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It is a very large volume of trade, if we do not get the money returned, we will be short of funds and unable to trade.
Can you somehow send the remainder of the goods to us?
For the moment, for a little while we intend to keep the goods at our store.

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It is a very large volume of trade and, if we do not get the money returned, we will be short of funds and unable to do business.
Can you somehow send the remainder of the goods to us?
At the moment, we intend to keep the goods at our store for the time being.

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About the Duvet.

Thank you for your support as always.

I have a question regarding the duvet of your company.

Please kindly look at the attached photograph.

I was contacted by a client that the feathers gradually came out everyday just like in the photograph,
and there were some clinging on the body and head upon when he woke up in the morning.

The feathers came out from the sown area,
so is this a problem with the sewing?
Or would all the feathers eventually come out of the duvet?

And can you send the bed skirt that I have asked about yesterday separately before the BO flat sheet?
Thank you very much.

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About the Duvet.

Thank you for your support as always.

I have a question regarding the duvet of your company.

Please kindly look at the attached photograph.

I was contacted by a client that the feathers gradually came out everyday just like in the photograph,
and there were some clinging to his body and head upon when he woke up in the morning.

The feathers came out from the sewn area,
so is this a problem with the sewing?
Or will all the feathers eventually come out of the duvet?

And can you send the bed skirt that I have asked about yesterday separately before the BO flat sheet?
Thank you very much.

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IGI3931

Thank you for contacting me.
I do not know the cause, but the holding period has expired so the product seems to have been returned.
I prepared the following actions to avoid causing you any inconvenience.
I will be looking forward for your response.

1. Re-delivery of the product (Shipping will be free of charge)
2. Full refund
Refund procedures:
Please log in to B.
Select product cancellation, product return from the order history.
This completes the process.

Have a nice day.

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IGI3931

Thank you for contacting me.
I do not know the cause, but the holding period has expired so the product seems to have been returned.
I prepared the following actions to avoid causing you any inconvenience.
I will be looking forward to your response.

1. Re-delivery of the product (Shipping will be free of charge)
2. Full refund
Refund procedures:
Please log in to B.
Select product cancellation, product return from the order history.
This completes the process.

Have a nice day.

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I absolutely do not know what I need to do with regards to this product.
Just tell me why it cannot be shipped in the first place!

In addition, I purchased 5 camping knives in Amazon,
but I cannot return it since it's already more than 30 days.

Are you telling me to throw this product in a garbage can??

Plus, why can't you ship to the specified location?

This is the first time that I encountered someone that's not flexible such as you.

Anyway, do not leave it as it is. Provide an answer immediately!
If you want to throw it away then just throw it away.

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I absolutely do not know what I need to do with regards to this product.
Just tell me why it cannot be shipped in the first place!

In addition, I purchased 5 camping knives on Amazon,
but I cannot return them since it's already more than 30 days.

Are you telling me to throw this product in the garbage??

Plus, why can't you ship to the specified location?

This is the first time that I encountered someone such as you who's not flexible.

Anyway, do not leave it as it is. Provide an answer immediately!
If you want to throw it away then just throw it away.

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★To strengthen bonds between Ayu and TA♪

①We are performing a premium live show online that allow you to ask Ayu questions and she will answer it on the spot.

②The documentary video, which captured the backstage of creating songs, rehearsal scenes, and her private life, will be aired.
We are going to create various things for you all to fell Ayu much closer.
Of course, the diary that Ayu keeps will be continued, too♪
Furthermore, we are planing a lot of new service to meet requests from TA members.

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★To strengthen bonds between Ayu and TA♪

①We are performing a premium live show online that allow you to ask Ayu questions and she will answer it on the spot.

②The documentary video, which captured the backstage of creating songs, rehearsal scenes, and her private life, will be aired.
We are going to create various things for you all to feel much closer to Ayu.
Of course, the diary that Ayu keeps will be continued too♪
Furthermore, we are planning a lot of new services to meet requests from TA members.

元の翻訳
Ayumi Hamasaki, releasing LIVE DVD&Blu-ray, "ayumi hamasaki COUNTDOWN LIVE 2013-2014 $$00007$$"!

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Ayumi Hamasaki, releasing her LIVE DVD & Blu-ray "Ayumi Hamasaki COUNTDOWN LIVE 2013-2014 $$00007$$"!

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The payment I received $9 is shipping for 1 book, the additional cost for the 2nd book is $4, I will send a payment request please check it and make payment.

Are the type of person that is OK with a manga plot spoiler?
If you are OK with it, I will tell you a shocking story I heard....
Speaking of the break up of A and B, the reason was to protect B.
but....A loves B therefore they can't quit..........

I went to send the item today, but the packaging size was [], which was over the allowed size, so it couldn't be sent.
I will repackage it tomorrow in a new wrap around box, please wait a little further.

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The $9 payment I received is shipping for 1 book, the additional cost for the 2nd book is $4. I sent a payment request so please check it and make the payment.

Are you the type of person who is OK with manga plot spoilers?
If you are OK with them then I will tell you a shocking story I heard...
The reason for ◯ and ☆'s breakup was to protect ☆.
but... ◯ also loves ☆ therefore ◯ can't give ☆ up...

I went to send the item today, but the packaging size was ◇, which was over the allowed size, so it couldn't be sent.
I will repackage it tomorrow in a new wrap-around box, please wait a little longer.

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As there are already several offers on you product it is a testament to the attractiveness of it I feel.
I believe that a great deal of Japanese people will want your product.
I am increasingly fascinated by the product.
I understand you have not had the Bluetooth tested in the US as of yet, I will let you know of some inspection agencies.

Please let me know when you have mad your preparations.
I am looking forward to the day when we can speak with each other.

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I think that there being already several offers is a testament to the attractiveness of your product.
I believe that a great deal of Japanese people will want your product.
I am increasingly fascinated by it.
I understand you have not had the Bluetooth tested in the US as of yet, I will let you know of some inspection agencies.

Please let me know when you have made your preparations.
I am looking forward to the day when we can speak with each other.

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This guitar does not have korina wood veneer pasted on it.
Including the neck and the body, it has three pieces. It is not Korina wood.
It weights about 3.5 kg.
Because the guitar is new, it does not have scratches or dents on the body.

I am currently sending my queries to MOON. I have asked them about the issue that you're having with your bass.
Because now it is weekend in Japan, I will inform you new week, as soon as I get an answer from MOON.

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This guitar does not have Korina wood veneer pasted on it.
Including the neck and the body, it has three pieces. It is not a 1-piece Korina wood.
It weights about 3.5 kg.
Because the guitar is brand new, it does not have any scratches or dents on the body.

I am currently sending your queries to MOON. I have asked them about the issue that you're having with your bass.
Because now it is the weekend in Japan, I will contact you as soon as I get an answer from MOON in the week.

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This guitar is not stuck a plywood of corina on. The both of its neck and body are made for 3 pieces. It's not a 1-piece corina. It's about 3.5kg weight. This guitar has no scars or marks on its body because it is brandnew.

I'm inquiring MOON about your base guitar. I informed of the conditions of your base guitar and asked a question about the remedy. It is weekend today in Japan, so I will notice you immediately after I receive the reply.

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This guitar does not have Korina wood on it. It's 3 pieces with the neck and body. It's not a 1-piece Korina. It's about 3.5kg heavy. This guitar has no scars or marks on its body because it is brand new.

I'm inquiring to MOON about your base guitar. I informed them of the conditions of your bass guitar and asked them for a remedy. It is the weekend today in Japan, so I will notify you immediately after I receive their reply.

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I have received a A I ordered from you.
When I tried to use it, the display did not light with the power turned on.
This should be an initial defect.
I am going to return this item, so please refund the purchase price.
Also, please let me know where I should send it, too.
Thank you for your attention.

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I have received the A I ordered from you.
When I tried to use it, the display did not light with the power turned on.
It is defected.
I am going to return this item, so please refund me the purchase price.
Also, please let me know where I should send it.
Thank you for your attention.

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We ordered A because we sold out the last set left with us.

The A sold to a customer has been found to have a defect.
The jig connecting part was crashed and the customer could not connect the part.
Please refer to the attached photo for the status of the defect.

We need a replacement of the damaged part.
We plan to send the customer only the replacement for the damaged part of the A he ordered.

Do you think it is possible for me to do the replacement of the part?
I also would request a special tool for the repair to be included, if any.

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We ordered A because we sold out of the last set left with us.

The A sold to the customer has been found to have a defect.
The jib connecting part was smashed and the customer could not connect the part.
Please refer to the attached photo for the status of the defect.

We need a replacement of the damaged part.
We plan to send the customer only the replacement for the damaged part of the A he ordered.

Do you think it is possible for me to replace the part?
I also would request a special tool for the repair to be included, if any.

元の翻訳
In addition, the best music video work of each department will be determined from the votes of the listeners and the general public which are being accepted in the special website, as well as the total number of music video playback count from the VMAJ official website, VMAJ.JP that is being operated by digital media partner GyaO!.

You can cast your votes with the [Vote] button in the VMAJ 2014 official website (http://vmaj.jp).

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In addition, the best music video from each department will be determined from votes by listeners and the general public, which are being accepted in the special website, as well as the total number count of music video playback from the VMAJ official website, VMAJ.JP, operated by digital media partner GyaO!.

You can cast your votes with the [Vote] button on the VMAJ 2014 official website (http://vmaj.jp).

元の翻訳
DAICHI MIURA will appear on [MTV VMAJ 2014]↵
as a Live Act

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DAICHI MIURA will appear on [MTV VMAJ 2014] as a live act!

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Organizer: FM802
Planning and production: FM802 / Kyodo Kansai
Contact: FM802 Listener center info@funky802.com
Questions about tickets: Kyodo Information 06-7732-8888

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Organizer: FM802
Planning and production: FM802 / Kyodo Kansai
Contact: FM802 Listener Center info@funky802.com
Questions about tickets: Kyodo Information 06-7732-8888

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Date: Saturday, May 31, 2014 & Sunday, June 1, 2014 Doors Open= 16:00 / Doors Close= 17:00 for both dates (scheduled)
Venue: Osaka Castle Hall

Performers:
Saturday, May 31 = SUGA SHIKAO/NAOTO INTI RAYMI/DAICHI MIURA and more…
Sunday, June 1 = LEO IEIRI/ULFULS/YU TAKAHASHI/AKIKO YANO and more…
*More and more splendid artists will be performing! We will disclose the second part very soon!

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Date: Saturday May 31, 2014 & Sunday June 1, 2014 Doors Open= 16:00 / Doors Close= 17:00 for both dates (scheduled)
Venue: Osaka Castle Hall

Performers:
Saturday, May 31 = SUGA SHIKAO/NAOTO INTI RAYMI/DAICHI MIURA and more…
Sunday, June 1 = LEO IEIRI/ULFULS/YU TAKAHASHI/AKIKO YANO and more…
*Many more splendid artists will be performing! We will disclose the second part very soon!

元の翻訳
By doing so, more people can image the sizes of the products and there will be more chances of their purchases.

2. Many buyers use key words to search for products on eBay. Include as many key words as possible in the titles to make our products easier to be found. In order to do so, copy the product titles from the products that have sold well rather than from those in Amazon, and add "Japan", "free shipping" and the like at the end.

So, use terapeak to search the relevant products they have sold, and list them on eBay.

Must select "Japan" from this menu.

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By doing so, more people can imagine the sizes of the products and they will more likely make purchases.

2. Many buyers use keywords to search for products on eBay. Include as many keywords as possible in the titles to make our products easier to be found. In order to do so, copy the product titles from the products that have sold well rather than copying from those in Amazon, and add "Japan", "free shipping" and the like at the end.

So, use terapeak to search for the relevant products they have sold and list them on eBay.

Be sure to select "Japan" from this menu.

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Thank you very much for working only for me fultime.
You said you were going to list 50 items a day on eBay, but you do not need to haste. Just start with focusing on making a good product page that would not need revision at my end.

Also, making a product page from where products sell well will result in an increased revenue for you as you will receive a bonus for that.

What does a product page from where products sell well look like?

I have two things for you to follow:
1. Show the sizes in both centimeters and inches: We list items on eBay US, where they use inches (in) for measurements. But in most other countries, they use centimeters (cm).

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Thank you very much for working only for me fulltime.
You said you were going to list 50 items a day on eBay, but you do not need to haste. Just start with focusing on making a good product page that would not need revision on my end.

Also, making a product page where products sell well will result in an increased revenue for you as you will receive a bonus for that.

What does a product page where products sell well look like?

I have two things for you to follow:
1. Show the sizes in both centimeters and inches: We list items on eBay US, where they use inches (in) for measurements. But in most other countries, they use centimeters (cm).

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When you do selling on eBay, commission fee is a must.
I don't understand why they can sell guitar A with a cheap price like that.
If we sell our new products with the same price, that will be a loss for us.

Please tell me about your detailed address and ZIP code in India. There are some areas in India where EMS won't work. We're still in middle of a sale campaign so discount is more or less possible. I would like to know how much you can pay.

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When you sell on eBay, you have to pay a commission fee.
I don't understand how they can sell guitar A at such a cheap price as that.
If we sell our new products with the same price, that will be a loss for us.

Please tell me the details about your address and ZIP code in India. There are some areas in India where EMS won't work. We're still in the middle of a sale campaign so a discount is more or less possible. I would like to know how much you can pay.

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The oil leakage of this car has been detected.
We will put the car on maintenance check so we won't be able to sell it.
We apologize for the inconvenience and we ask for your understanding.
As soon as we get the same kind of car,we will inform you right away.

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An oil leak from this car was detected.
We will take the car out for repairs so we won't be able to sell it.
We apologize for the inconvenience and we ask for your understanding.
As soon as we get the same kind of car, we will inform you right away.

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There is an oil leak from this car.
I have to send it to the repair shop so I can 't sell this car.
I deeply apologize, but please understand the circumstance.
If I found similar car, I will let you know in advance.

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There is an oil leak from this car.
I have to send it to the repair shop so I can't sell this car.
I deeply apologize, but please understand the circumstances.
If I find a similar car, you will be the first I tell.

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Only one in the world,we make the iPhone case just for you.
It is the custom-made which daringly cutting the kanji whatever you like at the whole back panel.
It is acceptable to use as many as three kanji.
If you are not sure about which kanji to use,according to the image you want to express,we can also offer proposal.
Enjoying the beauty of Japan,the unique presence which kanji possess.
Please understand it will be made by Japanese craftsman one at a time,and it takes time before delivery.

Accessory: Hexagon Wrench x1,Fixing Screws x4,Protection Film x1,Cleaner x1.

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Only one in the world; we make this iPhone case just for you.
It is custom-made with whatever kanji you like daringly cut on the whole back panel.
It is acceptable to use as many as three kanji.
If you are not sure about which kanji to use, we can also offer suggestions based on the image you want to express,
Enjoy the beauty of Japan; the unique presence which kanji possess.
Please understand it will be made by Japanese craftsman one at a time and it will take time before delivery.

Accessory: Hexagon Wrench x1, Fixing Screws x4, Protection Film x1, Cleaner x1.

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It appeared that there were mistakes in the entered contents of previous returning address,and it took time for the confirmation.However,the receipt of returned good was able to be confirmed today.
Just now,47.50 dollars equivalent to 50% of goods payment were repaid.
As for remaining 50% payment,since the returned good was assembled and painted by customer,the condition is different from the condition when we shipped it.It is considered as the handling charges.
As for the goods of tracking number A and B,These are parts of receiving returned goods we sold,the charge is zero.
About sending procedure,please reply to us about the process,regarding whom to send would be better.

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It appeared that there were mistakes in the details entered for your previous return address and it took time for it to be confirmed. However, we were able to confirm the receipt of the returned goods today.
Just now we repaid $47.50 dollars, equivalent to 50% of the payment for the order.
As for the remaining 50%, since the returned good were assembled and painted by the customer, the condition is different from the condition when we shipped it so we are considering it to be a restocking fee.
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As for the tracking numbers for orders A and B, these were accepted as returns for items we sold so the charge is zero.
Please reply with instructions on who it would be best to process the shipping for.

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I'm sorry for letting you wait. This is Terrapeak's ID and password.

This time's mission is searching on Amazon Japan for the same merchandise an outstanding dealer has sold, and put it up on eBay.

Please exhibit merchandise the following three sellers have sold in the last two weeks.

Choose the period from this menu.

Fill in the seller's ID here.

Electronic goods and books excluded, please exhibit all of the categories this time.

Please copy the merchandise's title from the sold merchandise, and add the postage fee among others to Japan last.

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I'm sorry for making you wait. This is my ID and password for Terapeak.

This time the mission is to search on Amazon Japan for the same merchandise an outstanding dealer has sold, and put it up on eBay.

Please exhibit the merchandise the following three sellers have sold in the last two weeks.

Choose the time period from this menu.

Fill in the sellers' IDs here.

Electronic goods and books excluded, please exhibit all of the categories this time.

Please copy the merchandise's title from the sold merchandise, and add the postage fee among others to Japan last.

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It's been a long time. Have you been well?
As expected, your works are wonderful! I ended up staring at it for about two hours.
I would like to purchase the following works.
Is it possible to give me 50% off?
If it is too difficult, could you give 40% off on everything?
I am awaiting your reply.

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It's been a long time. Have you been well?
As expected, your works are wonderful! I ended up staring at them for about two hours.
I would like to purchase the following works.
Is it possible to give me 50% off?
If it is too difficult, could you give 40% off on everything?
I am awaiting your reply.