翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

この度は、大変ご迷惑をお掛けして申し訳ございませんでした。ebayの入札をキャンセルしたいという友人を説得しました。あなたのお人形を買いたいと思います。大変お手数をお掛け致しますが、請求書（invoice）を送ってください。よろしくお願い申し上げます。請求書が届きましたら、私はあなたに支払いをします。お人形は、日本の住所へ送ってください。あなたのご対応に心から感謝します。ありがとうございました。では、請求書お待ちしています。

英語

We are so sorry to have bothered you this time.
I persuaded a friend of mine from canceling a bid on ebay. I would like to purchase your doll. I would really appreciate if you could send me an invoice. Thank you for cooperation in advance. Once I have received the invoice, I will pay. Could you send the doll to my postal address in Japan.
I would appreciate for your correspondence from bottom of my heart. Thanks a million. I'm looking forward the invoice from you.

レビュー ( 1 )

kiriyama_junはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/16 00:35:22

元の翻訳
We are so sorry to have bothered you this time.
I persuaded a friend of mine from canceling a bid on ebay. I would like to purchase your doll. I would really appreciate if you could send me an invoice. Thank you for cooperation in advance. Once I have received the invoice, I will pay. Could you send the doll to my postal address in Japan.
I would appreciate for your correspondence from bottom of my heart. Thanks a million. I'm looking forward the invoice from you.

修正後
We are so sorry to have bothered you this time.
I persuaded a friend of mine from canceling a bid on ebay. I would like to purchase your doll. I would really appreciate if you could send me an invoice. Thank you for cooperation in advance. Once I have received the invoice, I will make a payment. Could you send the doll to my postal address in Japan.
I would appreciate for your correspondence from bottom of my heart. Thanks a million. I'm looking forward the invoice from you.

意味は簡潔かつ完璧に伝わりますので、取引メールとして申し分ないと思います。

[mydogkuro11]

ありがとうございます。