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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/01/31 18:12:25

tmkogw
tmkogw 52 3年程、メーカーで輸出入業務を含む、営業事務を担当していました。 TOE...
日本語

今年もよろしくお願いします。

新製品のラインナップを確認しました!

注文書PDFを添付しました。
月曜日までに発送していただけたら助かります。

今回はAを注文してみようと思います。
AはB,C,やDに対応していますよね?
Aを使用するために必要な関連製品はありますか?

新製品の代理店価格を知らせて下さい。
新しいDealer Price Listはありますか?

前回注文した1台のEが破損していました。
パーツ部分だけを交換できるか検討しましたが不可能でした。
Eを1台無料で送って頂けませんか?











英語

I confirmed the new line of products and attached the PDF of order form.
I would appreciate it if you could send it to me by Monday.

I am going to order A this time.
Does A deal with B, C and D?
Is there any related products to use A?

Please tell me the price for the agency.
Do you have new Dealer Price List?

One of E that I ordered last time was damaged so I considered if I could exchange the damaged part for a new one but it was impossible.
Could you please send new E for free?

Thank you.

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russ87 68
russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/11 22:20:32

元の翻訳
I confirmed the new line of products and attached the PDF of order form.
I would appreciate it if you could send it to me by Monday.

I am going to order A this time.
Does A deal with B, C and D?
Is there any related products to use A?

Please tell me the price for the agency.
Do you have new Dealer Price List?

One of E that I ordered last time was damaged so I considered if I could exchange the damaged part for a new one but it was impossible.
Could you please send new E for free?

Thank you.

修正後
I checked the new line of products and attached the order form as a PDF.
I would appreciate it if you could send it out by Monday.

I am going to order A this time.
Is A compatible with B, C and D?
Are there any related products needed to use A?

Please tell me your dealers' prices of the new items.
Do you have new Dealer Price List?

One of E that I ordered last time was damaged so I considered if I could exchange the damaged part for a new one but it was impossible.
Could you please send a new E for free?

Thank you.

Good but some things to look at

tmkogw tmkogw 2014/04/22 17:13:33

Thank you for correcting my sentences !

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備考: アルファベットのA,B,C,D,E,F,には商品名が入ります。