon as possible?


My name is Yamada who made a reservation from January 28th to February 3rd.
I am going to stay at your hotel with my wife on our honeymoon.
I am very excited since this is my first trip to Hawaii in 7 years.
We will arrive at Oahu Airport at 10 o'clock in the morning,
and will be at your hotel a little after 11 o'clock.
May we check in earlier than the regular checking hour?
If it is impossible, may we leave our personal belongings ↵
at the front desk?

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What a coincidence! I had been also absent from the work until yesterday due to the influenze.
Would you please send A as soon as possible?


My name is Yamada who made a reservation from January 28th to February 3rd.
I am going to stay at your hotel with my wife on our honeymoon.
I am very excited since I have not come to Hawaii for 7 years.
We will arrive at Oahu Airport at 10 o'clock in the morning,
and will be at your hotel a little after 11 o'clock.
May we check in earlier than the regular check-in time?
If it is impossible, may we leave our luggage at the front desk?

元の翻訳
Did you pay individually as a guest without using warrantee amount for your accommodation?
Was the only change Koizumi was not staying at the hotel?
If there is any extended stay, please let us know.
We have received an invoice for 44 breakfast tickets. But we confirmed that it was 44 breakfast tickets.
We would like to check the number of breakfast tickets so please send us the detailed statement for the accommodation.
(The name of guests, number of stay, anything else indicates the amounts)

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Did you pay individually as a guest without using warrantee amount for your accommodation?
Was the only change Koizumi who did not stay at the hotel?
If you would like to extend your stay, please let us know.
We have received an invoice for 44 breakfast tickets. But we confirmed that it was 44 breakfast tickets.
We would like to check the number of breakfast tickets so please send us the detailed statement for the accommodation.
(The name of guests, number of stay, anything else indicates the amounts)

元の翻訳
We enjoyed Holland to the fullest!
It was not that far from Amsterdam, and we could experience the true Holland. In Zaanse Schans, we saw the windmills and tasted and bought cheese. Volendam and Marken are both fishers' villages where cute houses line up along the streets. In Volendam we ate the local specialty of fried cod, and in Marken we watched how craftsmen make clogs. We crossed over from Volendam to Marken by boat, and this was already included in the price, which made this a very good tour.

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We enjoyed Holland a lot!
It was not that far from Amsterdam, and we could experience the true Holland. In Zaanse Schans, we saw the windmills and tasted and bought cheese. Volendam and Marken are both fishers' villages where cute houses line up along the streets. In Volendam we ate the local specialty of fried cod, and in Marken we watched how craftsmen make clogs. We crossed over from Volendam to Marken by boat, and this was already included in the price, which made this a very good tour.

元の翻訳
今月の最近の評価において、あなたのアカウントがトップランクに至るには少々要件に満たなかったということをお知らせいたしております。

トップランクになることの利益がとても重要であることは承知しておりますので、貴方の地位をできる限り早く奪回するお手伝いをしたいと思っております。今ひとつ、貴方の販売者ダッシュボードのチェックをお願いいたします。どちらの分野に特に注意が必要かが分かると思いますし、それによってトップランクに戻るための近道がすぐに見つかるでしょう。

お客様に素晴らしいサービスを提供するのための貴方の努力を知っております。あなたはeBayコミュニティーの大切な一員ですので、すぐにでもトップランクセラーに返り咲いてくださいますのを楽しみにいたしております。

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最近の月間評価において、あなたのアカウントがトップランクに至るには少々要件に満たなかったということをお知らせいたしております。

トップランクになることの利点がとても重要であることは承知しておりますので、貴方の地位をできる限り早く奪回するお手伝いをしたいと思っております。今ひとつ、貴方の販売者ダッシュボードのチェックをお願いいたします。どちらの分野に特に注意が必要かが分かると思いますし、それによってトップランクに戻るための近道がすぐに見つかるでしょう。

お客様に素晴らしいサービスを提供するのための貴方の努力を知っております。あなたはeBayコミュニティーの大切な一員ですので、すぐにでもトップランクセラーに返り咲いてくださいますのを楽しみにいたしております。