翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

私の注文についてxxx@yyy宛にメールで確認しましたが一切連絡がなく、
また、注文したWEBページにもアクセスできなくなっています。
そのため、注文の支払いをキャンセルします。

英語

As to my order I tried to confirm it by emailing to xx@yyy with no reply, and I can't access to the WEB page where I had ordered either.
Therefore I anounce now to cancel the the payment for the order.

レビュー ( 1 )

russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/09 08:25:53

元の翻訳
As to my order I tried to confirm it by emailing to xx@yyy with no reply, and I can't access to the WEB page where I had ordered either.
Therefore I anounce now to cancel the the payment for the order.

修正後
As for my order I tried to confirm it by emailing xx@yyy but received no reply, and I can't access the webpage where I ordered it either.
Therefore I will cancel the the payment for the order.

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