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評価: 60 / ネイティブ 英語 / 1 Review / 2014/04/09 14:16:57

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日本語

この度は大変申し訳ありませんでした。

ダメージレポートの件は承知しました。
そうしましたら、お手数かけますが受け取り拒否 という形で返送してください。
その際に返送料はかかりません。
日本のEMSにもこの件は伝えてあります。
アメリカのEMS(UPS)にも調査依頼を出しております。

外傷はなくとも精密機器なので
大きなショックが故障の原因にもなります。

当商品は専門店で購入し、当方も何度か使用しました。
その点は間違いありません。
返送手続きをして頂いた段階で商品代、送料はご返金致します。

英語

I must apologize in this instant.

I did know about the damage report.
Please return it as received damaged, sorry for the inconvenience.
If it is done this way it will not incur shipping costs.
I have already informed EMS in Japan of this case.
I have sent a request for investigation to the American EMS (UPS) also.

Even if there is no external scratches, as it is a precision instrument,
large shocks can cause the malfunction.

I purchased this item from a specialist shop, they had used it many times.
You are not mistaken on that point.
When you have completed the process for return, I will refund the cost of the goods and shipping costs.

レビュー ( 1 )

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/09 20:46:30

元の翻訳
I must apologize in this instant.

I did know about the damage report.
Please return it as received damaged, sorry for the inconvenience.
If it is done this way it will not incur shipping costs.
I have already informed EMS in Japan of this case.
I have sent a request for investigation to the American EMS (UPS) also.

Even if there is no external scratches, as it is a precision instrument,
large shocks can cause the malfunction.

I purchased this item from a specialist shop, they had used it many times.
You are not mistaken on that point.
When you have completed the process for return, I will refund the cost of the goods and shipping costs.

修正後
I must apologize in this instant.

I did know about the damage report [differs from the original].
Please return it as received damaged [differs from the original]. Sorry for the inconvenience.
If it is done this way, it will not incur shipping costs.
I have already informed EMS in Japan of this case.
I have sent a request for investigation to the American EMS (UPS) also.

Even if there are no external scratches, as it is a precision instrument, large shocks can cause the malfunction.

I purchased this item from a specialist shop and had used it many times.
You can be sure of that.
When you have completed the process for return, I will refund the cost of the goods and shipping costs.

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