Tearz (tearz) — もらったレビュー

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Thank you for your contact.

Our item are sold with PDF data only.
Your purchased item is available for download from the order history (i.e.: FAQ).
We accept payments via PayPal.

Please contact us if any.
Thank you and best regards.

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Thank you for your contact.

Our [store/shop] only sells PDF data.
Your purchased item is available for download from the order history ↵
[refer to the FAQ's] (i.e.: FAQ).
We accept payments via PayPal.

Please contact us if [there is anything else we can do for you].
Thank you and best regards.

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新品と書かれていますが、どれだけ新品なのか、2014年製、またはそれより前の製造年度の新品ということなのかおしえていただけますか？アメリカではもう入手不可能なので、あなたのいらっしゃる国であればまだ製造されているのではないかと思いご連絡しました。

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新商品と書かれていましたが、新しいと言っても、どの程度新しい商品なのか、2014年の新商品なのか、それともより以前［or 2014年より以前］の年の新商品なのかおしえていただけますか？↵
アメリカ［or 米国］ではもう入手不可能なので、あなたの地元ではまだ製造されているものと考えているのですが。

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Thank you for shopping with us.
If you have received this letter, I guess the item was delivered to you without any issues.

I would be glad to hear from you with a feedback, etc.

Did you like the little gift sent from my shop to you?

Your child is very pretty, so I enclosed the Japanese sweets as a special occasion.

If you will be looking for Japanese items, please do let me know.

I sure will find it and let you know.

Hope to have you shopping with us again.

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Thank you for shopping with us.
If you have received this letter, I guess the item was delivered to you without any issues.

I would be glad to hear from you with feedback, etc.

Did you like the little gift sent from my shop to you?

Your child is very pretty, so I enclosed the Japanese sweets as a special [treat].

If you will be looking for Japanese items [in the future], please do let me know.

I will definitely find it for you and let you know.

Hope to have you shopping with us again.

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When a multiple images are uploaded, is there anyway I could set the image file name as alt or title of the image?
Also, it would be great if YouTube movies can be posted.
Please keep this for your reference as it may be just my personal opinion.

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When a multiple images are uploaded, is there any way I could set the image file name as alt or title of the image?
Also, it would be great if YouTube movies could be posted.
Please keep this for your reference as it may be just my personal opinion.↵
[This is only my personal opinion and for your reference only]

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Lastly, send the message of apologies to the buyers. Choose names.

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Lastly, send an apology message to the buyers. Choose the name(s).

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こんにちは、もし可能でしたら2件のPayPal請求書（USD185+2000）を直接私宛（dazzielisa@yahoo.it）に送っていただき、最初の請求書には「中古動作不可スチール腕時計」と明記して、保険対象金額はUSD185分のみとし、出荷用としてUSD185のPayPal決済の書類を同梱していただけますか。パッケージには「動作不可、中古スチール腕時計」と書いてください。私はまじめに配送時に発生しうる全リスクを負います。

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こんにちは、もし可能でしたら2件のPayPal請求書（USD185+2000）を直接私宛（dazzielisa@yahoo.it）に送っていただき、最初の請求書には「中古動作不可スチール腕時計」と明記して、保険対象金額はUSD185分のみとし、出荷用としてUSD185のPayPal決済の書類を同梱していただけますか。パッケージには「動作不可、中古スチール腕時計」と書いてください。私は真剣に買おうと思っていますし、配送時に発生しうる全リスクを負います。

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* When you purchase CDs at the venue on the date of the event, we accept cash only as a payment method. Please know inadvance that others such as credit card cannot be accepted.
* Please be informed in advance that once purchased, your purchase cannot be refunded. A defected item will be accepted for a replacement with another in a good condition.
* A "handshake event participation ticket" will be required for a child of age 3 and up.

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* When you purchase CDs at the venue on the date of the event, we accept cash only as a payment method. Please know in　advance that others such as credit card cannot be accepted.
* Please be informed in advance that once purchased, your purchase cannot be refunded. A defected item will be accepted for a replacement with another in a good condition.
* A "handshake event participation ticket" will be required for a child of age 3 and up.