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元の翻訳
タケダさん、こんにちわ。自動車でいくつもりです。無料の駐車場の情報ありがとうございます。第１館に駐車して、それから家に向かいます。歩いて４時間くらいかかるでしょうか。チェックインしたらあなたにお知らせするつもりです。その家にはヒーターがあるでしょうか？夫がとても気にしています。大変、お世話になります。

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タケダさん、こんにちは。自動車でいくつもりです。無料の駐車場の情報ありがとうございます。まずお城に寄って、それから家に向かいます。We are getting on the road in the next hourの訳漏れです。そちらまで４時間くらいかかるでしょうか。チェックインしたらあなたにお知らせするつもりです。その家にはヒーターがあるでしょうか？夫がとても気にしています。大変、お世話になります。↵

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。貴方は私をだましていました。内側のフォワードレンズの内側には、もやかおそらく菌類がついていました。

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こんにちは。貴方は私をだましていました。フォワードレンズの内側には、もやかおそらくカビがついています。

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。貴方は私をだましていました。内側のフォワードレンズの内側には、もやかおそらく菌類がついていました。

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こんにちは！↵
貴方は私をだましていました。内側のフォワードレンズの内側には、もやか、おそらくはかびがついていました。

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。貴方は私をだましていました。内側のフォワードレンズの内側には、もやかおそらく菌類がついていました。

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こんにちは。貴方は私をだましていました。１枚のフォワードレンズの内側には、もやかおそらく菌類がついていました。

元の翻訳
I will bit. Is it Hemmed up? I'm looking forward to your reply.

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I will bid. Is it hemmed up? I'm looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I will bit. Is it Hemmed up? I'm looking forward to your reply.

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I will bid. Is it hemmed up? I'm looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I will bit. Is it Hemmed up? I'm looking forward to your reply.

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I will bit. Is it hemmed up? I'm looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I have following questions:
1. Why dummy stores I tried to register is not displayed when I search for the dummy stores? I don’t know that reason. Is the reason that the payment has not finished?
2. Which place can I upload pictures of the stores?
3. Can I register stores via the control panel? I would like to register some stores with an administrator right.

The password of the control panel is as follows. You may want to freely modify it because of a demonstration site.

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I have following questions:
1. Why dummy stores I registered is [subject-verb agreement] not displayed when I search for them? I don’t know the reason. Is it because the payment has not been made?
2. Where can I upload pictures of the stores?
3. Can I register stores via the control screen? I would like to register some stores with an administrator right. 。(Paypalなどを通さずに無料で)

The password of the control screen is as follows. You may freely modify it because it's a demonstration site.

元の翻訳
#ill

The other day I ordered "A", but the item I received is "B". Because I will sell the item without change, it would appreciate if you coud give any discount. I ask for kind your consideration.

#fdealsandsteals1

The other day I ordered a quantity of three of "C", but when I check them, one of them has paint peeling at the crown and other one of them has errors of omission of numerical value in a spec sheet. Any items has arrived at my end in dfferent states from that of the item descriptions. I will sell them without change as imperfect product.

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#ill

The other day I ordered "A", but the item I received is "B". Because I will sell the item as is, I would appreciate it if you coud [spelling] give me a discount. I ask for kind your consideration [word order].

#fdealsandsteals1

The other day I ordered three of "C", but when I check them, one of them had paint peeling at the crown and other one of them had numerical values missing in the spec sheet. Any items has arrived [s-v agreement] in dfferent [spelling] states from that [unclear antecedent] of the item descriptions. I will sell them without change as imperfect products.

元の翻訳
I am sorry, but your proposal is not accepted.
The item is in the customer's hand, and it is not possible to repair the item.
Because I cannot have the customer wait, please send the body immediately.
If any notice of shipment is not received during the morning on yesterday, I request a refund in the evening.
I will return the defective product, and then please repair it at your end.

A notice of shipment have not been receive, and then I request a refund.

Such a procedures is admitted by eBay, isn't it?

A defective product was received at a previous time.
You are requested to inspect items without fail, and send the items.

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I am sorry, but we cannot accept your proposal.
The item is in the customer's hand, and it is not possible to repair it.
Because I cannot keep the customer wait, please send the body immediately.
If we do not receive any notice of shipment in the morning on yesterday [mistranslation], I request a refund in the afternoon.
I will return the defective product, and then please repair it at your end.

A notice of shipment have [s-v agreement] not been receive [tense confusion], and then I request a refund.

Such a procedures is admitted [word choice] by eBay [use active voice], isn't it?

A defective product was received at a previous time [use active voice].
You are requested [use the active voice] to inspect items without fail, and send them.

元の翻訳
And then, a translation task of the D2 Box will be closed.
Although a downloaded file is enclosed in email, the file can not likely be opend.
If so, the problem cannot be solved at our end. Can I leave a later action at your end?

The downloaded file is enclosed.
The translation task of the D2 Box is completed, and pleae ask a staff of AGITO when the file cannot be opened.

Best regards.

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And then [literal], a translation task of the D2 Box will be closed [use active voice].
Although a downloaded file is enclosed in the email [use active voice], the file can not likely be opend.
If so, the problem cannot be solved at our end. Can I leave a later action at your end?

The downloaded file is enclosed.
The translation task of the D2 Box is completed, and pleae ask a staff [uncountable noun] of AGITO when the file cannot be opened [use active voice].

Best regards,

元の翻訳
セイコードライバーskx009kの価格について戸惑っています。あなたの他の商品との違いは何でしょうか？昨日、あなたのサイトに問い合わせして回答を頂いていないので、ご回答頂けるようにお願い致します。

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セイコーのダイバーズウオッチskx009kの価格について戸惑っています。あなたの商品と他の販売業者との違いは何でしょうか？昨日、あなたのサイトに問い合わせして回答を頂いていないので、ご回答頂けるようにお願い致します。

元の翻訳
# c sales

Although a reply of discount negotiations is not received, I respectfully have paid just now a sum of money suggested firstly.
I'm sorry for asking for an unreasonable favor from you.

I am sorry for the many troubles, but your cooperation about the following precautions is apprecitated.

#template

Today(A few days ago), I bought the following item that you sell at the eBay.
Can I buy additionally a following number of them?

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# c sales

Although I did not hear from you about the discount negotiation, I have respectfully settled the payment with your initial proposal.
I'm sorry for asking you for an unreasonable favor.

I am sorry for bothering you much, but your cooperation about the following precautions is apprecitated.

#template

Today (the other day), I bought the following item you sell at eBay.
Can I buy it additionally with the following quantity?

元の翻訳
化粧品の説明書は正確ではなかった。そのようなトラブルはなかったけれど、100%の効き目があった。

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化粧品の説明書は正確ではなかった。100%効き目があるので問題ではないが。

元の翻訳
ありがとうございます。それも翻訳して文書に追加してもらえますか？

そうするためには完成後に文書をダウンロードして、線をつけて、その文書を再アップロードしてください。

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ありがとうございます。それも翻訳して文書に追加してもらえますか？

そうするためには完成後に文書をダウンロードし、線を引いてその文書を再アップロードしてください。

元の翻訳
We have not yet received a part of goods orderd on September 9.
Regarding this order, a Pick Ticket show different goods that we orderd.
Please see the second and third lines of the enclosed Pick Ticket.
Those recitations are different from the second and third lines of Order No. 116912 that is seen when we log in my account.
A good that is shown in the third line of the Pick Ticket has been received.
A good that it showin in the second line of that is not received.
For the present, would yo send us the good that is ordered but is not send.

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We have not yet received a part of the goods orderd on September 9.
Regarding this order, the Pick Ticket show different goods that we orderd.
Please see the second and third lines of the enclosed Pick Ticket.
Those recitations are different from the second and third lines of Order No. 116912 that are seen when we log in my account.
Goods shown in the third line of the Pick Ticket has been received.
Goods shown in the second line of that is not received.
For the present, would you send us the goods that I ordered but have not been delivered here yet?

元の翻訳
In usual, a hard case is not pertained. However, at present, original hard cases of the Duesenberg are fortunately in stock. They are very fine and in good condition though they are secondhand. Please see pictures of the actual goods. I propose that a gitter for $A + a hard case for $B = $C, carirage $D, and then total $E.
A color of this silver sparkle is a Japan limited color and very rare color. When they are sold, new goods may not be arrived. There are many queries from U.S.A.
I recommend you to buy before sold out of the goods.

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In usual, a hard case is not pertained. However, at present, original hard cases of the Duesenberg are fortunately in stock. They are very fine and in good condition though they are secondhand. Please see pictures of the actual goods. I propose that a guitar for $A + a hard case for $B = $C, carirage $D, and then total $E.
A color of this silver sparkle is a Japan limited color and very rare color. When they are sold, new goods may not be arrived. There are many queries from U.S.A.
I recommend you to buy before sold out of the goods.

元の翻訳
A
"If my falimily are disappiared suddnly, I wonder how I feel. I wonder I could accept their dead or disappearance."
"Is it not so easy to accept even if you confirm ?"
"Especially, in case of childs, I appears not to accept."
B
It seems to be left behind carelessly.
C
In this time, a lot of spaces for free conversation are taken up. Hmm, this is bad.
For this reason, 1/3 of the spaces is filled with two 4-panel comics, and abstract spaces is filled with loose descritptions about hobbies as usual.

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A
"If my falimily [spelling] are disappiared [tense confusion] [spelling] suddnly [spelling], I wonder how I feel. I wonder I could accept their dead [parts of speech confusion] or disappearance [確認できなかったら?]."
"Is it not so easy to accept even if you confirm [confirm what?]?"
"Especially, in case of childs [spelling], I appears [s-v agreement] not to accept."
B
It seems to be left behind carelessly [?].
C
In this time, a lot of spaces for free conversation are taken up. Hmm, this is bad.
For this reason, 1/3 of the spaces is filled with two 4-panel comics, and abstract spaces is filled with loose descritptions [spelling] about hobbies as usual.

元の翻訳
The goods that you returned have been received in Japan.

I will pay back $200 and $10.20 as refund fees to you.

When I ask Paypal, a procedure of refund cannnot be carried out unless a problem is solved at Resolution Center. Therefore, please cannel your claims in eBay at first.

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I have received an order from you.

I will soon obtain goods from a workshop.

At first, you are requested to make a successful bid of the goods of No.12 and to pay $12.

When the goods is reached to me, I measures a weight to tell you total fees again.

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The goods that you returned have been received in Japan.

I will pay back $200 and $10.20 as refund fees to you.

When I ask Paypal, a procedure of refund cannnot be carried out unless a problem is solved at Resolution Center. Therefore, please cannel your claims in eBay at first.

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I have received an order from you.

I will soon obtain goods from a workshop.

At first, you are requested to make a successful bid of the goods of No.12 and to pay $12.

When the goods have reached me, I will measure its weight to tell you total fees again.

元の翻訳
①○○、そのことについて言えば、いずれのアメリカ製キャンディも貴方の興味を引いている、あなたはそこに行けないの？

②貴方は感傷的になっている。

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①○○、そのことについて言えば、どのアメリカ製キャンディでも興味をもってもらえると思う、あちらでは手に入らないのかな？

②彼は感傷的になっている。

元の翻訳
You will not submit your invoice though we have been requested from last manth. Neither your adress nor telephone number are clear. Therefore, only the way left for us is to return the goods!
When we called for the company A, we are told about that there is no relationship between your company and the company A.
Since we buy it from not company A but your company, we have needed your information.
Although the haulier had made a contact with the company A, they could not obtain any information because there is no purchase with my name.
We cannot wait any longer, and then we will take a procedure for repayment via PayPal.
Please contact the haulier if there are any solutions.

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You will not [tense confusion] submit your invoice, even though we have been requested [tense confusion] from last manth [spelling]. Neither your adress [spelling] nor telephone number are [s-v agreement] clear. Therefore, we have no choice but to return the goods!
When we called Company A, we are told [tense confusion] about that there is no relationship between your company and Company A.
Since we buy it from not company A but your company, we have needed your information.
Although the haulier contacted Company A, they could not obtain any information because there is no purchase with my name.
We cannot wait any longer, and then we will take a procedure for repayment via PayPal.
Please contact the haulier [word choice] if there are any solutions.