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評価: 52 / 2 Reviews / 2014/01/03 12:47:36
Sサイズを購入予定です。Sサイズの具体的な欠陥を教えていただけますか?できれば写真も見たいです。
It is planned to buy S size. Could you tell us particular defects of S size? I want to see the photograph, if possible.
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元の翻訳
It is planned to buy S size. Could you tell us particular defects of S size? I want to see the photograph, if possible.
修正後
I plan on buying the S size. Could you tell me about the particular defects for the S size? I want to see photographs too, if possible.
元の翻訳
It is planned to buy S size. Could you tell us particular defects of S size? I want to see the photograph, if possible.
修正後
I plan to buy the S size. Could you tell me the particular defects it has? I want to see a photograph if possible.
"It is planned is to" is too indirect.
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