matsu (matsu11765) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
あなたは、ユニットを再投稿されるのですか？もしそうなら、あまりのドルとしてそれを投稿するつもりですか？

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あなたは、ユニットを再出品されるのですか？ もしそうなら、1ドル値下げしてお願いできませんか？

元の翻訳
こんにちは、

私たちは、以下に特記する注文に関する顧客から連絡を受けました。

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注文ナンバー: ****
品物: ****
理由:私のスタッフはどこですか?

詳細：品物が予定通り到着していません。
顧客から：私は、荷物の配信不能を報告したいと思います。
私は、日本の販売者に連絡しましたが、私はそれが彼らの問題ではなく、問題のパッケージが2013年12月14日14:04にISCニューヨークニューヨーク（USPS）へ到着しましたことが問題であると思っています。
その後、荷物は単に姿を消しました。さらなる追跡情報の提供はありません。顧客にステータス更新を送信してください。

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こんにちは、

私たちは、以下に特記する注文に関する顧客から連絡を受けました。

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注文ナンバー: ****
品物: ****
理由:私の商品はどこですか?

詳細：品物が予定通り到着していません。
顧客から：私は、荷物が配達されていないことを報告したいと思います。
私は、日本の販売者に連絡しましたが、私はそれが彼らの問題ではなく、問題のパッケージが2013年12月14日14:04にISCニューヨークニューヨーク（USPS）へ到着しましたことが問題であると思っています。
その後、荷物は単に姿を消しました。さらなる追跡情報の提供はありません。顧客にステータス更新を送信してください。

元の翻訳
フランス

こんにちは、

我々は、出荷時期が長すぎるため、この注文をキャンセルしたい。
私たちはあなたのお店が日本に基づいていなかったので気づいていなかった。

それは可能ですか？

よろしく

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フランス

こんにちは、

我々は、配達日数が長すぎるため、この注文をキャンセルしたいのです。
私たちはあなたのお店が日本に拠点を置いていることに気づいていませんでした。

キャンセルは可能ですか？

よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
①Popular stamp of more than 300 kinds
From finishing move to popular characters.

②Roar of laughter bulletin board!
Aim the No.1 interesting rankings

③Easy processing by one-touch.

④Gte points with Share

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① More than 300 kinds of popular stamps
From special moves to popular characters.

②Roar of laughter bulletin board!
Aim for No.1 interesting rankings

③Easy processing by one-touch.

④Share and get points

元の翻訳
イギリス
ありがとう。
あなたは、荷物の追跡番号を持っていますか？

配送会社は、我々がそれを受け取っていないことを確認するために、私は署名しなければならなかっただろう。

ドイツ
944
どうも、ありがとうございました。
私は今、税関からのマーカーを得ることができます！

敬具

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イギリス
ありがとう。
あなたは、荷物の追跡番号がありますか？

配送会社は、我々がそれを受け取っていないことを確認するために、私は署名しなければならなかっただろう。

ドイツ
944
どうも、ありがとうございました。
私は今、税関からのマーカーを得ることができます！

敬具

元の翻訳
With the details had been attached to the luggage,that are also listed about three cases, the 7-point golf club.
In other words,in spite of there is specification of the three cases which is paid a fee,but one case is not received
and Its contents is seven points golf club.
DHL is not in charge of the one remaining case,and It said that it is the responsibility of MyUS regarding this matter.

Where is the golf club now?

And when they might arrive?

Tax and charges that I paid the last time ,whether the amount of the golf club included?
Make sure above
Before the end of the day, please reply as soon as possible.

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With the details had been attached to the packages, that（←何をさしているのか分からない） are also listed about three cases, the 7-point golf club.
In other words, in spite of the specification of the three cases which is paid a fee(←このwhich is はつながりません）, but one case has not been received
and Its contents is seven golf clubs.
DHL is not in charge of the one remaining case,and It said that it is the responsibility of MyUS regarding this matter.

Where is the golf club now?

And when they might arrive?

Tax and charges that I paid the last time ,whether the amount of the golf club included?
Make sure above
Before the end of the day, please reply as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
We sell Japanese goods.
There are a lot of great items made ​​in Japan.
Please request feel free to contact us.

Things that can not be sold is a thing that can be deadly weapons and food, use to the deadly weapon.
You can not sell the import ban items of your country in addition.
Please check the import ban items of your country in advance.
There is the case that a duty depends on the receiving of the product.
Tariff is borne by the purchaser.
Please check the tariff of your country in advance.

There is that you can not use Japanese products shape of the plug, the difference in voltage household appliances.
Please confirm gets to use at home.

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We sell Japanese goods.
There are a lot of great items made ​​in Japan.
Please feel free to contact us for request.

Things that can not be sold are the things that can be deadly weapons, food and something that could be used as weapons.
In addition, you can not sell the products that are banned from import regulations of your country.
Please check the banned items from import regulations of your country in advance.
The customer duty will fall on the receiver of the product.
Tariff is borne by the purchaser.
Please check the tariff of your country in advance.

There might be some situations where you can't use the electric appliances due to the different shapes of the plugs and the difference in voltage regarding the products made in Japan.
Please make sure that you will be able to use the product in your country in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you for taking over work.

If it understands when finish, please let me know.
I expect you to finish as soon as possible,

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Thank you for taking over this work.

If it know when you'll be finished, please let me know.
I hope you'll finish as soon as possible,

元の翻訳
This product is designed to use in Japan.
For some countries which a successful bidder uses, the conversion plug and transformer of an electric socket may be needed.
If an additional charge is got about a conversion plug and a transformer, it can send together.
If there is a question about a power supply, please give me an inquiry before a bid.

Moreover, the manual of this product is created in Japanese.
The manual operation button of the products are written in Japanese.
Please give me a bid after an understanding.

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This product is designed for use in Japan.
A conversion plug and electrical transformer may be needed depending on which country the item will be used in.
If you are willing to pay an additional fee, I will send a conversion plug and transformer together with the item.
If you have any questions about power in regards to this product, please send me an inquiry before you bid.

Also, the manual of this product is written in Japanese.
The text of the buttons on the product is also in Japanese.
Please bid after careful consideration.

元の翻訳
How are you?
What time does the order in 2014 become?
Moreover, in Japan, breast putt is attached to tops(a camisole and a tank top) of yoga.
Can't I have breast putt attached also to your product for Japanese?

After placing an order as a backorder, you pass very much,what time does dispatch become possible?

Although I would like to order, please tell me password for going into a retail store-oriented page.

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How are you?
What is your plan of the next order in 2014?
Also, in Japan, breast putt is attached to tops(a camisole and a tank top) of yoga.
Can you put the breast putt attached to your products for Japan?

It's been awhile since I have placed an order, when can you ship them?

Also I would like to order, so please tell me the password for the retail store's account.

元の翻訳
In fact，It turned out that there is a crack small one place at the time of inspection of NS before dispatch.

It is a portion of a photograph.
Our policy is sending to you the goods with which a visitor can be satisfied.

There are three proposals.
1.I exchange for new VS of another color.
If it is same VS by a somewhat deep-colored, it is possible to send to United States in about three days.
2.Fix the crack of NS by the maker Y.
In this case,takes about one month.
3.Since it is in a state with a crack, I am allowed to cut a price $100, and I send NS immediately.
This case is the earliest.

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In fact，It turned out that there is a small crack at the time of inspection of NS before dispatch.

It is shown in a photograph.
Our policy is sending the satisfying goods to our customers.

There are three proposals.
1.I exchange it for new VS of another color.
It is the same VS of somewhat deep-colored, and it is possible to send to United States in about three days.
2.Fix the crack of NS by the maker Y.
In this case,it takes about one month.
3.Since it has a crack, I deduct $100 from its price and send it immediately.
This case is the earliest.

元の翻訳
The upper part of boots has discoloration.
Since there is also a crack on the whole, I wish to return the goods.
Since you are to blame for this, I also wish the refund of import duties, a mailing cost, and the mailing cost concerning returned goods besides commodity prices. Your prompt action is expected.

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The upper part of boots has discoloration.
Since there is also are cracks on the whole, I wish to return the goods.
Since you are to blame for this, I also wish the refund of import duties, a mailing cost, and the mailing cost concerning returned goods besides commodity prices. Your prompt action is expected.

元の翻訳
I'm looking forward to seeing for the first time in a long time this time.
I attach a summary of the meeting of the 3rd.
Start time of the meeting has not been determined, it is that (from 1 o'clock pm maybe) to start as soon as the members gathered.
I would like a brief meeting with you before, if possible, of the meeting.what the circumstances you?
I will arrive at 10:30 in NY airport, and arrive at 12 o'clock in NY.

As Mr. Tanaka had said, this meeting is an important meeting to discuss the issue various occurs with that company A is to the shareholders of Company C, and we need your help.

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I'm looking forward to seeing for the first time in a long time this time.
I attach a summary of the meeting of the 3rd.
Start time of the meeting has not been determined, it is said that it will be starting as soon as the members gathered (probably around 1:30pm.)
I would like a brief meeting with you before, if possible, of the meeting. what is your availability?
I will arrive at 10:30 in NY airport, and arrive at after 12 o'clock in NY.

As Mr. Tanaka had said, this meeting is an important meeting to discuss the issue various occurs with that company A is to the shareholders of Company C, and we need your help.

元の翻訳
Currently, I have been collecting photos which is the city shopping malls and brand shops, overseas.
So now, I want a person who can take a picture with your overseas .
New York
London
Barcelona
Madrid
Any Landscape or cityscape and sophisticated local Malls appearance, brand shop of street brand shops Attractions I ask for 200 or more images of these.

Will pay 8,000 yen as compensation.

When you contact me,I will show you a sample of the image.
Thank you.

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Currently, I have been collecting photos which is the city shopping malls and brand shops, overseas.
So now, I am seeking persons who reside in overseas and can take pictures.
New York
London
Barcelona
Madrid
Any Landscape or cityscape and sophisticated local Malls appearance, brand shop of street brand shops Attractions I ask for 200 or more images of these.

Will pay 8,000 yen as compensation.

When you contact me,I will show you a sample of the image.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I do not support the part refund unfortunately.
Fraud due to partial refund in ebay is all the rage now.
I have to stop the account of the other party and to encounter the other day fraud.
I think return is whether due process if there is a problem with the product.
I will refund after the arrival to the product.

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I do not support the part refund unfortunately.
Fraud due to partial refund in ebay is all the rage now.
I had encountered a fraud the other day, and had to stop the account of the other party.
I think return is whether due process if there is a problem with the product.
I will refund after the arrival of the product.