katrina_z (katrina_z) — 付けたレビュー

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The biggest reason I got bad reviews is delayed deliveries.
I was not aware of the difference of expected length of deliveries. The length is set to approximately one month when sent from Japan to UK, but shorter if purchased from other countries.

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The biggest reason I get bad reviews is for delayed deliveries.
I was not aware of the difference of expected length of deliveries. The length is set to approximately one month when sent from Japan to the UK, but shorter if purchased from other countries.

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Enter VW in the search box and click on the keyword search button.

The categories related to VW will be displayed and sorted by how often they are being used coming from above.

Select the most appropriate one among the categories and place a check.

Select the category within the store that displays the item. The categories that were set in advance within the store management within eBay will be automatically displayed in the drop-down menu. Select the store category that you think would best describe the products being displayed.

Setup the product display format.

Unless otherwise specified, please select a fixed price and display the product.

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The quality of all the razor is none, but there is some difference due to the the quality of the grinding wheel.

I recommend the razor of the following URL.

I can discount it and sell it at $ 500 including sharpening fee.

I am currently preparing a razor collection site with razors from all over the world.

It will take a while to look into the history of the razor.

Opinion of the collector like you is very valuable.

I have one question for you. I think there is a site that searched all the brand names of the razor around the world, but do you know the URL?

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The quality of all the razors is wonderful, but there are some difference due to the the quality of the grinding wheel.

I recommend the razors from the following URL.

I can discount it and sell it at $500 including the sharpening fee.

I am currently preparing a razor collection site with razors from all over the world.

It will take a while to look into the history of the razor.

Opinions of collectors like you are very valuable.

I have one question for you. I think there is a site that looked up all the brand names of the razor around the world. Do you know the URL?

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All of the razors are high quality, differences in the way they shave depend on the quality of the whetstone.

I recommend the following URL for razors.

I will give you a $500 discount including the honing fee.

Currently I am preparing a collection website about razors gathering from around the world.

I will need a bit more time to research the history of razors.

I hold the opinion of a collector such as yourself in high regard.

I do have one question. I believe there are sites that have researched the names of Razor brands from around the world, do you know of any URLs?

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All of the razors are high quality, differences in the way they shave depend on the quality of the whetstone.

I recommend the following URL for razors.

I will give you a $500 discount including the honing fee.

Currently I am preparing a collection website about razors gathered from around the world.

I will need a bit more time to research the history of razors.

I hold the opinion of a collector such as yourself in high regard.

I do have one question. I believe there are sites that have researched the names of razor brands from around the world. Do you know of any URLs?

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Since you have sincerely explained about the current state of the product, I will accept to return the product from you. Please pay the return shipping cost. Instead, if you purchase a product the next time, I would give you a great discount.

When you return it, if you add the tracking number or insurance, it will be expensive, so I recommend to send it by general airmail.

Although the most sharp razor of Tamahagane is a brand called "Suzuki", there are brands called "Tanaka" and "Sato" with longer history than "Suzuki". "Sato" is more sharp than "Tanaka" if I have to chose.

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Since you have sincerely explained about the current state of the product, I will accept to return the product from you. Please pay the return shipping cost. Instead, if you purchase a product the next time, I would give you a great discount.

When you return it, if you add the tracking number or insurance, it will be expensive, so I recommend to send it by general airmail.

Although the sharpest razor for Tamahagane is a brand called "Suzuki", there are brands called "Tanaka" and "Sato" with longer histories than "Suzuki". "Sato" is sharpr than "Tanaka" if I have to chose.

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I went to the Shirahone Hot Springs in Nagano Prefecture the other day.

Needless to say, the Shirahone Hot Springs was wonderful. I felt completely refreshed with the magnificent nature, the delicious cuisine of Nagano and the hospitality.

I will also be doing my best at work (^^).

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I went to the Shirahone Hot Springs in Nagano Prefecture the other day.

Needless to say, the Shirahone Hot Springs was wonderful. I felt completely refreshed by the magnificent nature, the delicious cuisine, and the hospitality of Nagano.

I will also be doing my best at work (^^).

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The product was dispatched on the X of X to the following address. However, since it was not delivered to you, we have confirmed the situation of your parcel with the tracking information.

It seems like you did not contact the post office to reschedule a redelivery, thus it was sent back to us after their maximum retention period.

You have 2 options to choose from. Please choose the one that fits your needs the most.

1. A full refund (product and delivery charge)

2. Please provide us a delivery address that we can successfully delivery the product. We will send it again free of charge.

Please let me know which option you would like to take and we will contact you again in regards to the refund or redelivery procedure.

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The product was dispatched on the X of X to the following address. However, since it was not delivered to you, we have confirmed the situation of your parcel with the tracking information.

It seems like you did not contact the post office to reschedule a redelivery, thus it was sent back to us after their maximum retention period.

You have 2 options to choose from. Please choose the one that fits your needs the most.

1. A full refund (product and delivery charge)

2. Please provide us a delivery address that we can successfully deliver the product. We will send it again free of charge.

Please let me know which option you would like to take and we will contact you again in regards to the refund or redelivery procedure.

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A few days ago Shunsuke contacted, saying please send the the undelivered product soon.
Otherwise, please contact soon about the estimated shipping date.

Also, there are a few questions about the products purchased a few days ago listed below.

1. Serenity Pillow case
A pillow case with a photo design attached.
The Serenity Pillow case is just a product with a pattern on it, correct?
Did you send the wrong product?

2. The brunch comforter cover, double size
The six inside chords are attached to the outside not the inside.
Is this a faulty product?

Please send my new versions of these products ASAP.

Thank you

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Please send the undelivered product soon that Shunsuke contacted you about a few days ago.
Otherwise, please contact me soon about the estimated shipping date.

Also, there are a few questions about the products purchased a few days ago listed below.

1. Serenity Pillow case
A pillow case with a photo design attached.
The Serenity Pillow case is just a product with a pattern on it, correct?
Did you send the wrong product?

2. The brunch comforter cover, double size
The six inside chords are attached to the outside, not the inside.
Is this a faulty product?

Please send new versions of these products ASAP.

Thank you

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Thank you for the detail.
The approach has changed few points compared to last Biennale. It seems its scale is more bigger. It was interested that there are some different kind of approach up to exhibition hall.

It is expected that it will be a tight schedule because we will hold a work outside in September. Fortunately, there is no big project till September, so I hope you can create a wonderful work in South Korea.
My recent situation is that I am going to plan to make a big work in next January at the group show.

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Thank you for the details.
The approach has changed somewhat compared to last Biennale. It seems its scale is bigger. I am interested that there are some different kinds of approaches to the exhibition hall.

It is expected that it will be a tight schedule because we will do outside work in September. Fortunately, there is no big project till September, so I hope you can create a wonderful work in South Korea.
There will be a group show in January at M Art Mueseum and I plan on making something big for it.

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Thank you for proposing an option other than refund. I am not sure if this item is repairable or not. Even if repairable, I am no sure if it'll be within $129.50, either. However, if you can return $129.50, I don't think I will lose money. I will take your proposal. I will give you a positive feedback as soon as I confirm refund from you.

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Thank you for proposing an option other than a refund. I am not sure if this item is repairable or not. Even if it's repairable, I am no sure if it'll be within $129.50, either. However, if you can refund me $129.50, I don't think I will lose money. I will accept your proposal. I will give you positive feedback as soon as I confirm the refund from you.

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There is something I should have mentioned to you in advance.

This product is made upon request, it is a handmade product by our craftsman.

Due to this, it will take a while before the product can be dispatched.

But I can assure you the product we provide will be of the highest quality.

The expected dispatch date will be around 18th-20th May.

Once we have dispatched it, we will provide you with a tracking code, which you can track the item's whereabouts on a website.

It may take a while, but I hope you can understand our circumstances.

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There is something I should have mentioned to you in advance.

This product is made upon request as it is handmade by our craftsman.

Due to this, it will take a while before the product can be dispatched.

But I can assure you the product we provide will be of the highest quality.

The expected dispatch date will be around the 18th-20th of May.

Once we have dispatched it, we will provide you with a tracking code, which you can use to track the item's whereabouts on a website.

It may take a while, but I hope you can understand our circumstances.

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I was suppose to have mentioned something to you beforehand.

After the order was made this time, each of the products is being done by hand by the craftsman.

Because of that, you will need to wait for a little longer for the arrival of the products.

On the other hand, we will be sending you the highest quality product.

The scheduled shipping will be around May 18 - May 20.

We will notify you on the tracking number after shipping the product and we will guide you on how to confirm the status on the website.

It will be a long wait, but I am hoping for your kind understanding on this matter.

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I was suppose to have mentioned something to you beforehand.

After the order was made this time, each of the products is being done by hand by the craftsman.

Because of that, you will need to wait a little longer for the arrival of the products.

On the other hand, we will be sending you the highest quality product.

The scheduled shipping will be around May 18 - May 20.

We will notify you of the tracking number after shipping the product and we will guide you on how to confirm the status on the website.

It will be a long wait, but I am hoping for your kind understanding on this matter.

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Romantic illustrations make the story more exciting!
You are the heroine! Enter a nickname you like and it will appear in-game!
Hunt down the target you like!
Who does Emi want to kiss?
Selecting the right answers will make them like you more!
Your fate will change according to the way you answer!
12 different endings with different guys that will make your heart skip a beat!
The guys you can target with this app:
If you read all the chapters, a hidden door will open!

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Thank you for your usual support. This is OO from Japan.
The product I have ordered the other day has arrived.
I am grateful for your prompt action as always.
There is one item that does not operate for item number 00 of M company that was purchased this time.
And by testing it carefully and thoroughly, there was 1 out of 6 that does not operate at all.
I will ask you to confirm the status and hope for either a repair or an exchange.
The return can be packaged together when ordering next time.
But first, I will be looking forward to your response.

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Thank you for your continued support. This is OO from Japan.
The product I have ordered the other day has arrived.
I am grateful for your prompt action as always.
There is one item that does not operate for item number 00 of M company that was purchased this time.
And by testing it carefully and thoroughly, there was 1 out of 6 that does not operate at all.
I will ask you to confirm the status and hope for either a repair or an exchange.
The return can be packaged together when I order next time.
But first, I will be looking forward to your response.

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Since the winning bidder cancelled the item, now we offer you the second chance.

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We understand your situation and refund you $○○.
It won't be long before the process is successfully done.

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Since the winning bidder cancelled the item, we're now offering you a second chance.

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We understand your situation and will refund you $○○.
It won't be long before the process is successfully completed.

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There are a lot of ways to approach and advertise your products in our market.
However, the important thing to do first is building an appropriate website.
So please send us something such as pictures of the products so that we can start building your website.
We ourselves also take some pictures for sales if you allow us.
Also, we would like 5 samples of each model as soon as possible.

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There are a lot of ways to approach and advertise your products in our market.
However, the important thing to do first is building an appropriate website.
So please send us something such as pictures of the products so that we can start building your website.
With your permission, we will also take some pictures for sales ourselves.
Also, we would like 5 samples of each model as soon as possible.

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There were Korean soldiers to check our dress code on our bus, guarding the safety for the bus as well. We were on service of International Cultural Service Club this time and it prepared for some spare clothes in case for those not suited for the dress code.

Then, got to Hanmonten,
I was not so nervous as I’d expected.

However!!

The tour conductor, always talking about the history of South and North in gentle tone, raised its voice at one time.

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There were Korean soldiers to check our dress code on our bus, guarding the safety for the bus as well. We were with the International Cultural Service Club this time and they prepared for us some spare clothes for those not suited for the dress code.

Then, on to Panmunjom,
I was not as nervous as I’d expected.

However!!

The tour conductor, always talking about the history of South and North in gentle tone, did raise his voice once.

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<The precious experience>

Though there is a demilitarized zoneI, I took part in the tour with somewhat uneasiness, because the number two at the North Krorean Republic has been executed recently at a public place. The participants were came from all over the world, most of them are the westerner.
The defectors from North Korea told us their experiences, and I fell really sorry for them.
Fortunately, I could enter Panmunjom, furthermore i could even visit North Korea in the building. When I visit there, I felt a bit strage.↵

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<A Precious Experience>

Though this is a demilitarized zone, I took part in the tour with somewhat uneasiness because the number two at the North Korean was executed recently in public. I was surprised as there were more people there than I expected. There were also many Westerners and I realized that the interest in North Korea is worldwide.
The defectors from North Korea told us their experiences, and I felt really sorry for them.
Fortunately, I could enter Panmunjom, furthermore I could even enter North Korea from inside a building. It felt a bit strange.

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There are now 30,000 Conyac users around the world.
When your company does not have staff capable of translation, with just one e-mail these users go to work helping you to expand overseas by localizing and disseminating your contents. Simply by utilizing the Conyac platform, you can enjoy a superb translation experience without the high costs of a translation company. With the ability to translate upward of 60 languages, you can choose your preferred translator to work for you.

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1. I'm sorry for my late reply. I'll definitely buy all that you have of the Japanese size so please hold them for me. Since I sometimes get requests to put embroidery on the Japanese size I'd like to have you hold those. Thank you very much.
2. I'm contacting you in place of Shunsuke. Does the time for delivery vary depending on the product series and variety?
If there are items that can be shipped immediately or will take some time, please tell me specifically which items. Thank you very much for that. Please send your reply to Shunsuke.

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1. I'm sorry for my late reply. I'll definitely buy all that you have of the Japanese size so please hold them for me. Since I sometimes get requests to put embroidery on the Japanese sizes I'd like to have you hold those. Thank you very much.
2. I'm contacting you in place of Shunsuke. Does the time for delivery vary depending on the product series and variety?
If there are items that can be shipped immediately or will take some time, please tell me specifically which items. Thank you very much for that. Please send your reply to Shunsuke.

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As it is of many transactions, we would be underfunded and not be able to carry out any business if the full sum isn't repaid.
With one way or another, could the remaining stock be shipped?
We plan to store the stock at our shop for the time being.

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As it is a large volume of transactions, we would be underfunded and not be able to carry out any business if the full sum isn't repaid.
Could the remaining stock be shipped to us one way or the other?
We plan to store the stock at our shop for the time being.