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Notice of exclusive on-the-spot broadcasting through the Niko Niko Namahousou(live broadcasting) of "AAA 10th Anniversary SPECIAL Open-air LIVE in Fujikyu Highland" !

September 23th(Wednesday / National holiday) 16:00 pm
We will present you all the final show of the "AAA 10th Anniversary SPECIAL Open-air LIVE in Fujikyu Highland" through on-the-spot broadcasting on the Niko Niko Namahousou!

The program is available on smartphones or mobile phones!
We really hope you would enjoy the show through the Niko Niko Namahousou in the case that you won't be able to go to the venue at the first hand on the day or missed to get a ticket.

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Notice of the exclusive broadcast on the Niko Niko Namahousou (live broadcasting) of "AAA 10th Anniversary SPECIAL Open-air LIVE in Fujikyu Highland" !

September 23th(Wednesday / National holiday) 16:00
We will present you all the final show of the "AAA 10th Anniversary SPECIAL Open-air LIVE in Fujikyu Highland" through on-the-spot broadcasting on the Niko Niko Namahousou!

The program is available on smartphones or mobile phones!
We really hope you will enjoy the show through the Niko Niko Namahousou in the case that won't be able to go to the place on the day or missed to get a ticket.

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Is the original of this "Pink" color item is "whitish pink in color" as its picture shows? It is quite whitish.
Or, is this a result of image processing for brightness?
If you have made image processing such as upping exposure value, I would like ask you to show me an image of the original item free from any image processing.

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Is the original of this "Pink" color item is "whitish pink in color" as its picture shows? It is quite whitish.
Or, is this a result of image processing for brightness?
If you have made image processing such as upping exposure values, I would like to ask you to show me an image of the original item free from any image processing.

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順調であれば3月4日に配達されることに気付きました。本当？配達は2月7日と約束されていたのでは？

明確にしてくださいますか。
よろしくお願いします。

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トラッキングによると、3月4日に配達されることに気付きました。本当？配達は2月7日と約束されていたのでは？

明確にしてくださいますか。
よろしくお願いします。

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I'm so sorry, because a different person (Facebook department) has mistakenly responded to you.
Please be at ease since we order department surely comprehend the contents.

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I'm so sorry. A different person from our office (Facebook department) has mistakenly responded to you.
Our order department understand your order correctly, please be at ease.

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May J is going to show up at a TV program "Ichiban Song (No.1 song ) SHOW" which is presented by Nohon TV on July 2nd (Wed) !!

"Ichiban song show" broadcasted by Nihon TV
・Date: July.2nd(Wed) 2014
・Broadcasting hours: 19:00-20:54
・HP regarding the program： http://www.ntv.co.jp/ichiban/

A theme of the program tonight : "In a special 2hours, celebrity artists who have gotten on the top will be on the show altogether! Funassy will shale a leg! Secret stories relating to masterpiece compositions will be disclosed "

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May J will perform on the TV program "Ichiban Song (No.1 song ) SHOW" presented by Nihon TV on July 2nd (Wed) !!

"Ichiban Song Show" broadcasted by Nihon TV
・Date: July.2nd(Wed) 2014
・Broadcasting hours: 19:00-20:54
・The Program's Homepage： http://www.ntv.co.jp/ichiban/

A theme of the program tonight : "In a special 2hours, the best celebrity artists will appear on the show altogether! Funassy will shale a leg! The secret stories of popular music hits will be confessed!"

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Yes sir, I absolutely would like to adjust our schedule to yours to discuss about possibilities in our future. Can I directly contact to Mr. xxx regarding adjustment of schedule?
To Mr. xxx > I will give you a contact later. I appreciate you in advance.

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Yes sir, I absolutely would like to adjust our schedule to yours to discuss about possibilities in our future. Can I directly contact Mr. xxx regarding adjustment of schedule?
To Mr. xxx > I will give you a contact later. I appreciate your cooperation in advance.

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Yes sir, I absolutely would like to adjust our schedule to yours to discuss about possibilities in our future. Can I directly contact to Mr. xxx regarding adjustment of schedule?
To Mr. xxx > I will give you a contact later. I appreciate you in advance.

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Yes sir, I absolutely would like to adjust our schedule to yours to discuss the possibilities in our future. Can I directly contact to Mr. xxx regarding adjustment of schedule?
To Mr. xxx > I will give you a contact later. Thank you in advance.

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しかし、アトピー性発育不全は骨の発達遅延と関連づけてこられたため、成人の身長には影響しないものと考えられていた。本研究の結果は、喘息およびアトピーが発育不全を起こす場合、成人後までその影響が及ぶことを示唆する。

CAMPの臨床試験において、軽度および中等度喘息を罹患する幼児への治療効果を確かめるために、プデセニドの一日量を400 μg とした。その後、一日量 200 μg のプデセニドを乾燥粉末吸入器を使用して投与した場合、5歳児から11歳児の喘息症状を抑え、病状悪化防止に繋がることが明らかになった。

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しかし、アトピー誘発型の発育不全は骨の発達遅延と関連づけられてきたため、成人の身長には影響しないものと考えられていた。本研究の結果は、喘息およびアトピーが発育不全を起こす場合、成人期にもその影響が及ぶことを示唆する。

CAMPの臨床試験において、軽度および中等度喘息を罹患する幼児への治療効果を確かめるために、プデセニドの一日量を400 μg とした。その後、一日量 200 μg のプデセニドを乾燥粉末吸入器を使用して投与した場合、5歳児から11歳児の喘息症状を効果的に抑制し、病状悪化減少に繋がることが明らかになった。

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Regarding location, address is xxxxxx.
URL of map is xxxxxx

Could you call xx at reception desk on the first floor in right affix of main office building.
You will be able to find me in front of the desk on the first floor at that day.
My cellphone number is xxx-xxxx-xxxx.

Although it is not definite, a few staffs in internet business department might be present at the meeting with us on that day.

I would appreciate you in advance.

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Regarding location, address is xxxxxx.
URL of map is xxxxxx

Could you call xx at reception desk on the first floor in right affix of the main office building.
You will be able to find me in front of the desk on the first floor at that day.
My cellphone number is xxx-xxxx-xxxx.

Although it is not definite, a few staffs in the internet business department might be present at the meeting with us on that day.

I would appreciate you in advance.

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We are so sorry to have bothered you this time.
I persuaded a friend of mine from canceling a bid on ebay. I would like to purchase your doll. I would really appreciate if you could send me an invoice. Thank you for cooperation in advance. Once I have received the invoice, I will pay. Could you send the doll to my postal address in Japan.
I would appreciate for your correspondence from bottom of my heart. Thanks a million. I'm looking forward the invoice from you.

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We are so sorry to have bothered you this time.
I persuaded a friend of mine from canceling a bid on ebay. I would like to purchase your doll. I would really appreciate if you could send me an invoice. Thank you for cooperation in advance. Once I have received the invoice, I will make a payment. Could you send the doll to my postal address in Japan.
I would appreciate for your correspondence from bottom of my heart. Thanks a million. I'm looking forward the invoice from you.

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Taking advantage of experiences as a journalist, I would like to perform sending out information regarding to the Mindfulness. Moreover also, since I have a business network across Asia through translated edition of my authors, I would like to enlarge the concept and practice of the Mindfulness over Asian countries from Japan

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Taking advantage of my experiences as a journalist, I would like to perform (commit to) sending out information regarding the Mindfulness. Moreover also（←どちらかでいいのでは？）, since I have a business network across Asia through translated edition of my books, I would like to enlarge the concept and practice of the Mindfulness over Asian countries from Japan

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Taking advantage of experiences as a journalist, I would like to perform sending out information regarding to the Mindfulness. Moreover also, since I have a business network across Asia through translated edition of my authors, I would like to enlarge the concept and practice of the Mindfulness over Asian countries from Japan

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Taking advantage of my experience as a journalist, I would like to perform sending out information regarding the Mindfulness. Moreover also, since I have a business network across Asia through translated edition of my authors, I would like to enlarge the concept and practice of the Mindfulness over Asian countries from Japan

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And in the same time, I'm questioning through your home page, but I have given a different answer.

You said that shaft is TourIssueS300 that has no matching serial number.
Which is correct?
Is Shaft TourIssueX100?

I'm looking forward to your reply.

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And at the same time, I'm questioning through your website, but I was given a different answer.

You were saying that Shaft was TourIssueS300 and that there were no matching serial numbers.
Which is correct?
Is Shaft TourIssueX100?

I'm looking forward to your reply.

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You get a chance for the Super Gacha with a Conquer Ticket.

The number of the Conquer Ticket of your own

By collecting cards of unconsolidated version of municipalities, let's get cards of
consolidated version of them, and let's repro the Great Synoecism in Heisei.


This is mode in which Gunma Chan, a mascot character of Gunma prefecture, get around various stations.

It is designed so that you blessedly get cards of Gunma Chan and resources with points depending on sections.

The number of move will up after certain period.


It's wonderful and impressive, isn't it?
It's a great pleasure.
Please don't care about details.
Could you please have mercy on me?

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You get a chance for the Super Gacha with a Conquer Ticket.

The number of the Conquer Ticket in possesion

By collecting cards of unconsolidated version of municipalities, let's get cards of
consolidated version of them, and let's repro the Great Synoecism in Heisei.


This is mode in which Gunma Chan, a mascot character of Gunma prefecture, travels around various stations.

It is in a good value, in which you'll obtain capital or Gunma Chan cards in addition to points, depending on the spot.

After a certain period of time, the number of moving command recovers


It is excellent.↵
It is impressive.
It is a great pleasure.
Please don't care about details.
Could you please have mercy on me?